History Fanfic / TokyoMewMewNoHopeLeft

In short, it's basically the [[Fanfic/MyImmortal]] of Tokyo Mew Mew.

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%%* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Haruko is wizened.

* PantyShot: Such as this:
--> Instead he zapped me with a lazer and knocked me backwards and my underwear showed and stuff!

''Tokyo Mew Mew No Hope Left'' is a fanfiction set in the universe of ''Manga/TokyoMewMew''. It's told from the perspective of the TheOjou Minto's twin sister, Sakura Aizawa, who wears a variety of {{Stripperific}} “gothic” outfits to school, occasionally forgetting that her school has a uniform. When she is not murdering boys for looking at her cleavage, she spends her time crying her eyes out.

* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Haruko is wizened.

** At the end of Chapter 7, many popular "Gothic" songs are referenced. Also, [[Film/ThePrincessBride Inigo]] broke up with Aoyama. That probably wasn't intentional, though.

''Tokyo Mew Mew No Hope Left'' is a fanfiction set in the universe of ''Manga/TokyoMewMew''. It's told from the perspective of the TheOjou Minto's twin sister, who wears a variety of {{Stripperific}} “gothic” outfits to school, occasionally forgetting that her school has a uniform. When she is not murdering boys for looking at her cleavage, she spends her time crying her eyes out.

* AntiHero: Sakura Aizawa, who likes to kill hackers and perverts. Only those so far.
* AuthorAppeal: Ryou being a vampire.

%%* BerserkButton: Being hit on by guys in yellow polo shirts.

* CostumePorn: The main character goes through many costume changes which are described in detail.

** The protagonist violently kills hackers offscreen.
** Ripping a boy's head off because he looked at her cleavage.

** Similarly, in chapter 12:

* ElegantGothicLolita: The protagonist wears outfits that are described as being gothic lolita style.

* InconsistentColoring: The protagonist's eye color keeps changing, as seen in ''Chapter One'':

* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: enforced...
-->"LOOK AT HER RED EYESHADOW EWWWW! AND SHE LIKES GOTH BANDS AND NOT PINK! WHY DOESN'T SHE LIKE JUSTIN BEIBER AND BRITENY SPEARS AND PREP SINGERS!! I HATE HER! SHE'S SO STUPID AND UGLY! WHY DOESN'T SHE JUST DIE BECAUSE GOTHS SHOULD DIE THATS WHAT THEY WANT TO DO AND SHE LIKES AMY LEE!" She said stupidly in a hi-pitched preppy voice."

* GrowingtheBeard: Once Kisshu is killed, Sakura stops the Wangst about preps and starts wistfully reflecting on her obsession with goth clothing.
** Interestingly, the authour claims that this chapter is the worst out of all of them.

-->''"It was a really hot guy with big ears and green pigtails."''
-->--A quote from chapter six. [[ItMakesSenseInContext It's not that weird if you've watched the show...]] Sort of.


-->''"Hello. My name is Aizawa Sakura. I live in a big house in Tokyo and I have long hair and green eyes, and I wear fishnet pantyhose and I have an older twin sister named Minto. This is my story."''
-->--The fact that she describes herself based on her pantyhose should say a lot about what you're getting yourself into by reading this.

* ArtifactTitle: What ''does'' 'No hope left' ''mean'', anyway?

* CostumePorn: [[StripperIffic Borders on real porn.]]
** Sometimes the author's need for costume porn is so strong, it outweighs actual continuity. In chapter 19, she wakes up "in my underwear and that sort of thing," and tied up by Pai. While Pai is watching over her, she notices Ryou in a "tube" and they confess their love for each other. She immediately starts making out with Ryou and -- with no intervening costume change at all -- she "was wearing a leather mini skirt made of lace and a gothic tube top and a gothic mini top hat and no shoes." (And no, she didn't use her Mew Mew transformation powers to accomplish this.)

* DisproportionateRetribution: Violently killing hackers, even if offscreen, people?

* ElegantGothicLolita: Attempted.

* GratuitousJapanese: Gratuitously.

[[NonIndicativeName Tokyo Mew Mew No Hope]] is a fanfiction set in the Universe of Manga/TokyoMewMew. It's told from the perspective of the TheOjou Minto's twin sister, a blatant MarySue, who wears a variety of {{Stripperific}} “gothic” outfits to school, occasionally forgetting that her school has a uniform. When she is not murdering boys for looking at her cleavage, which shouldn't have been visible in the first place considering she's in school, she spends her time crying her eyes out for reasons that are supposed to be Tearjerkers.(They're not)



The First Chapter can be found [[http://xxxkawaiibloodygothx.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2x7e5i here.]]

!!Tropes Applying to This Totally Not a TrollFic work:

* AerithAndBob: Ichigo's new friend, Lindsay, compared with... Most other people.

* AlphaBitch: Almost every female character, according to Sakura. Ichigo dumps her friends for no reason, Minto steals boyfriends, Lindsay pulls hair... *etc*

* BeigeProse: Frequently.
* BerserkButton: Being hit on by guys in yellow polo shirts.

* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment

** ripping a boy's head off because he looked at her cleavage.
-->There were lots of guys staring at my boobs which had gotten bigger sort of because I was wearing a relaly sexy dress. Even preppy guys were staring at my big boobs. "Hey there smexy!" Said a prep in an ugly yellow polo shirt. I ran up to him and ripped his head off by the hair and bashed his chest in with my boots which had really high hells. They got bloody so I went to get changed.

-->Preps were staring at me angrily. They were wearing bermuda shorts and leggings. A guy in a yellow polo shirt said, "NICE BOOTS STUPID GOTH GIRL. WANNA GO OUT!??" I killed him with a knife.
* FatBastard: Mr. Davidson. He's only mentioned in passing, but, yes.

