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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: During the LP's time frame, Ft. Bridger was a civilian fur-trading outpost, not a military post as depicted.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: During the LP's time frame, Ft. Bridger was a and Ft. Walla Walla were civilian fur-trading outpost, outposts, not a military post posts as depicted.
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Cyrus and Oxford are the only survivors.]]
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Entry has nothing to do with homesteading
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* DeterminedHomesteadersWife: Susan, who is not going to let a few broke limbs, bullets, or a medical book's worth of illnesses stop her from getting across the country.
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* DeterminedHomesteadersWife: {{Determinator}}: Susan, who is not going to let a few broke limbs, bullets, or a medical book's worth of illnesses stop her from getting across the country.
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--> '''Susan''': ''Did you just run over Baby?!''
--> '''Cyrus''': ''Son of a BITCH!''
--> '''Cyrus''': ''Son of a BITCH!''
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--> '''Cyrus''':
'''Cyrus:''' ''Son of a BITCH!''
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* [[spoiler: ConvenientMiscarriage]]: Though everyone is too distracted by their newfound cocaine addiction to mind.
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* [[spoiler: ConvenientMiscarriage]]: ConvenientMiscarriage: Though everyone is too distracted by their newfound cocaine addiction to mind.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: When the Neckebards reach Snake River, they hire a tribe of Native Americans to help them cross the river, only to realize too late that they'd fallen victim of a trap that the natives set to steal their belongings. [[spoiler: When the wagon capsized in the water and a massive emotional meltdown ensued, though, the chief felt guilty enough to order the tribe to fix their wagon for them.]]
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: When the Neckebards reach Snake River, they hire a tribe of Native Americans to help them cross the river, only to realize too late that they'd fallen victim of a trap that the natives set to steal their belongings. [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When the wagon capsized in the water and a massive emotional meltdown ensued, though, the chief felt guilty enough to order the tribe to fix their wagon for them.]]
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler: Cyrus and Oxford are the only survivors.]]
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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler: Cyrus [[spoiler:Cyrus and Oxford are the only survivors.]]
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--> The Neckebards must float
--> Like a butterfly and sting
--> Like a floating thing
--> Like a butterfly and sting
--> Like a floating thing
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Like a butterfly and
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Like a floating thing
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* OffTheRails: When Chewbot suggested the forum goons to [[http://lparchive.org/Oregon-Trail-%28by-Chewbot%29/Update%2021/ vote via haiku]] (suggestions as to what to do next would be counted as two votes). They wouldn't stop posting new river crossing poems, even long after the voting was done and the results posted. Eventually they stopped haikus altogether and started writing full-length ballads and love songs based on the characters. Chewbot was flabbergasted.
** Updates 17 and 19 are when the story completely loses all handle on reality and turns into a high-stakes, explosive, bullet-riddled chase sequence, amongst several other unexpected plot twists.
* PaperThinDisguise: On the way to Fort Walla Walla, the Neckebards decide to disguise themselves as the Bardneckes [[spoiler: while they're on the run from colonial soldiers]], complete with one item to disguise themselves with (except for Sarah Jane, [[ButtMonkey who doesn't even get anything to disguise herself with.]])
** Updates 17 and 19 are when the story completely loses all handle on reality and turns into a high-stakes, explosive, bullet-riddled chase sequence, amongst several other unexpected plot twists.
* PaperThinDisguise: On the way to Fort Walla Walla, the Neckebards decide to disguise themselves as the Bardneckes [[spoiler: while they're on the run from colonial soldiers]], complete with one item to disguise themselves with (except for Sarah Jane, [[ButtMonkey who doesn't even get anything to disguise herself with.]])
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* OffTheRails: OffTheRails:
** When Chewbot suggested the forum goons to [[http://lparchive.org/Oregon-Trail-%28by-Chewbot%29/Update%2021/ vote via haiku]] (suggestions as to what to do next would be counted as two votes). They wouldn't stop posting new river crossing poems, even long after the voting was done and the results posted. Eventually they stopped haikus altogether and started writing full-length ballads and love songs based on the characters. Chewbot was flabbergasted.
** Updates 17 and 19 are when the story completely loses all handle on reality and turns into a high-stakes, explosive, bullet-riddled chase sequence,amongst among several other unexpected plot twists.
* PaperThinDisguise: On the way to Fort Walla Walla, the Neckebards decide to disguise themselves as the Bardneckes[[spoiler: while [[spoiler:while they're on the run from colonial soldiers]], complete with one item to disguise themselves with (except for Sarah Jane, [[ButtMonkey who doesn't even get anything to disguise herself with.]])
** When Chewbot suggested the forum goons to [[http://lparchive.org/Oregon-Trail-%28by-Chewbot%29/Update%2021/ vote via haiku]] (suggestions as to what to do next would be counted as two votes). They wouldn't stop posting new river crossing poems, even long after the voting was done and the results posted. Eventually they stopped haikus altogether and started writing full-length ballads and love songs based on the characters. Chewbot was flabbergasted.
** Updates 17 and 19 are when the story completely loses all handle on reality and turns into a high-stakes, explosive, bullet-riddled chase sequence,
* PaperThinDisguise: On the way to Fort Walla Walla, the Neckebards decide to disguise themselves as the Bardneckes
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** [[spoiler: When Waffles is killed by colonial soldiers, Susan's response is to raze the nearby Fort Walla Walla to the ground.]]
** [[spoiler: And when Susan dies too, Cyrus goes apeshit on the British soldiers that come after them.]]
** [[spoiler: And when Susan dies too, Cyrus goes apeshit on the British soldiers that come after them.]]
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** [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When Waffles is killed by colonial soldiers, Susan's response is to raze the nearby Fort Walla Walla to the ground.]]
**[[spoiler: And [[spoiler:And when Susan dies too, Cyrus goes apeshit on the British soldiers that come after them.]]
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* ShoutOut: The "peperony and chease" tombstone was of course a reference to the old "What do you want on your Tombstone?" pizza commercials. Anyone who played this game in school will know how often kids typed that in for an epitaph.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The "peperony and chease" tombstone was of course a reference to the old "What do you want on your Tombstone?" pizza commercials. Anyone who played this game in school will know how often kids typed that in for an epitaph.
** The "peperony and chease" tombstone was of course a reference to the old "What do you want on your Tombstone?" pizza commercials. Anyone who played this game in school will know how often kids typed that in for an epitaph.
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* SpiritAdvisor: The ghost of [[spoiler: Sarah-Jane]] aids Cyrus while he is riding down the perilous river.
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* SpiritAdvisor: The ghost of [[spoiler: Sarah-Jane]] [[spoiler:Sarah-Jane]] aids Cyrus while he is riding down the perilous river.
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* WhamEpisode: Fort Bridger [[spoiler: and Susan turning out to be a British spy, and Waffles the key to retaking the US.]]
** The road to Fort Walla Walla, [[spoiler: and Waffle's death. While Baby had already died a while before, this is the point where the rest of the family starts dropping like flies.]]
** The road to Fort Walla Walla, [[spoiler: and Waffle's death. While Baby had already died a while before, this is the point where the rest of the family starts dropping like flies.]]
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* WhamEpisode: WhamEpisode:
** Fort Bridger[[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and Susan turning out to be a British spy, and Waffles the key to retaking the US.]]
** The road to Fort Walla Walla,[[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and Waffle's death. While Baby had already died a while before, this is the point where the rest of the family starts dropping like flies.]]
** Fort Bridger
** The road to Fort Walla Walla,
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: Ft. Bridger was a civilian fur-trading outpost, not a military post as depicted in the LP.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: During the LP's time frame, Ft. Bridger was a civilian fur-trading outpost, not a military post as depicted in the LP.depicted.
