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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]], and there is a completed spork here[[https://www.deviantart.com/procrastinatingstill/gallery/47902797/Moon-Daughter-Commentary]]. There is also a complete DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].

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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and A completed [[MST spork]] can be found here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]], and net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]]; there is a completed spork here[[https://www.deviantart.com/procrastinatingstill/gallery/47902797/Moon-Daughter-Commentary]]. There is also a complete DramaticReading here on YouTube [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].
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* EvilAllAlong: [[spoiler:Luke.]]

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* EvilAllAlong: [[spoiler:Luke.[[spoiler:Luke was manipulating Flavia the entire time. He pretended to be in love with her so when she became the final goddess she would make him immortal, after which he would trap her in "a cave or mummy box" and rule the world himself.]]
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* ButtMonkey: Ivy and Frank. Alabaster also starts out as this, with random gods commenting on what a "miserbael loser" he is and refusing to give him any gifts.
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* EvilAllAlong: [[spoiler:Luke.]]
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Hanna is also the author of the similarly bad Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse fanfic ''Fanfic/EvvaAgentOfShield''.
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Most of the plot concerns Flavia's attempts to kill "Kornos" and complete the twelve labors of Hercules so she can become a goddess.

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Most The first half of the plot concerns Flavia's attempts to kill "Kornos" consists of Flavia fighting [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Kornos]] and dealing with a LoveDodecahedron, and the second half involves her attempt to complete the twelve labors of Hercules so she can become a goddess.
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On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a Godess."]][[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess]]

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On February 7, 2015 Hanna posted a sequel called "Moon Daughter 2: [[StockSubtitle Rise of a Godess."]][[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess]]
net/s/11028315/1/Moon-Daughter-2-Rise-of-a-Godess]] Flavia returns to Camp Half Blood on her honeymoon, where she discovers a plot to [[BackFromTheDead open the Doors of Death]] and DePower the gods. After [[SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome tragedy strikes]], Flavia goes on a quest for the Golden Fleece, which can be used to restore the powers of the gods. However, things get weird when [[OnlySaneMan Frank]] [[CourtroomEpisode sues her]], leading to Flavia suffering a HeroicBSoD and using the Golden Fleece on herself. Unfortunately, this disrupts the Balance of the Universe, [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Matt]], and threatens to bring about [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Ragnarock]].
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* RunningGag: The DramaticReading voice actors turn xxMoonlitexx's repeated use of certain phrases into this.
** "One simple word...DEATH"
** [[AWizardDidIt Because Hecate.]]
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Jason, as a follower of Fluttershy, is required to be "a friend to all things that live." He suffers a HeroicBSOD when he kills the [[FeatheredFiend Steel Porcupine Birds]], but then realizes that [[InsaneTrollLogic when he killed them, they became dead and thus no longer qualify as living beings, "so Fluttershy is no friend of theres."]]
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** "The monsters pored over us like a wave at the beach exept with no surfers."
** "My lips were like a rainbow of only red."

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** --> "My lips were like a rainbow of only red."
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* ILoveTheDead: [[OutOfCharacter Sally Jackson]]. [[spoiler: In the Epilogue, she "gets help" and becomes "totally normal."]]

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* DisSimile: Flavia is fond of these.
** "The monsters pored over us like a wave at the beach exept with no surfers."
** "My lips were like a rainbow of only red."



* IceCreamKoan: "Artmeis" is fond of these.

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* IceCreamKoan: "Artmeis" is fond Most of Artemis's dialogue consists of these.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted when the [[Myth/Classical Mythology mythological Jason]] shows up to challenge Flavia for the Golden Fleece. Flavia promptly renames him Jason 2.

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* OneSteveLimit: Averted when the [[Myth/Classical Mythology [[Myth/ClassicalMythology mythological Jason]] shows up to challenge Flavia for the Golden Fleece. Flavia promptly renames him Jason 2.

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* ApocalypseMaiden: Flavia becomes this when she kills the Egyptian pantheon because, according to the Book of Amen Ra, "Whosumever kills the gods of Egypt an kick there asses in fare battle, thou must know thou has doomed the universe cause the ballance of Matt hathe been messed up...Thus spuck Amen Ra. The end." Unlike most versions of this trope, Flavia is perfectly fine with it, reasoning that if the world ends, she will rise from the ashes as the final, all-powerful goddess.



* ApocalypseMaiden: Flavia becomes this when she kills the Egyptian pantheon because, according to the Book of Amen Ra, "Whosumever kills the gods of Egypt an kick there asses in fare battle, thou must know thou has doomed the universe cause the ballance of Matt hathe been messed up...Thus spuck Amen Ra. The end." Unlike most versions of this trope, Flavia is perfectly fine with it, reasoning that if the world ends, she will rise from the ashes as the final, all-powerful goddess.
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* De-Power: This happens to all the Greek gods and goddesses except Flavia.

