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* AlternateUniverseFic: Initially meant to be a PseudocanonicalFic, but canon has {{Jossed}} certain elements since these were published. This series complies with the original episodes through most of season three, excluding "Magical Mystery Cure" and everything after. So Twilight is still a unicorn here, and the backstories for Nightmare Moon and the Elements of Harmony differ from the flashbacks in "Princess Twilight Sparkle".
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Initially meant to be a PseudocanonicalFic, but canon has {{Jossed}} disproved certain elements since these were published. This series complies with the original episodes through most of season three, excluding "Magical Mystery Cure" and everything after. So Twilight is still a unicorn here, and the backstories for Nightmare Moon and the Elements of Harmony differ from the flashbacks in "Princess Twilight Sparkle".
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-->Funny thing about griffon claws: they’re a lot easier to stomp on than hooves.\\
My forehoof came down hard with a sickening crack, though Gaelle’s agonized screech quickly overtook it.
My forehoof came down hard with a sickening crack, though Gaelle’s agonized screech quickly overtook it.
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-->Funny thing about griffon claws: they’re they're a lot easier to stomp on than hooves.\\
My forehoof came down hard with a sickening crack, thoughGaelle’s Gaelle's agonized screech quickly overtook it.
My forehoof came down hard with a sickening crack, though
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-->Even though I was relieved that she finally got the hint, I also felt kind of bad. The conviction to act, to do what she thinks is right, isn’t the most common quality around. But a pony has to know her limits and that’s something she needed to figure out before she learned it the hard way. Or worse, became the lesson for somepony else.
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-->Even though I was relieved that she finally got the hint, I also felt kind of bad. The conviction to act, to do what she thinks is right, isn’t isn't the most common quality around. But a pony has to know her limits and that’s that's something she needed to figure out before she learned it the hard way. Or worse, became the lesson for somepony else.
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-->“Sometimes bad things happen. Sometimes bad people win. Sometimes something beautiful is lost beneath the sands of time, like a forgotten rainbow. But sooner or later, someone will dig it up and remember that the world does have nice things.”
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-->''I don’t know what I missed, but it was bad. The spell brought Prideful's grandma back, but it wasn't right. She was saying weird things and didn't even recognize Prideful. They tried to talk for five minutes, but nothing was getting through.''
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-->''I don’t don't know what I missed, but it was bad. The spell brought Prideful's grandma back, but it wasn't right. She was saying weird things and didn't even recognize Prideful. They tried to talk for five minutes, but nothing was getting through.''
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-->“Different people have different ways of coping. But that’s just it. It’s coping, learning to move on, but never completely leaving the pain behind. It doesn’t simply vanish into thin air. It’s not easy and I don’t think it ever should be. [...] Don't let yourself reach a point where killing is easy, because that's when you lose yourself.”
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-->[Dusky said,] “If I disarm, you’ll kill us both. But if you kill her, you’ll be dead in an instant. How about you surrender and I’ll think about sparing your life?”
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-->[Dusky said,] “If "If I disarm, you’ll you'll kill us both. But if you kill her, you’ll you'll be dead in an instant. How about you surrender and I’ll I'll think about sparing your life?”life?"
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-->“Can… can your zombies cover me?”\\
Had the situation been any less dire, I might have laughed. Never in a thousand years did I think I’d utter those words.
Had the situation been any less dire, I might have laughed. Never in a thousand years did I think I’d utter those words.
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-->With a flourish, he continued. “No, I felt it and knew. Knew that you didn’t bear the touch of dark m—”\\
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-->With a flourish, he continued. “No, "No, I felt it and knew. Knew that you didn’t didn't bear the touch of dark m—”\\m-"\\
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-->“If you ask me, the real negative emotions are those that get in the way of my pony’s ambitions. Those sentiments that hold them back, those are the ones that put them truly off course.”\\
[Luna said,] “You make a good point. Those emotions can be troublesome at times. [...] But a pony’s own ambitions aren’t everything. They are not as simple as you make them out to be. Many genuinely desire to see their friends and family happy, to see them succeed. And those desires are not any less worthwhile than their own dreams.”\\
“Hmph, seems I spoke too soon. You do not truly understand. I wonder how long until you do, though.”
[Luna said,] “You make a good point. Those emotions can be troublesome at times. [...] But a pony’s own ambitions aren’t everything. They are not as simple as you make them out to be. Many genuinely desire to see their friends and family happy, to see them succeed. And those desires are not any less worthwhile than their own dreams.”\\
“Hmph, seems I spoke too soon. You do not truly understand. I wonder how long until you do, though.”
