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** A frustrated Peggy snatches it from him and flings it away.
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** A frustrated Peggy snatches it from him him, takes a bite herself and then flings it away.
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* Try not to chuckle when Peggy questions Howard's movie making decisions by saying [[MarvelCinematicUniverse movies based on comic books]] "are a [[SelfDeprecation dreadful]] [[WhoWouldWantToWatchUs idea]]."
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* Try not to chuckle when Peggy questions Howard's movie making decisions by saying [[MarvelCinematicUniverse [[Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse movies based on comic books]] "are a [[SelfDeprecation dreadful]] [[WhoWouldWantToWatchUs idea]]."
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-->'''Jarvis''': Based on your History, by drinking copious amounts of alcohol and consorting with loose women.
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** The fact that Howard [[InsultBackfire doesn't entirely deny Jarvis' answer]].
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** A frustrated Peggy snatches it from him and flings it away.
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** From the same scene, when Hank unexpectedly confesses to selling out to the authorities, Manfredi's reaction is a mildly exasperated "Aw jeez, Hank, I wish you hadn't told me that! [[BlackComedy Now I hafta kill ya!]]"
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* After opening a rift to another dimension and what does Howard Stark do? he starts playing golf with it.
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* After opening a rift to another dimension and what does Howard Stark do? he starts playing golf with it. Jarvis suggests that when trying to shoot a golf ball into a rip in the fabric of reality, one should use a seven iron.
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* Portal to another dimension and what does Howard Stark do? he starts playing golf with it.
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* Portal After opening a rift to another dimension and what does Howard Stark do? he starts playing golf with it.
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*Portal to another dimension and what does Howard Stark do? he starts playing golf with it.
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'''Samberly:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial I didn't faint]]. ...okay, I did faint.
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'''Samberly:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial I didn't faint]]. ...okay, I did faint]], I... ''did'' faint.
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-->'''Hank''': [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas I swear in the soul of my mother]]!\\
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-->'''Hank''': [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas I swear in it on the soul of my mother]]!\\
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--> '''Howard''': Oh wait, there's one.
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--> '''Howard''': [[AllMenArePerverts Oh wait, there's one.]]
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'''Manfredi''': [[AvertedTrope But you always hate your mother, Hank]]!\\
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'''Manfredi''': [[AvertedTrope But you [[SubvertedTrope You always hate hated your mother, Hank]]!\\Hank]].\\
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''*beat*''
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** -->'''Howard Stark''' : How do all great scientists achieve success?
-->'''Jarvis''': Based on your History, by drinking copious amounts of alcohol and consorting with loose women.
-->'''Howard''': That's a good guess, but it's wrong.
-->'''Jarvis''': Based on your History, by drinking copious amounts of alcohol and consorting with loose women.
-->'''Howard''': That's a good guess, but it's wrong.
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-->'''Howard Stark''' : How do all great scientists achieve
-->'''Jarvis''': Based on your History, by drinking copious amounts of alcohol and consorting with loose
-->'''Howard''': That's a good guess, but it's wrong.
** And then when Howard grabs on to Peggy to help her pull back Sousa...
--> '''Howard''': Peggy, I want you to know I'm not having any unsavory thoughts about you right now!
''*beat*''
--> '''Howard''': Oh wait, there's one.
--> '''Howard''': Peggy, I want you to know I'm not having any unsavory thoughts about you right now!
''*beat*''
--> '''Howard''': Oh wait, there's one.
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''*beat*''
--> '''Howard''': Oh wait, there's one.
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-->'''Jarvis''': Based on your History, by drinking copious amounts of alcohol and consorting with loose women.
-->'''Howard''': That's a good guess, but it's wrong.
-->'''Jarvis''': Based on your History, by drinking copious amounts of alcohol and consorting with loose women.
-->'''Howard''': That's a good guess, but it's wrong.
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''*beat*''
--> '''Howard''': Oh wait, there's one.
''*beat*''
--> '''Howard''': Oh wait, there's one.
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** Also when Dream!Jarvis appeared, [[https://49.media.tumblr.com/c01206a130da5097cecb58174f00de4b/tumblr_o3641rOQLX1s73dvbo1_500.gif look closely]] and you'll find out that the girls are Dottie Underwood, Ana Jarvis, and Whitney Frost the ''big bad'' herself!
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** Also when Dream!Jarvis appeared, appears, [[https://49.media.tumblr.com/c01206a130da5097cecb58174f00de4b/tumblr_o3641rOQLX1s73dvbo1_500.gif look closely]] and you'll find out that the girls are Dottie Underwood, Ana Jarvis, and Whitney Frost the ''big bad'' herself!herself.
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** Also when Dream!Jarvis appeared, [[http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/tumblr_o3641roqlx1s73dvbo1_500.gif look closely]] and you'll find out that the girls are Dottie Underwood, Ana Jarvis, and Whitney Frost the ''big bad'' herself!
