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* AdaptationalBadass: Teri can manipulate paper and can make it come to life, such as making an origami hawk, an f-16, a scorpion, etc. Traits she never exhibited in the show.
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* AdaptationalBadass: AdaptationalBadass:
** Teri can manipulate paper and can make it come to life, such as making an origami hawk, an f-16, a scorpion, etc. Traits she never exhibited in theshow.show.
** Gumball himself; he's more of a CowardlyLion than an outright coward, but nevertheless is a total weakling. The fanfic retains the former trope, but it becomes downplayed as Gumball starts actively training himself to fight off against a group of EldritchAbomination[=s=] that are five times his size. Later chapters even mention that he has begun developing some muscle and his reflexes become fast enough that he's able to block off [[BarbaricBully Jamie]]'s rapid punches.
** Teri can manipulate paper and can make it come to life, such as making an origami hawk, an f-16, a scorpion, etc. Traits she never exhibited in the
** Gumball himself; he's more of a CowardlyLion than an outright coward, but nevertheless is a total weakling. The fanfic retains the former trope, but it becomes downplayed as Gumball starts actively training himself to fight off against a group of EldritchAbomination[=s=] that are five times his size. Later chapters even mention that he has begun developing some muscle and his reflexes become fast enough that he's able to block off [[BarbaricBully Jamie]]'s rapid punches.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Gumball (as always), Teri, Carrie, and Rob.
* DeathGlare: Teri gives one to Gumball after he carries her through the hallway by her waist.
* DeathGlare: Teri gives one to Gumball after he carries her through the hallway by her waist.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Gumball (as always), retains his role as such from the series, but Teri, Carrie, and Rob.
Rob are also shown to be masters of sarcasm themselves.
* DeathGlare: Teri gives one to Gumball after he carries her through the hallway by herwaist.[[AccidentalPervert waist]].
* DeathGlare: Teri gives one to Gumball after he carries her through the hallway by her
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-->'''Gumball:''' "Maybe he fought someone here long ago and is now seeking to destroy his former rival? Maybe he went on vacation here once and didn't like the food? Maybe he wanted the collector's edition mini-figure of Captain Punch that came with the kid's meal at Joyful Burger, but was too late because they were out of stock? Maybe he and his wife had a bad time here and got a divorce and-!"
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* GeometricMagic: Teri gets 5 Magic Runes thanks to Rob:
** MakingASplash
** TakenforGranite
** HavingaBlast
** BarrierWarrior
** ???
** MakingASplash
** TakenforGranite
** HavingaBlast
** BarrierWarrior
** ???
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%% * GeometricMagic: Teri gets 5 Magic Runes thanks to Rob:
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%% ** MakingASplash
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%% ** ???
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* GreenEyedMonster: Teri gets jealous of Sherry even though Gumball just mentioned her, so she decides to dress differently to get Gumball's attention because she thinks Sherry would take him away from her.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Teri gets jealous of Sherry Sherry, a new student at Elmore Junior High, even though Gumball just mentioned her, so she decides to dress differently to get Gumball's attention because she thinks Sherry would take him away from her.
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* HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Subverted with Uriel as this doesn't kill him.
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%% * HalfTheManHeUsedToBe: Subverted with Uriel as this doesn't kill him.
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* {{Hypochondria}}: Teri, as always.
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* {{Hypochondria}}: Teri, as always.just like in the series proper.
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* LoveEpiphany: Gumball realizes that's he's in love with Teri during the fight with Tartarforas when she transforms into her.
** Also Teri figures out that she's fallen in love with Gumball. After her mother spells this out to her.
** Also Teri figures out that she's fallen in love with Gumball. After her mother spells this out to her.
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* LoveEpiphany: Gumball realizes that's he's in love with Teri during the fight with Tartarforas when she transforms into her.
** Alsoher. Teri also figures out that she's fallen in love with Gumball. After Gumball after her mother spells this out to her.her in the following chapter.
** Also
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-->'''Nicole:''' "Well I'm glad both of you are getting along well. I'm also pleased to hear that your grades have been improving as of lately and that you're taking your studying habits seriously. I think Teri has been a good influence on you, both academically and emotionally."
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** Gumball admits late in the story that one of the reasons why the breakup with Penny took such a toll on him was because it made him realize how much of a screwup he can be. Gumball felt personally responsible for Penny leaving because he knew that her parents (primarily her OverprotectiveDad) didn't like him because of his mischievous behavior. Not only would such behavior get Gumball in trouble, but sometimes Penny as well, and felt that one of the reasons they moved was to keep her away from him.
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** Gumball admits late in the story that one of the reasons why the breakup with Penny took such a toll on him was because it made him realize how much of a screwup he can be. Gumball felt personally responsible for Penny leaving because he knew that her parents (primarily her OverprotectiveDad) dad) didn't like him because of his mischievous behavior. Not only would such behavior get Gumball in trouble, but sometimes Penny as well, and felt that one of the reasons they moved was to keep her away from him.
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* DeadFic: The story has been dormant since July 2021.