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[Luna said,]
“Hmph,
"Hmph, seems I spoke too soon. You do not truly understand. I wonder how long until you do, though.
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-->Anyone who got close to me like that could become a target and that wouldn’t be fair.
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-->Terrabona grinned, glancing at Mahogany who raised his glass to her in salute. “We need to talk about you and a certain mare. I know it all, so just fess up.”\\
My jaw dropped as I followed Terrabona’s look towards my friend. “M-Mahogany... you told her? Y-you told her about my confession?”\\
Mahogany raised his free hoof to his face and sighed. “Nope. I didn't. I promised I wouldn't. But you did. Just now. Smoooooooth.”
My jaw dropped as I followed Terrabona’s look towards my friend. “M-Mahogany... you told her? Y-you told her about my confession?”\\
Mahogany raised his free hoof to his face and sighed. “Nope. I didn't. I promised I wouldn't. But you did. Just now. Smoooooooth.”
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-->Terrabona grinned, glancing at Mahogany who raised his glass to her in salute. “We "We need to talk about you and a certain mare. I know it all, so just fess up.”\\
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My jaw dropped as I followedTerrabona’s Terrabona's look towards my friend. “M-Mahogany... "M-Mahogany... you told her? Y-you told her about my confession?”\\
confession?"\\
Mahogany raised his free hoof to his face and sighed.“Nope."Nope. I didn't. I promised I wouldn't. But you did. Just now. Smoooooooth.”"
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191145/from-dusk-to-night From Dusk to Night]]'' and ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191722/mending-light Mending Light]]'': Years later, Dusky bides her time in Ponyville, waiting for the chance to rejoin Ivory and free Pasture from the grip of evil. In the meantime, she reconnects with her Ponyville friends, and makes a few new ones: a pair of exiled knights from the distant country of Ostfriesen, and Night Flurry, a nervous weatherpony with a lot of emotional baggage and an obvious crush on Dusky. But figures from the past--dysfunctional family members, criminals with a grudge against Dusky, and a warrior from ancient Ostfriesen--break the peace and draw all the ponies into further conflicts. Fortunately, Dusky's friends are made of sterner stuff than she realizes. (Currently ongoing--''From Dusk to Night'' tells the story from Dusky's perspective, and ''Mending Light'' tells it from Night's perspective.)
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191145/from-dusk-to-night From Dusk to Night]]'' and ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191722/mending-light Mending Light]]'': Years later, Dusky bides her time in Ponyville, waiting for the chance to rejoin Ivory and free Pasture from the grip of evil. In the meantime, she reconnects with her Ponyville friends, and makes a few new ones: a pair of exiled knights from the distant country of Ostfriesen, and Night Flurry, a nervous weatherpony with a lot of emotional baggage and an obvious crush on Dusky. But figures from the past--dysfunctional family members, criminals with a grudge against Dusky, and a warrior from ancient Ostfriesen--break the peace and draw all the ponies into further conflicts. Fortunately, Dusky's friends are made of sterner stuff than she realizes. (Currently ongoing--''From (Complete. ''From Dusk to Night'' tells the story from Dusky's perspective, and ''Mending Light'' tells it from Night's perspective.)
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* {{Adorkable}}: Night is so much in love with Dusky, so nervous around her... [[RealityEnsues that he can barely get out a full sentence when speaking to her, and Dusky just feels sorry for him.]] But as he gains more confidence, his awkwardness shrinks to a level that's actually endearing:
-->There was something oddly charming about him being so nervous about proposing a date that wasn’t a date as a follow-up to us already agreeing to go on a date.
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* EndearinglyDorky: Night is so much in love with Dusky, so nervous around her... that he can barely get out a full sentence when speaking to her, and Dusky just feels sorry for him. But as he gains more confidence, his awkwardness shrinks to a level that's actually endearing:
-->There was something oddly charming about him being so nervous about proposing a date that wasn’t a date as a follow-up to us already agreeing to go on a date.
-->There was something oddly charming about him being so nervous about proposing a date that wasn’t a date as a follow-up to us already agreeing to go on a date.
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* BiTheWay: Dusky mentions in passing that she's turned on by a well-toned body, mare or stallion. Merri mainly ogles stallions, but sometimes mares as well. And Terra, who's normally interested in stallions, flirts with Star at one point--Dusky isn't sure if Terra's genuinely attracted, or it's just the alcohol talking.
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* PossessingADeadBody: [[spoiler:The subplot with Bellerophon possessing Night Flurry's body eventually gets resolved when Bellerophon possesses the recently deceased Lord Firetail instead.]]
