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* BloodOnTheseHands: Yuusei hallucinates at the end of Chapter 7, thinking he has [[spoiler: Takasu's blood]] all over him, and even his cards.
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Yuusei hallucinates at the end of Chapter 7, thinking he has [[spoiler: Yusei's reaction, combined with BloodOnTheseHands, after Takasu dies.]]Takasu's blood]] all over him, and even his cards.
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* [[SeventhEpisodeTwist 7th Episode Twist]]: Chapter 7 has the first duel, and it's an AbsurdlyHighStakesGame. [[spoiler: It ends with Takasu dying at Yusei's hands]] and pretty much sets the tone for what's ahead.
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* [[SeventhEpisodeTwist [[MidSeasonTwist 7th Episode Twist]]: Chapter 7 has the first duel, and it's an AbsurdlyHighStakesGame. [[spoiler: It ends with Takasu dying at Yusei's hands]] and pretty much sets the tone for what's ahead.
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* DeclarationOfProtection: Rua hammers home just how far he'll go to protect Ruka in both versions during his duel with Jeager.
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* IWillProtectHer: Rua hammers home just how far he'll go to protect Ruka in both versions during his duel with Jeager.
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: Jack deals this to Yusei, not unlike the anime's take on the situation.
* HeroicSafeMode: Yusei's been living in this since Chapter 7 and finally confesses thirty chapters later.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Coupled with the above.
* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Coupled with the above.
* ImNotAHeroIm: Said by Yusei in Chapter 37.
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** 'No, Fudo Yusei… [[CardfightVanguard you've gotten weaker]]'.
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: And when there are, [[PsychoPsychologist you don't want to meet them...]]
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* TheBumblebee: Eliot, of the Arcadia Movement, whose described as much younger and shorter than his comrades and has HairOfGold to match.
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* TheBumblebee: Eliot, of the Arcadia Movement, whose described as much younger and shorter than his comrades and has HairOfGold HairOfGoldHeartOfGold to match.
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* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Divine appears to be one for Aki. When he's arrested by Security, she becomes even more of an Ice Queen. On the other hand, when [[spoiler: he's sacrificed by the Earthbound Gods]], she is left an emotional wreck and thrown into ShrinkingViolet territory. Naoko seems to take up the role in at this point.
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** Chapter 15: -->'''Daly''': I'm sending out a warrant… for [[spoiler: Jack Atlus']] arrest.
** Chapter 15: -->'''Daly''': I'm sending out a warrant… for [[spoiler: Jack Atlus']] arrest.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: At 32 chapters, it has 324,000 words, making it one of the largest in the 5D's archive on FFN, and it's still setting up the Dark Signer arc.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Because Yusei beat Jack in their secret duel, he's more than willing to [[RevengeByProxy attack and destroy Satellite, including Yusei's waiting friends.]]
* {{Doorstopper}}: At32 35 chapters, it has 324,000 a little over 350,000 words, making it one of the largest in the 5D's archive on FFN, and it's still setting up the Dark Signer arc.
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* ForcedToWatch: Godwin leaves Yusei in the Detention Centre with a device to broadcast the attack on Satellite. Even when he ignores it, it plays automatically so that he can't even escape the audio.
* RousingSpeech: Nerve gives one to convince Blitz and Taka to help prepare for the fight against Neo-Domino's duellists.
* {{Doorstopper}}: 94,000 words from just 6 chapters. [[ForegoneConclusion It's clear where this is going.]]
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* MulticolouredHair: Blyth, who has black hair whose spikes' tips are magenta and dark-red.
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* MulticolouredHair: Blyth, who has black hair whose [[AnimeHair spikes' tips are magenta and dark-red.]]
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* BigGuyLittleGuy: Wear and Tyne are introduced as a duo, with this as one major feature that's pointed out.
* TheBumblebee: Eliot, of the Arcadia Movement, whose described as much younger and shorter than his comrades and has HairOfGold to match.
* HeroicBSOD: Like ''Path One'', Yusei doesn't handle Kiryu being a Dark Signer well.
* KickTheDog: Senator Wilhelmina Magenta made Aki's time at Duel Academy hell and made sure she was kicked out, just because of her PsychicPowers.
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* MulticolouredHair: Blyth, who has black hair whose spikes' tips are magenta and dark-red.
* OriginalCharacter: A few more are thrown in than the original version. Chapter 30 introduces six new Psychics in the Arcadia Movement.
* OriginalCharacter: A few more are thrown in than the original version. Chapter 30 introduces six new Psychics in the Arcadia Movement.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyBoy: Tees.
