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** There's also Poe. Not "Po," as in Po from WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda or Chien-Po from WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}, or the similarly-pronounced "Pau," but "Poe," as in "Edgar Allen."
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** There's also Poe. Not "Po," as in Po from WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda ''Franchise/KungFuPanda'' or Chien-Po from WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}, ''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}'', or the similarly-pronounced "Pau," but "Poe," as in "Edgar Allen."
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Lilith and Kuzon in the Water Tribes.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Poe acts a lot younger than his sixteen-or-so years, supposedly as a coping mechanism to get through the grief of the war and [[spoiler: his father's illness]]. This gets on Ling's nerves, so of course she is perfectly [[SarcasmMode perfectly justified]] in earthbending a rock so he hits it face-first at high speed and sinking him neck-high into the ground [[DudeNotFunny which would break his nose and make it very hard for him to breathe, respectively.]]
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Poe acts a lot younger than his sixteen-or-so years, supposedly as a coping mechanism to get through the grief of the war and [[spoiler: his father's illness]]. This gets on Ling's nerves, so of course she is perfectly [[SarcasmMode perfectly justified]] in earthbending a rock so he hits it face-first at high speed and sinking him neck-high into the ground [[DudeNotFunny which would break his nose and make it very hard for him to breathe, respectively.]]
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Lilith and Kuzon in are bullied by the Water Tribes.
Tribe children for being children of the Fire Nation.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: [[PlayingWithTropes Played with:]] Poeacts is framed this way to Ling, despite the pair being twins. He’s shown to act a lot younger than his sixteen-or-so years, supposedly presumably as a coping mechanism to get through the grief of the war and [[spoiler: his father's illness]]. This gets on Ling's nerves, so of course she is perfectly [[SarcasmMode perfectly justified]] in earthbending a rock so he hits it face-first at high speed and sinking him neck-high into the ground [[DudeNotFunny Unfortunately his pranks tend to require Ling to smooth over, which would break his nose and make it very hard for him to breathe, respectively.]]she hates.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: [[PlayingWithTropes Played with:]] Poe
*BaitAndSwitch: Miracle is walking in the palace grounds when some children playing ball accidentally kicked it over the palace wall, hitting her on the head. She approaches them with their ball and a cold expression, saying that by hitting her head with the ball, they’ve essentially attacked a royal and she could have them severely punished. But she’d be inclined to show mercy if… they let her play. Miracle then smiles, praising the children’s splendid kick, asking to be shown how it was done.
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** It turns out... insulting Zuko and Katara in front of Lilith is a ''really bad idea''.
** Poe is really touchy about his hair.
** Poe is really touchy about his hair.
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** It turns out... insulting Zuko and Katara in front of Lilith is a ''really bad idea''.
idea''. When a group of bullies did, Lilith flew at them with flames spewing from her hands.
** Poe is really touchy about hishair.hair, stealing a merchant’s goods and leading him on a chase through the city as retaliation.
** Poe is really touchy about his
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* DeathByWomanScorned: [[spoiler: Mai]] is done being Ms. Nice Guy.
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* DeathByWomanScorned: [[spoiler: Mai]] is done being Ms. Nice Guy.Guy, murdering Zuko offscreen.
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* FriendToAllChildren: Miracle, apparently. She strikes the fear of God (or Agni, whatever) into a couple of kids who accidentally hit her with a ball during play, [[DisproportionateRetribution threatening heavy punishment for a small offense.]] Then, she smiles and asks if she can play with them. And she had almost looked like the ''real'' Azula too...
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* FriendToAllChildren: Miracle, apparently. She strikes the fear of God (or Agni, whatever) into a couple of kids who accidentally hit her with a ball during play, [[DisproportionateRetribution threatening heavy punishment for a small offense.]] Then, she smiles Miracle is introduced teasing some children and asks if she can asking to play with them. And she had almost looked like the ''real'' Azula too...them.
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* DownerBeginning: [[spoiler: Zuko and Katara both die, leaving their orphaned children to be raised in the Southern Water Tribe and the Fire Nation’s fate uncertain.]]
* HappyEndingOverride: The previous comic ended on a relatively high note, with the couples married with adorable children and living in peace and happiness… this comic opens with [[spoiler: Zuko being murdered, the palace being set ablaze, Katara being forced to flee to the Southern Water Tribe with her children before succumbing to a cursed wound herself, then in the present the now-teens are all clearly traumatized and Aang is dying of an undisclosed illness.]]
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* WinterRoyalLady: Azula and Miracle have this goin' on.
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* WinterRoyalLady: Azula and Miracle have this goin' on.both wear dark blue, [[PrettyInMink fur-lined dresses and capes,]] with their white hair completing the look.
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[[caption-width-right:358:[[HereWeGoAgain She's at it again.]] (Count the [[OnlySixFaces reused faces]], too.)]]
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[[caption-width-right:358:[[HereWeGoAgain She's at it again.]] (Count the [[OnlySixFaces reused faces]], too.)]]
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The comic starts off much as the first one did with a dream sequence flashback. In this, it shows an attack on the fire nation from the perspective of Lilith, Zuko and Katara's daughter. She wakes and after a short argument with her brother, Kuzon, they both leave to train. While training, they both experience flashbacks about the their time at the water tribe immediately following the attack. Once this ends, we move on to Poe, Aang and Toph's son, who is causing trouble. Ling, his twin sister, stops him and these two also have an argument before Ling buries him up to his neck in the ground and walks off. Then we get to see Miracle, Sokka and Azula's daughter, as she interacts with two children at the Northern Water Tribes capital... which leads to another flashback sequence of the treatment Lilith and Kuzon received in the Water Tribes due to their unorthodox parentage.
