History Fanfic / TokyoMewMewNoHopeLeft

The First Chapter can be found here: http://xxxkawaiibloodygothx.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2x7e5i

Chapter 16 suddenly changed in tone and maturity. Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under DidNotDoTheResearch.

* ElegantGothicLolita: subverted with a good case of DidNotDoTheResearch. What makes lolita fashion "Lolita" is that it is young-looking and classy...meaning not worn like this:

-->Haruko's golden boar, wrought by the hands of the residents of DarkalfHeim, ...

* SadistTeacher: Mr. Davidson. Probably more.

* ShoutOut: At the end of Chapter 7, many popular "Gothic" songs are referenced. Also, [[Film/ThePrincessBride Inigo]] broke up with Aoyama. That probably wasn't intentional, though.
** In chapter ten, Kisshu screams "[[MyImmortal BECAUSE I LOVE HER]]"
** In chapter 20,
-->""Leave SAKURA ALONE!" Ichigo yelled angry. "YOUR LUCKY SHE EVEN CAME FOR TO FIGHT YOU, BASTE!""

* TheLibby: Almost every female character, according to Sakura. Ichigo dumps her friends for no reason, Minto steals boyfriends, Lindsay pulls hair... *etc*

** Sometimes the author's need for costume porn is so strong, it outweighs actual continuity. In chapter 19, she wakes up "in my underwear and that sort of thing," and tied up by Pai. While Pai is watching over her, she notices Ryou in a "tube" and they confess their love for each other. She immediately starts making out with Ryou and -- with no intervening costume change at all -- she "was wearing a leather mini skirt made of lace and a gothic tube top and a gothic mini top hat and no shoes."

However the very latest chapter has suddenly changed in tone and maturity.

Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under DidNotDoTheResearch.

If this keeps up, "No Hope Left" may be rescued from the badfic pile.

-->There were lots of guys staring at my boobs which had gotten bigger sort of because I was wearing a relaly sexy dress. Even preppy guys were staring at my big boobs. "Hey there smexy!" Said a prep in an ugly yellow polo shirt. I ran up to him and ripped his head off by the hair and bashed his chest in with my boots which had really high hells. They got bloody so I went to get changed.

* DieForOurShip: Every pairing has been changed to Sakurax INSERT NAME HERE.

[[NonIndicativeName Tokyo Mew Mew No Hope]] is a fanfiction set in the Universe of TokyoMewMew. It's told from the perspective of the TheOjou Minto's twin sister, a blatant MarySue, who wears a variety of {{Stripperific}} “gothic” outfits to school, occasionally forgetting that her school has a uniform. When she is not murdering boys for looking at her cleavage, which shouldn't have been visible in the first place considering she's in school, she spends her time crying her eyes out for reasons that are supposed to Tearjerkers.(They're not)

* ShoutOut: At the end of Chapter 7, many popular "Gothic" songs are referenced. Also, [[ThePrincessBride Inigo]] broke up with Aoyama. That probably wasn't intentional, though.

Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under DidNotDoTheResearch

If this keeps up, "No Hope let" may be rescued form the badfic pile

* MostCommonSuperpower: Sakura claims to have a "medium-sized" chest early on, but it seems to [[BreastExpansion change quite quickly]]...

* GrowingtheBeard: Once Kisshu is killed, Sakura stops [[wangst wangsting]] about preps and starts wistfully reflecting on her obsession with goth clothing.

* GrowingtheBeard: Once Kisshu is killed, Sakura stops [[wangst]]ting about preps and starts wistfully reflecting on her obsession with goth clothing.

* GrowingtheBeard: Once Kisshu is killed, Sakura stops [[wangs]]ting about preps and starts wistfully reflecting on her obsession with goth clothing.

* CharacterDerailment: EVERYONE, but especially [[ItsPronouncedTropay Mint/Minto.]] She changes from TheOjou into a flat out evil boyfriend-stealing [[TheLibby Libby.]]

* Growing the Beard: Once Kisshu is killed, Sakura stops [[wangs]]ting about preps and starts wistfully reflecting on her obsession with goth clothing.

--> "ot out of bed and put on a lacy black tube top and leather tight pants and a sexy collar with spikes on it. My hair was so long that it was almost to my knees now. I put on black eyeliner really thick and loads of red eyeshadow. My lipstick was a deep, dark, blue. "

She has managed, so far, to make every male who appears fall madly in love with her, even, in recent chapters, [[CharacterDerailment Aoyama]] [[JerkJock Masaya.]] She abuses everyone, and gets away with it because she's [[ScrewTheRulesImBeautiful prettier]] than the legging and polo shirt clad “preps.”

"I must be getting shallow," I whispered to myself. "Spending too much time thinking about clothes, I'm turning into a regular priss."

[[caption-width-right:350: Disclaimer: she wears nothing as modest as a frilly maids outfit during the fic .]]

-->--The fact that she describes herself based on her pantyhose should say a lot about what your getting yourself into by reading this.