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* CasualDangerDialog: Teruki keeps this up through the entire fight with Ritsu. For example...

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* CasualDangerDialog: CasualDangerDialogue: Teruki keeps this up through the entire fight with Ritsu. For example...

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* TheCameo: Tsubomi makes a silent cameo at the market when Reigen asks her mom for advice on hair management.


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* ContinuityCameo: Tsubomi makes a silent cameo at the market when Reigen asks her mom for advice on hair management.
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* BreakTheCutie: Essentially the basis of the entire fic - Mob goes from a cute and cheerful ten-year-old to a broken fourteen-year-old who's terrified to get close to ''anyone'' for fear of hurting or killing them by accident.

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* BreakTheCutie: Essentially the basis of the entire fic - -- Mob goes from a cute and cheerful ten-year-old to a broken fourteen-year-old who's terrified to get close to ''anyone'' for fear of hurting or killing them by accident.



* MustHaveCaffeine: To avoid having to sleep - which reminds him too much of when Mogami was in control - Tetsuo turns to a constant supply of coffee to try and keep himself awake.

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* MustHaveCaffeine: To avoid having to sleep - -- which reminds him too much of when Mogami was in control - -- Tetsuo turns to a constant supply of coffee to try and keep himself awake.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In Chapter 41, after dealing with the stress of trying to find Mob and fielding Ritsu's difficult attitude for quite a while, Reigen ''explodes'' at Ritsu after Ritsu blames him for everything, viciously tearing into Ritsu for his tendency to [[NeverMyFault blame others for their failings but never taking responsibility for his own mistakes]]. Deconstructed in that Reigen [[JerkassHasAPoint isn't off-base with his criticisms]], he ''is'' still an adult taking out his stress on a young and traumatized teenager, and is immediately [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone appalled and disgusted with himself]] afterwards.
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** Taken UpToEleven at the end of chapter 33 when [[spoiler: his entire hand hits Mob's barrier]]

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** Taken UpToEleven {{Exaggerated|trope}} at the end of chapter 33 when [[spoiler: his entire hand hits Mob's barrier]]



* WillingChanneler: [[spoiler:Ritsu, after he allows Gimcrack to possess him to avoid dying to either the spirit or the projector crushing him at the movie theater, starts doing this regularly with Gimcrack as a way to train his powers. This gets taken UpToEleven in chapter 33 where, in his second fight with Teru, he allows ''every spirit'' in his hoard to possess him to increase his strength.]]

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* WillingChanneler: [[spoiler:Ritsu, after he allows Gimcrack to possess him to avoid dying to either the spirit or the projector crushing him at the movie theater, starts doing this regularly with Gimcrack as a way to train his powers. This gets [[ExaggeratedTrope taken UpToEleven further]] in chapter 33 where, in his second fight with Teru, he allows ''every spirit'' in his hoard to possess him to increase his strength.]]
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* ImportantHaircut: In Chapter 26, [[spoiler: Mob allows Reigen to cut his hair, trading his Rapunzel Hair for a long-ish bob as Mob isn't able to handle a full return to the trademark bowl cut, but is still a major step in his healing process]].

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* ImportantHaircut: In Chapter 26, [[spoiler: Mob allows Reigen to cut his hair, trading his Rapunzel Hair very long hair for a long-ish bob as Mob isn't able to handle a full return to the trademark bowl cut, but is still a major step in his healing process]].



* MessyHair: As a result of barrier-related trauma, Mob hasn't intentionally cut his hair in years. It's described in-story as being just below shoulder-length, though in fanart it can be wildly exaggerated until it more closely resembles RapunzelHair. It's messy enough that Mob can't get it properly clean, even once he has access to shampoo to use on it. [[spoiler: Later chapters resolve this as Mob becomes more comfortable enough around scissors to have his hair cut.]]

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* MessyHair: As a result of barrier-related trauma, Mob hasn't intentionally cut his hair in years. It's described in-story as being just below shoulder-length, though in fanart it can be wildly exaggerated until it more closely resembles RapunzelHair.Rapunzel's. It's messy enough that Mob can't get it properly clean, even once he has access to shampoo to use on it. [[spoiler: Later chapters resolve this as Mob becomes more comfortable enough around scissors to have his hair cut.]]
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* AdultFear:
** The Kageyama parents had their oldest son be kidnapped in broad daylight, with his missing persons' case having gone cold. As such, they're very overprotective of their remaining son, Ritsu, requiring a daily check-in from him once he returns from school and severely limiting his social life.
** The Hanazawa parents [[spoiler:were possessed by evil spirits and forced to treat their own son horribly as part of Claw's scheme to drive him into joining. And while he figured it out in time, the hatred remained even after they were exorcised, leaving them to grapple with impulses to ''hurt him'']].
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* BullyingADragon: Attempted by [[spoiler:Ichi Mezato]], who harasses Ritsu after overhearing something they shouldn't have. This leads to [[spoiler:Ritsu having her possessed in order to eliminate her as a threat]].
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* NotSoDifferent: An unsettling one between Ritsu and [[spoiler: Mogami, as both take to eating spirits to gain greater control over their power, though Ritsu is also doing it to make up for what he's giving away to his hoard.]]
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A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Phantomrose96/pseuds/Phantomrose96 phantomrose96]].