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* AdaptationalNationality: In the series proper, Teri is ([[WeAllLiveInAmerica presumably]]) a regular American. However, the fanfic shows that she has Japanese heritage.
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* AdaptationalNationality: In the series proper, Teri is ([[WeAllLiveInAmerica presumably]]) (presumably) a regular American. However, the fanfic shows that she has Japanese heritage.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Teri can manipulate paper and can make it come to life, such as making an origami hawk, an f-16, a scorpion, etc.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Teri can manipulate paper and can make it come to life, such as making an origami hawk, an f-16, a scorpion, etc. Traits she never exhibited in the show.
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%%* AngelicAbomination: The Nephilims.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: Raphael, Thundero, and Toxic Pill.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: Three of the Nephilims, Raphael, Thundero, and Toxic Pill.Pill, are all described as having bug-like appearances. Toxic Pill, in particular, resembles a pill bug (hence the name).
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Downplayed; the story captures the lighthearted spirit of its source material, but given what the concept is about, there's a lot of action and overall more violence in the story compared to the show. Additionally, the story deals with themes of heartbreak, romance, and inevitable destruction that are taken more seriously than in the show (comparatively at least). Lastly, there's some profanity here and there, but it's mostly present in later chapters.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Downplayed; the The story captures the lighthearted spirit of its source material, but given what the concept is about, there's a lot of action and overall more violence in the story compared to the show. Additionally, the story deals with themes of heartbreak, romance, and inevitable destruction that are taken more seriously than in the show (comparatively at least). Lastly, there's some quite a bit of profanity here and there, but though it's mostly present in later chapters.
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* DeadFic: The story has been dormant since July 2021.
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* AdultFear:
** Your kid comes back home with her leg missing. Luckily, since she's made of paper, she can just put it back on her body.
** Two complete strangers come to your house and tell you that one of them is your child. But after you kick both of them out, you start to question if something is missing after you look through your family photos.
** Your kid comes back home with her leg missing. Luckily, since she's made of paper, she can just put it back on her body.
** Two complete strangers come to your house and tell you that one of them is your child. But after you kick both of them out, you start to question if something is missing after you look through your family photos.
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* AngelicAbomination: The Nephilims.
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* {{Nephilim}}: The monsters that are trying to destroy Elmore.
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* CollateralDamage: Throughout the story, the Nephilims cause quite a lot of damage to various parts of Elmore. Rather than everything going back to normal the next day, the damage remains, eventually causing widespread concerns. Additionally, there have also been casualties thanks to such damage, such as the death of a close friend of Richard and Louie (though they thought he had died of heart failure).
* TheLostLenore: While Gumball is showing signs of recovery, mostly thanks to Teri, it's still evident in later chapters that he hasn't completely moved on from Penny since she was the love of his life.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Chapter 9 has Gumball go off on his own to fight Tartarforas. When Rob and Teri find out about this, they're beyond furious for several reasons. One, Gumball fighting the Nephilim ''all by himself'' nearly gets himself killed in the process. Second, Gumball's recklessness ends up attracting Carrie's attention who just so happen to have been nearby, causing her to find out about the Nephilims. Third, Carrie had to endanger Tina's father by possessing him in order to help fight off Tartarforas, which a later chapter reveals that he's still recovering from the injuries sustained. Lastly, Teri in particular feels betrayed because Gumball made a vow to her that they would always fight the Nephilims together, which ends up causing her insecurities about feeling useless to come back.
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* RealityEnsues:
** Gumball and Teri don't just immediately fall in love, as it takes time to develop a romantic relationship. It's only after they start hanging out and getting to know each other that they ''barely'' start to develop feelings for each other.
** While Gumball is showing signs of recovery, mostly thanks to Teri, it's still evident in later chapters that he hasn't completely moved on from Penny since she was the love of his life.
** Throughout the story, the Nephilims cause quite a lot of damage to various parts of Elmore. Rather than everything going back to normal the next day, the damage remains, eventually causing widespread concerns. Additionally, there have also been casualties thanks to such damage, such as the death of a close friend of Richard and Louie (though they thought he had died of heart failure).
** Gumball and Teri don't leave any of the fights with the Nephilims unscathed. Gumball is covered in bandages after each fight, and Teri loses a leg at one point (though thankfully, she can reattach it because she's made of paper). Their parents also begin to grow suspicious of why they're always coming home injured and staying out so late.
** It's mentioned that Rob had to resort to crime and selling many of his inventions in order to pay for his new apartment and to put Rachel back in school. Smart as Rob is, he's ineligible to find a job due to his young age.
** Chapter 9 has Gumball go off on his own to fight Tartarforas. When Rob and Teri find out about this, they're beyond furious for several reasons. One, Gumball fighting the Nephilim ''all by himself'' nearly gets himself killed in the process. Second, Gumball's recklessness ends up attracting Carrie's attention who just so happen to have been nearby, causing her to find out about the Nephilims. Third, Carrie had to endanger Tina's father by possessing him in order to help fight off Tartarforas, which a later chapter reveals that he's still recovering from the injuries sustained. Lastly, Teri in particular feels betrayed because Gumball made a vow to her that they would always fight the Nephilims together, which ends up causing her insecurities about feeling useless to come back.
