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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Apparently that's a ''thing'' with princesses. Rebecca gained the ability after marrying Leonard.
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* SadisticChoice: Corona's law would make the King hang a criminal disturbing the peace. It unfortunately involves the people who finally brought the Lost Princess back to her parents.
* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Apparently that's a ''thing'' with princesses. Rebecca gained the ability after marrying Leonard.
* StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler: Of Maleficent.]]
* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Apparently that's a ''thing'' with princesses. Rebecca gained the ability after marrying Leonard.
* StartOfDarkness: [[spoiler: Of Maleficent.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7485250/1/Rapunzel-Goes-Home-extended-edition Rapunzel Goes Home extended edition]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}}'' ''Franchise/{{Tangled}}'' fanfiction by bStomhands. It details the events leading from Rapunzel and Flynn escaping the tower and the fall out and emotional turmoil of rebuilding the royal family.
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Now with a sequel called ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7926378/1/Roused Roused]]'' which has Rapunzel coming to counsel Princess Aurora and ties up some loose ends from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.
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Now with a sequel called ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7926378/1/Roused Roused]]'' which has Rapunzel coming to counsel Princess Aurora and ties up some loose ends from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.''WesternAnimation/SleepingBeauty''.
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* OverlyLongName: Rapunzel actually was born Solara Rebecca Agatha Menolly Von Sonnenshein, and tacks "Rapunzel" as a first name after being formally crowned as the princess of Corona.
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: Apparently that's a ''thing'' with princesses. Rebecca gained the ability after marrying Leonard.
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* NoPeriodsPeriod: Averted -- Gothel grouses this is an aspect of youth she didn't miss ''at all'', and Rapunzel actually suffered a FirstPeriodPanic as she thought she was hurting and couldn't heal herself.
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** Following his heroic run to bring Flynn to the tower, Maximus is in a rather pitiful state and needs rest and care.
** A blonde girl with 70 feet long hair acting as the LifeOfTheParty actually ''will'' be noticed. Still, the Guard let her be as she didn't look like a subversive element.
** Rapunzel is ''not'' the firt girl to claim she's the Lost Princess. The King and Queen actually created a protocol to test each and every candidate, but the constant failures took a heavy toll upon their mental.
** After being raised in total isolation, Rapunzel isn't very good with crowds. Oh, she won't be scared, but she will quickly tire after prolonged interactions.
** A lifetime of verbal and emotional abuse means Rapunzel is unable to let Eugene tell he loves her or her birth parents pay her a compliment, since Gothel used that to demean or control her.
* RealityEnsues:
** Following his heroic run to bring Flynn to the tower, Maximus is in a rather pitiful state and needs rest and care.
** A blonde girl with 70 feet long hair acting as the LifeOfTheParty actually ''will'' be noticed. Still, the Guard let her be as she didn't look like a subversive element.
** Rapunzel is ''not'' the firt girl to claim she's the Lost Princess. The King and Queen actually created a protocol to test each and every candidate, but the constant failures took a heavy toll upon their mental.
** After being raised in total isolation, Rapunzel isn't very good with crowds. Oh, she won't be scared, but she will quickly tire after prolonged interactions.
** A lifetime of verbal and emotional abuse means Rapunzel is unable to let Eugene tell he loves her or her birth parents pay her a compliment, since Gothel used that to demean or control her.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: The King is incredulous to hear Eugene doesn't think he's worthy of Rapunzel after spending several days constantly protecting her and ultimately giving his life for her freedom.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7485250/1/Rapunzel-Goes-Home-extended-edition Rapunzel Goes Home extended edition]]'' is a ''Disney/{{Tangled}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}}'' fanfiction by bStomhands. It details the events leading from Rapunzel and Flynn escaping the tower and the fall out and emotional turmoil of rebuilding the royal family.
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* ARareSentence: Hook-hand actually realizes how ''insane'' his defense of "a horse told me to do so" sounds like when the King asks why he helped a prisoner on death row to escape his execution.
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* CrazyPrepared: The Guard intended for the infant princess spent eighteen years to speculate on her return's circumstances. So when Rapunzel is brought by her criminal sweetheart, the Captain only needs to find the adequate file.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Exploited by Rapunzel to prevent the Guard from arresting Eugene on sight, as she immediately declares herself the Lost Princess. As he's her companion, Eugene is safe until she's brought to the Castle and tested.
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* SadisticChoice: Corona's law would make the King hang a criminal disturbing the peace. It unfortunately involves the people who finally brought the Lost Princess back to her parents.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In chapter 45 Queen Rebecca suspects that Rapunzel and Eugene had sex that night at the campfire because she believes that because of the way Rapunzel's eating, the only logical explanation is pregnancy (Spoiler: Rapunzel is definitely not pregnant). She also mentions that because she has birthed fourteen children (Rapunzel being the only one that survived past infancy) she knows just about everything about pregnancy and childbirth, so you'd think that she'd know that no-one shows signs of pregnancy until 4 weeks in. According to Eugene, he has only known Rapunzel for ''four days!''