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** Also when Dream!Jarvis appeared, [[http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/tumblr_o3641roqlx1s73dvbo1_500.[[https://49.media.tumblr.com/c01206a130da5097cecb58174f00de4b/tumblr_o3641rOQLX1s73dvbo1_500.gif look closely]] and you'll find out that the girls are Dottie Underwood, Ana Jarvis, and Whitney Frost the ''big bad'' herself!
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** Also when Dream!Jarvis appeared, [[http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/tumblr_o3641roqlx1s73dvbo1_500.gif look closely]] and you'll find out that the girls are Dottie Underwood, Ana Jarvis, and Whitney Frost the ''big bad'' herself!
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* Even in a normal conversation, Peggy can't stop being a snarker:
-->'''Jason''': Mr. Stark has offered me a position in his new facility.\\
'''Peggy''': I didn't know he had one.
-->'''Jason''': Mr. Stark has offered me a position in his new facility.\\
'''Peggy''': I didn't know he had one.
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* Howard flirts with Rose while Dr. Samberly, who has crush on Rose, frowns while observing them.
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* Peggy finds Howard, Wilkes and Samberly deep in a serious argument that seems to bode ill for the success of the plan, only for Jarvis to inform her that they cracked the problem already and are actually arguing about what to call the machine.
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* Peggy finds Howard, Wilkes and Samberly deep in a serious argument that seems to bode ill for the success of the plan, only for Jarvis to inform her that they cracked the problem already and are actually arguing about what to call the machine. In the end, Peggy is the one who name it: "Rift Generator".
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-->'''Hank''': [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas I swear in the soul of my mother]]!\\
'''Manfredi''': [[AvertedTrope But you always hate your mother, Hank]]!\\
'''Hank''': So what?
-->'''Hank''': [[EvenBadMenLoveTheirMamas I swear in the soul of my mother]]!\\
'''Manfredi''': [[AvertedTrope But you always hate your mother, Hank]]!\\
'''Hank''': So what?
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* Peggy having to repeatedly zap Hugh Jones with the memory eraser while searching his clothes for his elevator key. She has to talk herself through removing his belt by reminding herself that it's to save the world.
** The aftermath;
-->'''Receptionist''': ''Did you have a good lunch?''\\
'''Hugh''': ({{Beat}}. Looks down at disheveled clothing and unbuckled belt, looks up with pleased smile on face.) ''I '''must''' have!''
** The aftermath;
-->'''Receptionist''': ''Did you have a good lunch?''\\
'''Hugh''': ({{Beat}}. Looks down at disheveled clothing and unbuckled belt, looks up with pleased smile on face.) ''I '''must''' have!''
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* Peggy having to repeatedly zap Hugh Jones with the memory eraser while searching his clothes for his elevator key. She has to talk herself through removing his belt by reminding herself that it's to save the world.
** The aftermath;
world. And then the aftermath.
-->'''Receptionist''':''Did Did you have a good lunch?''\\
lunch?\\
'''Hugh''':({{Beat}}. Looks ''[looks down at disheveled clothing and unbuckled belt, looks up with pleased smile on face.) ''I '''must''' have!''face]'' I ''must'' have!
** The aftermath;
-->'''Receptionist''':
'''Hugh''':
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* Jarvis distracted Thompson by [[MomentKiller popping in]] between Thompson and a female guest . Not to mention his dorky grin while doing so.
** Not to mention he's trying to needlessly distract a man who's already conveniently DistractedByTheSexy .
** Not to mention he's trying to needlessly distract a man who's already conveniently DistractedByTheSexy .
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* Jarvis distracted Thompson by [[MomentKiller popping in]] between Thompson and a female guest . Not to mention his dorky grin while doing so.
** Not to mentionso. Plus he's trying to needlessly distract a man who's already conveniently DistractedByTheSexy .DistractedByTheSexy.
** Not to mention
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* In a bit of fridge funny, Whitney Frost's speech at the end:
-->'''Whitney:''' do you really believe that Isodyne recruited you because they valued your brilliant mind? You were hired for the same reason that Jane Scott was hired. A woman and a colored man. We're people so marginalized, so desperate for approval, we'll do anything to hold on to what little respect we can get. Easily manipulated and completely expendable.
** Which is a pearl of self-criticism when coming from a studio that 5 years ago (in Thor) forcibly put an asian, a black man and a female as representatives of ancient scandinavian warrior pantheon.
-->'''Whitney:''' do you really believe that Isodyne recruited you because they valued your brilliant mind? You were hired for the same reason that Jane Scott was hired. A woman and a colored man. We're people so marginalized, so desperate for approval, we'll do anything to hold on to what little respect we can get. Easily manipulated and completely expendable.
** Which is a pearl of self-criticism when coming from a studio that 5 years ago (in Thor) forcibly put an asian, a black man and a female as representatives of ancient scandinavian warrior pantheon.
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-->'''Whitney:''' do you really believe that Isodyne recruited you because they valued your brilliant mind? You were hired for the same reason that Jane Scott was hired. A woman and a colored man. We're people so marginalized, so desperate for approval, we'll do anything to hold on to what little respect we can get. Easily manipulated and completely expendable.
