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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17672/The-Order-of-Koaxia The Order of Koaxia]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfictio''n by HellRyden.
A crossover that is simply MASSIVE in scale, The Order of Koaxia draws inspiration from countless forms of media, be they anime, manga, fantasy, or video games. Joining the idyllic land of Equestria with a much larger, much more dangerous Multiverse, the story focuses on the Mane Six, watching as they are forced to inherit and understand a set of strange new powers, powers that somehow intertwine with the Elements of Harmony...
A crossover that is simply MASSIVE in scale, The Order of Koaxia draws inspiration from countless forms of media, be they anime, manga, fantasy, or video games. Joining the idyllic land of Equestria with a much larger, much more dangerous Multiverse, the story focuses on the Mane Six, watching as they are forced to inherit and understand a set of strange new powers, powers that somehow intertwine with the Elements of Harmony...
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A crossover that is simply MASSIVE in scale,
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: The dynamic between [[spoiler: Descartes]] and Fluttershy certainly teases at this towards the end of Chapter 7 - at least, for the brief time that they interact with each other before [[spoiler: Descartes' death.]]
* CallingYourAttacks: And HOW.
* CallingYourAttacks: And HOW.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: The dynamic between [[spoiler: Descartes]] and Fluttershy certainly teases at this towards the end of Chapter 7 - -- at least, for the brief time that they interact with each other before [[spoiler: Descartes' death.]]
* %%* CallingYourAttacks: And HOW.
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** In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from VideoGame/DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
** Applejack using the [[spoiler: Buster Sword from ''Franchise/FinalFantasy'']] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's heavily implied that [[spoiler: Descartes]] has one of these.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Evil, no. Insane, yes.
** Applejack using the [[spoiler: Buster Sword from ''Franchise/FinalFantasy'']] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's heavily implied that [[spoiler: Descartes]] has one of these.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Evil, no. Insane, yes.
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** In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's [[spoiler:Nero's Red Queen, from VideoGame/DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
** Applejack using the[[spoiler: Buster [[spoiler:Buster Sword from ''Franchise/FinalFantasy'']] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
* %%* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's heavily implied that [[spoiler: Descartes]] [[spoiler:Descartes]] has one of these.
* %%* DarkIsNotEvil: Evil, no. Insane, yes.
** Applejack using the
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* EvilMentor: [[spoiler: Descartes']] master, Nietzsche, certainly gives off very strong vibes of this, even before he joined the half of the Order that turned on the other half still loyal to their world.
* GoodEyesEvilEyes: [[spoiler: Descartes]] possessed his fair share of creepy eye powers. It's been implied that [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] now possesses these same abilities.
* ICanStillFight: Normally, having most of your bones cracked or broken, losing a couple pints of blood, and being covered in burns, cuts, and bruises would be enough to take anyone out of a fight. Not if you're [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* JumpedAtTheCall: Surprisingly, [[spoiler:Fluttershy]].
* LetThemDieHappy: The Order's "current" members seem to enjoy doing this.
* GoodEyesEvilEyes: [[spoiler: Descartes]] possessed his fair share of creepy eye powers. It's been implied that [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] now possesses these same abilities.
* ICanStillFight: Normally, having most of your bones cracked or broken, losing a couple pints of blood, and being covered in burns, cuts, and bruises would be enough to take anyone out of a fight. Not if you're [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* JumpedAtTheCall: Surprisingly, [[spoiler:Fluttershy]].
* LetThemDieHappy: The Order's "current" members seem to enjoy doing this.
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* EvilMentor: [[spoiler: Descartes']] [[spoiler:Descartes']] master, Nietzsche, certainly gives off very strong vibes of this, even before he joined the half of the Order that turned on the other half still loyal to their world.
* GoodEyesEvilEyes:[[spoiler: Descartes]] [[spoiler:Descartes]] possessed his fair share of creepy eye powers. It's been implied that [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] now possesses these same abilities.
