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* WouldHurtAChild: Y'golonac has no reservations when it comes to who he kills.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Y'golonac has no reservations when it comes to who he kills.kills.
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* HateSink: [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos Y'golonac]], per usual, is the Great Old One of Depravity and Perversion who manipulates a man into summoning him and taking possession of his body to commit murders and rapes. Upon meeting the protagonist, he tries to force him to say his name in hopes of breaking free from his imprisonment and bringing about the end of mankind.
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''[[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/The_Defiler The Defiler]]'', by Tropers/AustinDR, is a short horror story inspired by the ''Literature/CthulhuMythos'' primarily Creator/RamseyCampbell's contributions to the mythos. The story follows a nameless protagonist whose love of reading leads to him accepting an offer from a wealthy man on paying a visit to his house to read forbidden literature. However, he comes to the realization that he bit off more than he could chew.
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''[[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/The_Defiler The Defiler]]'', by Tropers/AustinDR, is a short horror story inspired by the ''Literature/CthulhuMythos'' ''Literature/CthulhuMythos'', primarily Creator/RamseyCampbell's contributions to the mythos.Mythos. The story follows a nameless protagonist whose love of reading leads to him accepting an offer from a wealthy man on paying a visit to his house to read forbidden literature. However, he comes to the realization that he bit off more than he could chew.
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* HateSink: [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos Y'golonac]], per usual, is the Great Old One of Depravity and Perversion who manipulates a man into summoning him and taking possession of his body to commit murders and rapes. Upon meeting the protagonist, he tries to force him to say his name in hopes of breaking free from his imprisonment and bringing about the end of mankind.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The three rooms dedicated to the SevenDeadlySins that the protagonist sees in the Defiler's house. In the Lust room, his worshipers are indulging in a violent orgy. In Gluttony, they're eating each other. And in Sloth ... they're all lying around lazily, reduced to obese blobs. Though it still disturbs the protagonist just slightly less than the other two.
* CollapsingLair: After the protagonist mortally wounds the Defiler's avatar, the house collapses, taking his followers with them.
* FauxAffablyEvil: While in the body of the nobleman, Y'golonac treats the hero with respect and hospitality, easily accepting his apology after bumping into him in the bookstore. Once the protagonist reaches his house, he continues to play the part of the gracious host, acting as though the horrors he's being exposed to are perfectly normal.
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* NothingIsScarier: The form the narrator sees actually isn't Y'golonac's true form: it's still locked away behind a stonewall somewhere.
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* NothingIsScarier: The form the narrator sees actually isn't Y'golonac's [[EldritchAbomination true form: form]]: it's still locked away behind a stonewall somewhere.stone wall somewhere.
* ReligionOfEvil: The cult of Y'golonac is an obvious one. Acts of deviant orgies, cannibalism, rape ...
* ReligionOfEvil: The cult of Y'golonac is an obvious one. Acts of deviant orgies, cannibalism, rape ...
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* TongueTrauma: The protagonist cut his own tongue out in order to refrain himself from saying the Defiler's name.
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* SevenDeadlySins: Y'golonac's house has rooms dedicated to indulging in them, although the protagonist only gets to see lust, gluttony, and sloth.
* TongueTrauma: The protagonistcut cuts his own tongue out in order to refrain himself from saying the Defiler's name.
* TongueTrauma: The protagonist
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''[[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/The_Defiler The Defiler]]'' Defiler]]'', by Tropers/AustinDR, is a short horror story inspired by the ''Literature/CthulhuMythos'' primarily Creator/RamseyCampbell's contributions to the mythos. The story follows a nameless protagonist whose love of reading leads to him accepting an offer from a wealthy man on paying a visit to his house to read forbidden literature. However, he comes to the realization that he bit off more than he could chew.
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* SerialRapist: As with his typical incarnations, Y'golonac forces the host he possessed into raping victims, though he mentions it minorly as "cozying up with strangers."
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* ChildEater: Y'golonac devours children it killed through his hosts.
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* TongueTrauma: The protagonist cut his own tongue out in order to refrain himself from saying the Defiler's name.name.
* WouldHurtAChild: Y'golonac has no reservations when it comes to who he kills.
* WouldHurtAChild: Y'golonac has no reservations when it comes to who he kills.
