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* HonorBeforeReason: Roarke, and her people, treat imprisonment and being saved by someone else as worse than death. It's so bad that she tries to start a fight while Rainbow is trying to get her out of a burning inferno.
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much the majority of Rainbow Dash and Roarke's fight. Everytime one thinks they have beaten the other, they just get back up again. Rainbow Dash ultimately wins
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much the majority of Rainbow Dash and Roarke's fight. Everytime one thinks they have beaten the other, they just get back up again. Rainbow Dash ultimately wins
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* HonorBeforeReason: Roarke, and her people, fellow Searonese, treat imprisonment and being saved by someone else as worse than death. It's so bad that she tries to start a fight while Rainbow is trying to get her out of a burning inferno.
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much the majority of Rainbow Dash and Roarke's fight. Everytime one thinks they have beaten the other, they just get back up again. Rainbow Dash ultimatelywinswins by smashing her armor with Crimson's hammer.
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much the majority of Rainbow Dash and Roarke's fight. Everytime one thinks they have beaten the other, they just get back up again. Rainbow Dash ultimately
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* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: Rainbow Dash ''can'' [[spoiler:remove her pendant and enjoy the benefits of being a [[HumanoidAbomination partially transformed chaos beast]], but there's always the chance of it being permanent]]. It's also very painful for her.
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Enraged by her friends' deaths, Rainbow manages to summon her Element's power and [[HoldYourHippogriffs single-hoofedly]] turn Discord back into a statue. She proceeds to break the statue into pieces. ]]
** BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: She really shouldn't have done the last part.
** BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: She really shouldn't have done the last part.
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Enraged by her friends' deaths, Rainbow manages to summon her Element's power and [[HoldYourHippogriffs single-hoofedly]] turn Discord back into a statue. She proceeds to break the statue into pieces. ]]
** BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: She really shouldn't have done the last part.pieces]]
** BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: She really shouldn't have done the last part.
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* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much the majority of Rainbow Dash and Roarke's fight.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Roarke, and her people, treat imprisonment and being saved by someone else as worse than death. It's so bad that she tries to start a fight while Rainbow is trying to get her out of a burning inferno.
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much the majority of Rainbow Dash and Roarke's fight. Everytime one thinks they have beaten the other, they just get back up again. Rainbow Dash ultimately wins
* HowMuchMoreCanHeTake: Pretty much the majority of Rainbow Dash and Roarke's fight. Everytime one thinks they have beaten the other, they just get back up again. Rainbow Dash ultimately wins
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Up To Eleven is being dewicked.
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Enraged by her friends' deaths, Rainbow manages to summon her Element's power and [[HoldYourHippogriffs single-hoofedly]] turn Discord back into a statue. She proceeds to [[UpToEleven break the statue into pieces]]. ]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler: Enraged by her friends' deaths, Rainbow manages to summon her Element's power and [[HoldYourHippogriffs single-hoofedly]] turn Discord back into a statue. She proceeds to [[UpToEleven break the statue into pieces]].pieces. ]]
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** The "hringr" in Urohringr means "circle, ring", while "Uro" means chaotic or unrest in modern scandinavian, meaning Urohringr can be translated as "Discordant Ring".
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** The "hringr" in Urohringr means "circle, ring", while "Uro" means chaotic chaos or unrest in modern scandinavian, meaning Urohringr can be translated as "Discordant Ring".
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* BreakingTheFellowship: [[spoiler: The Noble Jury disbands in Yaerfaerda, and Rainbow Dash goes into the Grand Choke alone.]]
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* BreakingTheFellowship: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The Noble Jury disbands in Yaerfaerda, and Rainbow Dash goes into the Grand Choke alone.]]
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** Midnite Bastion.
* ChildSoldier: The Searonese in general, but Roarke in particular.
* ChildSoldier: The Searonese in general, but Roarke in particular.
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* ChildSoldier: The Searonese in general, but Roarke in particular. Foals are raised from birth to become warriors.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The fic routinely draws attention to Rainbow Dash's ruby eyes. Except, in the show, Rainbow's eyes are magenta, not red. [[spoiler:It's eventually revealed that she is host to Discord's magic, who ''does'' have red eyes]].
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* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: Lady Pestiferous can turn into a mechanical pony-spider hybrid at will.]]
