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* AbsentMindedProfessor: Pietro is an unparalleled roboticist responsible for building Penny, the first synthetic life-form to produce an Aura. He also created Yang's state-of-the-art cybernetic arm, and is responsible for keeping Maria's cybernetic eyes functioning and tuned. Despite the fact Maria has been returning to him for decades to get her eyes readjusted, he doesn't initial recognise her or understand the purpose for her visit until after she has jogged his memory several times.
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* AbsentMindedProfessor: Pietro is an unparalleled roboticist responsible for building Penny, the first synthetic life-form to produce an Aura. He also created Yang's state-of-the-art cybernetic arm, and is responsible for keeping Maria's cybernetic eyes functioning and tuned. Despite the fact Maria has been returning to him for decades to get her eyes readjusted, he doesn't initial recognise initially recognize her or understand the purpose for her visit until after she has jogged his memory several times.
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* AlternateCatchphraseInflection: Penny usually says her catch phrase "Salutations!" in a quick and chipper tone. For her first saying after returning Penny says it slowly and draws out each syllable to emphasize her return.
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The heroes travelled to Atlas hoping that General Ironwood could protect the Relic of Knowledge. What they find upon setting foot in Mantle makes them rethink whether that's the case.
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The heroes travelled to Atlas hoping that General Ironwood could protect the Relic of Knowledge. What However, what they find upon setting foot in Mantle makes them rethink whether that's the case.
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Our heroes have finally made it to Atlas, but are they truly as safe as they’d hoped? This shining city in the clouds may be a beacon of hope for Remnant, but it casts a dark shadow...
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* WorthIt: After Blake's comment on Mantle insults a drunk bystander she tries to calm the situation down by apologizing. He starts to call her a stupid Faunus which cause Weiss to send him flying into a dumpster. The others look at her in surprise. She just says it was worth it before they run off.
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* WorthIt: After Blake's comment on Mantle insults a drunk bystander she tries to calm the situation down by apologizing. He starts to call her a stupid Faunus which cause causes Weiss to send him flying into a dumpster. The others look at her in surprise. She just says it was worth it before they run off.