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''[[https://creepypasta.fandom.com/wiki/The_Defiler The Defiler Defiler]]'' is a short horror story inspired by the ''Literature/CthulhuMythos'' primarily Creator/RamseyCampbell's contributions to the mythos. The story follows a nameless protagonist whose love of reading leads to him accepting an offer from a wealthy man on paying a visit to his house to read forbidden literature. However, he comes to the realization that he bit off more than he could chew.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: The protagonist stabs Y'golonac; while it doesn't kill him, it does convince Y'golonac to leave him alone for the time being.
* EldritchLocation: The Defiler's home is definitely not normal. For one, the trees around it transform into scaly claws; fleshy walls secreting slime; the outside of the house contorts and shifts constantly, etc.
* EldritchLocation: The Defiler's home is definitely not normal. For one, the trees around it transform into scaly claws; fleshy walls secreting slime; the outside of the house contorts and shifts constantly, etc.
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* KarmaHoudini: The protagonist may have succeeded at defeating Y'golonac, but before he exits, Y'golonac mentions the possibility of finding another hapless victim to manipulate.
* NothingIsScarier: The form the narrator sees actually isn't Y'golonac's true form: it's still locked away behind a stonewallsomewhere/somewhere.
* SealedEvilInACan: Much like the other Great Old Ones, the Defiler is trapped and is hellbent on escaping his prison at any cost.
* SerialKiller: Y'golonac had used his human host to murder several children. And later ate parts of them.
* TongueTrauma: The protagonist cut his own tongue out in order to refrain himself from saying the Defiler's name.
* NothingIsScarier: The form the narrator sees actually isn't Y'golonac's true form: it's still locked away behind a stonewall
* SealedEvilInACan: Much like the other Great Old Ones, the Defiler is trapped and is hellbent on escaping his prison at any cost.
* SerialKiller: Y'golonac had used his human host to murder several children. And later ate parts of them.
* TongueTrauma: The protagonist cut his own tongue out in order to refrain himself from saying the Defiler's name.
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The Defiler is a short horror story inspired by the ''Literature/CthulhuMythos'' primarily Creator/RamseyCampbell's contributions to the mythos. The story follows a nameless protagonist whose love of reading leads to him accepting an offer from a wealthy man on paying a visit to his house to read forbidden literature. However, he comes to the realization that he bit off more than he could chew.
!!The story provides examples of:
* AxCrazy: Unlike the other gods of the Cthulhu Mythos, Y'golonac not only understands humans but absolutely ''enjoys'' driving them to commit the most carnal of sins.
* BigBad: Y'golonac, but he goes by the moniker of "The Defiler" because saying his real name is enough to summon him much like in the ''Severn Valley'' stories.
* AFateWorseThanDeath: Y'golonac reveals that after he hijacked the original man's body, he tossed the man's soul in a state between life and death where he'll be forever imprisoned.
* FatBastard: Y'golonac takes the form of an obese man and is inhumanly evil.
* ForTheEvulz: The Defiler plainly explains that he does what he does out of the sheer joy of it.
* HumanoidAbomination: Y'golonac takes the form of a headless fat man with mouths in the palms of his hands whenever he possesses a human host.
* NothingIsScarier: The form the narrator sees actually isn't Y'golonac's true form: it's still locked away behind a stonewall somewhere/
!!The story provides examples of:
* AxCrazy: Unlike the other gods of the Cthulhu Mythos, Y'golonac not only understands humans but absolutely ''enjoys'' driving them to commit the most carnal of sins.
* BigBad: Y'golonac, but he goes by the moniker of "The Defiler" because saying his real name is enough to summon him much like in the ''Severn Valley'' stories.
* AFateWorseThanDeath: Y'golonac reveals that after he hijacked the original man's body, he tossed the man's soul in a state between life and death where he'll be forever imprisoned.
* FatBastard: Y'golonac takes the form of an obese man and is inhumanly evil.
* ForTheEvulz: The Defiler plainly explains that he does what he does out of the sheer joy of it.
* HumanoidAbomination: Y'golonac takes the form of a headless fat man with mouths in the palms of his hands whenever he possesses a human host.
* NothingIsScarier: The form the narrator sees actually isn't Y'golonac's true form: it's still locked away behind a stonewall somewhere/