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* SuperWindowJump: Dusky escapes a fight (barely) by leaping out the window. There's no SoftGlass, though: she throws a sandbag through to break the glass beforehand, and the shards still in the frame give her a nasty cut as she goes through.
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* SuperWindowJump: Dusky escapes a fight (barely) by leaping out the window. There's no SoftGlass, though: she throws a sandbag through to break the glass beforehand, and she still gets nasty cuts from the shards still remaining in the frame give her a nasty cut as she goes through.frame.
* SymbioticPossession: Bellerophon's soul was trapped within his old bracer, and when Night puts on that bracer, Bellerophon winds up inside his mind. They soon come to an understanding, and Belle only takes control of the body with Night's permission.
* SymbioticPossession: Bellerophon's soul was trapped within his old bracer, and when Night puts on that bracer, Bellerophon winds up inside his mind. They soon come to an understanding, and Belle only takes control of the body with Night's permission.
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* DoomedFellowPrisoner: Dusky gets captured and imprisoned by the Leaf Cartel crime family. The next cell over has a stallion named Diligent Duster, who shares his sad story about how he ended up there and what the Cartel's already done to him. He mysteriously disappears just before Dusky can make her escape. [[spoiler: Then he attacks Dusky, revealing that he's actually a Cartel member with a personal vendetta against her. He was just pretending to be a fellow prisoner as an overly complicated plan to mess with her psychologically before killing her.]]
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* NoNameGiven: As far as anypony knows, the evil spirit simply doesn't have a name. Celestia and Luna dubbed him "Nameless" for lack of anything better to call him.
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* SomebodyNamedNobody: As far as anypony knows, the evil spirit simply doesn't have a name. Celestia and Luna dubbed him "Nameless" for lack of anything better to call him.
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* GoodCopBadCop: Played with--Mint and the other Guards will act extra-nice to reassure witnesses who are cooperative but nervous. They call this "good cop, good cop".
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* AsleepForDays: In the aftermath of a nasty fight, Dusky gets healing magic to recover, and the spell knocks her unconscious while she heals. ''From Dusky to Night'' devotes nearly two whole chapters to this period, including some odd dreams and a few times she partially regained consciousness.
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* AsleepForDays: In the aftermath of a nasty fight, Dusky gets healing magic to recover, and the spell knocks her unconscious while she heals. ''From Dusky Dusk to Night'' devotes nearly two whole chapters to this period, including some odd dreams and a few times she partially regained consciousness.
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* LockedUpAndLeftBehind: In Ostfriesen, Star interrogates an enemy scout, then considers killing her when she's done. Dusky and Night balk at this, and convince Star to just tie the scout up instead, and come back to free her afterwards. Of course, this gives the scout ''more'' incentive to tell the truth about the layout of the enemy base.
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* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:Night Light]] hated his old name, so he renamed himself Night Flurry to reflect his talent for winter weather work. It works the other way, too: when he opens up to Dusky about his old name, it's a sign that he's making peace with his past.
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* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:Night Light]] hated his old name, so he renamed himself Night Flurry to reflect his talent for winter weather work. It works the other way, too: when he opens up to Dusky about his old name, it's a sign that he's making peace with his past.
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* BeachEpisode: The cast spend several chapters in Myrtail Beach--but it's not a relaxing vacation. They're hiding from the Cartel, after Dusky was attacked in Ponyville.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Well before Bellerophon gets truly introduced to the readers, he shows up [[spoiler:as a voice in Night's head who knows things Night couldn't know.]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: ChekhovsGunman:
** Well before Bellerophon gets truly introduced to the readers, he shows up [[spoiler:as a voice in Night's head who knows things Night couldn't know.]]]]
** Night's sister, Mint Creme, first shows up spying on [[spoiler:Dusky's meeting with Noble Light]].
** Well before Bellerophon gets truly introduced to the readers, he shows up [[spoiler:as a voice in Night's head who knows things Night couldn't know.
** Night's sister, Mint Creme, first shows up spying on [[spoiler:Dusky's meeting with Noble Light]].
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* {{Irony}}:
** When Night attempts to protect Dusky from Merri's misfired magic, he injures his wing. When the Cartel attacks Dusky and Night a few days later at Fetlock Falls, Dusky would prefer to just fly away--but can't because of Night's injury. So, by trying to protect Dusky, Night puts her in more danger in the long run.
** Night fantasizes about rescuing Dusky, or otherwise proving his bravery through combat. But instead, the first time he actually helps Dusky and starts to earn her respect, it's by braving social awkwardness and reconnecting with his family.
