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** And later Ren and Itsuki meet Mein of Samphor, the adventurer. As in, [[TheRealRemingstonSteele an actual adventurer named Mein who hails from Samphor, complete with red hair and green eyes]]. And apparently, her mother got her name from a trashy novel...
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** And later Ren and Itsuki meet Mein of Samphor, the adventurer. As in, [[TheRealRemingstonSteele [[TheRealRemingtonSteele an actual adventurer named Mein who hails from Samphor, complete with red hair and green eyes]]. And apparently, her mother got her name from a trashy novel...
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* Right before the apex of the Three Heroes Church arc, Sigmar Conservatie corners Naofumi and his remaining companions, and, thinking himself invincible, he doesn't relent even after the other Heroes come to the rescue, and instead charges at them. [[CurbStompBattle Motoyasu drops the flat of his spear on his head, spanks him, and ties him to a tree]].
** After Balmus shows up and engages the Heroes himself while declaring his philosophy, Sigmar starts cheering for him, also declaring that soon enough he'll kill Balmus himself. Balmus calmly walks to the tree and takes from him the artifact that was making him immortal.
** After Balmus shows up and engages the Heroes himself while declaring his philosophy, Sigmar starts cheering for him, also declaring that soon enough he'll kill Balmus himself. Balmus calmly walks to the tree and takes from him the artifact that was making him immortal.
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** By Chapter 30, Malty later learns the name of Henchmen number 2 being, Dida.
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* Ancient magic tomes are akin to philosophy texts, and the Grimoire of Water expouses the idea of non-violence. After reading its initial passages, Malty tries and envisions how its Fire counterpart would start... And she envisions the ''[[Franchise/StarWars Sith Code]]''.
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* Malty not knowing the name of one of Amelia's bodyguards, so she chooses to call the bodyguard she recognizes as "Henchman number 2".
* Ancient magic tomes are akin to philosophy texts, and the Grimoire of Waterexpouses exposes the idea of non-violence. After reading its initial passages, Malty tries and envisions how its Fire counterpart would start... And she envisions the ''[[Franchise/StarWars Sith Code]]''.
* Ancient magic tomes are akin to philosophy texts, and the Grimoire of Water
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* The identities of the Sword, Spear, Bow, and Shield Heroes of the previous generation: [[LightNovel/SwordArtOnline Kirigaya Kazuto]], [[VisualNovel/SchoolDays Itou Makoto]], [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Emiya Shirou]], and Mikami Mikage (AKA the King of Rape). For obvious reasons, the only one Naofumi doesn't recognize is his own predecessor.
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* The identities of the Sword, Spear, Bow, and Shield Heroes of the previous generation: [[LightNovel/SwordArtOnline [[Literature/SwordArtOnline Kirigaya Kazuto]], [[VisualNovel/SchoolDays Itou Makoto]], [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Emiya Shirou]], and Mikami Mikage (AKA the King of Rape). For obvious reasons, the only one Naofumi doesn't recognize is his own predecessor.
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* [[StopHelpingMe Lautrec and the tamed Balloons trying to help Naofumi convince an innkeeper that they're harmless.]]
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* [[StopHelpingMe Lautrec and the tamed Balloons trying to help Naofumi convince an innkeeper that they're harmless.]]
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* As she's coming back to the camp from selling their loot, Malty hears fighting noises and strange shouts coming from it. Imagining a number of bad scenarios, Malty comes to the rescue... And finds Naofumi using the round red, white and blue shield he unlucked the previous day to play ComicBook/CaptainAmerica. [[EagleLand Badly]].
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* As she's coming back to the camp from selling their loot, Malty hears fighting noises and strange shouts coming from it. Imagining a number of bad scenarios, Malty comes to the rescue... And finds Naofumi using the round red, white and blue shield he unlucked unlocked the previous day to play ComicBook/CaptainAmerica. [[EagleLand Badly]].
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"[[BigWhat What?!]]" [[StunnedSpeechless The goddess actually seems completely shocked at Raphtalia's reaction, as she simply stands in the open without doing anything]].
