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-->'''Captain''': Then has your cat learned to sing? (''Cue indignant hissing from Lucifer.'')
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-->'''Captain''': Then has your cat learned to sing? (''Cue indignant hissing from Lucifer.'')
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* Lady Tremaine describing Anastasia and Drisella as affectionate to one another at the same moment as they are having a furious argument. Drisella in fact is saying that she'd love to scratch Anastasia's eyes out.
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* Lady Tremaine describing Anastasia and Drisella as affectionate to one another at the same moment as they are having a furious argument. Drisella in fact is saying that she'd love to scratch Anastasia's eyes out.
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* Lady Tremaine describing Anastasia and Drisella as affectionate to one another at the same moment as they are having a furious argument. Drisella in fact is saying that she'd love to scratch Anastasia's eyes out.
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** The goose is transformed into the coachman, and immediately says, "[[RealityEnsues I can't drive,]] I'm a ''goose''."
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** The goose is transformed into the coachman, and immediately says, "[[RealityEnsues I "I can't drive,]] drive, I'm a ''goose''."
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** The goose is transformed into the coachman, and immediately says: "I can't drive, I'm a goose."
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** The goose is transformed into the coachman, and immediately says: "I says, "[[RealityEnsues I can't drive, drive,]] I'm a goose.''goose''."
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--> '''The Captain:''' [''catching on''] Well, we'd better get a move on, [''smirks''] ''Mr Kit''.
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--> '''The Captain:''' [''catching on''] Well, we'd better get a move on, [''smirks''] ''Mr ''Mr. Kit''.
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** The stepmother gets up and sort of runs around Cinderella flailing her arms and then over to the stepsisters and tells them to calm down.
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* While the search itself is funny seeing the EpicFail that the Duke puts out for the search, one maiden, an over weight baker, tries to take off her shoe...cue the mass faint from her SmellyFeet. She just sheepishly blames the yeast while everyone just stares in bewilderment.
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* While the search itself is funny seeing the EpicFail that the Duke puts out for the search, one maiden, an over weight baker, tries to take off her shoe...cue the mass faint from her SmellyFeet.{{SmellyFeet|Gag}}. She just sheepishly blames the yeast while everyone just stares in bewilderment.
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** Every part of that process sounds utterly mortifying - from having to stand around desperately avoiding eye contact as the producers discussed his package, to the one jockstrap that was too tight and brought him to tears.
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* The stepsisters are both distracted by Cinderella's dress and how pretty she is after the DanceOfRomance, before Lady Tremaine reminds them that they're trying to catch the prince's attention for themselves.
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* The stepsisters are both distracted by Cinderella's dress and how pretty she is after the DanceOfRomance, before Lady Tremaine [[DopeSlap whacks them with her fan]] and reminds them that they're trying to catch the prince's attention for themselves.
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--> '''The Captain:''' We have to go, your Hi--
--> '''Kit:''' ''It's Kit! Kit! I'm Kit!''
--> '''Kit:''' ''It's Kit! Kit! I'm Kit!''
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--> '''The Captain:''' We have to go, your Ah, there you are, Your Hi--
--> '''Kit:''' ''It's Kit! Kit! I'mKit!''Kit!'' I'm on my way!
--> '''The Captain:''' [''catching on''] Well, we'd better get a move on, [''smirks''] ''Mr Kit''.
** The next scene, Kit is telling his father about Ella, and they end up in a good-natured disagreement.
--> '''The King:''' You sound as you're the first fellow to ever meet a pretty girl-
--> '''Kit:''' She wasn't a "pretty girl"! [''{{beat}}, off the King's incredulous look''] Well, she ''was'' a pretty girl, but there was so much more to her!
--> '''The King:''' How much more? [[LoveAtFirstSight You've only met her once.]] How could you know anything about her?
--> '''Kit:''' You told me you knew ''right away'' when you met Mother.
--> '''The King:''' [[HypocriticalHumor Ye- that's different, your mother was a princess.]]
--> '''Kit:''' You would have loved her anyway.
--> '''The King:''' I would never have seen her, because it wouldn't have been appropriate. And my father would have told me what I'm telling you- and I would have listened.
--> '''Kit:''' No you wouldn't.
--> '''The King:''' Yes I would.
--> '''Kit:''' No you ''wouldn't''.
--> '''The King:''' I would.
--> '''Kit:''' You wouldn't.
--> '''The King:''' [[RuleOfThree You're right.]]
--> '''Kit:''' [''grins triumphantly'']
--> '''Kit:''' ''It's Kit! Kit! I'm
--> '''The Captain:''' [''catching on''] Well, we'd better get a move on, [''smirks''] ''Mr Kit''.