* ICanStillFight: Normally, having most of your bones cracked or broken, losing a couple pints of blood, and being covered in burns, cuts, and bruises would be enough to take anyone out of a fight. Not if you're[[spoiler: Rainbow [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]].
* %%* JumpedAtTheCall: Surprisingly, [[spoiler:Fluttershy]].
* %%* LetThemDieHappy: The Order's "current" members seem to enjoy doing this.
* GoodEyesEvilEyes:
* ICanStillFight: Normally, having most of your bones cracked or broken, losing a couple pints of blood, and being covered in burns, cuts, and bruises would be enough to take anyone out of a fight. Not if you're
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%%* RideTheLightning: When Melchior needs to catch up to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
%%* ShockAndAwe: Melchior and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
%%* ShockAndAwe: Melchior and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
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%%* RideTheLightning: When Melchior needs to catch up to [[spoiler: Rainbow [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]].
%%* ShockAndAwe: Melchior and[[spoiler: Rainbow [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]].
%%* ShockAndAwe: Melchior and
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%%* TheSacredDarkness: Descartes and, presumably, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]].
* TookALevelInBadass: Thus far, [[spoiler: Rarity and Rainbow Dash]] have both managed to do so. Odds are they'll soon be joined by the rest of their friends.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Again, cracked/broken bones, inordinate amounts of bloodloss, and countless wounds will typically put someone on their back. Again, not when you're [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Thus far, [[spoiler: Rarity and Rainbow Dash]] have both managed to do so. Odds are they'll soon be joined by the rest of their friends.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Again, cracked/broken bones, inordinate amounts of bloodloss, and countless wounds will typically put someone on their back. Again, not when you're [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
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%%* TheSacredDarkness: Descartes and, presumably, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]].
[[spoiler:Fluttershy]].
* TookALevelInBadass: Thus far,[[spoiler: Rarity [[spoiler:Rarity and Rainbow Dash]] have both managed to do so. Odds are they'll soon be joined by the rest of their friends.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Again, cracked/broken bones, inordinate amounts of bloodloss, and countless wounds will typically put someone on their back. Again, not when you're[[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
[[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Thus far,
* YouCanBarelyStand: Again, cracked/broken bones, inordinate amounts of bloodloss, and countless wounds will typically put someone on their back. Again, not when you're
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* BequeathedPower
* BigDamnHeroes: Rainbow Dash in chapter 6 - refer to Dynamic Entry below.
* BlackEyesOfCrazy: Descartes, when fighting against his old master in chapter 7.
* BigDamnHeroes: Rainbow Dash in chapter 6 - refer to Dynamic Entry below.
* BlackEyesOfCrazy: Descartes, when fighting against his old master in chapter 7.
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* ColorCodedElements
* CoolSword: In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from VideoGame/DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
* CoolSword: In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from VideoGame/DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
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** In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from VideoGame/DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
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* DynamicEntry: Berserk!Rainbow Dash's entry against the manticore in chapter 6 - she literally thunders down from the sky [[spoiler: in her human form]] and smashes right into its side when it's seconds away from disemboweling Applejack.
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* DynamicEntry: Berserk!Rainbow Dash's entry against the manticore in chapter 6 - -- she literally thunders down from the sky [[spoiler: in her human form]] and smashes right into its side when it's seconds away from disemboweling Applejack.
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* PhysicalGod: Celestia and Luna.
* PlayingWithFire: Hinted to be the eventual power of [[spoiler:Applejack]].
* PunctuatedForEmphasis
* RideTheLightning: When Melchior needs to catch up to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* ShockAndAwe: Melchior and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* ShoutOut: Too many to count!
* PlayingWithFire: Hinted to be the eventual power of [[spoiler:Applejack]].
* PunctuatedForEmphasis
* RideTheLightning: When Melchior needs to catch up to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* ShockAndAwe: Melchior and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* ShoutOut: Too many to count!
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: When your memories of your friends come to your defense when some creepy jerk invades your mindscape.