** Which is a pearl of self-criticism when coming from a studio that 5 years ago (in Thor) forcibly put an asian, a black man and a female as representatives of ancient scandinavian warrior pantheon.
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-->'''Whitney:''' do you really believe that Isodyne recruited you because they valued your brilliant mind? You were hired for the same reason that Jane Scott was hired. A woman and a colored man. We're people so marginalized, so desperate for approval, we'll do anything to hold on to what little respect we can get. Easily manipulated and completely expendable.
** Which is a pearl of self-criticism when coming from a studio that 5 years ago (in Thor) forcibly put an asian, a black man and a female as representatives of ancient scandinavian warrior pantheon.
-->'''Whitney:''' do you really believe that Isodyne recruited you because they valued your brilliant mind? You were hired for the same reason that Jane Scott was hired. A woman and a colored man. We're people so marginalized, so desperate for approval, we'll do anything to hold on to what little respect we can get. Easily manipulated and completely expendable.
** Which is a pearl of self-criticism when coming from a studio that 5 years ago (in Thor) forcibly put an asian, a black man and a female as representatives of ancient scandinavian warrior pantheon.
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** The aftermath;
-->'''Receptionist''': ''Did you have a good lunch?''\\
'''Hugh''': ({{Beat}}. Looks down at disheveled clothing and unbuckled belt, looks up with pleased smile on face.) ''I '''must''' have!''
-->'''Receptionist''': ''Did you have a good lunch?''\\
'''Hugh''': ({{Beat}}. Looks down at disheveled clothing and unbuckled belt, looks up with pleased smile on face.) ''I '''must''' have!''
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* Manfredi's grandmother tells him that to save Whitney, he needs to make a deal with the devil. [[BrickJoke She means Peggy]].
* As Peggy, Howard, and Wilkes are having lunch, Howard yells repeatedly for Jarvis to bring the mustard. Jarvis comes in, held at gunpoint by Manfredi, and Howard gravely asks Manfredi to [[SkewedPriorities let him put the mustard down]]. Then it turns out they're old friends (though Manfredi is still mad at Howard for [[NoodleIncident stealing his underwear]]), and Jarvis puts his arms down with an epic "Oh come '''''on'''''" look on his face.
* When the remote doesn't work and [[HeroicSacrifice someone has to step inside the danger zone to manually turn off the device]], everyone is arguing why [[MoreHeroThanThou they should be the one to do it]], while Sousa just goes and ''does'' it (though he does have the foresight to tie himself a safety line first).
-->'''Howard:''' Well that doesn't seem fair.
* Last we saw Samberly, he was a few feet away from Whitney, and then he wasn't answering his radio. He shows up after the rift is closed, none the worse for wear.
-->'''Thompson:''' Thought you were dead.\\
'''Samberly:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial I didn't faint]]. ...okay, I did faint.
* As Peggy, Howard, and Wilkes are having lunch, Howard yells repeatedly for Jarvis to bring the mustard. Jarvis comes in, held at gunpoint by Manfredi, and Howard gravely asks Manfredi to [[SkewedPriorities let him put the mustard down]]. Then it turns out they're old friends (though Manfredi is still mad at Howard for [[NoodleIncident stealing his underwear]]), and Jarvis puts his arms down with an epic "Oh come '''''on'''''" look on his face.
* When the remote doesn't work and [[HeroicSacrifice someone has to step inside the danger zone to manually turn off the device]], everyone is arguing why [[MoreHeroThanThou they should be the one to do it]], while Sousa just goes and ''does'' it (though he does have the foresight to tie himself a safety line first).
-->'''Howard:''' Well that doesn't seem fair.
* Last we saw Samberly, he was a few feet away from Whitney, and then he wasn't answering his radio. He shows up after the rift is closed, none the worse for wear.
-->'''Thompson:''' Thought you were dead.\\
'''Samberly:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial I didn't faint]]. ...okay, I did faint.
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* Peggy offends Jarvis by calling a cab for the airport rather than letting them spend a bit more time together as he drives her. Ana convinces her to let him do it, and before she even finishes agreeing he does a ''flying leap'' back out the door to get started.
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'''Jarvis:''' I wouldn't put much mind to it, Miss Frost is quite resilient, sir.
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'''Jarvis:''' I wouldn't put much mind to it, Miss Frost is [[{{Understatement}} quite resilient, resilient]], sir.
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'''Jarvis:''' I believe thet you can actually hear the sound of their egos growing.
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'''Jarvis:''' I believe thet that you can actually hear the sound of their egos growing.
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* Later on in the same discussion:
-->'''Peggy:''' I am standing in front of three of the most radiant minds on the planet.\\
''(Wilkes, Samberly and Stark all preen)''\\
'''Jarvis:''' I believe thet you can actually hear the sound of their egos growing.
-->'''Peggy:''' I am standing in front of three of the most radiant minds on the planet.\\
''(Wilkes, Samberly and Stark all preen)''\\
'''Jarvis:''' I believe thet you can actually hear the sound of their egos growing.