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* TheCreon: Two examples appear among the pirate crew in the prequel trilogy. When a misunderstanding makes Captain Mak think Jules wants to usurp his job, she sincerely denies it. She is surprised to learn that she, rather than First Mate Ang (who would rather be permanent first mate no matter who is in charge), is being groomed as Mak's successor but has no desire to step into Mak's shoes for the rest of his natural life. [[spoiler:At the end of ''The Pirate of the Prophecy'', Mak suffers a MentorOccupationHazard and Jules assumes command while Ang does indeed stay first mate.]]
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* [[spoiler: ColonyShip: The Demeter is still in orbit, although mostly stripped. It's the reason the Mechanics Guild forbids astronomy]]
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** In ''The Fate of the Free Lands'', the prisoners Jules liberates and works alongside of while she's separated from her crew prove to be reliable, resourceful, and lucky enough to avoid dying at the hands of multiple threats. * MilitaryMage: Mages with combat orientated magic like Alain are mercenaries under the control of the guild.
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** In ''The Fate of the Free Lands'', the prisoners Jules liberates and works alongside of while she's separated from her crew prove to be reliable, resourceful, and lucky enough to avoid dying at the hands of multiple threats. threats.
* MilitaryMage: Mages with combat orientated magic like Alain are mercenaries under the control of the guild.
* MilitaryMage: Mages with combat orientated magic like Alain are mercenaries under the control of the guild.
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* WrittenByTheWinners: Mechanic's Guild history bares little resemblance to what actually happened. [[spoiler: From a long history of purges reducing their technical level, to a series of civil wars, to the true nature of their guild as Crew on the Demeter]]
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* WrittenByTheWinners: Mechanic's Guild history bares bears little resemblance to what actually happened. [[spoiler: From a long history of purges reducing their technical level, to a series of civil wars, to the true nature of their guild as Crew on the Demeter]]
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* DungeonBypass: When [[spoiler:Mari is captured and locked up, Alain]] breaks into the dungeon simply by walking right through the walls with magic. However, he then lacks the strength to do the same for their escape, leaving him stuck in the dungeon too. He admits that he didn't think it through properly. Fortunately, [[spoiler:he does have enough strength to create a hole big enough for Mari to tamper with the lock]].
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* DungeonBypass: When [[spoiler:Mari is captured and locked up, Alain]] breaks into the dungeon by simply by walking right through the walls with magic. However, he then lacks the strength to do the same for their escape, leaving him stuck in the dungeon too. He admits that he didn't think it through properly. Fortunately, [[spoiler:he does have enough strength to create a hole big enough for Mari to tamper with the lock]].
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* MilitaryMage: Mages with combat orientated magic like Alain are mercenaries under the control of the guild.
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* MenOfSherwood: Mari's allies are competent, but are more of BadassArmy due to their size and eventual military nature. Multiple pirate groups in the ''Empress of the Endless Sea'' prequel trilogy play this straighter, though.
** The other other members of Jules's pirate crew are accomplished fighters who have a good survival rate.
** In ''The Fate of the Free Lands'', the prisoners Jules liberates and works alongside of while she's separated from her crew prove to be reliable, resourceful, and lucky enough to avoid dying at the hands of multiple threats. * MilitaryMage: Mages with combat orientated magic like Alain are mercenaries under the control of the guild.
** The other other members of Jules's pirate crew are accomplished fighters who have a good survival rate.
** In ''The Fate of the Free Lands'', the prisoners Jules liberates and works alongside of while she's separated from her crew prove to be reliable, resourceful, and lucky enough to avoid dying at the hands of multiple threats. * MilitaryMage: Mages with combat orientated magic like Alain are mercenaries under the control of the guild.
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* CultDefector: An interesting case where the "Cults" are the forces that govern the world. Both the Mage and Mechanics Guild (mainly the later) impress a mindset of superiority and caring for no one outside their Guilds upon the children they forcibly take in (along with plenty of other messed up philosophies for the Mage Guild), and the series begins with Mechanic Mari and Mage Alain beginning to resist that mindset and conditioning, [[spoiler:eventually rallying others to do so as well and outright login to war with the Guilds they came from]].
