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* ToBeContinued: [[OriginalFlavor Much like the anime.]] [[SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism The narrator is also just as idealistic, which makes the cynical tone of the rest of the comic all the more prominent.]]
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* [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse What Happened to the Electric Mouse]]: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1769474/chapter-6-page-97/ by popular demand.]]
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* [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse What Happened to the Electric Mouse]]: Mouse?]]: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1769474/chapter-6-page-97/ by popular demand.]]
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* [[WhatHappenedToTheMouse What Happened to the Electric Mouse]]: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1769474/chapter-6-page-97/ by popular demand.]]
--> '''AltText:''' Here's your bloomin' Pikachu )8 Cripes...
--> '''AltText:''' Here's your bloomin' Pikachu )8 Cripes...
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* TheBusCameBack: [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1994118/chapter-8-page-15/ Spoiler warning with the link, of course.]]
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[[caption-width:303:Atty has [[TopGear Richard Hammond]] at home waiting for him.]]
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** JustifiedTrope: The whole thing IS based off [[UsefulNotes/{{Kawaisa}} a Japanese franchise]] that features an entire world of [[SeriesMascot Series Mascots.]]
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* QuoteSwearUnquote: "[[InTheNameOfTheMoon Prepare yerselves for fuckin' trouble,]] [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1786175/chapter-7-page-6/ faggots!]]"
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* ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1953750/chapter-7-page-93/ Here.]] Bonus points for AltText actually quoting this trope word-for-word.
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* KillerRabbit: Clefairy. After a while, their presence elicits an OhCrap reaction.
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* KillerRabbit: Clefairy. After a while, their presence elicits an OhCrap reaction.
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* EsembleDarkhorse: [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1133094/chapter-4-page-4/ In-universe.]]
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* EsembleDarkhorse: EnsembleDarkhorse: [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1133094/chapter-4-page-4/ In-universe.]]
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* EsembleDarkhorse: [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1133094/chapter-4-page-4/ In-universe.]]
--> '''Trix:''' ''...What's she doing?''
--> '''Thad:''' ''[[ThirdOptionAdaptation ...Trying to catch a Pikachu.]]''
--> '''Trix:''' ''...Why?''
--> '''Thad:''' ''[[AudienceSurrogate I dunno, 'cuz every kid wants a Pikachu.]] Probably none of the damn things left.''
--> '''Trix:''' ''...What's she doing?''
--> '''Thad:''' ''[[ThirdOptionAdaptation ...Trying to catch a Pikachu.]]''
--> '''Trix:''' ''...Why?''
--> '''Thad:''' ''[[AudienceSurrogate I dunno, 'cuz every kid wants a Pikachu.]] Probably none of the damn things left.''
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** [[GoddamnBats Goddamn]] [[ImageSource Zubats]]: [[Atty takes two steps into Mt. Moon.]] [[http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/7/7/772cc787ar3pk.png Mt. Moon]] [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1810999/chapter-7-page-20/ proceeds]] [[EverythingIsTryingToKillYou to kick Atty's ass.]]
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** [[GoddamnBats Goddamn]] [[ImageSource Zubats]]: [[Atty [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1806769/chapter-7-page-17/ Atty takes two steps into Mt. Moon.]] [[http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/7/7/772cc787ar3pk.png Mt. Moon]] [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1810999/chapter-7-page-20/ proceeds]] [[EverythingIsTryingToKillYou to kick Atty's ass.]]
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I know goddamn bats is a YMMV trope. I think we can make an exception to the poster child.
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** [[GoddamnBats Goddamn]] [[ImageSource Zubats]]: [[Atty takes two steps into Mt. Moon.]] [[http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/7/7/772cc787ar3pk.png Mt. Moon]] [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1810999/chapter-7-page-20/ proceeds]] [[EverythingIsTryingToKillYou to kick Atty's ass.]]
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--> ''[[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/662798/chapter-2-page-3/ This]] is [[DawnOfAnEra the start of a beautiful new era.]] These secret little messages that no one will know about [[ViewersLikeYou except you.]]''
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--> ''[[LoveConfession I love you.]] [[LoveMakesYouCrazy In a very real and worrying way.]]''
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--> ''[[LoveConfession I love you.]] [[LoveMakesYouCrazy In a very real and worrying way.]]''