* YouCantFightFate: Kinomiya's argument to Jack in Chapter 30.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Tyne.
* YouCantFightFate: Kinomiya's argument to Jack in Chapter 30.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Tyne.
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* BigBadassBattleSequence: The initial clash between Neo-Domino and Satellite's forces.
* DeadLineNews: A news crew moving towards the Arcadia Movement to cover the attack result in [[RedshirtReporter the crew being sacrificed]] as fuel for the Earthbound Gods and their [[StuffBlowingUp helicopter crashing.]]
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** MassOhCrap: When Ccarayhua and [[spoiler; Urcuchillay]] appear in Neo-Domino, people on both sides have the same reaction.
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** MassOhCrap: When Ccarayhua and [[spoiler; [[spoiler: Urcuchillay]] appear in Neo-Domino, people on both sides have the same reaction.
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** Special mention to Kinomiya, who appeared in [[OneShotCharacter one episode in the anime]], but has a recurring role in the fic.
** WordOfGod states Naoko was intended to be a OneShotCharacter herself, but grew on the author, so has become a regular character herself where the Psychic Duellists are involved.
** WordOfGod states Naoko was intended to be a OneShotCharacter herself, but grew on the author, so has become a regular character herself where the Psychic Duellists are involved.
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** Yusei again during his nightmare in Chapter 35.
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* DeathByCameo: [[spoiler: Tyne, Tweed, Blyth, Wear, Tees and Eliot,]] who are said to have a greater role in the fic's other version, but show up briefly before being used as fuel for the chapter's two Earthbound Gods.
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** Naoko goes back into the Arcadia Movement while the Dark Signers are attacking to get Aki. [[spoiler: Ironically, in spite of her efforts, they're the only ones to walk away after the attack.]]
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Ushio and Kinomiya working on the case of [[spoiler: Takasu's death]] had clear signs of this.
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** In the same chapter, Misty doesn't have the time to finish off Aki, but has Ccarayhua attack the Arcadia Movement just to damage it further.
** In the same chapter, Misty doesn't have the time to finish off Aki, but has Ccarayhua attack the Arcadia Movement just to damage it further.
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** Carly has Chapter 33. It hasn't ended badly for her... [[TemptingFate yet.]]
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** Carly has Chapter 33. It hasn't ended badly for her... [[TemptingFate yet.]] [[spoiler: Then [[RuleofThree Chapter 35 had her]] [[ADeathInTheLimelight taken out]] by Dark Signer Ushio.]]
* BadDreams: In the same manner as the anime, Yusei has one [[spoiler: over his near-death experience at Ccapac Apu's hands, but elaborates on his feeling powerless to save those he's fighting for.]] With a helping of NightmareFuel. Overlaps with AnxietyDreams, as he'll have to face it again in the future.
* BadassInDistress: Jack, on two occasions. The third arc is built on [[spoiler: his arrest and the threat of execution]], while Chapters 31 and 32 have him cornered by Kinomiya and duels him for his freedom.
** ItGotWorse, much worse, during the Dark Signer arc.
* DescriptionPorn: When a Duel Monster appears for the first time, it's not uncommon for an entire paragraph to describe its appearance.
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* OhCrap: Crow has his moment when Kiryu summons Ccapac Apu.
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** MassOhCrap: When Ccarayhua and [[spoiler; Urcuchillay]] appear in Neo-Domino, people on both sides have the same reaction.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Ushio goes from being a {{Jerkass}} as he was portrayed early-anime to [[spoiler: a real Dark Signer.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: Ushio goes from being a {{Jerkass}} as he was portrayed early-anime to [[spoiler: a real Dark Signer.]]
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** Carly finds a document in Divine's study called [[HigurashiNoNakuKoroNi File 34, which contains conspiracy theories]], including those on the origins of Psychic Duellists.
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The Neo-Domino Purge is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} fanfic that follows an alternate continuity from episode 8 of the anime onwards. Desperate to uncover the Signers lurking on both sides of the Neo-Domino/Satellite divide, Rex Godwin creates a conflict between the two under the pretense of their way of life being threatened. Essentially the fanfic boils down to taking the TraumaCongaLine already set up in 5D's and [[UpToEleven turning it up to eleven]]. The fanfic is written by Cuteyami apparently with someone else working on the story and duel planning. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4568291/1/Neo_Domino_Purge_The/ here]]
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The Neo-Domino Purge is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} fanfic that follows an alternate continuity from episode 8 of the anime onwards. Desperate to uncover the Signers lurking on both sides of the Neo-Domino/Satellite divide, Rex Godwin creates a conflict between the two under the pretense of their way of life being threatened. Essentially the fanfic boils down to taking the TraumaCongaLine already set up in 5D's and [[UpToEleven turning it up to eleven]]. The fanfic is written by Cuteyami [=CuteYami=] apparently with someone else working on the story and duel planning. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4568291/1/Neo_Domino_Purge_The/ here]]
** Any time Neo-Domino rides on Satellite.
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* TheReveal: [[spoiler: Ushio]] appears at the end of Chapter 34 as [[spoiler: a new Dark Signer.]]