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* OneWingedAngel: OneWingedAngel:
** [[spoiler: Lady Pestiferous can turn into a mechanical pony-spider hybrid at will.]]]]
** [[spoiler:If Rainbow Dash is withouot the element of loyalty for too long, she turns into an AxCrazy dragon-like creature]].
** [[spoiler: Lady Pestiferous can turn into a mechanical pony-spider hybrid at will.
** [[spoiler:If Rainbow Dash is withouot the element of loyalty for too long, she turns into an AxCrazy dragon-like creature]].
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* EyeColourChange: Rainbow Dash's eyes are red rather than magenta in this story. [[spoiler:It's because of the influence of Discord. Anytime she loses the element of loyalty, they turn yellow and red like his eyes were]].
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* AntiMagic: The [[spoiler: sapphiric crystal ponies of Aurum province]] can suppress the magical leylines of living things and technology.
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* AntiMagic: The [[spoiler: sapphiric crystal ponies of Aurum province]] can suppress the magical leylines of living things biological and technology.artificial leylines.
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* AntiMagic: The [[spoiler: sapphiric crystal ponies of Aurum province]] can suppress the magical leylines of living things and technology.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent:NotSoDifferentRemark"
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* WhamEpisode: So, so many, but what takes the cake is [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle's ghost appearing at the end of Yaerfaerda, completely changing the character of the lavender light and the Yaerfaerda symbol.]]
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* WhamEpisode: So, so many, but what takes the cake is [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle's ghost appearing at the end of Yaerfaerda, completely changing the character of the lavender light and the Yaerfaerda symbol.]]]]
* WorldSundering: A bit more dramatic than normal. The Sundering was an event in Equestria's distant past where [[spoiler:the ringworld of Urohringr was shattered into different pieces]].
* WorldSundering: A bit more dramatic than normal. The Sundering was an event in Equestria's distant past where [[spoiler:the ringworld of Urohringr was shattered into different pieces]].
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* ThreesomeSubtext: There is some between Rainbow, Belle and Pilate when they travel together in ''Eljunbyro''. Rainbow Dash treats them affectionately like close friends after just knowing them for a short while, and Pilate and Belle both refer to her as "beloved", a term they otherwise only use for eachother.
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* TemporaryLoveInterest: Gold Petals was this... for maybe thirty chapters in ''Austraeoh'' at most, and has barely been mentioned in the story since.
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* TakeThat: A small one in "Precious Wings" of Eljunbyro. Rainbow says she'll be back before Belle and Pilate can recite the Ledomaritan pledge of allegiance, to which Pilate responds that they don't have one. That's right, the blatantly authocratic nation doesn't have the thing that the US makes their students do every morning.
* TemporaryLoveInterest: Gold Petals was this... for maybe thirty chapters in ''Austraeoh'' at most, and has barely been mentioned in the story since. Overall, Rainbow tends to get a minor love interest in several of the places she visits, but doesn't stay.
* TemporaryLoveInterest: Gold Petals was this... for maybe thirty chapters in ''Austraeoh'' at most, and has barely been mentioned in the story since. Overall, Rainbow tends to get a minor love interest in several of the places she visits, but doesn't stay.
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* BilingualBonus: the titles are composed of Old Norse words. The meanings of Eljunbyro ("endurance (re)born") and Odrsjot ("frantic compansionship") are mentioned in the text. The others can be translated as "east horse" (Austraeoh; the "eoh" is from Old English) and "accomplish-wind" (Innavedr). The "hringr" in Urohringr means "circle, ring". Yaerfaerda apparently comes from "gær - fœða", "yesterday - to give birth" (translated as "foal yesterday" in the story). Ynanhluutr seems to come from "innan hlutr" - "inner purpose".
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* BilingualBonus: the titles are composed of Old Norse words.
** The meanings of Eljunbyro ("endurance (re)born") and Odrsjot ("frantic compansionship") are mentioned in thetext. The others can be translated as text.
** Austraeoh is "east horse" (Austraeoh; the "eoh" is from OldEnglish) and "accomplish-wind" (Innavedr). English)
** Innavedr is "accomplish-wind"
** The "hringr" in Urohringr means "circle,ring". ring", while "Uro" means chaotic or unrest in modern scandinavian, meaning Urohringr can be translated as "Discordant Ring".