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* De-Power: DePower: This happens to all the Greek gods and goddesses except Flavia.

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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and here[[http://scarecrow113.deviantart.com/art/Moon-Daughter-MST-416117475]], and there is a completed spork here[[https://www.deviantart.com/procrastinatingstill/gallery/47902797/Moon-Daughter-Commentary]]. There is also a DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].

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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and here[[http://scarecrow113.deviantart.com/art/Moon-Daughter-MST-416117475]], here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13132496/1/Moon-Daughter-A-Dramatic-Commenting]], and there is a completed spork here[[https://www.deviantart.com/procrastinatingstill/gallery/47902797/Moon-Daughter-Commentary]]. There is also a complete DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].


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* BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy: [[{{My Little Pony Friendship is Magic}} Bronies]] are all secretly members of the "Futtershy Mystry Brother Hood," an ancient religion dedicated to pacifism.


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* MediumAwareness: Characters are sometimes described as "walking onto the screen," and at one point Flavia drives her motorcycle off "into the background."


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* ApocalypseMaiden: Flavia becomes this when she kills the Egyptian pantheon because, according to the Book of Amen Ra, "Whosumever kills the gods of Egypt an kick there asses in fare battle, thou must know thou has doomed the universe cause the ballance of Matt hathe been messed up...Thus spuck Amen Ra. The end." Unlike most versions of this trope, Flavia is perfectly fine with it, reasoning that if the world ends, she will rise from the ashes as the final, all-powerful goddess.


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* De-Power: This happens to all the Greek gods and goddesses except Flavia.


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* NoEndorHolocaust: Flavia uses her "godful glow" to melt all the snow and ice in Antarctica, apparently with no effects to ocean levels.
* OneSteveLimit: Averted when the [[Myth/Classical Mythology mythological Jason]] shows up to challenge Flavia for the Golden Fleece. Flavia promptly renames him Jason 2.


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* PrincessClassic: [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Madea]], Princess of the Golden Fleece Island, is describes as a "plastick bitch" with blond hair, blue eyes, and a "pfufly" pink dress.


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* SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome: Albaster gets this treatment.
* UnusualEuphemism: Osiris's...mummy stick.
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and here[[http://scarecrow113.deviantart.com/art/Moon-Daughter-MST-416117475]], and has a DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].

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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and here[[http://scarecrow113.deviantart.com/art/Moon-Daughter-MST-416117475]], and has there is a completed spork here[[https://www.deviantart.com/procrastinatingstill/gallery/47902797/Moon-Daughter-Commentary]]. There is also a DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL6_0J-vWBjoFaAReqo2a4aDhIZxwScu8X]].
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* ShoutOut: "Cruxus," the "word of pain spell," sounds [[HarryPotter familiar.]]

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* ShoutOut: "Cruxus," the "word of pain spell," sounds [[HarryPotter [[Franchise/HarryPotter familiar.]]
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->Artmeis eyes flashed. [[PrecisionFStrike “FUCK THOU!”]] She yelled.

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->Artmeis eyes flashed. [[PrecisionFStrike “FUCK “FUCK]] [[YeOldeButcheredEnglish THOU!”]] She yelled.
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Accidentally Accurate has been renamed per TRS thread. Genius Bonus is YMMV.


* ShoutOut: In Chapter 42, Creator/{{Socrates}} is in charge of making sure Flavia's prisoners don't escape from [[PlatonicCave the dark cave she locked them in.]] [[GeniusBonus This]] [[AccidentallyAccurate may not be intentional.]]

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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 42, Creator/{{Socrates}} is in charge of making sure Flavia's prisoners don't escape from [[PlatonicCave the dark cave she locked them in.]] [[GeniusBonus This]] [[AccidentallyAccurate This [[AccidentallyCorrectWriting may not be intentional.]]
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Blond Guys Are Evil and Blondes Are Evil are no longer tropes.


* BlondesAreEvil: Blondes are AlwaysChaoticEvil. Ironically, the author didn't seem to know that Flavia means "blonde."
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* OutOfCharacter: Everyone. Annabeth is a bullying "prep" who listens to [[{{OneDirection}} 1D]], Percy smokes pot and cheats on Annabeth, Chiron is an Emo Teen, Mr. D is a pedophile, Kronos shops Hot Topic, and Jason is a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic brony.]]