* RooftopConfrontation: Yusei and Takasu's duel takes place on the roof of the DetentionCentreCentre.
* SayMyName: On several occasions, including Yusei to Crow [[spoiler: when the latter is knocked out of the Security tower by Bommer, as mentioned above]] and a collective call from the rest of the major characters to Yusei at the end of Chapter 23.
* RooftopConfrontation: Yusei and Takasu's duel takes place on the roof of the Detention
* SayMyName: On several occasions, including Yusei to Crow [[spoiler: when the latter is knocked out of the Security tower by Bommer, as mentioned above]] and a collective call from the rest of the major characters to Yusei at the end of Chapter 23.
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** Chapter 34 has the biggest impact by the appearance of [[spoiler: Dark Signer Ushio.]]
** Chapter 34 has the biggest impact by the appearance of [[spoiler: Dark Signer Ushio.]]
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* BloodlessCarnage: For a conflict fought on high-speed motorbikes there's little actual violence [[spoiler: but then gets subverted HARD for Takasu's death]].
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* BloodlessCarnage: For a conflict fought on high-speed motorbikes there's little actual violence [[spoiler: but then gets subverted HARD for Takasu's death]].
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** Carly has Chapter 33. It hasn't ended badly for her... yet.
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** There was almost six months between Chapters 32 and 33, due to a combination of being an [[OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent Ordinary University Student]] and CreatorBreakdown in the form of the author suffering from depression.
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* ShoutOut: Carly makes reference to [[NineteenEightyFour telescreens]] while hiding with Jack at the beginning of the second season.
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The Neo-Domino Purge is a {{Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds}} fanfic that follows an alternate continuity from episode 8 of the anime onwards. Desperate to uncover the Signers lurking on both sides of the Neo-Domino/Satellite divide, Rex Godwin creates a conflict between the two under the pretense of their way of life being threatened. Essentially the fanfic boils down to taking the TraumaCongaLine already set up in 5D's and [[BeyondTheImpossible [[UpToEleven turning it up to eleven]]. The fanfic is written by Cuteyami apparently with someone else working on the story and duel planning. It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4568291/1/Neo_Domino_Purge_The/ here]]
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* FiveBadBand: From Arc 3
** BigBad: [[spoiler: Juri]]
** TheDragon: Kinomiya
** TheBrute: Shira and Jil
** TheEvilGenius: Frank
** TheDarkChick: Akutsu
** SixthRanger: Bommer
** BigBad: [[spoiler: Juri]]
** TheDragon: Kinomiya
** TheBrute: Shira and Jil
** TheEvilGenius: Frank
** TheDarkChick: Akutsu
** SixthRanger: Bommer
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* ScheduleSlip: The fic was originally supposed to be posted with the first chapter of the first version's Season 2 in November 2010. The fic appeared at the end of January 2011, but the first chapter wasn't posted until March.
** The two chapters with the Rua/Jeager and Jack/Kinomiya duels were supposed to be posted simultaneously with the original's versions. Neither happened.
** The two chapters with the Rua/Jeager and Jack/Kinomiya duels were supposed to be posted simultaneously with the original's versions. Neither happened.
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* GambitRoulette: [[spoiler: Godwin's plan is to uncover the Signers quickly and force the Dark Signers to show themselves. All this involves starting a that is MOSTLY bloodless whilst pretending to the public in Neo-Domino that it is for their security and to the higher-ups that he is [[ForScience trying to push the limits of Momentum]]. He has to pray the situation doesn't get even more out of hand all the while.]]
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* XanatosRoulette: [[spoiler: Godwin's plan is to uncover the Signers quickly and force the Dark Signers to show themselves. All this involves starting a that is MOSTLY bloodless whilst pretending to the public in Neo-Domino that it is for their security and to the higher-ups that he is [[ForScience trying to push the limits of Momentum]]. He has to pray the situation doesn't get even more out of hand all the while.]]
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* BloodOnTheseHands: Yuusei hallucinates at the end of Chapter 7, thinking he has [[spoiler: Takasu's blood]] all over him, even his cards.
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