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Example Indentation In Trope Lists. And the italisized \'holy arceus\' bit in Sociopathic Hero is hardly necessary — he\'s hardly the worst example of it out there.
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* {{Deconstruction}}: One of the comic's main sources of humour. Atticus doesn't ''want'' ToBeAMaster but is forced into doing so by his mother, there's a rather grisly explanation as to what happens to the remaining starter (as well as [[LudicrousGibs Pidgeys who don't get out of the way of lawnmowers]]), among many other examples.
** It pretty much showcases the [[FridgeLogic inherent flaws in logic]] and [[FridgeHorror terrifying implications]] of [[CrapsaccharineWorld a world of unbridled idealism built on the foundation of wild animals being dependent on their human masters.]]
** It pretty much showcases the [[FridgeLogic inherent flaws in logic]] and [[FridgeHorror terrifying implications]] of [[CrapsaccharineWorld a world of unbridled idealism built on the foundation of wild animals being dependent on their human masters.]]
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* {{Deconstruction}}: One of the comic's main sources of humour. Atticus doesn't ''want'' ToBeAMaster but is forced into doing so by his mother, there's a rather grisly explanation as to what happens to the remaining starter (as well as [[LudicrousGibs Pidgeys who don't get out of the way of lawnmowers]]), among many other examples.
**examples. It pretty much showcases the [[FridgeLogic inherent flaws in logic]] and [[FridgeHorror terrifying implications]] of [[CrapsaccharineWorld a world of unbridled idealism built on the foundation of wild animals being dependent on their human masters.]]
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* {{Expy}}: The masked person looks quite similar to [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Madara Uchiha.]]
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* {{Expy}}: {{Expy}}:
** The masked person looks quite similar to [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Madara Uchiha.]]
** The masked person looks quite similar to [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Madara Uchiha.]]
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* KnightOfCerebus: In a way, Atticus is this to the Pokémon universe.
** On his first day he [[spoiler: ''burned down Viridian Forest.'']] One can only imagine what will come next.
** On his first day he [[spoiler: ''burned down Viridian Forest.'']] One can only imagine what will come next.
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* KnightOfCerebus: In a way, Atticus is this to the Pokémon universe. \n** On his first day he [[spoiler: ''burned down Viridian Forest.'']] One can only imagine what will come next.
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* SociopathicHero: ''Holy Arceus'', Atticus. He does thankfully [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold have a softspot]], but for the most part he is selfish and apathetic towards everyone.
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* SociopathicHero: ''Holy Arceus'', Atticus. He does thankfully [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold have a softspot]], but for the most part he is selfish and apathetic towards everyone.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: The alt text on Chpt 3 Pg 17 claims that Atty's mom named him after a lawyer who is most likely [[Literature/ToKillAMockingbird Atticus Finch.]]
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: The alt text on Chpt 3 Pg 17 claims that Atty's mom named him after a lawyer who is most likely [[Literature/ToKillAMockingbird Atticus Finch.]]]] Out of universe, H0lyhandgrenade first heard the name Atticus from the book and liked it ever since. [[note]][[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/981432/chapter-3-page-20/ Stated in the comment section of this post.]][[/note]]
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: The alt text on Chpt 3 Pg 17 claims that Atty's mom named him after a lawyer who is most likely [[Literature/ToKillAMockingbird Atticus Finch.]]
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It begins the adventure of an unenthusiastic trainer named Atticus Brent being kicked out by his mother for being unwilling to partake in the wonderful world of Pokémon and is forced onto his journey by her. After being given his Charmander ('affectionately' nicknamed Dragonthing) by a worryingly senile professor Oak, he finds himself slowly sucked into the world of Pokémon. Though he's all too aware that a lot of it [[FridgeLogic doesn't make sense]].
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It begins the adventure of an unenthusiastic trainer named Atticus Brent being kicked out by his mother for being unwilling to partake in the wonderful world of Pokémon and is forced onto his journey by her. After being given his Charmander ('affectionately' nicknamed Dragonthing) by a worryingly senile professor Professor Oak, he finds himself slowly sucked into the world of Pokémon. Though he's all too aware that a lot of it [[FridgeLogic doesn't make sense]].
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* EasterEgg: All of Atty's cigarette packets have a [[VideoGame/FinalFantasy Malboro]] on them. The cigarette brand is [[IncrediblyLamePun Marlboro.]]