** When Night attempts to protect Dusky from Merri's misfired magic, he injures his wing. When the Cartel attacks Dusky and Night a few days later at Fetlock Falls, Dusky would prefer to just fly away--but can't because of Night's injury. So, by trying to protect Dusky, Night puts her in more danger in the long run.
** Night fantasizes about rescuing Dusky, or otherwise proving his bravery through combat. But instead, the first time he actually helps Dusky and starts to earn her respect, it's by braving social awkwardness and reconnecting with his family.
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* AsleepForDays: In the aftermath of a nasty fight, Dusky gets healing magic to recover, and the spell knocks her unconscious while she heals. ''From Dusky to Night'' devotes nearly two whole chapters to this period, including some odd dreams and a few times she partially regained consciousness.
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* ConverseWithTheUnconscious: While Dusky recovers from her injuries, Night stays at her side and talks.
* CrashingDreams: While Dusky is unconscious and recovering from her fight, she occasionally hears bits and pieces of conversations around her and incorporates them into her fever dreams. For example, when [[ConverseWithTheUnconscious Night talks to her in the waking world]], Dusky hears it and dreams that they're having a conversation in the back room of the tavern.
* CrashingDreams: While Dusky is unconscious and recovering from her fight, she occasionally hears bits and pieces of conversations around her and incorporates them into her fever dreams. For example, when [[ConverseWithTheUnconscious Night talks to her in the waking world]], Dusky hears it and dreams that they're having a conversation in the back room of the tavern.
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* WatchingTheSunset: In part because of his name, Night feels an affinity for the night sky and loves to watch the sunset and moonrise. When he and Dusky try to watch the sunset together in Ponyville, Dusky's mom interrupts with a "pop quiz" for Dusky. And when Night's dad needs to speak to him in Canterlot, he finds Night by looking in high spots that offer a good view of the moonrise.
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* GeoEffects: Why Dusky survives the warehouse fight. She takes up a position where she can attack her opponents by surprise, and where they can only attack her one-at-a-time--initially.
* PensieveFlashback: Night sees a vision of ancient Ostfriesen, and the falling-out between Lord Bellerophon and Queen Tapioca, as if he were physically there. Just before the vision ends, the memory of Bell seems to directly address Night.
* RailingKill: Dusky fights with some Cartel thugs on the upper loft of an abandoned warehouse. She bucks one of them into the railing, which breaks and sends him falling to his death.
* SuperWindowJump: Dusky escapes a fight (barely) by leaping out the window. There's no SoftGlass, though: she throws a sandbag through to break the glass beforehand, and the shards still in the frame give her a nasty cut as she goes through.
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* ZergRush: The Cartel's enforcer's aren't very ''good'' fighters, and their preferred strategy is just to attack in overwhelming numbers. When only three of them square off against Dusky and Night, Dusky knows it was just an attack of opportunity--if it were planned, the Cartel would have sent at least six thugs.
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* FreakOut: When Terra [[NotRightInTheBed gets her libido inhibited by Star's spell]], long-suppressed parts of her personality come to the forefront to fill the void--particularly her motherly instincts. This triggers an existential crisis, crying fits, and worse binge-drinking than usual. Fortunately, Terra comes out the other side with these disparate parts of her personality in a healthier balance, [[spoiler:and starts dating a single dad.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Night has a bad tendency to misinterpret events to blame himself as much as possible. Two of his sisters were borderline abusive to him, but Night somehow thinks that made ''him'' the bad brother. And he cuts himself off from his family, because he's convinced they're better off without him.
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* ImplausibleDeniability: Dusky knocks on Terra's door. Terra is inside, but she's drunk and wants to be left alone, so she answers:
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* TheUnreveal: Blaze wonders why a ''landlocked'' town like Ponyville has a tavern named the Lusty Sea Pony. Dusky starts to explain--then the chapter ends, and the audience never hears the rest of the story.
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* AlliterativeName: Dusky Down, Prideful Policy, Windy Ward, Splendid Speech.
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* AlliterativeName: Dusky Down, Prideful Policy, Windy Ward, Splendid Speech.Speech, Ruby Result.
* BiTheWay: Dusky mentions in passing that she's turned on by a well-toned body, mare or stallion. Merri mainly ogles stallions, but sometimes mares as well. And Terra, who's normally interested in stallions, flirts with Star at one point--Dusky isn't sure if Terra's genuinely attracted, or it's just the alcohol talking.
* EatingTheEyeCandy: Merri openly leers at good-looking stallions (and sometimes mares). At one point, when eating at a restaurant, she specifically chooses the table that will give the best angle for watching the waiters walk back to the kitchen.
* EdibleThemeNaming: Seems to be the rule for the royalty of Ostfriesen. Their first Queen was Tapioca, and their current Queen is Papaya.
* EdibleThemeNaming: Seems to be the rule for the royalty of Ostfriesen. Their first Queen was Tapioca, and their current Queen is Papaya.
* FantasticDrug: Ghost Leaf: "a powerful hallucinogen. A favorite among the rave crowd." And it's the source of a lot of money for the Leaf Cartel.
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* FortuneTeller: When Night wanders into the Everfree on a poorly thought-out quest to prove himself, Zecora appears to guide him back to safety. Then, sensing something that Night hadn't yet admitted to anyone, she offers him [[{{Foreshadowing}} some prescient advice]].
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* FortuneTeller: When Night wanders into the Everfree on a poorly thought-out quest to prove himself, Zecora appears to guide him back to safety. Then, sensing something that Night hadn't hasn't yet admitted to anyone, she offers him [[{{Foreshadowing}} some prescient advice]].
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* TheProfessor: Ruby, a university science teacher in Canterlot who confirms the presence of Ghost Flower via lab analysis.
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* ActionGirl: Dusky is not quite a professional warrior (though she was trained by one), but she's tough enough to mess up anyone who takes her for a pushover.
* AlliterativeName: Dusky Down, Prideful Policy, Windy Ward, Splendid Speech.
* AlliterativeName: Dusky Down, Prideful Policy, Windy Ward, Splendid Speech.
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* ActionMom: Windy Ward, Dusky's mom and a professional bodyguard. Everything about fighting that Dusky knows, she learned from Windy.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Well before Bellerophon gets truly introduced to the readers, he shows up [[spoiler:as a voice in Night's head who knows things Night couldn't know.]]
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* KnowledgeBroker: Lockbox, a former Guard who has the inside scoop on underworld goings-on. Dusky consults him when she needs to know what the Leaf Cartel are up to.
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* RevealingCoverup: Someone destroys all the ice sculptures at the Fetlock Falls Winter Festival. It's a coverup, of course: [[spoiler:The Leaf Cartel is smuggling Ghost Flower inside surplus ice blocks. When they collect their contraband, they distract everyone from the missing ice blocks by smashing all the leftover ice and the sculptures.]] They probably would have gotten away with it, if they hadn't alerted Dusky to their presence by attacking her in Fetlock Falls.
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* CringeComedy: A brief scene of it. Terra encourages Night to practice, before asking Dusky out for real. Night closes his eyes and starts to speak--and then Dusky walks in and hears his entire love confession.
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* CringeComedy: A brief scene of it. Terra encourages Night to practice, before practice asking Dusky out out, before doing it for real. Night closes his eyes and starts to speak--and then Dusky walks in and hears his entire love confession.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Night starts off with a bad case of this. It causes him to walk into the Everfree Forest with intentions to slay some monsters (and no actual plan for ''how'' to do it), and then to injure himself by "protecting" Dusky (when she isn't even in danger). Dusky has to give him a stern talk just to drill basic self-preservation into his head.
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* DontSneakUpOnMeLikeThat: Night surprises Dusky by popping a hat onto her head from behind (when, unknown to him, she's paranoid about ponies tracking her). She reacts on instinct and barely stops herself from punching Night.
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[[caption-width-right:250:"Pony Prejudice Perpetuates Potential Peril" --[[https://www.equestriadaily.com/2013/10/story-necromancers-ambition.html EQD]].]]
[[caption-width-right:250:"Pony Prejudice Perpetuates Potential Peril" --[[https://www.equestriadaily.com/2013/10/story-necromancers-ambition.html EQD]].]]
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->''Trouble. It follows me around like an unwanted pet. The kind of pet liable to maul my friends' faces.''
-->-- '''Dusky Down''', from the description of ''From Dusk to Night''
The Duskyverse is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction series by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/KuroiTsubasaTenshi Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi]] (with help from [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Invidlord Invidlord]]), mainly focusing on the traveling pegasus, Dusky Down.
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/120195/the-necromancers-ambition The Necromancer's Ambition]]'': Dusky Down makes an unexpected detour to Pasture, a small town supposedly menaced by a Necromancer in the nearby forest. Dusky soon finds that the Necromancer is real--her name is Ivory, and she's far kinder than expected. Ivory is also at war with a gang of bandits; Dusky tries to stay uninvolved, but when a young aspiring guardsmare throws a spanner into the ongoing conflict, Dusky can't help but leap into the fray herself. (Complete.)
