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* TheGlomp: When Penny spots Ruby, she charges towards her with the full force of her rocket boosters, slamming Ruby into the ground in a very enthusiastic hug. Ruby regains her feet... painfully.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Pietro medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in an unauthorised ship, ditching said ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command and then engaging in unauthorised battle. Also, since Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all considered unlicensed Huntsmen, they aren't authorised to act as though they are.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Pietro medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in an unauthorised ship, ditching said ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command and then engaging in unauthorised battle. Also, since Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all considered unlicensed Huntsmen, they aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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* TheGlomp: When Penny spots Ruby, she charges towards her with uses the full force of her rocket boosters, slamming boosters to slam Ruby into the ground in a very enthusiastic hug. Ruby regains her feet... painfully.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defendPietro Pietro's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in an unauthorised a stolen ship, ditching said ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command and then engaging in unauthorised battle. Also, since Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all considered unlicensed Huntsmen, they aren't authorised to act as though they are.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in a unauthorised ship, ditching said ship against orders from Atlesian command and then engaging in unauthorised battle. Also, since Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen, they aren't authorised to act as though they are.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. People keep to themselves and the miners that are ferried to and from their work places are exhausted, dirty and demoralised. When Blake comments on how awful the city is, she is immediately accosted by a drunkard for insulting his city.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. People keep to themselves and the miners that are ferried to and from their work places are exhausted, dirty and demoralised. When Blake comments on how awful the city is, she is immediately accosted by a drunkard for insulting his city.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's Pietro medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in a an unauthorised ship, ditching said ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command and then engaging in unauthorised battle. Also, since Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all considered unlicensed Huntsmen, they aren't authorised to act as though they are.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. People keep to themselves and the miners that are ferried to and from their work places are exhausted, dirty and demoralised. When Blake comments on how awful the city is, she is immediately accosted by a drunkard forinsulting mocking his city.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. People keep to themselves and the miners that are ferried to and from their work places are exhausted, dirty and demoralised. When Blake comments on how awful the city is, she is immediately accosted by a drunkard for
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in a unauthorised ship, ditching the ship in an unauthorised area and then engaging in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in a unauthorised ship, ditching the said ship in an unauthorised area against orders from Atlesian command and then engaging in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Also, since Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore Huntsmen, they aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in a stolen ship, landing in an unauthorised area, ditching the ship, and then engaging in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. However, Ace Ops quickly busts the group for illegally entering Atlas in a stolen unauthorised ship, landing ditching the ship in an unauthorised area, ditching the ship, area and then engaging in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm, only to be arrested. Ace Ops captures them for being unauthorised personnel who arrived in an unauthorised ship, landed in an unauthorised area, ditched the ship, and then engaged in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm, only to be arrested. Grimm. However, Ace Ops captures them quickly busts the group for being unauthorised personnel who arrived illegally entering Atlas in an unauthorised a stolen ship, landed landing in an unauthorised area, ditched ditching the ship, and then engaged engaging in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Teams RWBY, JNR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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* CallBack: Pietro is introduced as a close ally of Ironwood and, when he sees Yang, he exclaims that she painted the cyberarm. In the Volume 4 episode where Yang originally receives the arm, her father states Ironwood personally commissioned a state-of-the-art cybernetic arm without being asked. It arrives in an unpainted metallic form but Yang changes that to fit in with her preferred colour scheme.
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* CallBack: Pietro is introduced as a close ally of Ironwood and, when he sees Yang, he exclaims that she painted the cyberarm. In the Volume 4 episode where 4, Yang's arm had arrived unpainted; Yang originally receives the arm, her father states Ironwood personally commissioned a state-of-the-art cybernetic arm without being asked. It arrives in an unpainted metallic form but Yang changes that painted it herself to fit in with into her preferred colour color scheme.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Pietro Poledina, a master inventor who works alongside General Ironwood as well as helping out the locals of Mantle. As Penny's father, he is the man responsible for creating the world's first synthetic lifeform that is capable of generating an Aura, and he also constructed Yang's state-of-the-art cybernetic arm. He also services Maria's cybernetic eyes every ten years to keep them in working order.
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* GadgeteerGenius: Dr. Pietro Poledina, Polendina, a master inventor who works alongside General Ironwood as well as helping out the locals of Mantle. As Penny's father, he is the man responsible for creating the world's first synthetic lifeform that is capable of generating an Aura, and he also constructed Yang's state-of-the-art cybernetic arm. He also services Maria's cybernetic eyes every ten years to keep them in working order.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm, only to be arrested. Ace Ops captures them for being unauthorised personnel who arrived in an unauthorised ship, landed in an unauthorised area, ditched the ship, and then engaged in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Teams RWBY, JNPR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm, only to be arrested. Ace Ops captures them for being unauthorised personnel who arrived in an unauthorised ship, landed in an unauthorised area, ditched the ship, and then engaged in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Teams RWBY, JNPR JNR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore aren't authorised to act as though they are.