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"[[BigWhat What?!]" [[StunnedSpeechless The goddess actually seems completely shocked at Raphtalia's reaction, as she simply stands in the open without doing anything]].
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* At the end of the Third Wave, [[TheBusCameBack Lautrec returns]] and summons his goddess, that is the web novel version of ''Raphtalia'', who, quite understandably, wants Malty dead... And has to deal with her local counterpart defending her and revealing how exactly she considers Malty:
-->The dimensional invader seems to freeze for a brief moment, before she grabs Raphtalia's sword and throws her away like an afterthought. Raphtalia lands on the ground with a roll, and she bounces right back at the goddess. "I'm not losing ''another'' Mother of mine to you damn WAVE!"\\
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-->The dimensional invader seems to freeze for a brief moment, before she grabs Raphtalia's sword and throws her away like an afterthought. Raphtalia lands on the ground with a roll, and she bounces right back at the goddess. "I'm not losing ''another'' Mother of mine to you damn WAVE!"\\
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*** The above is taken UpToEleven in that said complaint by Motoyasu is in actuality a summation of the entire TraumaCongaLine that Canon-Naofumi experienced after being summoned to Melromarc in the first place.
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*** The above is taken UpToEleven up to eleven in that said complaint by Motoyasu is in actuality a summation of the entire TraumaCongaLine that Canon-Naofumi experienced after being summoned to Melromarc in the first place.
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* Naofumi's ''epic'' EntertaininglyWrong moment, in which, from the exchanges between Malty and two low-level Siltvelt spies, he concludes that the "Wise King" Aultclay and the Queen are a couple of {{Magnificent Bastard}}s who summoned all the Heroes in order to stave off a Siltvelt invasion that they couldn't hope to fight off, by effectively taking ''the entire world'' hostage in order to force the stronger countries to keep Siltvelt down, with the Queen being at the conference for the sake of PlausibleDeniability – rather than a moment of spite from a bitter old man with too much power. And it makes enough sense that ''Malty starts believing it to be the case''.
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*** [[IAteWhat Raphtalia mistakenly thinking she ate Balloon Monsters]] due Naofumi naming his trio after the pomelo fruit and putting the actual fruit in the dish.
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** The above is taken UpToEleven in that said complaint by Motoyasu is in actuality a summation of the entire TraumaCongaLine that Canon-Naofumi experienced after being summoned to Melromarc in the first place.
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** Later that day, Motoyasu invites Naofumi and Malty to drink with his party... And gets bitten by one of the balloons under Naofumi's cloak. The scene (and Itsuki "saving" him) has to read. And then, there's Motoyasu complaining that everyone is treating him like an idiot for what has happened:
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** Later that day, Motoyasu invites Naofumi and Malty to drink with his party... And gets bitten by one of the balloons under Naofumi's cloak. The scene (and Itsuki "saving" him) has to read. And then, there's Motoyasu [[LargeHam Motoyasu]] complaining that everyone is treating him like an idiot for what has happened:
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* During the battle with the Bitch Lord, she starts hurling threats... Then [[TalkToTheFist Naofumi starts slamming her with a stone shield]]. That is just irritating, but then Naofumi grabs her arm with a club prothesis and uses ''that'' to smack her into unconsciousness (the club uses the Bitch Lord's own attack rating).
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* How Malty and Raphtalia learn that Filo has turned into a proper Monarch Filorial:
-->That's when they, and probably a number of other people heard what can only be described as a pained scream of pure despair and agony from Shield Hero. It's fit for a man who just found out he murdered his wife and unborn child in a fit of cursed wrath.\\
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Both the princess and the demi-human child turn around as fast as they could. A number of Balafon farmers, Whiterun and Claes guardsmen, the Spear Hero and his companions are already running towards inside the village palisade. Mein and Raphtalia half hop, half dash their way into the village and push their way through the gathered people. They find Naofumi currently lying on the ground in a fetal position while hammering the earth. "My chocobo turned into a ''giant rubber DUCKY'' !"\\
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The princess turns her head up to take a good look at what her Naofumi is currently groveling about. She has to spend a moment to pause at what she sees. Firo, Wolfgang, and the four birds brought along by the Spear Hero all look much bigger... and fatter from the night before. Even their elongated neck is no longer visible, as their heads look like a fluffy stump propped over their puffy, spherical bodies that can easily fit two, maybe three adult men inside.