** Or when you need to convince said creepy jerk to calm down and talk things out.
* TheSacredDarkness: Descartes and, presumably, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]]
** Or when you need to convince said creepy jerk to calm down and talk things out.
* TheSacredDarkness: Descartes and, presumably, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]]
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: When your memories of your friends come to your defense when some creepy jerk invades your mindscape.
**mindscape. Or when you need to convince said creepy jerk to calm down and talk things out.
* %%* TheSacredDarkness: Descartes and, presumably, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]]Fluttershy]].
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* ApocalypseHow: Equestria’s hidden, bloody history during the first invasion of the demons, before their formation into the Burning Legion.
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* ApocalypseHow: Equestria’s Equestria's hidden, bloody history during the first invasion of the demons, before their formation into the Burning Legion.
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: Descartes’]] inheritance battle with Fluttershy - rather than confront the pegasus directly, he instead remotely enters her mind from a distance and battles her within her mindscape.
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: [[spoiler: Descartes’]] Descartes']] inheritance battle with Fluttershy - rather than confront the pegasus directly, he instead remotely enters her mind from a distance and battles her within her mindscape.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: The dynamic between [[spoiler: Descartes]] and Fluttershy certainly teases at this towards the end of Chapter 7 - at least, for the brief time that they interact with each other before [[spoiler: Descartes’ death.]]
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: The dynamic between [[spoiler: Descartes]] and Fluttershy certainly teases at this towards the end of Chapter 7 - at least, for the brief time that they interact with each other before [[spoiler: Descartes’ Descartes' death.]]
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* DynamicEntry: Berserk!Rainbow Dash’s entry against the manticore in chapter 6 - she literally thunders down from the sky [[spoiler: in her human form]] and smashes right into its side when it’s seconds away from disemboweling Applejack.
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* DynamicEntry: Berserk!Rainbow Dash’s Dash's entry against the manticore in chapter 6 - she literally thunders down from the sky [[spoiler: in her human form]] and smashes right into its side when it’s it's seconds away from disemboweling Applejack.
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* EvilMentor: [[spoiler: Descartes’]] master, Nietzsche, certainly gives off very strong vibes of this, even before he joined the half of the Order that turned on the other half still loyal to their world.
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* EvilMentor: [[spoiler: Descartes’]] Descartes']] master, Nietzsche, certainly gives off very strong vibes of this, even before he joined the half of the Order that turned on the other half still loyal to their world.
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* CoolSword: In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from Franchise/DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
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* CoolSword: In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from Franchise/DevilMayCry]].VideoGame/DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
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* CoolSword: In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
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* CoolSword: In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from DevilMayCry]].Franchise/DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
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** Applejack using the [[spoiler: Buster Sword from FinalFantasy]] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
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** Applejack using the [[spoiler: Buster Sword from FinalFantasy]] ''Franchise/FinalFantasy'']] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17672/The-Order-of-Koaxia The Order of Koaxia]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by HellRyden.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17672/The-Order-of-Koaxia The Order of Koaxia]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfictio''n by HellRyden.
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* JumpedAtTheCall: Surprisingly, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]].
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* JumpedAtTheCall: Surprisingly, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]].[[spoiler:Fluttershy]].
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* PlayingWithFire: Hinted to be the eventual power of [[spoiler:Applejack]].
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: When Fluttershy [[spoiler: sees the very essence of who Descartes is through an implied Soulgaze,]] her resolve to take on the burden of the [[spoiler: Element of Darkness]] strengthens, and she sets aside her fear to do what she does best - [[spoiler: easing his pain.]]
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** Applejack using the [[spoiler: Buster Blade]] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
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** Applejack using the [[spoiler: Buster Blade]] Sword from FinalFantasy]] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
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* SuckSessor: Considering that her powers are currently driving her insane with pain and agony, [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] is probably this to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
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* BloodKnight: Descartes' [[spoiler: inner demon.]]