** The next scene, Kit is telling his father about Ella, and they end up in a good-natured disagreement.
--> '''The King:''' You sound as you're the first fellow to ever meet a pretty girl-
--> '''Kit:''' She wasn't a "pretty girl"! [''{{beat}}, off the King's incredulous look''] Well, she ''was'' a pretty girl, but there was so much more to her!
--> '''The King:''' How much more? [[LoveAtFirstSight You've only met her once.]] How could you know anything about her?
--> '''Kit:''' You told me you knew ''right away'' when you met Mother.
--> '''The King:''' [[HypocriticalHumor Ye- that's different, your mother was a princess.]]
--> '''Kit:''' You would have loved her anyway.
--> '''The King:''' I would never have seen her, because it wouldn't have been appropriate. And my father would have told me what I'm telling you- and I would have listened.
--> '''Kit:''' No you wouldn't.
--> '''The King:''' Yes I would.
--> '''Kit:''' No you ''wouldn't''.
--> '''The King:''' I would.
--> '''Kit:''' You wouldn't.
--> '''The King:''' [[RuleOfThree You're right.]]
--> '''Kit:''' [''grins triumphantly'']
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* "I have to leave. It's hard to explain. Lizards and pumpkins and... things."
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--->'''Fairy Godmother:''' Artichoke? Beef tomato?
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--->'''Fairy Godmother:''' Artichoke? Kumquat? Beef tomato?
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--->'''Fairy Godmother:''' ''Ah!'' (pauses and gives an ''eh'' face)
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--->'''Fairy Godmother:''' ''Ah!'' (pauses and gives an a slightly ''eh'' face)
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* Lady's Tremaine coaching her daughters from the sidelines of the ballroom. It includes her repeatedly urging them to smile and boosting her chest suggestively.
* Kit using an ExactWords loophole logic when he and Ella speak in private during the ball:
* Kit using an ExactWords loophole logic when he and Ella speak in private during the ball:
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* The stepsisters are both distracted by Cinderella's dress and how pretty she is after the DanceOfRomance, before Lady Tremaine reminds them that they're trying to catch the prince's attention for themselves.
** And Lady's Tremaine coaching her daughters from the sidelines of the ballroom. It includes her repeatedly urging them tosmile smile, pointing them in the right direction when they veer too far from the prince, and boosting her chest suggestively.
* Kit using an ExactWords loophole logic when he and Ella first speak in private during the ball:
** And Lady's Tremaine coaching her daughters from the sidelines of the ballroom. It includes her repeatedly urging them to
* Kit using an ExactWords loophole logic when he and Ella first speak in private during the ball:
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-->'''Kit:''' Well, I'm not ''the'' prince. There are many princes in the world, I'm just ''a'' prince.
-->'''Ella:''' But your name's not really Kit.
-->'''Kit:''' Oh, no, it is. My father still calls me that, when he's feeling particularly- un-peeved at me.
-->'''Ella:''' You're not an apprentice.
-->'''Kit:''' I ''am'' an apprentice monarch, still learning my trade.
-->'''Ella:''' But your name's not really Kit.
-->'''Kit:''' Oh, no, it is. My father still calls me that, when he's feeling particularly- un-peeved at me.
-->'''Ella:''' You're not an apprentice.
-->'''Kit:''' I ''am'' an apprentice monarch, still learning my trade.
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-->'''Kit:''' Well, I'm not ''the'' prince. prince... exactly. There are many plenty of princes in the world, I'm just ''a'' prince.
-->'''Ella:'''But But- your name's not really Kit.
-->'''Kit:''' Oh, no, certainly it is. My father still calls me that, when he'sfeeling particularly- especially- un-peeved at me.
-->'''Ella:'''You're not an But- you're no apprentice.
-->'''Kit:''' I''am'' an ''am''! An apprentice monarch, still learning my trade.
-->'''Ella:'''
-->'''Kit:''' Oh, no, certainly it is. My father still calls me that, when he's
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-->'''Kit:''' I
* As Ella's fleeing from the ball, the Captain sums the situation up quite nicely.
--> "I was having a fine old time. You had to go and pick ''that'' one, didn't you."
--> "I was having a fine old time. You had to go and pick ''that'' one, didn't you."
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* As Ella's fleeing from the ball, the Captain sums the situation up quite nicely.
--> "I was having a fine old time. You had to go and pick ''that'' one, didn't you."
--> "I was having a fine old time. You had to go and pick ''that'' one, didn't you."