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/14061/evils-twilight Evil's Twilight]]'': (A side story, with Dusky just appearing as a supporting character.) A freak winter storm traps Twilight Sparkle alone in a cave system, where a mysterious voice offers the help she needs to escape. But afterwards, Twilight is troubled by strange outbursts of anger and disturbing visions of the past. Too late, the Princesses realize that a millennia-old force of evil has returned, and Twilight is its latest target. (Complete.)
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191145/from-dusk-to-night From Dusk to Night]]'' and ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191722/mending-light Mending Light]]'': Years later, Dusky bides her time in Ponyville, waiting for the chance to rejoin Ivory and free Pasture from the grip of evil. In the meantime, she reconnects with her Ponyville friends, and makes a few new ones: a pair of exiled knights from the distant country of Ostfriesen, and Night Flurry, a nervous weatherpony with a lot of emotional baggage and an obvious crush on Dusky. But figures from the past--dysfunctional family members, criminals with a grudge against Dusky, and a warrior from ancient Ostfriesen--break the peace and draw all the ponies into further conflicts. Fortunately, Dusky's friends are made of sterner stuff than she realizes. (Currently ongoing--''From Dusk to Night'' tells the story from Dusky's perspective, and ''Mending Light'' tells it from Night's perspective.)
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!! Provides examples of:
[[folder:The whole series]]
* AlternateUniverseFic: Initially meant to be a PseudocanonicalFic, but canon has {{Jossed}} certain elements since these were published. This series complies with the original episodes through most of season three, excluding "Magical Mystery Cure" and everything after. So Twilight is still a unicorn here, and the backstories for Nightmare Moon and the Elements of Harmony differ from the flashbacks in "Princess Twilight Sparkle".
* BlackMagic: Ironically, necromancers aren't inherently evil in this 'verse. But on the other hand, you have to be evil (or at least power-hungry and a little crazy) to become a Shadow Walker--one who gives up part of their soul in exchange for magic powers. [[spoiler:Gaelle, the bandit leader,]] from ''The Necromancer's Ambition'' and [[spoiler:Lord Firetail]] in ''From Dusk to Night'' are both Shadow Walkers.
* CombatPragmatist: Pretty much everyone fights dirty, especially Dusky. (The only exceptions are the few magic-users who are so powerful they don't really ''need'' to fight smart. Even so, they tend to die anyway.) A notable example is in ''The Necromancer's Ambition'' when Dusky fights a griffon and deliberately breaks one of her claws.
-->Funny thing about griffon claws: they’re a lot easier to stomp on than hooves.\\
My forehoof came down hard with a sickening crack, though Gaelle’s agonized screech quickly overtook it.
* TheCynic: Dusky used to be [[TheIdealist an idealist]], until she learned the hard way that the good guys don't always win, and they aren't always that good. As she notes in ''The Necromancer's Ambition'':
-->Even though I was relieved that she finally got the hint, I also felt kind of bad. The conviction to act, to do what she thinks is right, isn’t the most common quality around. But a pony has to know her limits and that’s something she needed to figure out before she learned it the hard way. Or worse, became the lesson for somepony else.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Played with. Dusky refrains from certain Equestrian-isms associated with the original canon--she says "people" instead of "ponies", "anyone" instead of "anypony", etc. This signifies that she travels and interacts with other species more than the average pony does.
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Dusky is alive because she knows how to run the hell away when faced with a fight she can't win.
* MyGreatestFailure:
** Dusky is haunted by the outcome of her first "adventure". [[spoiler:She found evidence incriminating the Leaf Cartel and turned it over to the Guard, but she wasn't careful enough at covering her tracks. The Cartel attacked the Guard's safehouse, and several Guard ponies died protecting Dusky.]]
** Her role in the events of ''Evil's Twilight'' weighs on her as well. She was with Twilight during the blizzard, so she blames herself for Twilight getting lost and entering the cave, and for everything that followed.
* ProperlyParanoid: Dusky is constantly on-guard, as though any stranger might attack her without warning--owing to the self-defense training drilled into her by her mother. [[spoiler:An organized crime family has been hunting her for years]], so that paranoia has saved Dusky's life several times.
-->Some ponies might balk at the idea of keeping a wingblade so close at hoof, but a lone mare on the road needs to be prepared.
* ScarfOfAsskicking: Dusky wears a blue scarf and hides her wingblade inside it.