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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: In chapter 45 45. Queen Rebecca suspects that Rapunzel and Eugene had sex that night at the campfire because she believes that because of the way Rapunzel's eating, the only logical explanation is pregnancy (Spoiler: pregnancy, despite both a doctor and the orphanage headmistress both informing her that Rapunzel is definitely not pregnant).still a virgin. She also mentions that because she has birthed fourteen children (Rapunzel being the only one that survived past infancy) she knows just about everything about pregnancy and childbirth, so you'd think that she'd know that no-one shows signs of pregnancy until 4 weeks in. According to Eugene, Eugene in this chapter, he has only known Rapunzel for ''four days!''days!'' On a small side note, Rapunzel is not pregnant.
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* ArtisticLicenseBiologyArtisticLicenseBiology: In chapter 45 Queen Rebecca suspects that Rapunzel and Eugene had sex that night at the campfire because she believes that because of the way Rapunzel's eating, the only logical explanation is pregnancy (Spoiler: Rapunzel is definitely not pregnant). She also mentions that because she has birthed fourteen children (Rapunzel being the only one that survived past infancy) she knows just about everything about pregnancy and childbirth, so you'd think that she'd know that no-one shows signs of pregnancy until 4 weeks in. According to Eugene, he has only known Rapunzel for ''four days!''
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* NinjaMaid: The royal family has a whole group of these, known as the Lock Maids. Margaret, Rapunzel's primary maid, is particularly good with throwing knives.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7485250/1/Rapunzel-Goes-Home-extended-edition Rapunzel Goes Home extended edition]]'' is a ''{{Tangled}}'' fanfiction by bStomhands. It details the events leading from Rapunzel and Flynn escaping the tower and the fall out and emotional turmoil of rebuilding the royal family.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7485250/1/Rapunzel-Goes-Home-extended-edition Rapunzel Goes Home extended edition]]'' is a ''{{Tangled}}'' ''Disney/{{Tangled}}'' fanfiction by bStomhands. It details the events leading from Rapunzel and Flynn escaping the tower and the fall out and emotional turmoil of rebuilding the royal family.
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Now with a sequel called ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7926378/1/Roused Roused]]'' which has Rapunzel coming to council counsel Princess Aurora and ties up some loose ends from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.
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Now with a sequel called ''Roused'' ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7926378/1/Roused Roused]]'' which has Rapunzel coming to council Princess Aurora and ties up some loose ends from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Let's just say Gothel's lucky she aged to death before the King and Queen got to her.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: The King and Queen are fair and kind rulers, but they become very, ''very'' scary when Rapunzel is threatened.
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* Backstory: Plenty of secondary and primary characters get quite a lot.
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*DarkerandEdgier: DarkerAndEdgier: For being based on Disney princesses, this goes to some ''really'' dark places.
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* WhatTheHellHero: The King has this reaction to [[spoiler: the Three Good Fairies from Disney/{{SleepingBeauty}} ''Disney/SleepingBeauty'' after she's traumatized by their deception of being her aunts]].aunts]].
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* HurtComfortFic: Both {{Rapunzel Goes Home extended edition}} and {{Roused}}
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* StartofDarkness: [[spoiler: Of Maleficent.]]
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* MamaBear: Rapunzel's mother, Queen Rebecca.Rebecca.
* WhatTheHellHero: The King has this reaction to [[spoiler: the Three Good Fairies from Disney/{{SleepingBeauty}} after she's traumatized by their deception of being her aunts]].
* WhatTheHellHero: The King has this reaction to [[spoiler: the Three Good Fairies from Disney/{{SleepingBeauty}} after she's traumatized by their deception of being her aunts]].
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* GrandTheftMe: In ''Roused'', [[spoiler: Maleficent tries to do this with Princess Aurora.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: The characters have nightmares of different horrible ways ''Tangled'' could have ended because of minor changes. Rapunzel lost the flag and never got her memories back; the mirror never broke and Flynn couldn't cut her hair; Rapunzel's hair is never ''ever'' cut and creates a world where nobody can ever die.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7485250/1/Rapunzel-Goes-Home-extended-edition Rapunzel Goes Home extended edition]]'' is a ''Tangled'' ''{{Tangled}}'' fanfiction by bStomhands. It details the events leading from Rapunzel and Flynn escaping the tower and the fall out and emotional turmoil of rebuilding the royal family.
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* MamaBear: Rapunzel's mother, Queen Rebecca.
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!!''Roused'' provides examples of:
* EldritchAbomination: The Goon Queen, a giant monster living under the Forbidden Mountain that gives birth to Maleficent's goons.
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*EldritchAbomination: The Goon Queen, a giant monster living under the Forbidden Mountain that gives birth to Maleficent's goons.
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*EldritchAbomination: The Goon Queen, a giant monster living under the Forbidden Mountain that gives birth to Maleficent's goons.
