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** Evee escapes from Legune and the Cabal by going back through Legune's HQ, slaughtering every living person who crossed her path.
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** Evee escapes from Legune and the Cabal by going back through Legune's HQ, lair, slaughtering every living person who crossed her path.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Hero [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=665 tracked down]] the assassin who killed his mother, then proceeded to [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=666 wipe out most of the nobles]] who had hired him.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: RoaringRampageOfRevenge:
** Evee escapes from Legune and the Cabal by going back through Legune's HQ, slaughtering every living person who crossed her path.
** Hero [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=665 tracked down]] the assassin who killed his mother, then proceeded to [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=666 wipe out most of the nobles]] who had hired him.
** Evee escapes from Legune and the Cabal by going back through Legune's HQ, slaughtering every living person who crossed her path.
** Hero [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=665 tracked down]] the assassin who killed his mother, then proceeded to [[http://evoncomics.com/?p=666 wipe out most of the nobles]] who had hired him.
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* FullFrontalAssault:
** Maximus fights Ferneris naked [[spoiler:because he was interrupted trying to rape Evon]].
** Evee's RoaringRampageOfRevenge is carried out while she's totally nude.
** Maximus fights Ferneris naked [[spoiler:because he was interrupted trying to rape Evon]].
** Evee's RoaringRampageOfRevenge is carried out while she's totally nude.
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* FullFrontalAssault:
** Maximus fights Ferneris naked [[spoiler:because he was interrupted trying to rape Evon]].
** Evee's RoaringRampageOfRevenge is carried out while she's totally nude.
** Maximus fights Ferneris naked [[spoiler:because he was interrupted trying to rape Evon]].
** Evee's RoaringRampageOfRevenge is carried out while she's totally nude.
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* FullFrontalAssault: Maximus fights Ferneris naked [[spoiler:because he was interrupted trying to rape Evon]].
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** Clone Evon's RoaringRampageOfRevenge is carried out while she's totally nude.
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* FullFrontalAssault: FullFrontalAssault:
** Maximus fights Ferneris naked [[spoiler:because he was interrupted trying to rape Evon]].
**Clone Evon's Evee's RoaringRampageOfRevenge is carried out while she's totally nude.
** Maximus fights Ferneris naked [[spoiler:because he was interrupted trying to rape Evon]].
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* ThatManIsDead: Belvedier makes it abundantly clear [[http://evoncomics.com/?comic=volume-five-chapter-twenty-three-page-973 he is no longer the Demon Overlord]]. Feneris, a member of the Cabal, [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HorrifyingTheHorror acquiesces without complaint.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: When Legune taunts Evee with imminent destruction if she doesn't please him--pleasing him meaning performing oral sex on him. [[GroinAttack He realizes too late that where her mouth is, there her teeth are also.]] And while he's in agony from being so violently castrated, she snaps his neck.
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* GenderBender: [[spoiler:The Traveler is turned into a sorcer’’ess’’ after falling into a pool of dark matter.]]
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* GenderBender: [[spoiler:The Traveler is turned into a sorcer’’ess’’ sorcer''ess'' after falling into a pool of dark matter.]]
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* GenderBender: [[spoiler:The Traveler is turned into a sorcer’’ess’’ after falling into a pool of dark matter.]]
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* MayflyDecemberRomance: Presumably any relationship between a sorcerer and a non-magical person. When Feneris asks Evon what she'll do when Hero inevitably dies before her, she tries to turn the question back on him and Freya. He simply says he will mourn her, as he has done before.
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* CallBack: In [[http://evoncomics.com/?comic=volume-four-chapter-18-page-729 comic #729]], Belvidier makes mention that he "has a daughter out there somewhere." In [[http://evoncomics.com/?comic=volume-five-chapter-twenty-three-page-974 comic #974]], we find out who she is: [[spoiler: Feneris' lover, Freya.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter Twenty-Three drops several bombs regarding Belvidier's past: [[spoiler: He was apparently a warlord known as "The Demon Overlord". He's also Freya's father.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter Twenty-Three drops several bombs regarding Belvidier's past: [[spoiler: He was apparently a warlord known as "The Demon Overlord". He's also Freya's father.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter Twenty-Three drops several bombs regarding Belvidier's past: [[spoiler: He was apparently a warlord known as "The Demon Overlord". He's also Freya's father.]]
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* AgeInsecurity: All members of the Cabal are listed as being [[WizardsLiveLonger centuries old]], except Lanna, the sole female member, who refuses to disclose her age and is infuriated when Evee calls her an "old hag". Ironically she's dating Traveler, the oldest (over 800) member.
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* ChainmailBikini: Evon wears [[http://evoncomics.com/?comic=volume-four-chapter-17-page-666 one]] for one of her attempts to catch Hero's attention in chapter 17. He points out the practical issues almost immediately.
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* CasualKink: Traveller and Lanna discuss their plans to take over the Cabal while the latter is naked and chained to the bedposts.
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* {{Necromancer}}: Lanna the Shadow's specialty. She's been seen using magic to summon a life-sucking shapeshifter and weaponizing [[BloodyMurder her own blood.]]
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* VainSorceress: Lanna is the only member of the Cabal whose age is not listed, and the only female. She looks to be no older than thirty but the youngest Cabal member who will admit to his age is still over 100.
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* FiveManBand: The Cabal (the named members, when first introduced as a group)
** BigBad: Sevarian the Powerful
** TheDragon: Ferneris the Gray
** TheBrute: Maximus the Cruel
** EvilGenius: Legune the Alchemist
** DarkChick: Lanna the Shadow
** SixthRanger: Shakar the Manipulator [[note]]Who seems to have moved into the Genius role with Legune's death.[[/note]]
** BigBad: Sevarian the Powerful
** TheDragon: Ferneris the Gray
** TheBrute: Maximus the Cruel
** EvilGenius: Legune the Alchemist
** DarkChick: Lanna the Shadow
** SixthRanger: Shakar the Manipulator [[note]]Who seems to have moved into the Genius role with Legune's death.[[/note]]
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** Venir tries to sell Evon out to The Cabal for the reward. Not only are they not impressed with what he offered (they remind Venir that the reward was for Evon's ''capture'', not her location, which they already had), but they assume he was sent by Hero to feed them misinformation. The Cabal turns him over to Legune for [[EnhancedInterrogationTechniques "interrogation".]]
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** Venir tries to sell Evon out to The Cabal for the reward. Not only are they not impressed with what he offered (they [[note]]They remind Venir that the reward was for Evon's ''capture'', not her location, which they already had), had[[/note]], but they assume he was sent by Hero to feed them misinformation. The Cabal turns him over to Legune for [[EnhancedInterrogationTechniques "interrogation".]]