* AWorldHalfFull: This series uses the idea that, far from the eyes of the Princesses and the mane six, Equestria has more violence and corruption than we see on the show. But there is still hope and the potential to make things better. As Dusky explains in ''The Necromancer's Ambition'':
-->“Sometimes bad things happen. Sometimes bad people win. Sometimes something beautiful is lost beneath the sands of time, like a forgotten rainbow. But sooner or later, someone will dig it up and remember that the world does have nice things.”
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[[folder:''The Necromancer's Ambition'']]
* BadPowersGoodPeople: Ivory the necromancer is firmly in CreepyGood territory.
* BittersweetEnding: Dusky and her friends score a significant victory ([[spoiler:Gaelle dies and her bandits scatter]]), but lose their best hope of taking down the Big Bad and have no choice but to flee Pasture.
* BleedEmAndWeep: When Blaze kills an enemy for the first time, she starts to go into shock, mechanically stabbing the body over and over. Dusky has to talk her back to reality.
* BodySurf: The original legend of the Necromancer stated that, every time he started to get too old, he would transfer his mind into a new body. [[spoiler:Dusky suspects that this is the reason the Necromancer legend persists--so the residents of Pasture would have a readymade excuse to drive ''anyone'' out of town, simply by claiming the unwanted pony is the Necromancer's latest incarnation.]]
* CameBackWrong: Ivory can revive dead animals with no side effects. But when she tries to bring a pony back from the dead:
-->''I don’t know what I missed, but it was bad. The spell brought Prideful's grandma back, but it wasn't right. She was saying weird things and didn't even recognize Prideful. They tried to talk for five minutes, but nothing was getting through.''
* CreepyGood: Ivory is a necromancer--but she uses her power mostly to help others or defend herself. In fact, by the time Dusky arrives in Pasture, Ivory has already been defending the town from bandits for years.
* CryingWolf: Pasture's Mayor has sent a lot of hunting parties in search of the Necromancer, to absolutely no effect. Earnest Care notes that it's happened so many times, the Equestrian Guard no longer responds to the mayor's requests for aid.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Ivory tried to bring Prideful's grandmother back from the dead, but it didn't go right. Prideful blamed Ivory for what happened. In response, he accused Ivory of being the "evil Necromancer" from the legend, and used his family connections to drive her family out of town, as well as her only friend and his family. And when he realized Ivory hadn't died in the woods, he hired bandits to hunt and kill her. And he kept up that hunt for ''years''.
* DeathOfAThousandCuts: [[spoiler:Gaelle]] is taken down by zombie birds {{Zerg Rush}}ing her, pecking and scratching until she's too weak to stand. Then a mob of angry ponies finishes her off.
* TheDrifter: Dusky's just passing through Pasture, and doesn't ''want'' to get involved in the local problems with the Necromancer. But she winds up in the thick of things anyway.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Ivory, the CreepyGood necromancer, has an ivory coat and black mane.
* FireForgedFriends: Dusky and Ivory.
-->They say that friendship forged in the trials of fire is among the strongest things in the world. On that day, I felt no statement could be truer.
* {{Foil}}: Dusky notes that both of the other major protagonists are foils for her:
** She and Ivory are both outsiders who were wronged by corrupt authority figures.
** Blaze is a WideEyedIdealist, eagerly looking for an adventure--just like Dusky used to be.
* [[HealingHands Healing Hooves]]: Ivory has healing powers, closely tied to her necromantic abilities. She doesn't just bring the dead back to life, but she fully restores them (bodily, at least). She can heal the living just as effectively.
* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Dusky carries a wingblade for self-protection--and it almost gets her killed. One of Ivory's zombie sentries notices Dusky's blade, mistakes her for a bandit, and attacks her.
* ItGetsEasier / ItNeverGetsAnyEasier: Dusky notes that how you deal with the stress, after the fact, is what determines if killing gets easier or not.
-->“Different people have different ways of coping. But that’s just it. It’s coping, learning to move on, but never completely leaving the pain behind. It doesn’t simply vanish into thin air. It’s not easy and I don’t think it ever should be. [...] Don't let yourself reach a point where killing is easy, because that's when you lose yourself.”
* {{Necromancer}}: Ivory--she even has a cutie mark for reviving the dead.
* PutDownYourGunAndStepAway: The fake necromancer takes Blaze hostage, then threatens to kill her if the real Necromancer doesn't call off her real zombies--and he thinks Dusky is the Necromancer. She's smart enough to know ''not'' to comply with his request:
-->[Dusky said,] “If I disarm, you’ll kill us both. But if you kill her, you’ll be dead in an instant. How about you surrender and I’ll think about sparing your life?”
* ARareSentence:
-->“Can… can your zombies cover me?”\\
Had the situation been any less dire, I might have laughed. Never in a thousand years did I think I’d utter those words.