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* ICanStillFight: Normally, having most of your bones cracked or broken, losing a couple pints of blood, and being covered in burns, cuts, and bruises would be enough to take anyone out of a fight. Not if you're [spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
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* ICanStillFight: Normally, having most of your bones cracked or broken, losing a couple pints of blood, and being covered in burns, cuts, and bruises would be enough to take anyone out of a fight. Not if you're [spoiler: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
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* YouCanBarelyStand: Again, cracked/broken bones, inordinate amounts of bloodloss, and countless wounds will typically put someone on their back. Again, now when you're [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
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* YouCanBarelyStand: Again, cracked/broken bones, inordinate amounts of bloodloss, and countless wounds will typically put someone on their back. Again, now not when you're [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
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* ApocalypseHow: Equestria’s hidden, bloody history during the first invasion of the demons, before their formation into the Burning Legion.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's heavily implied that [[spoiler: Descartes]] has one of these.
* EvilMentor: [[spoiler: Descartes’]] master, Nietzsche, certainly gives off very strong vibes of this, even before he joined the half of the Order that turned on the other half still loyal to their world.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Thus far, [[Rarity and Rainbow Dash]] have both managed to do so. Odds are they'll soon be joined by the rest of their friends.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Thus far, [[Rarity [[spoiler: Rarity and Rainbow Dash]] have both managed to do so. Odds are they'll soon be joined by the rest of their friends.
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* GoodEyesEvilEyes
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* GoodEyesEvilEyes
GoodEyesEvilEyes: [[spoiler: Descartes]] possessed his fair share of creepy eye powers. It's been implied that [[spoiler: Fluttershy]] now possesses these same abilities.
* ICanStillFight: Normally, having most of your bones cracked or broken, losing a couple pints of blood, and being covered in burns, cuts, and bruises would be enough to take anyone out of a fight. Not if you're [spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* JumpedAtTheCall: Surprisingly, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]].
* LetThemDieHappy: The Order's "current" members seem to enjoy doing this.
* PhysicalGod: Celestia and Luna.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis
* RideTheLightning: When Melchior needs to catch up to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* ShockAndAwe: Melchior and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* ShoutOut: Too many to count!
* SuckSessor: Considering that her powers are currently driving her insane with pain and agony, [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] is probably this to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Remember that inner demon we were talking about earlier...?
* ThePowerOfFriendship: When your memories of your friends come to your defense when some creepy jerk invades your mindscape.
** Or when you need to convince said creepy jerk to calm down and talk things out.
* TheSacredDarkness: Descartes and, presumably, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Thus far, [[Rarity and Rainbow Dash]] have both managed to do so. Odds are they'll soon be joined by the rest of their friends.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Again, cracked/broken bones, inordinate amounts of bloodloss, and countless wounds will typically put someone on their back. Again, now when you're [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
* ICanStillFight: Normally, having most of your bones cracked or broken, losing a couple pints of blood, and being covered in burns, cuts, and bruises would be enough to take anyone out of a fight. Not if you're [spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* JumpedAtTheCall: Surprisingly, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]].
* LetThemDieHappy: The Order's "current" members seem to enjoy doing this.
* PhysicalGod: Celestia and Luna.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis
* RideTheLightning: When Melchior needs to catch up to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* ShockAndAwe: Melchior and [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* ShoutOut: Too many to count!
* SuckSessor: Considering that her powers are currently driving her insane with pain and agony, [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]] is probably this to [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: Remember that inner demon we were talking about earlier...?
* ThePowerOfFriendship: When your memories of your friends come to your defense when some creepy jerk invades your mindscape.
** Or when you need to convince said creepy jerk to calm down and talk things out.
* TheSacredDarkness: Descartes and, presumably, [[spoiler: Fluttershy]]
* TookALevelInBadass: Thus far, [[Rarity and Rainbow Dash]] have both managed to do so. Odds are they'll soon be joined by the rest of their friends.