*** Related to the above events, Teri makes it clear that a simple apology isn't going to make her instantly forgive Gumball, and that it'll take some time for her to get over what he did. [[spoiler: Fortunately, she's touched enough by Gumball's effort to speed up the process]].
** Brahka is KilledMidSentence by Hector while getting distracted during a monologue, proving that [[TalkingIsAFreeAction talking is NOT a free action]].
** Gumball and Teri don't just immediately fall in love, as it takes time to develop a romantic relationship. It's only after they start hanging out and getting to know each other that they ''barely'' start to develop feelings for each other.
** While Gumball is showing signs of recovery, mostly thanks to Teri, it's still evident in later chapters that he hasn't completely moved on from Penny since she was the love of his life.
** Throughout the story, the Nephilims cause quite a lot of damage to various parts of Elmore. Rather than everything going back to normal the next day, the damage remains, eventually causing widespread concerns. Additionally, there have also been casualties thanks to such damage, such as the death of a close friend of Richard and Louie (though they thought he had died of heart failure).
** Gumball and Teri don't leave any of the fights with the Nephilims unscathed. Gumball is covered in bandages after each fight, and Teri loses a leg at one point (though thankfully, she can reattach it because she's made of paper). Their parents also begin to grow suspicious of why they're always coming home injured and staying out so late.
** It's mentioned that Rob had to resort to crime and selling many of his inventions in order to pay for his new apartment and to put Rachel back in school. Smart as Rob is, he's ineligible to find a job due to his young age.
** Chapter 9 has Gumball go off on his own to fight Tartarforas. When Rob and Teri find out about this, they're beyond furious for several reasons. One, Gumball fighting the Nephilim ''all by himself'' nearly gets himself killed in the process. Second, Gumball's recklessness ends up attracting Carrie's attention who just so happen to have been nearby, causing her to find out about the Nephilims. Third, Carrie had to endanger Tina's father by possessing him in order to help fight off Tartarforas, which a later chapter reveals that he's still recovering from the injuries sustained. Lastly, Teri in particular feels betrayed because Gumball made a vow to her that they would always fight the Nephilims together, which ends up causing her insecurities about feeling useless to come back.
*** Related to the above events, Teri makes it clear that a simple apology isn't going to make her instantly forgive Gumball, and that it'll take some time for her to get over what he did. [[spoiler: Fortunately, she's touched enough by Gumball's effort to speed up the process]].
** Brahka is KilledMidSentence by Hector while getting distracted during a monologue, proving that [[TalkingIsAFreeAction talking is NOT a free action]].
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* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Averted. Brahka is KilledMidSentence by Hector while getting distracted during a monologue, proving that talking is NOT a free action.
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* FamousLastWords:
** "Hard to believe a mere mortal brought a Nephilim to one knee. You shall never live to see the morning-"[[spoiler: Silver Twelve]]
** " Not too worry! Little do they know once I catch their scent, there will be nowhere they can hide! We will find them and destroy them!" [[spoiler:Raphael]]
** "YOU COWARDLY, VILE, LITTLE… LITTLE… RAUUUGHH! DIE" [[spoiler:Torax]]
** "So in turn, I, Brahka, will bring a swift end to the likes of both of you vermin as a well-suited reward for-!"[[spoiler:Brahka]]
** "Torax, Olaf, Raphael, Thundero, Brahka, and Leliel, I'm so sorry. I should have waited…" [[spoiler:Uriel]]
** "Hard to believe a mere mortal brought a Nephilim to one knee. You shall never live to see the morning-"[[spoiler: Silver Twelve]]
** " Not too worry! Little do they know once I catch their scent, there will be nowhere they can hide! We will find them and destroy them!" [[spoiler:Raphael]]
** "YOU COWARDLY, VILE, LITTLE… LITTLE… RAUUUGHH! DIE" [[spoiler:Torax]]
** "So in turn, I, Brahka, will bring a swift end to the likes of both of you vermin as a well-suited reward for-!"[[spoiler:Brahka]]
** "Torax, Olaf, Raphael, Thundero, Brahka, and Leliel, I'm so sorry. I should have waited…" [[spoiler:Uriel]]
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%%* WithAFriendAndAStranger: Gumball, Rob, and Teri.
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* WithAFriendAndAStranger: Gumball and Teri (friends and later a couple) team up with Rob (stranger) to battle the Nephilims. The stranger part is downplayed, however, since Gumball and Teri actually know Rob.
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* PowerTrio: Gumball, Rob, and Teri.
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* Love Epiphany: Gumball realizes that's he's in love with Teri during the fight with Tartarforas when she transforms into her.
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* Love Epiphany: Gumball realizes that's he's in love with Teri during the fight with Tartarforas when she transforms into her.
** Also Teri figures out that she's fallen in love with Gumball. After her mother spells this out to her.
** Also Teri figures out that she's fallen in love with Gumball. After her mother spells this out to her.