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* OutOfCharacter: Everyone. Annabeth is a bullying "prep" who listens to [[{{OneDirection}} [[Music/OneDirection 1D]], Percy smokes pot and cheats on Annabeth, Chiron is an Emo Teen, Mr. D is a pedophile, Kronos shops Hot Topic, and Jason is a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic brony.]]
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and here[[http://scarecrow113.deviantart.com/art/Moon-Daughter-MST-416117475]], and has a DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sd86I-lGN68]].

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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and here[[http://scarecrow113.deviantart.com/art/Moon-Daughter-MST-416117475]], and has a DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sd86I-lGN68]].
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->Artmeis eyes flashed. [[PrecisionFStrike “FUCK THOU!”]] She yelled.

-->-- [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9552184/22/Moon-Daughter Moon Daughter Chapter 22]]

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->[[YeOldeButcheredeEnglishe “Silence thou fools”]] She said to the hunteresses, “I have a prophacy for Flavia’s ears!” I listened close and she said “Kornos found half the word of death! [[McGuffin But there is a bigger word thou must find it first]] before Kronos cause then thou can crush his word with the new and ‘mystic” word of Deep death.”

->“How can I find it?” I said crying silver tears of beaty and joyful from seeing Artemis finally but also cause Kronos knew the word of death and the quest was going to be harder now.

->“Its written in the roman camp” She explaned wisely. [[VirginPower “but thou can only use the deep death word if you are a virgen with no bf an no makin out”]]

->[[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove “Noooo but I love her!” said Percy all sexly.]]

->Artmeis eyes flashed. [[PrecisionFStrike “FUCK THOU!”]] She yelled.

-->-- [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9552184/22/Moon-Daughter Moon Daughter Chapter 22]]
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* HumanSacrifice: Attempted ([[spoiler: and eventually realised]]) several times, by the ''[[WhatTheHellHero protagonists]]'', in spite of the fact that [[ClassicalMythology hellenic religion]] strictly forbade human sacrifice (just take a look at what Zeus did to the people who tried it, like Lycaon).

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* HumanSacrifice: Attempted ([[spoiler: and eventually realised]]) several times, by the ''[[WhatTheHellHero protagonists]]'', in spite of the fact that [[ClassicalMythology [[Myth/ClassicalMythology hellenic religion]] strictly forbade human sacrifice (just take a look at what Zeus did to the people who tried it, like Lycaon).
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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10539498/1/Tossing-the-Moons-Daughter-into-the-Sun]] and here[[http://scarecrow113.deviantart.com/art/Moon-Daughter-MST-416117475]], and has a DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sd86I-lGN68]].

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It has been described by several reviewers as the ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' of the Percy Jackson fandom, and shares some similarities, including a hatred of "preps" and a tendency to over-describe clothing. It is currently being [[{{MST}} sporked]] here[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10539498/1/Tossing-the-Moons-Daughter-into-the-Sun]] here[[http://www.wattpad.com/71021482-i-read-a-terrible-fanfic-ch-1]] and here[[http://scarecrow113.deviantart.com/art/Moon-Daughter-MST-416117475]], and has a DramaticReading here [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sd86I-lGN68]].
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* Polyamory: Flavia and Alabaster have an open marriage.

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* Polyamory: {{Polyamory}}: Flavia and Alabaster have an open marriage.



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* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Flavia apparently has a gestation period of one day.
* BackFromTheDead: Octavius, Piper, and presumably all the other dead characters except Kronos, due to the opening of the Doors of Death.
* CreatorInJoke: "Note, the Squirrel will understand this joke if she reads it"
* GRatedSex: The author attempts this.
-->"We...did it! Also our hearts were [[PerfectlyCromulentWord tined]] with love but Im keepin this teen rated like "Pg 13" so thats all you will ever know about it"
* LivingLieDetector: Flavia gains this power when she becomes a goddess.
* MediumAwareness: "Its in LA, didnt u even read the books" Although this might be because [[AuthorAvatar Hanna identifies with Flavia to the point of forgetting if she is speaking as the author or character.]]
* Polyamory: Flavia and Alabaster have an open marriage.
* ShoutOut: "Cruxus," the "word of pain spell," sounds [[HarryPotter familiar.]]
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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 42, [[PlatonicCave Socrates is in charge of making sure Flavia's prisoners don't escape from the dark cave she locked them in.]] [[GeniusBonus This]] [[AccidentallyAccurate may not be intentional.]]

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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 42, [[PlatonicCave Socrates Creator/{{Socrates}} is in charge of making sure Flavia's prisoners don't escape from [[PlatonicCave the dark cave she locked them in.]] [[GeniusBonus This]] [[AccidentallyAccurate may not be intentional.]]

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