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* EasterEgg: All of Atty's cigarette packets have a [[VideoGame/FinalFantasy [[Franchise/FinalFantasy Malboro]] on them. The cigarette brand is [[IncrediblyLamePun Marlboro.]]
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* EasterEgg: All of Atty's cigarette packets have a [[FinalFantasy Malboro]] on them. The cigarette brand is [[IncrediblyLamePun Marlboro.]]
* {{Expy}}: The masked person looks quite similar to [[{{Naruto}} Madara Uchiha.]]
* {{Expy}}: The masked person looks quite similar to [[{{Naruto}} Madara Uchiha.]]
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* EasterEgg: All of Atty's cigarette packets have a [[FinalFantasy [[VideoGame/FinalFantasy Malboro]] on them. The cigarette brand is [[IncrediblyLamePun Marlboro.]]
* {{Expy}}: The masked person looks quite similar to[[{{Naruto}} [[Manga/{{Naruto}} Madara Uchiha.]]
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* EyeScream: About half of the comments on [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1220067/chapter-4-page-35/ this]] comic were something along the lines of "Ouch, tree in eye looks painful." [[hottip:*:The other half were "I bet she beats him to the exit."]]
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* EyeScream: About half of the comments on [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1220067/chapter-4-page-35/ this]] comic were something along the lines of "Ouch, tree in eye looks painful." [[hottip:*:The [[note]]The other half were "I bet she beats him to the exit."]]"[[/note]]
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* {{Determinator}}: Dragonthing during its third battle.
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* CombatPragmatist: Dragonthing attacks a Ricardo's Caterpie while the guy is in the middle of boasting about the friendship between him and his Pokémon.
* CoolMask: The person who owns Feraligatr; may cross into MalevolentMaskedMan.
* CoolMask: The person who owns Feraligatr; may cross into MalevolentMaskedMan.
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* CombatPragmatist: Dragonthing attacks a Ricardo's Caterpie while the guy is in the middle of boasting about the friendship between him and his Pokémon.
* CoolMask:The person who owns Feraligatr; Gabe; may cross into MalevolentMaskedMan.
* CoolMask:
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* AltText: Starting from the third page of chapter 2.
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* AltText: Starting from the third page of chapter 2.two.
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* ArtEvolution: Happens within the ''first chapter'' due to ScheduleSlip.
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* ArtEvolution: Happens within the ''first chapter'' due to ScheduleSlip. Also applies for the entire comic; compare [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/459083/chapter-1-page-2/ one of the earliest pages]] with [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1763071/chapter-6-page-94/ one of the most recent pages]]. Justified, since the comic nearly spans five years already.
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** The Pewter Gym Leader, Elle, has a lampshaded resemblance to [[Manga/DeathNote Mello]].
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** The Pewter Gym Leader, Elle, Elle has a lampshaded resemblance to [[Manga/DeathNote Mello]].
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* BrickJoke: Before he began his journey Atticus yelled at Dragonthing for being completely unable to attack on her own. [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1175484/chapter-4-page-18/ Now...]]
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* BrickJoke: Before he began his journey Atticus yelled at Dragonthing for being completely unable to attack on her its own. [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1175484/chapter-4-page-18/ Now...]]
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* ImagineSpot: Twice in Chapter Three, when poor Dragonthing first imagines Atticus having the worst possible reaction to her {{Subverted}} Awesomeness and an extremely unrealistic outcome to [[spoiler: her taking on Feraligatr]].
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* ImagineSpot: Twice in Chapter Three, when poor Dragonthing first imagines Atticus having the worst possible reaction to her its {{Subverted}} Awesomeness and an extremely unrealistic outcome to [[spoiler: her it taking on Feraligatr]].
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* {{Retirony}}: Lapshaded and Discussed by [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1623860/chapter-6-page-25/ one character]] when he jokes that a burned-down forest was 'just three weeks away from retirement'.
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* {{Retirony}}: Lapshaded Lampshaded and Discussed by [[http://mokepon.smackjeeves.com/comics/1623860/chapter-6-page-25/ one character]] when he jokes that a burned-down forest was 'just three weeks away from retirement'.
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* YourTomcatIsPregnant: [[spoiler:Dragonthing is actually a girl.]]
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* [[UnsoundEffect]]: DISPLACEMENT!
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* [[UnsoundEffect]]: [[UnsoundEffect Unsound Effect]]: DISPLACEMENT!
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