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* ColorCodedEyes: Kara's eyes are a pale grey. They add to her waifish and distracted aura. The color also signifies that she is empty, a blank slate ready to be shape into her owner's will.
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* GrayEyes: Kara's eyes are a pale grey. They add to her waifish and distracted aura. The color also signifies that she is empty, a blank slate ready to be shape into her owner's will.
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* CanonWelding: Information in Kara's bio in ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'' indicates that the Kara in this tech demo is the very same Kara the player controls in the game itself.
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** Could also be argued that [[spoiler: the Operator had felt guilty after coming very closely to dissembling (killing) the fully-sentient Kara, who is begging for her life after being branded as 'defective'.]]
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** Could also be argued that [[spoiler: the Operator had felt guilty after coming very closely to dissembling (killing) disassembling (i.e. killing) the fully-sentient Kara, who is begging for her life after being branded as 'defective'.]]
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that's just a random AX 400; the Kara from the short is the Kara we play in Detroit
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]] An EasterEgg in ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'' [[spoiler:has a cameo of this Kara, and unfortunately, she ended up being broken and disposed to a junkyard.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]] An EasterEgg in ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'' [[spoiler:has a cameo of this Kara, and unfortunately, she ended up being broken and disposed to a junkyard.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]] An EasterEgg in ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'' [[spoiler:has a cameo of this Kara, and unfortunately, she ended up being broken and disposed to a junkyard.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]] An EasterEgg in ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'' [[spoiler:has a cameo of this Kara, and unfortunately, she ended up being broken and disposed to a junkyard.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: There are a few hints that she's becoming sentient before it's confirmed; the way she smiles after she's given a name, the look of wonderment as she uses her arms and legs for the first time, and the way she covers herself when she's naked speaks of more than just programming.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler: There [[spoiler:There are a few hints that she's becoming sentient before it's confirmed; the way she smiles after she's given a name, the look of wonderment as she uses her arms and legs for the first time, and the way she covers herself when she's naked speaks of more than just programming.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]] As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]] As An EasterEgg in ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'' [[spoiler:has a cameo of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.Kara, and unfortunately, she ended up being broken and disposed to a junkyard.]]
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued--''and'' that David Cage himself grew frustrated that he didn't know what would happen after the events in the tech demo--''Kara'' was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued--''and'' that David Cage himself grew frustrated that he didn't know what would happen after the events in the tech demo--''Kara'' was recently then announced to become for development into a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]]
** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
* CerebusSyndrome: again, ''very'' plot-heavy for a 7-minute tech demo, to the point that it ended up being the narrative foundation for an entire game.
** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
* CerebusSyndrome: again, ''very'' plot-heavy for a 7-minute tech demo, to the point that it ended up being the narrative foundation for an entire game.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]] As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
* CerebusSyndrome: again, Again, ''very'' plot-heavy for a 7-minute tech demo, to the point that it ended up being the narrative foundation for an entire game.
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Go watch it on [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lhoYLp8CtXI YouTube]].
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Go watch it on [[http://www.[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lhoYLp8CtXI com/watch?v=1EvqiGm0wz8 YouTube]].
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* CerebusSyndromeCerebusSyndrome: again, ''very'' plot-heavy for a 7-minute tech demo, to the point that it ended up being the narrative foundation for an entire game.
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* FemBot: showing linguistic drift. Kara defines herself as an "android" (from the suffix -oid, "having form or likeness of", and the Greek root "andro," or "man") despite there already being a word for robots that have the form or likeness of a woman ("gynoid"). But would [[ViewersAreMorons audiences understand the more uncommon term]]?
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The Operator [[spoiler: as he lets the fully sentient Kara-model go free.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: The Operator [[spoiler: as he lets the fully sentient Kara-model Kara model go free.]]
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: The Operator is moved to let Kara live as a sentient android, but she still has to work as a slave-bot.]]
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** [[spoiler: Also, "Stop! I'm scared! (''disassambly stops'') I want to live. I'm begging you."]]
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** [[spoiler: Also, "Stop! I'm scared! (''disassambly (''disassembly stops'') I want to live. I'm begging you."]]
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued--''and'' that David Cage himself grew frustrated that he didn't know what would happen after the events in the tech deom--''Kara'' was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued--''and'' that David Cage himself grew frustrated that he didn't know what would happen after the events in the tech deom--''Kara'' demo--''Kara'' was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara continued--''and'' that David Cage himself grew frustrated that he didn't know what would happen after the events in the tech deom--''Kara'' was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomeHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomeHuman''.''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomeHuman'', ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomeHuman''.
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman''.''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman''.
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman'', ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomeHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomingHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomingHuman''.''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman''.
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomingHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomingHuman'', ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman''.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman''.''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomingHuman''.
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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** As of the trailer to ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman'', ''VideoGame/Detroit:BecomingHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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** As of the trailer to Detroit: Becoming Human, [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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** As of the trailer to Detroit: Becoming Human, ''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman'', [[spoiler: this seems not the case.]]
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of Detroit: Becoming Human.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of Detroit: Becoming Human.''VideoGame/DetroitBecomingHuman''.
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Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of Detroit: Becoming Human.
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Due to the positive reception of the tech demo and many people wanting to know how Kara's story continued, Kara was recently announced to become a full game by the name of Detroit: Becoming Human.
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Now, Kara will become a full game by the name of Detroit: Becoming Human.
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Now, Kara will become a full game by the name of videogame/Detroit: Becoming Human.
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Now, Kara will become a full game by the name of videogame/Detroit: Detroit: Becoming Human.
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Now, Kara will become a full game by the name of Videogame/Detroit: Becoming Human.
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Now, Kara will become a full game by the name of Videogame/Detroit: videogame/Detroit: Becoming Human.