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* CultDefector: An interesting case where the "Cults" are the forces that govern the world. Both the Mage and Mechanics Guild (mainly the later) latter) impress a mindset of superiority and caring for no one outside their Guilds upon the children they forcibly take in (along with plenty of other messed up philosophies for the Mage Guild), and the series begins with Mechanic Mari and Mage Alain beginning to resist that mindset and conditioning, [[spoiler:eventually rallying others to do so as well and outright login to war with the Guilds they came from]].
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* CultDefector: An interesting case where the "Cults" are the forces that govern the world. Both the Mage and Mechanics Guild (mainly the later) impress a mindset of superiority and caring for no one outside their Guilds upon the children they forcibly take in (along with plenty of other messed up philosophies for the Mage Guild), and the series begins with Mechanic Mari and Mage Alain beginning to resist that mindset and conditioning, [[[spoiler:eventually rallying others to do so as well and outright login to war with the Guilds they came from]].
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* CultDefector: An interesting case where the "Cults" are the forces that govern the world. Both the Mage and Mechanics Guild (mainly the later) impress a mindset of superiority and caring for no one outside their Guilds upon the children they forcibly take in (along with plenty of other messed up philosophies for the Mage Guild), and the series begins with Mechanic Mari and Mage Alain beginning to resist that mindset and conditioning, [[[spoiler:eventually [[spoiler:eventually rallying others to do so as well and outright login to war with the Guilds they came from]].
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* StarCrossedLovers: Alain and Mari
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* StarCrossedLovers: Master Mechanic Mari and Mage Alain and Maricome from guilds which ban members from even speaking to each other, but quickly fall in love.
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* AntiMutiny: [[spoiler:The Librarians]][[spoiler: The Librarians are descendants of the starship crew members who refused to support their superiors' abuse of their authority to found the Mechanics Guild and rule over the passengers they were supposed to protect.]]
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* LostColony: [[spoiler:The Demeter project]] [[spoiler: The world of the series is a space colony which lost contact with Earth due to TheMutiny.]]
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* PirateGirl: [[spoiler:Mari in book 4]]
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* PirateGirl: [[spoiler:Mari in book 4]]Teenaged mechanic Mari eventually becomes an honorary pirate due to an alliance she forms with some {{Lovable Rogue}}s who help her capture vessels of the Mechanics Guild. Something similar happened to her ancestor Jules.
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The abusive Mage Guild bring up Asha with condemnations about how her beauty means she isn’t detached enough to master their teachings.
* TheSociopath: PrinceTien.Tien is a sadist who is devoid of any empathy or compassion.
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* StartMyOwn: [[spoiler: The Teenaged Mage Alain and teenaged mechanic Mari start the New Dawn]]Dawn to defy their former guilds and give dissidents from the guilds and unaffiliated commoners a new place to go.]]
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* ChosenOne: The Daughter of Jules, who is prophesied to break the Great Guilds. Of course, since the prophecy was made during Jules' lifetime, all of her children were raised in obscurity to prevent the Guilds from finding them. Between that and the fact that she died centuries ago, it's impossible to prove or disprove the theory that anyone is a descendant of Jules.
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* ChosenOne: ChosenOne:
** The Daughter of Jules, who is prophesied to break the Great Guilds. Of course, since the prophecy was made during Jules' lifetime, all of her children were raised in obscurity to prevent the Guilds from finding them. Between that and the fact that she died centuries ago, it's impossible to prove or disprove the theory that anyone is a descendant ofJules.Jules.
** The prequel novels reveal that Alain was also a Chosen One, but the mage giving the prophecy bled out before he could finish saying it, so it ended up being forgotten.