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I'm not sure why this was changed to Came Back Strong, given that she had the rocket booster ability in V3 as well. I've put it back to Back From The Dead, which is currently a ZCE. Call Black misuse; repalced with a genuine example. The protagonists didn't really need rescuing, so she was making a Dynamic Entry rather than a Big Damn Heroes one. The staff is very easy to see without any need to freeze frame, so removed for misuse. While Jacques is an example, the opening credits are not episode specific, so this should be troped elsewhere. Reality Ensues misuse: the trope is for when the narrative flow is interrupted by something 'real life'. The real life has to prevent the normal narrative process that should happen. The entire episode is building up to the heroes being arrested and their capture is even shown in the trailer advertising the volume. The expected narrative flow is therefore that they engage in acts throughout the episode that justify their capture at the end of it.
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* BackFromTheDead: Penny has been rebuilt, much to Ruby's delight.
* BigDamnHeroes: Just as a Grimm is about to pounce on Blake, Penny appears out of nowhere and eliminates it.
* CallBack: Yang's bionic arm still has the burn mark from her fight with Adam.
** Blake's sword is still broken as well, forcing her to switch it to gun mode for the fight.
* CameBackStrong: As it transpires, Pietro Polendina ended up rebuilding and upgrading Penny during the Mistral arc, after the Amity Colosseum returned to Atlas. She's now capable of flight and works to protect Mantle.
* FantasticRacism: A drunkard in the streets of Mantle accosts Blake for saying their town looks awful, and starts to insult her over her Faunus nature until Weiss hurls him into a dumpster.
* FreezeFrameBonus: At the end of the opening titles, we see a brief flash of the Staff of Creation.
** Also in the opening, when a man throws a rock, at the hologram of Ironwood, he briefly turns in Jacques Schnee.
* GadgeteerGenius: Pietro Poledina, a master inventor who works alongside General Ironwood as well as helping out the locals of Mantle. He's revealed to be Penny's father, as well as the one who constructed Yang's bionic arm.
* TheGlomp: Once again, Ruby is subject to a painful version of this from Penny.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm, only for them to be arrested since they do not have a Huntsman license ''and'' they disobeyed orders from Atlesian command to ditch their ship in Mantle.
* RealityEnsues: The heroes illegally enter Atlas using their stolen ship and ditch it in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command, and later use their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This catches the attention of the local authorities, who quickly bust the heroes.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. Blake gets accosted in the streets by a drunk man for saying the city seems awful.
* BigDamnHeroes: Just as a Grimm is about to pounce on Blake, Penny appears out of nowhere and eliminates it.
* CallBack: Yang's bionic arm still has the burn mark from her fight with Adam.
** Blake's sword is still broken as well, forcing her to switch it to gun mode for the fight.
* CameBackStrong: As it transpires, Pietro Polendina ended up rebuilding and upgrading Penny during the Mistral arc, after the Amity Colosseum returned to Atlas. She's now capable of flight and works to protect Mantle.
* FantasticRacism: A drunkard in the streets of Mantle accosts Blake for saying their town looks awful, and starts to insult her over her Faunus nature until Weiss hurls him into a dumpster.
* FreezeFrameBonus: At the end of the opening titles, we see a brief flash of the Staff of Creation.
** Also in the opening, when a man throws a rock, at the hologram of Ironwood, he briefly turns in Jacques Schnee.
* GadgeteerGenius: Pietro Poledina, a master inventor who works alongside General Ironwood as well as helping out the locals of Mantle. He's revealed to be Penny's father, as well as the one who constructed Yang's bionic arm.
* TheGlomp: Once again, Ruby is subject to a painful version of this from Penny.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm, only for them to be arrested since they do not have a Huntsman license ''and'' they disobeyed orders from Atlesian command to ditch their ship in Mantle.
* RealityEnsues: The heroes illegally enter Atlas using their stolen ship and ditch it in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command, and later use their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This catches the attention of the local authorities, who quickly bust the heroes.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. Blake gets accosted in the streets by a drunk man for saying the city seems awful.
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* BackFromTheDead: Penny has been rebuilt, much Pietro explains that, as long as Penny's core is salvageable, it doesn't matter how badly torn up she is. She can still be restored to Ruby's delight.
* BigDamnHeroes: Justworking order, given enough time. She now claims to be as a Grimm is about to pounce on Blake, Penny appears out of nowhere good as new, perhaps even better, and eliminates it.
is currently assigned to protect the city of Mantle.
* CallBack:Yang's bionic Pietro is introduced as a close ally of Ironwood and, when he sees Yang, he exclaims that she painted the cyberarm. In the Volume 4 episode where Yang originally receives the arm, her father states Ironwood personally commissioned a state-of-the-art cybernetic arm still has the burn mark from her fight without being asked. It arrives in an unpainted metallic form but Yang changes that to fit in with Adam.
**her preferred colour scheme.
* DynamicEntry: When the heroes are fighting the Grimm, one launches itself at Blake'ssword is still broken as well, forcing her back. It's killed by a laser that goes on to switch it to gun mode for kill the fight.
* CameBackStrong: As it transpires, Pietro Polendina ended up rebuilding and upgradingrest of the Grimm the heroes are fighting. Penny during the Mistral arc, after the Amity Colosseum returned to Atlas. She's now capable flies into view before landing in front of flight and works to protect Mantle.
them all.
* FantasticRacism: A drunkard in the streets of Mantle accosts Blake for saying their town looks awful, and starts to insult herover her Faunus nature until Weiss hurls him into a dumpster.
* FreezeFrameBonus: At the end of the opening titles, we see a brief flash of the Staff of Creation.
** Also in the opening, when a man throws a rock, at the hologram of Ironwood, he briefly turns in Jacques Schnee.
* GadgeteerGenius: Pietro Poledina, a master inventor who works alongside General Ironwood as well as helping out the locals of Mantle. He's revealed to be As Penny's father, as well as he is the one who man responsible for creating the world's first synthetic lifeform that is capable of generating an Aura, and he also constructed Yang's bionic arm.
state-of-the-art cybernetic arm. He also services Maria's cybernetic eyes every ten years to keep them in working order.
* TheGlomp:Once again, When Penny spots Ruby, she charges towards her with the full force of her rocket boosters, slamming Ruby is subject to into the ground in a painful version of this from Penny.
very enthusiastic hug. Ruby regains her feet... painfully.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm, onlyfor them to be arrested since arrested. Ace Ops captures them for being unauthorised personnel who arrived in an unauthorised ship, landed in an unauthorised area, ditched the ship, and then engaged in unauthorised battle. On top of that, Teams RWBY, JNPR and Oscar are all unlicensed Huntsmen and therefore aren't authorised to act as though they do not have a Huntsman license ''and'' they disobeyed orders from Atlesian command to ditch their ship in Mantle.
* RealityEnsues: The heroes illegally enter Atlas using their stolen ship and ditch it in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command, and later use their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This catches the attention of the local authorities, who quickly bust the heroes.
are.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. People keep to themselves and the miners that are ferried to and from their work places are exhausted, dirty and demoralised. When Blakegets comments on how awful the city is, she is immediately accosted in the streets by a drunk man drunkard for saying the city seems awful.insulting his city.
* BigDamnHeroes: Just
* CallBack:
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* DynamicEntry: When the heroes are fighting the Grimm, one launches itself at Blake's
* CameBackStrong: As it transpires, Pietro Polendina ended up rebuilding and upgrading
* FantasticRacism: A drunkard in the streets of Mantle accosts Blake for saying their town looks awful, and starts to insult her
** Also in the opening, when a man throws a rock, at the hologram of Ironwood, he briefly turns in Jacques Schnee.
* TheGlomp:
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm, only
* RealityEnsues: The heroes illegally enter Atlas using their stolen ship and ditch it in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command, and later use their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This catches the attention of the local authorities, who quickly bust the heroes.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. People keep to themselves and the miners that are ferried to and from their work places are exhausted, dirty and demoralised. When Blake
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* FantasticRacism: A drunkard in the streets of Mantle accosts Blake for saying their town looks awful, and starts to insult her over her Faunus nature until Weiss hurls him into a dumpster.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just as a Grimm is about to pounce of Blake, Penny appears out of nowhere and eliminates it.
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* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. Blake gets accosted in the streets by a drunk man for saying the city seems awful.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. Blake gets accosted in the streets by a drunk man for saying the city seems awful.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes illegally enter Atlas using their stolen ship and ditched ditch it on in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command, and later use their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This catches the attention of the local authorities, who quickly bust the heroes.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. Blake gets accosted in the streets by a drunk man for saying the city seemsawful.awful.
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* BackFromTheDead: Penny has been rebuilt, much to Ruby's delight.
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** Also in the opening, when a man throws a rock, at the hologram of Ironwood, he briefs turns in Jacques Schnee.