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A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 [[Webcomic/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Phantomrose96/pseuds/Phantomrose96 phantomrose96]].
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* EarNotch: Ritsu gains one after his (first) fight with Teru.
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* CopKiller: Mogami becomes one in chapter 35 by killing [[spoiler: Haruki]].


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* HeKnowsTooMuch: Mogami kills [[spoiler: Haruki when he figures out that Mogami is possessing Tetsuo.]] Notably the fic's first (human) CharacterDeath.
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** Chapter 32 has a doozy: [[spoiler:Slipshod confronts Reigen while inside Mezato's body and reveals what Retsu's been doing... and that his spirits ''already know where Shigeo is'' and have deliberately kept that information from Retsu. Followed shortly by Teruki bursting in, collecting her unconscious body, and informing Reigen that he's going to destroy Kageyama]].

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** Chapter 32 has a doozy: [[spoiler:Slipshod confronts Reigen while inside Mezato's body and reveals what Retsu's Ritsu's been doing... and that his spirits ''already know where Shigeo is'' and have deliberately kept that information from Retsu.Ritsu. Followed shortly by Teruki bursting in, collecting her unconscious body, and informing Reigen that he's going to destroy Kageyama]].
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** Taken UpToEleven at the end of chapter 33 when [[spoiler: his entire hand hits Mob's barrier]]


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** Happens again in chapter 33, this time to [[spoiler: Mezato, Teru, and Mei when the latter assumes that Mezato's strange behavior coupled with Teru spending a night at her house is this. The truth is that Mezato had been recently freed from long term possession and Teru was keeping guard, but Mei wasn't likely to believe that, which Teru {{lampshades}}]]


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* ProtagonistJourneyToVillain: [[spoiler: Ritsu Kageyama's ultimate plotline]]


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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: Downplayed example but [[spoiler: Gimcrack in chapter 34 is exorcised by Ritsu shortly after establishing that he actually cared somewhat for Ritsu]]
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* WillingChanneler: [[spoiler:Ritsu, after he allows Gimcrack to possess him to avoid dying to either the spirit or the projector crushing him at the movie theater, starts doing this regularly with Gimcrack as a way to train his powers.]]

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* WillingChanneler: [[spoiler:Ritsu, after he allows Gimcrack to possess him to avoid dying to either the spirit or the projector crushing him at the movie theater, starts doing this regularly with Gimcrack as a way to train his powers. This gets taken UpToEleven in chapter 33 where, in his second fight with Teru, he allows ''every spirit'' in his hoard to possess him to increase his strength.]]
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** Chapter 32 has a doozy: [[spoiler:Slipshod confronts Reigen while inside Mezato's body and reveals what Retsu's been doing. Followed shortly by Teruki bursting in, collecting her unconscious body, and informing Reigen that he's going to destroy Kageyama]].

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** Chapter 32 has a doozy: [[spoiler:Slipshod confronts Reigen while inside Mezato's body and reveals what Retsu's been doing.doing... and that his spirits ''already know where Shigeo is'' and have deliberately kept that information from Retsu. Followed shortly by Teruki bursting in, collecting her unconscious body, and informing Reigen that he's going to destroy Kageyama]].

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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AdultFear: The Kageyama parents had their oldest son be kidnapped in broad daylight, with his missing persons' case having gone cold. As such, they're very overprotective of their remaining son, Ritsu, requiring a daily check-in from him once he returns from school and severely limiting his social life.

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!! This !!This fic provides examples of:
* AdultFear: AdultFear:
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The Kageyama parents had their oldest son be kidnapped in broad daylight, with his missing persons' case having gone cold. As such, they're very overprotective of their remaining son, Ritsu, requiring a daily check-in from him once he returns from school and severely limiting his social life.life.
** The Hanazawa parents [[spoiler:were possessed by evil spirits and forced to treat their own son horribly as part of Claw's scheme to drive him into joining. And while he figured it out in time, the hatred remained even after they were exorcised, leaving them to grapple with impulses to ''hurt him'']].