** The Daughter of Jules, who is prophesied to break the Great Guilds. Of course, since the prophecy was made during Jules' lifetime, all of her children were raised in obscurity to prevent the Guilds from finding them. Between that and the fact that she died centuries ago, it's impossible to prove or disprove the theory that anyone is a descendant of
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* WastelandElder: Professor Wren is the elderly spokesperson of the one bastion of civilization inside the city of Marandur (a heavily guarded university) after the city was quarantined two hundred years ago and everyone else inside long ago descended to barbarism.
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* MirroringFactions: For all of their posturing about being supreme forces miles above each other and the commons, there's isn't much difference between the Great Guilds. Both are absurdly in denial that the other can do anything important, treat the commons like dirt and have trouble adapting in the face of adversity.
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* NotSoDifferent: For all of their posturing about being supreme forces miles above each other and the commons, there's isn't much difference between the Great Guilfs. Both are absurdly in denial that the other can do anything important, treat the commons like dirt and have trouble adapting in the face of adversity.
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* FamousLastWords: The dying Mages Jules talks to in the first and second prequel novels both go out with a memorable quote.
--> '''Mage from The Pirate of the Prophecy:''' The shadow asks many questions. The shadow seeks wisdom given. Others can show the path. But only that one can walk the path and find what lies....at the end
--> '''Mage from Explorer of the Endless Sea:''' [[IDieFree Over...at....last....]]. Ha...ppiness....Illusion.
--> '''Mage from The Pirate of the Prophecy:''' The shadow asks many questions. The shadow seeks wisdom given. Others can show the path. But only that one can walk the path and find what lies....at the end
--> '''Mage from Explorer of the Endless Sea:''' [[IDieFree Over...at....last....]]. Ha...ppiness....Illusion.
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'''''The Pillars of Reality''''' is a series of {{Fantasy}}-ish (perhaps ScienceFantasy) novels by Creator/JohnHemry (aka Jack Campbell). They mark a departure from his more normal straight ScienceFiction work (such as ''Literature/TheLostFleet''). So far, there are twelve books set in this world — the original series had six books, and a follow-up series called ''The Legacy Of Dragons'' had three, and the ''Empress of the Endless Sea'' prequel series also has three.
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''The Pillars of
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* CruelMercy: Happens to enemies on multiple occasions. In ''The Wrath of the Great Guilds'', when [[spoiler:Deciding not to request the execution of the Mechanics Guild leaders from the Emperor's emissary]] Mari notes:
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* CruelMercy: Happens to enemies on multiple occasions. In ''The Wrath of the Great Guilds'', when [[spoiler:Deciding [[spoiler: deciding not to request the execution of the Mechanics Guild leaders from the Emperor's emissary]] Mari notes:
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Mages, due to having their emotions mostly drummed out of them. This is lampshades when Alain ha an encounter with another former Mage [[DefectorFromDecadence who fled the order as an acolyte and made a new life with the commons.]]
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Mages, due to having their emotions mostly drummed out of them. This is lampshades lampshaded when Alain ha has an encounter with another former Mage [[DefectorFromDecadence who fled the order as an acolyte and made a new life with the commons.]]
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** In the prequel books Jules is briefly aided by a man who reveals the he is the son of a mechanic who was disowned by his father for failing the Mechanic aptitude tests and is thus eager to contribute to something that will hurt the Guilds.
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** In the third book Asha tells Alain that there was one Mage Acolyte powerful enough to become a full Mage at ''12'' and another who did so at sixteen) but both died in mysterious "accidents" after the Mage leaders felt that they were youngg and inquisitive enough to challenge the elders.
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** In the third book Asha tells Alain that there was one Mage Acolyte powerful enough to become a full Mage at ''12'' and another who did so at sixteen) but both died in mysterious "accidents" after the Mage leaders felt that they were youngg young and inquisitive enough to challenge the elders.
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* StealingFromTheTill: In ''The Pirate of the Prophecy'', Jules kills the captain of another pirate ship when first he tries to bribe her into having sex with him (and making him the ancestor of the descendant in the prophecy) and then tries to force himself on her when she says no. An ugly confrontation with the man's crew is averted when Jules reveals that he had a pouch of gems (enough to buy two new ships) that he's used to try to bribe her. Gems that the captain had taken from the ships treasury to keep for himself rather than divide them with the rest of the crew. This makes their desire to avenge their captain fizzle out quickly.
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* StealingFromTheTill: In ''The Pirate of the Prophecy'', Jules kills the captain of another pirate ship when first he tries to bribe her into having sex with him (and making him the ancestor of the descendant in the prophecy) and then tries to force himself on her when she says no. An ugly confrontation with the man's crew is averted when Jules reveals that he had a pouch of gems (enough to buy two new ships) that he's he used to try to bribe her. Gems that the captain had taken from the ships treasury to keep for himself rather than divide them with the rest of the crew. This makes their desire to avenge their captain fizzle out quickly.
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* StealingFromTheTill: In ''The Pirate of the Prophecy'', Jules kills the captain of another pirate ship when first he tries to bribe her into having sex with him (and making him the ancestor of the descendant in the prophecy) and then tries to force himself on her when she says no. An ugly connotation with the man's crew is averted when Jules reveals that he had a pouch of gems (enough to buy two new ships) that he's used to try to bribe her. Gems that the captain had taken from the ships treasury to keep for himself rather than divide them with the rest of the crew. This makes their desire to avenge their captain fizzle out quickly.
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* StealingFromTheTill: In ''The Pirate of the Prophecy'', Jules kills the captain of another pirate ship when first he tries to bribe her into having sex with him (and making him the ancestor of the descendant in the prophecy) and then tries to force himself on her when she says no. An ugly connotation confrontation with the man's crew is averted when Jules reveals that he had a pouch of gems (enough to buy two new ships) that he's used to try to bribe her. Gems that the captain had taken from the ships treasury to keep for himself rather than divide them with the rest of the crew. This makes their desire to avenge their captain fizzle out quickly.
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* FakeDefector: The mechanics try this a few times as Mari begins forming an army but due to the LivingLieDetector Mages working with her it never gets very far.
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* FakeDefector: The mechanics try this a few times as Mari begins forming an army but due to the LivingLieDetector Mages working with her it never gets very far.the false defectors are quickly pointed out and captured.
* FamousLastWords: The dying Mages Jules talks to in the first and second prequel novels both go out with a memorable quote.
--> '''Mage from The Pirate of the Prophecy:''' The shadow asks many questions. The shadow seeks wisdom given. Others can show the path. But only that one can walk the path and find what lies....at the end
--> '''Mage from Explorer of the Endless Sea:''' [[IDieFree Over...at....last....]]. Ha...ppiness....Illusion.
* FamousLastWords: The dying Mages Jules talks to in the first and second prequel novels both go out with a memorable quote.
--> '''Mage from The Pirate of the Prophecy:''' The shadow asks many questions. The shadow seeks wisdom given. Others can show the path. But only that one can walk the path and find what lies....at the end
--> '''Mage from Explorer of the Endless Sea:''' [[IDieFree Over...at....last....]]. Ha...ppiness....Illusion.
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* HeroOfAnotherStory:
** In the fourth book, Mage Elder Hiro [[spoiler:One of the first Mages to defect to Mari and Alain's army]] mentions that several decades ago, there was another daughter of Jules line who emerged and apparently tried to act against the Guilds, but she was betrayed and murdered.
** In the third book Asha tells Alain that there was one Mage Acolyte powerful enough to become a full Mage at ''12'' and another who did so at sixteen) but both died in mysterious "accidents" after the Mage leaders felt that they were youngg and inquisitive enough to challenge the elders.
** In the fourth book, Mage Elder Hiro [[spoiler:One of the first Mages to defect to Mari and Alain's army]] mentions that several decades ago, there was another daughter of Jules line who emerged and apparently tried to act against the Guilds, but she was betrayed and murdered.
** In the third book Asha tells Alain that there was one Mage Acolyte powerful enough to become a full Mage at ''12'' and another who did so at sixteen) but both died in mysterious "accidents" after the Mage leaders felt that they were youngg and inquisitive enough to challenge the elders.
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