* InconsistentColoring: Or KaleidoscopeEyes. In either case, the protagonist's eye color keeps changing, as seen in ''Chapter One'':
## DescriptionInTheMirror: "This morning, I looked in the mirror. I saw a small, thin girl with large magenta eyes, pale skin, a medium-sized chest, and mid-leg length black hair with ao and pinku streaks."\\
## Describing herself: "I live in a big house in Tokyo and I have long hair and green eyes, and I wear fishnet pantyhose and I have an older twin sister named Minto."
* JerkJock: Aotama Masiay.
* KaleidoscopeEyes: That, or [[InconsistentColoring the author keeps forgetting what colour her character's eyes are]], as seen in ''Chapter One'':
## DescriptionInTheMirror: "This morning, I looked in the mirror. I saw a small, thin girl with large magenta eyes, pale skin, a medium-sized chest, and mid-leg length black hair with ao and pinku streaks."\\
## Describing herself: "I live in a big house in Tokyo and I have long hair and green eyes, and I wear fishnet pantyhose and I have an older twin sister named Minto."

* OutOfCharacter: Everyone. Mint gets special mention for just ''how'' OOC she is.

* PurpleProse: Attempted on several occasions, but failed.
* RetCon: Ryou's backstory is completely different. Apparently, he's a ''[[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampire]]''.
* RichBitch: Minto.

* SadistTeacher: Mr. Davidson. Probably more.
* ShoutOut: At the end of Chapter 7, many popular "Gothic" songs are referenced. Also, [[Film/ThePrincessBride Inigo]] broke up with Aoyama. That probably wasn't intentional, though.

-->""Leave SAKURA ALONE!" Ichigo yelled angry. "YOUR LUCKY SHE EVEN CAME FOR TO FIGHT YOU, BASTE!""

* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sakura and Minto, are described as this in chapter fourteen. However considering the way Sakura, the 'tomboy' of the two, dresses and generally acts, it doesn't really work.
* WorldOfHam
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Haruko is wizened.

* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Haruko is wizened.
* ZettaiRyouiki: With fishnets and a not so elegant ElegantGothicLolita dress. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill Yeah...]] The writing makes it closer to FanDisservice, though.

* KaleidoScopeEyes: That, or the author keeps forgetting what colour her character's eyes are.
--> "I saw a small, thin girl with large magenta eyes, pale skin, a medium-sized chest, and mid-leg length black hair with ao and pinku streaks."
--> "I live in a big house in Tokyo and I have long hair and green eyes, and I wear fishnet pantyhose and I have an older twin sister named Minto."
** Both from ''Chapter One''.

* PantyShot: showing up in the oddest of places

** I think its supposed to be a TearJerker

* KimonoFanservice: Haruko wears a [[WomanInWhite white kimono]] all the time. It's been described as nearly falling off her shoulders and being extremely short.

** In chapter ten, Kisshu screams "[[MyImmortal BECAUSE I LOVE HER]]"

* XMeetsY: Manga/TokyoMewMew meets MyImmortal.

[[NonIndicativeName Tokyo Mew Mew No Hope]] is a fanfiction set in the Universe of TokyoMewMew. It's told from the perspective of the TheOjou Minto's twin sister, a blatant MarySue, who wears a variety of {{Stripperific}} “gothic” outfits to school, occasionally forgetting that her school has a uniform. When she is not murdering boys for looking at her cleavage, which shouldn't have been visible in the first place considering she's in school, she spends her time crying her eyes out for reasons that are supposed to be Tearjerkers.(They're not)

* XMeetsY: TokyoMewMew meets MyImmortal.

* ElegantGothicLolita::attenpted

Chapter 16 suddenly changed in tone and maturity. Exhibit A: contrast this description of Sakura's clothing with the ones listed under ElegantGothicLolita.

-->I couldn't really get down right now, could I? I fidgeted with lace on the edge of my sleeve. Cluny, contrasting rather nicely with the thick cotton. Bell sleeves, not exaggerated, or tacky. My pannier was well hidden, and my skirt fell just below the knees. The high neck itched slightly. I straightened my bow. It was odd. I'd wondered if, upon seeing something like this, silly and superficial things wouldn't matter anymore. I sighed.
-->"I must be getting shallow," I whispered to myself. "Spending too much time thinking about clothes, I'm turning into a regular priss."


If this had kept up, "No Hope Left" may have been rescued from the badfic pile. But the very next chapter opens with "(Lol srry about the suckish writing an spelling on the last chaptr XD I was tired.)", and immediately launches back into the author's usual pre-chapter-16 writing style.

** ripping a boy's head off because he looked at her cleavage. I wish I was lying.

* ElegantGothicLolita: subverted with poor research. What makes lolita fashion "Lolita" is that it is young-looking and classy...meaning not worn like this:

* NorseMythology: All throughout chapter 21, such as:
-->And all the while, the ice cow licked and licked.
-->I WILL MAKE A NEW EARTH FROM YOUR FLESH, AND A SKY FROM THE DOME OF YOU DEFEATED SKULL!
-->Haruko's golden boar, wrought by the hands of the residents of [=DarkalfHeim=], ...

** [[ThePrincessBride Sakura says]] "[[MyNameIsInigoMontoya My name is Sakura Momomya.]] YouKilledMyFather. PrepareToDie."

* AccidentalInnuendo: "And then, KISSHU CAME!"
* AcceptableTargets: Preps and hackers.

* DieForOurShip: Every pairing has been changed to Sakura + INSERT NAME HERE.

* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sakura and Minto, are described as this in chapter fourteen. However considering the way Sakura, the 'tomboy' of the two, dresses and generally acts, it doesn't really work.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs