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* InternalReformist: Vattu attempts this in the comic's latter half, with dismal results. One of the story's [[AnAesop aesops]] is that change from within is ''impossible'' for imperialist systems, as the system will simply use such attempts to further extend its own power.
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* InternalReformist: Vattu attempts this in the comic's latter half, with dismal results. One of the story's [[AnAesop aesops]] moral lessons is that change from within is ''impossible'' for imperialist systems, as the system will simply use such attempts to further extend its own power.
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* {{Catchphrase}}: Otti:
-->"You are an idiot."
-->"You are an idiot."
* CharacterCatchphrase: Otti:
-->"You are an idiot."
* ChildProdigy: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] with Junti; despite being an unremarkable student and the properties of Unweight being pretty well-understood, she still manages to puzzle out the mechanics of Unweight-powered flight and create a working design for a flying apparatus (in this case, a kind of personal levitation harness) in the span of a few months through sheer deduction. Later on, she puts this discovery to good use when [[spoiler: she breaks Vattu out of the Imperial Tower's prison with [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1107 an]] [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1112 Unweight]] [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1118 airship]].]]
-->"You are an idiot."
* ChildProdigy: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] with Junti; despite being an unremarkable student and the properties of Unweight being pretty well-understood, she still manages to puzzle out the mechanics of Unweight-powered flight and create a working design for a flying apparatus (in this case, a kind of personal levitation harness) in the span of a few months through sheer deduction. Later on, she puts this discovery to good use when [[spoiler: she breaks Vattu out of the Imperial Tower's prison with [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1107 an]] [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1112 Unweight]] [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1118 airship]].]]
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* ChildProdigy: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] with Junti; despite being an unremarkable student and the properties of Unweight being pretty well-understood, she still manages to puzzle out the mechanics of Unweight-powered flight and create a working design for a flying apparatus (in this case, a kind of personal levitation harness) in the span of a few months through sheer deduction. Later on, she puts this discovery to good use when [[spoiler: she breaks Vattu out of the Imperial Tower's prison with [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1107 an]] [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1112 Unweight]] [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=1118 airship]].]]
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* {{Forshadowing}}: During one of Junti's early meetings with the Weightless One, they mention that "one pinch more" of Unweight than normal would send them flying high above the city. [[spoiler:Sure enough, they end up doing just that once the Surin Enclave is blasted out of Sahta.]]
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* {{Forshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}: During one of Junti's early meetings with the Weightless One, they mention that "one pinch more" of Unweight than normal would send them flying high above the city. [[spoiler:Sure enough, they end up doing just that once the Surin Enclave is blasted out of Sahta.]]
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* {{Forshadowing}}: During one of Junti's early meetings with the Weightless One, they mention that "one pinch more" of Unweight than normal would send them flying high above the city. [[spoiler:Sure enough, they end up doing just that once the Surin Enclave is blasted out of Sahta.]]
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* FourFingeredHands: Sahtans have four fingers on each hand, while War-Men and Fluters have only three. Averted with the Surin, who have five-fingered hands.
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* FourFingeredHands: Sahtans have four fingers on each hand, while War-Men and Fluters have only three. Averted with the Surin, who The Surin have five-fingered hands.
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* SchizoTech: Generally [[AvertedTrope averted]], but in a [[http://www.rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=479 few]] [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=656 instances]] it is shown that the Surin use lighters, in a society otherwise analogous to Classical Rome.
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* SchizoTech: Generally [[AvertedTrope averted]], but in In a [[http://www.rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=479 few]] [[http://rice-boy.com/vattu/index.php?c=656 instances]] it is shown that the Surin use lighters, in a society otherwise analogous to Classical Rome.
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* CigarChomper: Bakrah is rarely seen without one. [[AvertedTrope Averted]] later on when he switches to a pipe.
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* CigarChomper: Bakrah is rarely seen without one. [[AvertedTrope Averted]] later Later on when he switches to a pipe.
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The webcomic consists of four books.
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The webcomic consists of four books.
books, beginning in June 2010 and finishing in September 2022.
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* PublicExecution: Book Two opens with one.
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* PublicExecution: Book Two opens with one. a Grish shipbuilder being hanged by Sahtan authorities for selling to enemies of the state, [[AllCrimesAreEqual and not paying taxes to the Emperor]].
-->'''Shakkiz the Red:''' I ''spit'' on your Emperor!\\
'''Sahtan spectator:''' We spit on all the Grish!\\
'''Shakkiz:''' No. [[FacingTheBulletsOneLiner You simply kill us.]]
-->'''Shakkiz the Red:''' I ''spit'' on your Emperor!\\
'''Sahtan spectator:''' We spit on all the Grish!\\
'''Shakkiz:''' No. [[FacingTheBulletsOneLiner You simply kill us.]]
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** Calirus' son Caniri is likewise almost certainly an analogue for [[Series/GameOfThrones Joffrey]], both of them being horribly unqualified [[RoyalBrat Royal Brats]] whose families plan to use them as a PuppetKing, with dire consequences for everyone else. Tanniri even shares Joffrey's habit of [[KillEmAll hysterically calling for executions whenever he's threatened]]. [[spoiler:Fortunately, Vattu's rebellion destroys all of Caniri's support, and he's left unable to do anything but ineffectually protest as she takes the throne]].
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** Calirus' son Caniri is likewise almost certainly an analogue for [[Series/GameOfThrones Joffrey]], both of them being horribly unqualified [[RoyalBrat Royal Brats]] whose families plan to use them as a PuppetKing, with dire consequences for everyone else. Tanniri even shares Joffrey's habit of [[KillEmAll hysterically calling for executions whenever he's threatened]].threatened. [[spoiler:Fortunately, Vattu's rebellion destroys all of Caniri's support, and he's left unable to do anything but ineffectually protest as she takes the throne]].
