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* YourWorstNightmare: Sombra exploits and expands Spike's fear revealed in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E2TheCrystalEmpirePart2 Season 3]].
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'''[[https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/The-Shadow-Shard-Page-1-688636365 The Shadow Shard]]''' is a FanWebcomic drawn and written by [[http://dsana.deviantart.com dSana]] on Website/DeviantArt, based off ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''
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'''[[https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/The-Shadow-Shard-Page-1-688636365 The Shadow Shard]]''' is a FanWebcomic {{Fan Webcomic|s}} drawn and written by [[http://dsana.deviantart.com dSana]] on Website/DeviantArt, based off ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''
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Getting Crap Past The Radar needs to discuss how it actually got past the radar, it's not simply any innuendo (and if it's a web work, then lack of a radar disqualifies it)
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** They end up doing it to themselves when [[spoiler:Starlight makes Sunburst tell her why he never wrote to her after he went to magic school ''immediately'' after finally sharing a passionate kiss with him and trying to get him to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar invite her to his room]]]].
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** They end up doing it to themselves when [[spoiler:Starlight makes Sunburst tell her why he never wrote to her after he went to magic school ''immediately'' after finally sharing a passionate kiss with him and trying to get him to [[GettingCrapPastTheRadar invite her to his room]]]].room]].
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dSana's art page can be found [[http://dsana.deviantart.com/ here]], and the comic itself can be read [[https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/The-Shadow-Shard-Page-1-688636365 here]].
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* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse, Starlight Glimmer wonders if her stint as a villain is why it seems Twilight is holding her at arm's length. [[spoiler: This may have something to do with the nightmares sent by Sombra.]]
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* OnceDoneNeverForgotten: Starlight Glimmer wonders if her stint as a villain is why it seems Twilight is holding her at arm's length. [[spoiler: This may have something to do with the nightmares sent by Sombra.]]
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* OrwellianRetcon: The comic was initially set in the same universe as the artist's previous webcomic, "Left Behind," which depicted Starlight as having an [[AbusiveParents abusive father]]. After the season 8 episode "The Parent Map" aired, [[OutdatedByCanon showing that Starlight's father was NOT abusive]], however, the artist rewrote parts of this comic to remove references to "Left Behind." On the other hand, this is downplayed a bit, as none of the pages that were rewritten had been drawn and published yet before they were rewritten.
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* OrwellianRetcon: The comic was initially set in the same universe as the artist's previous webcomic, "Left Behind," "Webcomic/LeftBehind," which depicted Starlight as having an [[AbusiveParents abusive father]]. After the season 8 episode "The Parent Map" aired, [[OutdatedByCanon showing that Starlight's father was NOT abusive]], however, the artist rewrote parts of this comic to remove references to "Left Behind." On the other hand, this is downplayed a bit, as none of the pages that were rewritten had been drawn and published yet before they were rewritten.
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* MamaBear: Twilight [[spoiler:when Sombra tries to possess an awakening Spike.]]
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* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:After Sunburst and Starlight [[LoveConfession confess their love for each other]], they embrace in another kiss before combining their magic against Sombra.]]
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* MysteriousParent: Dragoness who laid Spike's egg [[spoiler: whose heart was turned into the Crystal Heart]]
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* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:After Sunburst and Starlight [[LoveConfession confess their love for each other]] they embrace in another kissbefore combining their magic against Sombra.]]
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* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:After Sunburst and Starlight [[LoveConfession confess their love for each other]] other]], they embrace in another kissbefore kiss before combining their magic against Sombra.]]
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* IWantMyMommy!: [[spoiler: After Twilight suddenly vanishes from his MentalWorld, Spike tears up and calls after her "mommy"]]
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* IWantMyMommy!: [[spoiler: After Twilight suddenly vanishes from his MentalWorld, Spike tears up and calls her "mommy"]]
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* BigDamnKiss: [[After Sunburst and Starlight [[LoveConfession confess their love for each other]] they embrace in another kissbefore combining their magic against Sombra.]]
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* LoveConfession: [[spoiler: Sunburst finally confesses his love to Starlight before the final battle with Sombra]]
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* LoveConfession: [[spoiler: Sunburst finally confesses his love to Starlight before the final battle with Sombra]]
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* DispelMagic: [[spoiler: Starlight removes her own cutie mark to prevent Sombra from casting spells while he stays in her body]]
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* XanatosSpeedChess: Sombra adjusts his plans when he can't control Spike [[spoiler: and goes for Starlight instead.]]
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* XanatosSpeedChess: Sombra adjusts his plans when he can't control Spike Spike, and instead tries to corrupt Twilight - and finally [[spoiler: and goes for Starlight instead.successfully gets hold of Starlight's body.]]
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* BatmanGambit: Sombra manipulates Spike into succumbing to greed and going after the Crystal Heart.
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* XanatosSpeedChess: Sombra adjusts his plans when he can't control Spike [[spoiler: and goes for Starlight instead.]]