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The comic starts off much as the first one did with a dream sequence flashback. In this, it shows an attack on the fire nation from the perspective of Lilith, Zuko and Katara's daughter. She wakes and after a short argument with her brother, Kuzon, they both leave to train. While training, they both experience flashbacks about the their time at the water tribe immediately following the attack. Once this ends, we move on to Poe, Aang and Toph's son, who is causing trouble. Ling, his twin sister, stops him and these two also have an argument before Ling buries him up to his neck in the ground and walks off. Then we get to see Miracle, Sokka and Azula's daughter, as she interacts with two children at the Northern Water Tribes Tribe's capital... which leads to another flashback sequence of the treatment Lilith and Kuzon received in the Water Tribes due to their unorthodox parentage.
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* AerithAndBob: The name Lilith comes from Hebrew mythology. What's it doing in a FantasyCounterpartCulture of East Asia?
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* AerithAndBob: AerithAndBob:
** The name Lilith comes from Hebrew mythology. What's it doing in a FantasyCounterpartCulture of East Asia?
** The name Lilith comes from Hebrew mythology. What's it doing in a FantasyCounterpartCulture of East Asia?
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The sequel to the fan comic ''Webcomic/HowIBecameYours'' based off of the show ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', ''How I Became Yours: Rise of the Agni Army'' is a fancomic created by Jackie Diaz and co-authored by a fellow named Patrick BP. Ms. Diaz was notorious for continuous tracing, stolen photographs, and bad Photoshops within the first comic. While only one partial chapter has been released so far, it seems that she's up to the same old shenanigans.
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The sequel to the fan comic ''Webcomic/HowIBecameYours'' based off of the show ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', ''How I Became Yours: Rise of the Agni Army'' is a fancomic created by Jackie Diaz and co-authored by a fellow named Patrick BP. Ms. Diaz was notorious for continuous tracing, stolen photographs, and bad Photoshops within the first comic. While only one partial chapter has been released so far, it seems that she's up to the same old shenanigans.\n
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* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: According to the cover picture, Mai suffers a little from this. Sho pulls it off and makes it [[EvilIsSexy sexy]], as per the usual.
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* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: According to the cover picture, Mai suffers a little from this. Sho pulls it off and makes it [[EvilIsSexy sexy]], sexy as per the usual.
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The comic is located right [[https://myspace.com/270093196/mixes/classic-how-i-became-yours-2-rise-of-the-agni-army-414717 here]]. It can also be found [[http://s762.photobucket.com/albums/xx265/ReneeLuvsZutara/ here]], if and when Ms. Diaz friendslocks ''this'' comic too. Unfortunately, only the first installment has been completed, and by now it appears to be a DeadFic.
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The comic is located right [[https://myspace.com/270093196/mixes/classic-how-i-became-yours-2-rise-of-the-agni-army-414717 here]]. It can also be found [[http://s762.photobucket.com/albums/xx265/ReneeLuvsZutara/ here]], if and when Ms. Diaz friendslocks ''this'' comic too. Unfortunately, only the first installment has been completed, and by now it appears to be a DeadFic.
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* SiblingYinYang: Poe is a hyperactive bad boy in training. Ling is a responsible young woman who acts like Poe's mother when the parents aren't around. TheyFightCrime.
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* SiblingYinYang: Poe is a hyperactive bad boy in training. Ling is a responsible young woman who acts like Poe's mother when the parents aren't around. TheyFightCrime.
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The comic is located right [[http://www.myspace.com/47931544/photos/albums/album/3188421#mssrc=SitesPhotos_SP_AlbumCover_ViewAlbum here]]. It can also be found [[http://s762.photobucket.com/albums/xx265/ReneeLuvsZutara/ here]], if and when Ms. Diaz friendslocks ''this'' comic too. Unfortunately, only the first installment has been completed, and by now it appears to be a DeadFic.
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The comic is located right [[http://www.myspace.com/47931544/photos/albums/album/3188421#mssrc=SitesPhotos_SP_AlbumCover_ViewAlbum [[https://myspace.com/270093196/mixes/classic-how-i-became-yours-2-rise-of-the-agni-army-414717 here]]. It can also be found [[http://s762.photobucket.com/albums/xx265/ReneeLuvsZutara/ here]], if and when Ms. Diaz friendslocks ''this'' comic too. Unfortunately, only the first installment has been completed, and by now it appears to be a DeadFic.
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* HalfBreedDiscrimination: Lilith and Kuzon, being among the most visibly biracial, get the brunt of the drama that is the result of this trope. Miracle doesn't for some reason... either the Water Tribe is more accepting of her because the Moon Spirit healed her, or they just got used to her.
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* MixedAncestry: Lilith and Kuzon, being among the most visibly biracial, get the brunt of the drama that is the result of this trope. Miracle doesn't for some reason... either the Water Tribe is more accepting of her because the Moon Spirit healed her, or they just got used to her. It's a non-issue for Poe and Ling.
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* UnexplainedRecovery: Yay! Judging from the cover art, Mai's back! [[CompletelyMissingThePoint Wait...]]
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* UnexplainedRecovery: Yay! Judging from the cover art, Mai's back! [[CompletelyMissingThePoint Wait...]]
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* IncestSubtext: Let's see...the seemingly-adult Lilith and Kuzon both sleep in the same room, in separate beds that are not five feet away from each other, and their first dialogue together...well.
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* MeaninglessMeaningfulWords: The supposed "review" on the cover is just a bunch of melodramatic words that don't make a lick of sense when put together. [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Plus, "heroes" is misspelled.]]