* YouCanBarelyStand: Again, cracked/broken bones, inordinate amounts of bloodloss, and countless wounds will typically put someone on their back. Again, now when you're [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
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* AntiVillain: Despite their attempts to seemingly [[spoiler kill the Mane Six]], the members of the Order aren't actually all that bad.
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* AntiVillain: Despite their attempts to seemingly [[spoiler [[spoiler: kill the Mane Six]], the members of the Order aren't actually all that bad.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: When Fluttershy [[spoiler: sees the very essence of who Descartes is through an implied Soulgaze,]] her resolve to take on the burden of the [[spoiler: Element of Darkness]] strengthens, and she sets aside her fear to do what she does best - [[spoiler: easing his pain.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: When Fluttershy [[spoiler: sees the very essence of who Descartes is through an implied Soulgaze,]] her resolve to take on the burden of the [[spoiler: Element of Darkness]] strengthens, and she sets aside her fear to do what she does best - [[spoiler: easing his pain.]]
]]
* DarkIsNotEvil: Evil, no. Insane, yes.
* DeathGlare: Fluttershy's Stare. Dragons and cockatrices aren't the only things it works on.
* DynamicEntry: Berserk!Rainbow Dash’s entry against the manticore in chapter 6 - she literally thunders down from the sky [[spoiler: in her human form]] and smashes right into its side when it’s seconds away from disemboweling Applejack.
* EnemyWithin: Implied to be the curse of the [[spoiler: Element of Darkness]]. Its previous bearer constantly battled against his inner demon after inheriting it.
* GoodEyesEvilEyes
* DarkIsNotEvil: Evil, no. Insane, yes.
* DeathGlare: Fluttershy's Stare. Dragons and cockatrices aren't the only things it works on.
* DynamicEntry: Berserk!Rainbow Dash’s entry against the manticore in chapter 6 - she literally thunders down from the sky [[spoiler: in her human form]] and smashes right into its side when it’s seconds away from disemboweling Applejack.
* EnemyWithin: Implied to be the curse of the [[spoiler: Element of Darkness]]. Its previous bearer constantly battled against his inner demon after inheriting it.
* GoodEyesEvilEyes
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Descartes’ inheritance battle with Fluttershy - rather than confront the pegasus directly, he instead remotely enters her mind from a distance and battles her within her mindscape.
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* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Descartes’ [[spoiler: Descartes’]] inheritance battle with Fluttershy - rather than confront the pegasus directly, he instead remotely enters her mind from a distance and battles her within her mindscape.
mindscape.
* BequeathedPower
* BigDamnHeroes: Rainbow Dash in chapter 6 - refer to Dynamic Entry below.
* BlackEyesOfCrazy: Descartes, when fighting against his old master in chapter 7.
* BloodKnight: Descartes' [[spoiler: inner demon.]]
* BreakTheCutie: In chapter 7, [[spoiler: Descartes]] begins their encounter by trying to deconstruct Fluttershy's worldview. He fails. Horribly.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: This story contains Pinkie Pie. 'Nuff said.
* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: The dynamic between [[spoiler: Descartes]] and Fluttershy certainly teases at this towards the end of Chapter 7 - at least, for the brief time that they interact with each other before [[spoiler: Descartes’ death.]]
* CallingYourAttacks: And HOW.
* CastingAShadow: Summoning an army of shadowy tendrils to rip your opponents to bits!
* TheChainsOfCommanding: When your personal student and her friends are slowly being attacked, one by one, and you can't do a thing about it. Sometimes being an immortal goddess princess can really suck.
* ColorCodedElements
* CoolSword: In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
** Applejack using the [[spoiler: Buster Blade]] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: When Fluttershy [[spoiler: sees the very essence of who Descartes is through an implied Soulgaze,]] her resolve to take on the burden of the [[spoiler: Element of Darkness]] strengthens, and she sets aside her fear to do what she does best - [[spoiler: easing his pain.]]
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* BequeathedPower
* BigDamnHeroes: Rainbow Dash in chapter 6 - refer to Dynamic Entry below.