* During their travel to the former Seatto lands, Naofumi and his party set to camp for the night, with a party of a noble child and her four escorts camping nearby. Mein doesn't have much trouble... Up until she recognizes ''her sister''. Malty's horror at everything that follows has to be read.
** When day comes, Naofumi and his party leave... Then they notice that ''Melty hid inside Filo''.
*** Malty's attempt to get rid of Melty... By telling her where Motoyasu is and that he'd gladly raise a dozen Monarch Filorials for her. Too bad Melty can get Filorials any time she wants, but going on an adventure with ''her'' is a one-in-a-lifetime occasion...
-->That's when they, and probably a number of other people heard what can only be described as a pained scream of pure despair and agony from Shield Hero. It's fit for a man who just found out he murdered his wife and unborn child in a fit of cursed wrath.\\
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Both the princess and the demi-human child turn around as fast as they could. A number of Balafon farmers, Whiterun and Claes guardsmen, the Spear Hero and his companions are already running towards inside the village palisade. Mein and Raphtalia half hop, half dash their way into the village and push their way through the gathered people. They find Naofumi currently lying on the ground in a fetal position while hammering the earth. "My chocobo turned into a ''giant rubber DUCKY'' !"\\
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The princess turns her head up to take a good look at what her Naofumi is currently groveling about. She has to spend a moment to pause at what she sees. Firo, Wolfgang, and the four birds brought along by the Spear Hero all look much bigger... and fatter from the night before. Even their elongated neck is no longer visible, as their heads look like a fluffy stump propped over their puffy, spherical bodies that can easily fit two, maybe three adult men inside.
* During their travel to the former Seatto lands, Naofumi and his party set to camp for the night, with a party of a noble child and her four escorts camping nearby. Mein doesn't have much trouble... Up until she recognizes ''her sister''. Malty's horror at everything that follows has to be read.
** When day comes, Naofumi and his party leave... Then they notice that ''Melty hid inside Filo''.
*** Malty's attempt to get rid of Melty... By telling her where Motoyasu is and that he'd gladly raise a dozen Monarch Filorials for her. Too bad Melty can get Filorials any time she wants, but going on an adventure with ''her'' is a one-in-a-lifetime occasion...
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* Naofumi tries to understand how the Life Root grew so fast, only for Motoyasu to brush it off as "magic", causing Naofumi to remark that he clearly failed grade school.
-->'''Motoyasu:''' I'll have you know I only started failing my life science tests in high school!\\
'''Naofumi:''' And you are PROUD of this, because?!
-->'''Motoyasu:''' I'll have you know I only started failing my life science tests in high school!\\
'''Naofumi:''' And you are PROUD of this, because?!
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** Later in the chapter, [[RunningGag Motoyasu continues strangling his wounded crotch in the bandages]].
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* When they meet at Balafon village, Motoyasu gloating at Naofumi, affirming the superiority of his two Filorials over Filo while Naofumi tries to point out they're ''not'' rivals... And then, [[MythologyGag Filo kicks Motoyasu in the groin]].
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* Upon learning that rubbing a demihuman's animal traits is generally only done by parents or lovers, Naofumi nearly falls down the stairs in his shock.
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* Malty's mental rant after a single look at Cattleya's gigantic breasts.
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* During her duel against Eclair, Weiss Schnee uses a spell to lighten her body and increase her jumping ability. During one such leap, she strikes a dramatic pose... only for Eclair to grab her by the face and choke slam her into the ground.
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* Galieon sheepishly admitting that Wyndia didn't go to see her friend, more rather he forbade her and she snuck out. Both Ren and Naofumi point out how that's a basic pitfall of parenting, forbidding a child from doing something will make them want to do it more.
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