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[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-gaiden-story-zero-hour.17011/ Halkegenia Online: Zero Hour]] is a fanfiction of ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' fanfic ''Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline'' that kept getting expanded until the point where it was spun off into its own thread.
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* CatchPhrase: "This gun and I are one and the same, our name, <[Death Gun!>]"
* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Sugou Nobuyuki, and HOW.
* {{Cyborg}}: Nanami
* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Sugou Nobuyuki, and HOW.
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* TheDreaded: Sinon and the Iron Valkyrie.
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[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-gaiden-story-zero-hour.17011/ Halkegenia Online: Zero Hour]] is a fanfiction of ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' fanfic ''Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline'' that kept getting expanded until the point where it was spun off into its own thread.
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[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-gaiden-story-zero-hour.17011/ Halkegenia Online: Zero Hour]] is a fanfiction of ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' fanfic ''Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline'' that kept getting expanded until the point where it was spun off into its own thread.
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* AlternateUniverse: Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline is already an alternate universe to both Literature/SwordArtOnline and LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero. We're first led to believe that Zero Hour takes place in the same universe as canon Halkegenia Online, but [[spoiler:the later arcs reveal that it is not the case, as Zero Hour itself take place in an alternate timeline. For example, Shino herself is a human/fae hybrid, and so is her mother. Furthermore, it's later revealed that there have been Fae on Earth even before the Transition happened.]]
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* AlternateUniverse: Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline is already an alternate universe to both Literature/SwordArtOnline and LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero.Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero. We're first led to believe that Zero Hour takes place in the same universe as canon Halkegenia Online, but [[spoiler:the later arcs reveal that it is not the case, as Zero Hour itself take place in an alternate timeline. For example, Shino herself is a human/fae hybrid, and so is her mother. Furthermore, it's later revealed that there have been Fae on Earth even before the Transition happened.]]
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[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-gaiden-story-zero-hour.17011/ Halkegenia Online: Zero Hour]] is a fanfiction of ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' fanfic ''Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline'' that kept getting expanded until the point where it was spun off into its own thread.
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[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-gaiden-story-zero-hour.17011/ Halkegenia Online: Zero Hour]] is a fanfiction of ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' fanfic ''Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline'' that kept getting expanded until the point where it was spun off into its own thread.
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* AlternateUniverse: Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline is already an alternate universe to both LightNovel/SwordArtOnline and LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero. We're first led to believe that Zero Hour takes place in the same universe as canon Halkegenia Online, but [[spoiler:the later arcs reveal that it is not the case, as Zero Hour itself take place in an alternate timeline. For example, Shino herself is a human/fae hybrid, and so is her mother. Furthermore, it's later revealed that there have been Fae on Earth even before the Transition happened.]]
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* AlternateUniverse: Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline is already an alternate universe to both LightNovel/SwordArtOnline Literature/SwordArtOnline and LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero. We're first led to believe that Zero Hour takes place in the same universe as canon Halkegenia Online, but [[spoiler:the later arcs reveal that it is not the case, as Zero Hour itself take place in an alternate timeline. For example, Shino herself is a human/fae hybrid, and so is her mother. Furthermore, it's later revealed that there have been Fae on Earth even before the Transition happened.]]
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[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-gaiden-story-zero-hour.17011/ Halkegenia Online: Zero Hour]] is a fanfiction of ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''Anime/SwordArtOnline'' ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' fanfic ''Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline'' that kept getting expanded until the point where it was spun off into its own thread.
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* CaramelldansenVid: In-universe, someone made one out of footage of Sinon massacring a dozen Yakuza thugs in a church. Sinon herself considered it bizarre and disturbing.
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* AlternateUniverse: Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline is already an alternate universe to both LightNovel/SwordArtOnline and Light/TheFamiliarOfZero.LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero. We're first led to believe that Zero Hour takes place in the same universe as canon Halkegenia Online, but [[spoiler:the later arcs reveal that it is not the case, as Zero Hour itself take place in an alternate timeline. For example, Shino herself is a human/fae hybrid, and so is her mother. Furthermore, it's later revealed that there have been Fae on Earth even before the Transition happened.]]
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* WrongGenreSavvy: A RunningGag in the early chapters is villains thinking that they're the protagonists in a mafia movie, or a war movie. They're actually the victims in a monster movie, and Sinon is the monster.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: A RunningGag in the early chapters is villains thinking that they're the protagonists MainCharacters in a mafia movie, or a war movie. They're actually the victims in a monster movie, and Sinon is the monster.
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[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-gaiden-story-zero-hour.17011/ Halkegenia Online: Zero Hour]] is a fanfiction of the ''Anime/ZeroNoTsukaima''/''Anime/SwordArtOnline'' fanfic ''Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline'' that kept getting expanded until the point where it was spun off into its own thread.
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[[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/halkegenia-online-gaiden-story-zero-hour.17011/ Halkegenia Online: Zero Hour]] is a fanfiction of the ''Anime/ZeroNoTsukaima''/''Anime/SwordArtOnline'' ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero''/''Anime/SwordArtOnline'' fanfic ''Fanfic/HalkegeniaOnline'' that kept getting expanded until the point where it was spun off into its own thread.
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** Sinon is a contraction of 'Sin On'.
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** In the original story, Sinon is was a contraction of 'Sin On'.On'. In the rewrite, it was derived from a passage from a complex (and incorrect) mathematical formula, the sine of theta times n factorial, or Sin(Θn!).
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* OverrankedSoldier: Nanami makes (brevet) Major at fifteen.
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* CaramelldansenVid: In-universe, someone made one out of footage of Sinon massacring a dozen Yakuza thugs in a church. Sinon herself considered it bizarre and disturbing.
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* BoxedCrook: After the government figures out the identity of Sinon, they offer her a deal: if she signs up with the JSDF and agrees to only kill when given permission through proper channels, the government will backdate her enlistment to just prior to Zero Hour and claim that everyone she'd killed so far was the result of an authorized operation.
* BulletholeDoor: Nanami shoots a hole in the floor to get the drop on terrorists on the level below. Made more plausible than usual by the fact that she was using a minigun.
* BulletholeDoor: Nanami shoots a hole in the floor to get the drop on terrorists on the level below. Made more plausible than usual by the fact that she was using a minigun.
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* MajorlyAwesome: Nanami gets nicknamed "The Major" by the [=SAOvivers=] in reference to [[Manga/GhostInTheShell another famous lady cyborg]]. After Death Gun gets folded into the JSDF, it ends up becoming her official (Brevet) rank.
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The story is now in rewrite, but the original version is now being posted on fanfiction.net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12362398/1/Halkegenia-Online-Gaiden-Story-Zero-Hour-Original-Edition here]].