* BlackEyesOfCrazy: Descartes, when fighting against his old master in chapter 7.
* BloodKnight: Descartes' [[spoiler: inner demon.]]
* BreakTheCutie: In chapter 7, [[spoiler: Descartes]] begins their encounter by trying to deconstruct Fluttershy's worldview. He fails. Horribly.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: This story contains Pinkie Pie. 'Nuff said.
* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: The dynamic between [[spoiler: Descartes]] and Fluttershy certainly teases at this towards the end of Chapter 7 - at least, for the brief time that they interact with each other before [[spoiler: Descartes’ death.]]
* CallingYourAttacks: And HOW.
* CastingAShadow: Summoning an army of shadowy tendrils to rip your opponents to bits!
* TheChainsOfCommanding: When your personal student and her friends are slowly being attacked, one by one, and you can't do a thing about it. Sometimes being an immortal goddess princess can really suck.
* ColorCodedElements
* CoolSword: In her dream sequence, Rainbow Dash wielded [[spoiler: Nero's Red Queen, from DevilMayCry]]. Which is really about as awesome as you can get.
** Applejack using the [[spoiler: Buster Blade]] in her dream sequence, to a lesser extent.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: When Fluttershy [[spoiler: sees the very essence of who Descartes is through an implied Soulgaze,]] her resolve to take on the burden of the [[spoiler: Element of Darkness]] strengthens, and she sets aside her fear to do what she does best - [[spoiler: easing his pain.]]
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* An Ice Person: Balthazar and, to a lesser extent, [[spoiler: Rarity.]]
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* An Ice Person: AnIcePerson: Balthazar and, to a lesser extent, [[spoiler: Rarity.]]
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* AntiVillain: Despite their attempts to seemingly [[spoiler kill the Mane Six]], the members of the Order aren't actually all that bad.
* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: Rainbow Dash and Rarity inherited their new roles when [[spoiler: being struck by a ENORMOUS lightning bolt]] and after [[spoiler: executing a quartet of giant Ice Golems]], respectively.
* BadassBoast
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Descartes’ inheritance battle with Fluttershy - rather than confront the pegasus directly, he instead remotely enters her mind from a distance and battles her within her mindscape.
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* AntiVillain: Despite their attempts to seemingly [[spoiler kill the Mane Six]], the members of the Order aren't actually all that bad.
* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: Rainbow Dash and Rarity inherited their new roles when [[spoiler: being struck by a ENORMOUS lightning bolt]] and after [[spoiler: executing a quartet of giant Ice Golems]], respectively.
* BadassBoast
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Descartes’ inheritance battle with Fluttershy - rather than confront the pegasus directly, he instead remotely enters her mind from a distance and battles her within her mindscape.
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ActionGirl: Rainbow Dash when [[spoiler: trying to fight off/escape from Melchior's assault.]] And, surprisingly, Rarity when she [[spoiler: tries to escape Balthazar's ice labyrinth.]]
* An Ice Person: Balthazar and, to a lesser extent, [[spoiler: Rarity.]]
* An Ice Person: Balthazar and, to a lesser extent, [[spoiler: Rarity.]]
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17672/The-Order-of-Koaxia The Order of Koaxia]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by HellRyden.
A crossover that is simply MASSIVE in scale, The Order of Koaxia draws inspiration from countless forms of media, be they anime, manga, fantasy, or video games. Joining the idyllic land of Equestria with a much larger, much more dangerous Multiverse, the story focuses on the Mane Six, watching as they are forced to inherit and understand a set of strange new powers, powers that somehow intertwine with the Elements of Harmony...
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A crossover that is simply MASSIVE in scale, The Order of Koaxia draws inspiration from countless forms of media, be they anime, manga, fantasy, or video games. Joining the idyllic land of Equestria with a much larger, much more dangerous Multiverse, the story focuses on the Mane Six, watching as they are forced to inherit and understand a set of strange new powers, powers that somehow intertwine with the Elements of Harmony...
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