* DarkAndTroubledPast: Teruki's StartOfDarkness is revealed in Chapter 32: [[spoiler:When he was ten years old, agents from Claw had his teacher and parents possessed in order to isolate and drive him into the organization. While this failed, the feelings of utter ''hatred'' the spirits forcibly instilled in their victims remained]].



* TraumaButton: For Mob, anything with a sharp edge, such as scissors or a knife, as they remind him of his barrier, and being in close contact with other living beings. For Ritsu, anything about Mob, but especially implying or stating that Mob may be dead.

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* TraumaButton: TraumaButton:
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For Mob, anything with a sharp edge, such as scissors or a knife, as they remind him of his barrier, and being in close contact with other living beings. beings.
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For Ritsu, anything about Mob, but especially implying or stating that Mob may be dead.dead.
** For Teruki, anything to do with [[spoiler:possession]].



** Chapter 26 [[spoiler: Isa has Ritsu meet her at a cafe to discuss his delinquent behavior and Ritsu, angry at her over his perception that she and the other police officers gave up on Mob, ends up revealing himself as a psychic to Isa and reveals his deals with spirits to find his brother plan to her. Isa then has to deal with her own guilt at letting Mob's case grow cold and how it pushed Ritsu down his current path.]]
** Chapters 28 and 29 reveal that [[spoiler: [[UnexpectedCharacter Ichi Mezato]] was also present in the cafe during the events of chapter 26 and now also know about Ritsu's powers and general bad decisions. She confronts Ritsu and attempts to blackmail him into telling her more, but the confrontation ends in a draw after Teru intervenes and deletes her blackmail pictures. After she threatens to confront Ritsu again without Teru present, Ritsu has her possessed by a member of his spirit hoard.]] And because [[spoiler: Mob and Reigen are also at the mall the previous scene takes place in, the spirit possessed Ichi spots Mob as the two of them leave.]]
** Chapter 31 ends with two: [[spoiler: First, Teru learns that Ritsu had Mezato possessed which is implied to be a TraumaButton for him. The scene ends before Teru's full reaction to this can be seen. Then Tetsuo has his first POV in 8 chapters only to learn that he lost a day, heavily implying he was possessed again without realizing it or anyone noticing.]]
* WillingChanneler: [[spoiler: Ritsu, after he allows Gimcrack to possess him to avoid dying to either the spirit or the projector crushing him at the movie theater, starts doing this regularly with Gimcrack as a way to train his powers.]]

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** Chapter 26 [[spoiler: Isa [[spoiler:Isa has Ritsu meet her at a cafe to discuss his delinquent behavior and Ritsu, angry at her over his perception that she and the other police officers gave up on Mob, ends up revealing himself as a psychic to Isa and reveals his deals with spirits to find his brother plan to her. Isa then has to deal with her own guilt at letting Mob's case grow cold and how it pushed Ritsu down his current path.]]
** Chapters 28 and 29 reveal that [[spoiler: [[UnexpectedCharacter [[spoiler:[[UnexpectedCharacter Ichi Mezato]] was also present in the cafe during the events of chapter 26 and now also know about Ritsu's powers and general bad decisions. She confronts Ritsu and attempts to blackmail him into telling her more, but the confrontation ends in a draw after Teru intervenes and deletes her blackmail pictures. After she threatens to confront Ritsu again without Teru present, Ritsu has her possessed by a member of his spirit hoard.]] And because [[spoiler: Mob [[spoiler:Mob and Reigen are also at the mall the previous scene takes place in, the spirit possessed Ichi spots Mob as the two of them leave.]]
leave]].
** Chapter 31 ends with two: [[spoiler: First, [[spoiler:First, Teru learns that Ritsu had Mezato possessed which is implied to be a TraumaButton for him. The scene ends before Teru's full reaction to this can be seen. Then Tetsuo has his first POV in 8 chapters only to learn that he lost a day, heavily implying he was possessed again without realizing it or anyone noticing.]]
** Chapter 32 has a doozy: [[spoiler:Slipshod confronts Reigen while inside Mezato's body and reveals what Retsu's been doing. Followed shortly by Teruki bursting in, collecting her unconscious body, and informing Reigen that he's going to destroy Kageyama]].
* WillingChanneler: [[spoiler: Ritsu, [[spoiler:Ritsu, after he allows Gimcrack to possess him to avoid dying to either the spirit or the projector crushing him at the movie theater, starts doing this regularly with Gimcrack as a way to train his powers.]]