** Yaerfaerda apparently comes from "gær - fœða", "yesterday - to give birth" (translated as "foal yesterday" in thestory). story).
** Ynanhluutr seems to come from "innan hlutr" - "inner purpose".
** The meanings of Eljunbyro ("endurance (re)born") and Odrsjot ("frantic compansionship") are mentioned in the
** Austraeoh is "east horse" (Austraeoh; the "eoh" is from Old
** Innavedr is "accomplish-wind"
** The "hringr" in Urohringr means "circle,
** Yaerfaerda apparently comes from "gær - fœða", "yesterday - to give birth" (translated as "foal yesterday" in the
** Ynanhluutr seems to come from "innan hlutr" - "inner purpose".
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* TheDreaded: Rainbow to the Ledomaritan soldiers, and not without reason. Rumors eventually start spreading that she can ''summon giant centipedes at will''. While that's not true, she did slaughter an entire batallion on her own.
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* WhamShot: In "Convenient Cave", the 123rd chapter of Eljunbyro: Rainbow Dash finds another wall engraved with the symbol of Austraeoh, the skeleton of another pegasus, and a book with Austraeoh on the cover.
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* {{Egopolis}}: Ledomare is ruled by queen Ledo. The nation is actually officially known as The Maretriarchal Confederacy, but gets a new name based on the ruling monarch. Previous names include Byssomare, Zaidmare and Wessamare.
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* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler:Applejack]] is Rainbow's. While they were never in a relationship, Rainbow was in love with her. She does have flings along the journey eastward, but they all end just as soon as they begin due to Rainbow's quest.
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* TheNicknamer: Rainbow rarely calls anyone by their real names. Among others, Bellesmith and Pilate are "Ding-dong" and "Stripes".
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* MistakenIdentity: When Rainbow arrives in Verdestone, the denizens assume she's queen Whitemane's daughter. Whitemane doesn't actually have a daughter, and she and Rainbow look nothing alike, but the Verdestinians have never seen a pegasus before, so they assume she's related to the only other winged pony they know.
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* {{Precursors}}: According to Whitemane, the Alicorns seeded the world with harmony (and thereby life) after discovering it drifting through the void. [[spoiler:She's partially correct, although that's not the entire truth.]] [[spoiler:The ancient Pegasi were the first equine race to inhabit the world, possibly even before [[RingWorldPlanet Urohringr]] was shattered. Modern equines are descended from the Pegasi through the Alicorns' meddling]].
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* {{Precursors}}: According to Whitemane, the Alicorns (of whom Celestia, Luna and Whitemane are the last ones) seeded the world with harmony (and thereby life) after discovering it drifting through the void. [[spoiler:She's She's partially correct, although that's not the entire truth.]] truth. [[spoiler:The ancient Pegasi were the first equine race to inhabit the world, possibly even before [[RingWorldPlanet Urohringr]] was shattered. Modern equines are descended from the Pegasi through the Alicorns' meddling]].
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* TragicKeepsake: Rainbow dash carries two items with her; The glasses from Scootaloo, and a book of pictures. [[spoiler:She loses both to the dragons in Silvadel]].
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'''Austraeoh''' is a lengthy ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction series by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Imploding+Colon Imploding Colon]]. New chapters have been released daily since May 2012. There are currently eight completed stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25966/austraeoh Austraeoh]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/57450/eljunbyro Eljunbyro]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/88713/innavedr Innavedr]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/126689/odrsjot Odrsjot]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/171718/urohringr Urohringr]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/213020/yaerfaerda Yaerfaerda]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254555/ynanhluutr Ynanhluutr]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/290208/utaan Utaan]]'', and an ongoing ninth, ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/373584/ofolrodi Ofolrodi]]''. Each story is 200 chapters long, with Utaan (clocking in at 300) and Ofolrodi (still unfinished, but nearing 300) being the exceptions for the time being.
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'''Austraeoh''' is a lengthy ongoing ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction series by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Imploding+Colon Imploding Colon]]. New chapters have been released daily since May 2012. There are currently eight completed stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/25966/austraeoh Austraeoh]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/57450/eljunbyro Eljunbyro]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/88713/innavedr Innavedr]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/126689/odrsjot Odrsjot]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/171718/urohringr Urohringr]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/213020/yaerfaerda Yaerfaerda]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254555/ynanhluutr Ynanhluutr]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/290208/utaan Utaan]]'', and an ongoing ninth, ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/373584/ofolrodi Ofolrodi]]''. Each story is 200 chapters long, with Utaan (clocking in at 300) and Ofolrodi (still unfinished, but nearing topping 300) being the exceptions for the time being.