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** Also in the opening, when a man throws a rock, at the hologram of Ironwood, he briefs briefly turns in Jacques Schnee.
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** Also in the opening, when a man throws a rock at the hologram of Ironwood, he briefs turns in Jacques Schnee.
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* CallBack: Yang's bionic arm still has the burn mark from her fight with Adam.
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* CallBack: Yang's bionic arm still has the burn mark from her fight with Adam.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just as a Grimm is about to pounce of Blake, Penny appears out of nowhere and eliminates it.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This results in them getting busted for their actions.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes illegally enter Atlas using their stolen ship and ditched the ship in it on Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used command, and later use their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This results in them getting busted for their actions.catches the attention of the local authorities, who quickly bust the heroes.
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* BackFromTheDead: As it transpires, Pietro Polendina ended up rebuilding and upgrading Penny during the Mistral arc, after the Amity Colosseum returned to Atlas. She's now capable of flight and works to protect Mantle.
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* BackFromTheDead: CameBackStrong: As it transpires, Pietro Polendina ended up rebuilding and upgrading Penny during the Mistral arc, after the Amity Colosseum returned to Atlas. She's now capable of flight and works to protect Mantle.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Just as a Grimm is about to pounce of Blake, Penny appears out of nowhere and eliminates it.
* CallBack: Yang's bionic arm still has the burn mark from her fight with Adam.
* CallBack: Yang's bionic arm still has the burn mark from her fight with Adam.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This results in them getting busted for their actions.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This results in them getting busted for their actions.actions.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. Blake gets accosted in the streets by a drunk man for saying the city seems awful.
* WretchedHive: Mantle is poor, grimy, and heavily monitored by soldiers. Blake gets accosted in the streets by a drunk man for saying the city seems awful.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. They're busted by a special ops team as a result.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. They're This results in them getting busted by a special ops team as a result.for their actions.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes end up defending Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. But since they do not have a Huntsman license ''and'' they disobeyed orders from Atlesian command to ditch their ship in Mantle, the heroes are quickly arrested.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes end up defending defend Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm. But Grimm, only for them to be arrested since they do not have a Huntsman license ''and'' they disobeyed orders from Atlesian command to ditch their ship in Mantle, the heroes are quickly arrested.Mantle.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes end up defending Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm - for that, Grimm. But since they were arrested for being unlicensed Huntsmen do not have a Huntsman license ''and'' for illegally ditching the Manta they disobeyed orders from Atlesian command to ditch their ship they came in.in Mantle, the heroes are quickly arrested.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes end up defending Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm - for that, they were arrested for being unlicensed Huntsmen ''and'' for illegally ditching the Manta ship they came in.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This results in a special ops team arresting them for various infractions.
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* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This results in They're busted by a special ops team arresting them for various infractions.as a result.
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!!Tropes in this episode include:
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!!Tropes in this episode include:include:
* BackFromTheDead: As it transpires, Pietro Polendina ended up rebuilding and upgrading Penny during the Mistral arc, after the Amity Colosseum returned to Atlas. She's now capable of flight and works to protect Mantle.
* TheGlomp: Once again, Ruby is subject to a painful version of this from Penny.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes end up defending Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm - for that, they were arrested for being unlicensed Huntsmen ''and'' for ditching the Manta ship they came in.
* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This results in a special ops team arresting them for various infractions.
* BackFromTheDead: As it transpires, Pietro Polendina ended up rebuilding and upgrading Penny during the Mistral arc, after the Amity Colosseum returned to Atlas. She's now capable of flight and works to protect Mantle.
* TheGlomp: Once again, Ruby is subject to a painful version of this from Penny.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: The heroes end up defending Dr. Polendina's medical practice against a swarm of Grimm - for that, they were arrested for being unlicensed Huntsmen ''and'' for ditching the Manta ship they came in.
* RealityEnsues: The heroes ditched the ship in Mantle against orders from Atlesian command to protect Weiss, then used their weapons to defend Mantle from a host of Grimm. This results in a special ops team arresting them for various infractions.
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'''Volume 6, Episode 1:'''
!Argus Limited
!Argus Limited
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'''Volume 6, 7, Episode 1:'''
!Argus Limited
!The Greatest Kingdom
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'''Volume 6, Episode 1:'''
!Argus Limited
Our heroes have finally made it to Atlas, but are they truly as safe as they’d hoped? This shining city in the clouds may be a beacon of hope for Remnant, but it casts a darkshadow …shadow ...
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!Argus Limited
Our heroes have finally made it to Atlas, but are they truly as safe as they’d hoped? This shining city in the clouds may be a beacon of hope for Remnant, but it casts a dark
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