-->'''Mogami:''' Psychics are impressionable. Psychics will manifest the powers they’re led to believe they have. All I had to do was tell you that your powers would burn you, and if you believed me, you would burn.

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-->'''Mogami:''' Psychics are impressionable. Psychics will manifest the powers they’re led to believe they have. All I had to do was tell you that your powers would burn you, and if you believed me, you would burn.burn.

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* WillingChanneler: [[spoiler: Ritsu, after he allows Gimcrack to possess him to avoid dying to either the spirit or the projector crushing him at the movie theater, starts doing this regularly with Gimcrack as a way to train his powers.]]
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** Chapter 31 ends with two: [[spoiler: First, Teru learns that Ritsu had Mezato possessed which is implied to be a TraumaButton for him. The scene ends before Teru's full reaction to this can be seen. Then Tetsuo has his first POV in 8 chapters only to learn that he lost a day, heavily implying he was possessed again without realizing it or anyone noticing.]]
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** Tetsuo and Jun have now fallen into this as well, with their last appearances being chapter's 23 and 15, respectively.

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** Tetsuo and Jun have now fallen into this as well, with their last appearances being chapter's 23 and 15, respectively. [[spoiler: Tetsuo returns in chapter 31]]
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* OriginalCharacter: Jun and Tetsuo Isari and Officer Isa Maki, as well as the background police officers and Dr. Wong.

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* OriginalCharacter: Jun and Tetsuo Isari and Officer Isa Maki, as well as the background police officers and Dr. Wong. Additionally, there's the spirit hoard that Ritsu uses to find Mob, with Gimcrack being the most prominent member.
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** Mogami has a more potent one [[spoiler: surrounding his corpse in the attic.]]
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A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[https://phantomrose96.tumblr.com/ phantomrose96]].

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A [[Manga/MobPsycho100 Mob Psycho 100]] AlternateUniverseFic by [[https://phantomrose96.tumblr.com/ [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Phantomrose96/pseuds/Phantomrose96 phantomrose96]].
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* TraumaButton: For Mob, anything with a sharp edge, such as scissors or a knife, as they remind him of his barrier, and being in close contact with other living beings. For Ritsu, anything about Mob, but especially implying or stating that Mob may be dead in front of him.

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* TraumaButton: For Mob, anything with a sharp edge, such as scissors or a knife, as they remind him of his barrier, and being in close contact with other living beings. For Ritsu, anything about Mob, but especially implying or stating that Mob may be dead in front of him.dead.
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** Tetsuo and Jun have now fallen into this as well, with their last appearances being chapter's 23 and 15, respectively.
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** From chapter 10, this is generally present with Ritsu putting his life at risk to rescue Mob, not knowing that Mob has already been rescued at this point.
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* AdultFear: The Kageyama parents had their oldest son be kidnapped in broad daylight, with his missing persons' case having gone cold. As such, they're very overprotective of their remaining son, Ritsu, requiring a daily check-in from him once he returns from school and severely limiting his social life.
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* TraumaButton: For Mob, anything with a sharp edge, such as scissors or a knife, as they remind him of his barrier, and being in close contact with other living beings. For Ritsu, anything about Mob, and do not imply or state that Mob may be dead in front of him.

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* TraumaButton: For Mob, anything with a sharp edge, such as scissors or a knife, as they remind him of his barrier, and being in close contact with other living beings. For Ritsu, anything about Mob, and do not imply but especially implying or state stating that Mob may be dead in front of him.
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* TraumaButton: For Mob, anything with a sharp edge, such as scissors or a knife, as they remind him of his barrier, and being in close contact with other living beings. For Ritsu, anything about Mob, and do not imply or state that Mob may be dead in front of him.
* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: Ritsu's psychic powers awaken shortly after Mob is kidnapped.
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**The spirit in the hoodie that Ritsu fights in chapter 27 [[spoiler: talked to Mob at the mall earlier in the day. Ritsu, with Gimcrack's help, ended up destroying his first solid lead without even realizing it as he never stopped to talk to the spirit.]]


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* {{Jerkass}}: Teru, full stop. He's only hanging around Ritsu because he's the first teen esper Teru's ever met and he's getting enjoyment out of Ritsu's attempts to find Mob, who he believes is likely dead. Much of his dialogue is making snappy insults at Ritsu and he's left him in dangerous situations multiple times.


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* NotSoDifferent: An unsettling one between Ritsu and [[spoiler: Mogami, as both take to eating spirits to gain greater control over their power, though Ritsu is also doing it to make up for what he's giving away to his hoard.]]

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