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* AxCrazy: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash, without the Element of Loyalty to keep her Chaos in check, will relentlessly slaughter anyone in her path.]]
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* AxCrazy: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash, without the Element of Loyalty to keep her Chaos in check, will relentlessly slaughter anyone in her path. The Ledomaritans only realized the connection between her and the Element because it was at the bottom of a ''MountainOfCorpses''.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: The dragon Matriarch Axan gives one to Rainbow Dash after she [[spoiler: melts her hoard.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: The dragon Matriarch Axan gives one to Rainbow Dash after she [[spoiler: melts her hoard.]]
* NoobleImplements: Inverted in that the audience knows exactly what she's talking about, while Belle, Dalton and Pilate are just confused when Rainbow Dash casually mentions that last time she was in the mechanical bowels of the world, it involved floating balls of lightning, a gasmask and a bunch of dead foals.
* NoobleImplements: Inverted in that the audience knows exactly what she's talking about, while Belle, Dalton and Pilate are just confused when Rainbow Dash casually mentions that last time she was in the mechanical bowels of the world, it involved floating balls of lightning, a gasmask and a bunch of dead foals.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: The dragon Matriarch Axan gives one to Rainbow Dash after she [[spoiler: melts her hoard.]]
* NoobleImplements:NoodleImplements: Inverted in that the audience knows exactly what she's talking about, while Belle, Dalton and Pilate are just confused when Rainbow Dash casually mentions that last time she was in the mechanical bowels of the world, it involved floating balls of lightning, a gasmask and a bunch of dead foals.
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* NoobleImplements: Inverted in that the audience knows exactly what she's talking about, while Belle, Dalton and Pilate are just confused when Rainbow Dash casually mentions that last time she was in the mechanical bowels of the world, it involved floating balls of lightning, a gasmask and a bunch of dead foals.
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* ArcNumber: 12. There are 12 planned parts of the series (9 currently published), and Urohringr [[spoiler:is a dodecagon, a 12-sided polygon]].
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* ButchLesbian: Rainbow Dash prefers mares and is a self-proclaimed athlete.
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* DoorStopper: As of December 2020, this story is '''1993 chapters''' long, clocking in at '''3,857,678''' words total. And it's ''still'' not complete.
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* DoorStopper: As of December 2020, February 2021, this story is '''1993 '''2000 chapters''' long, clocking in at '''3,857,678''' '''3,903,404''' words total. And it's ''still'' not complete.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Rainbow tends to solve problems on her trip eastward. [[spoiler:Averted for the reason she set out in the first place. She's travelling eastward because she has nothing left at home]].
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* AwesomeButTemporary: [[spoiler:The Sword of the Solstice was the only reason anypony made it off Stratopolis alive. It also allowed Rainbow Dash to talk to Celestia whenever the sun was up. Rainbow Dash decided to leave it in Durandana to give the pegasi there a link to Celestia.]]
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* AwesomeButTemporary: AwesomeButTemporary:
** [[spoiler:The Sword of the Solstice was the only reason anypony made it off Stratopolis alive. It also allowed Rainbow Dash to talk to Celestia whenever the sun was up. Rainbow Dash decided to leave it in Durandana to give the pegasi there a link to Celestia.]]
** [[spoiler:The Sword of the Solstice was the only reason anypony made it off Stratopolis alive. It also allowed Rainbow Dash to talk to Celestia whenever the sun was up. Rainbow Dash decided to leave it in Durandana to give the pegasi there a link to Celestia.]]
* AxCrazy: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash, without the Element of Loyalty to keep her Chaos in check, will relentlessly slaughter anyone in her path.]]
* ParadoxPerson: Rainbow Dash. After [[spoiler:killing Discord]], she became the host of Chaos while ''also'' being a creature of harmony. The Chaos is kept at bay by her Element of Loyalty, but there's only so much it can do and any time she removes it, her Chaos starts to show.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Shell spends a good deal of time describing how much of a monster Rainbow is. He is blind to all the atrocities he himself has committed willingly, whereas Rainbow rarely kills anyone intentionally.