* TheRealRemingtonSteele: Back when Ivory was just a filly, there was already a legend of an "evil Necromancer" living in the woods. When Ivory developed her powers, Prideful drove her out of town by claiming that she was the Necromancer's latest incarnation. By the present day, the legend has grown to the extent that the bandits exploit it by posing as a Necromancer (and an army of zombie ponies) themselves.
* RefusalOfTheCall: Early on, Blaze tries to recruit Dusky into the fight against the Necromancer. Dusky declines--she's seen enough adventure to know that she wants nothing to do with this one. Then she gets attacked by a zombie bird and spends a few days recovering in Ivory's cabin, but she ''still'' doesn't want to get involved in Ivory's war against the bandits. What finally convinces Dusky to intervene is seeing Blaze on the verge of getting herself killed by marching into a trap.
* ShapedLikeItself:
-->True to its name, Pasture was a small village sitting in the middle of a plain.
* RaisingTheSteaks: Many of Ivory's zombies are forest animals, rather than ponies.
* TalkToTheFist:
-->With a flourish, he continued. “No, I felt it and knew. Knew that you didn’t bear the touch of dark m—”\\
I lunged, deciding that if he was going to make death threats and then go on to showboat, he was going to pay for his ego.
* TeleportSpam: In his second fight, the fake necromancer teleports to disorient his enemies. [[spoiler:It's not enough, because he's outnumbered. Blaze gives the killing blow while he's focused on Dusky.]]
* ThatWasTheLastEntry: Dusky reads Ivory's journal. She gets just enough information about Ivory's childhood to call into doubt her earlier assumption that Ivory is evil--then the journal ends. However, when Dusky asks to hear the rest of the story, Ivory is right there and happy enough to explain.
* TownWithADarkSecret: Pasture, with its rumors of a Necromancer. [[spoiler:The ''real'' dirty secret is that the Mayor is corrupt and vindictive. He's perpetuating the legends of the evil Necromancer while cozying up with organized crime, purely to get personal revenge against Ivory.]]
* VoodooZombie: The animals and ponies that Ivory brings back to life are completely under her thrall.
* WideEyedIdealist: Blaze, who's gung-ho about leaping into battle against the forces of evil, and says she's willing to die for a good cause, but doesn't seem to grasp the possibility of losing.
* XanatosGambit: When Ivory and the bandit leader openly fight in the middle of Pasture, the Mayor's timely speech turns the onlooking crowd against both of them. This leaves Ivory in a bind: if she fights back, she'll kill at least some of the mob and forever cement her reputation as a dangerous monster. But if she doesn't fight back, the mob will kill her ''now''. [[spoiler:Ivory takes her chances fleeing. She escapes thanks to timely intervention from Earnest Care.]]
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[[folder:''Evil's Twilight'']]
* AmbitionIsEvil: Played with. The BigBad of this story claims that he's merely helping mortal ponies realize their ambitions, by [[TheUnfettered making them throw off any concerns that might hold them back]]. Luna argues in response that his interpretation of ambition is off-base:
-->“If you ask me, the real negative emotions are those that get in the way of my pony’s ambitions. Those sentiments that hold them back, those are the ones that put them truly off course.”\\
[Luna said,] “You make a good point. Those emotions can be troublesome at times. [...] But a pony’s own ambitions aren’t everything. They are not as simple as you make them out to be. Many genuinely desire to see their friends and family happy, to see them succeed. And those desires are not any less worthwhile than their own dreams.”\\
“Hmph, seems I spoke too soon. You do not truly understand. I wonder how long until you do, though.”
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: While her friends fight Nameless outside, [[spoiler:Twilight]] fights Nameless inside, for control of her own body. It takes the form of a magical RealityWarper brawl.
* BlackMagic: Destruction magic, spells designed specifically to kill, are regarded as this. Princess Celestia made Twilight promise not to study that field until Celestia felt she was ready. [[spoiler:When Misty pressures Twilight to learn one such spell anyway, it's the readers' first clue that she's not to be trusted.]]
* BodySurf: When its current host dies, the Nameless will leap into a new one--usually the same pony who just killed its host.
* TheCavalry: Pinkie and Rainbow Dash are surrounded and outnumbered by dog-worms. They prepare to make their LastStand--until Dusky and Ditzy swoop in with firebombs to rescue them.
* TheCorrupter: The Nameless starts off as this, amplifying and exploiting the host pony's negative emotions--until it progresses to outright DemonicPossession.
* CurseCutShort: [[spoiler:The Nameless's last words are cut off by the rainbow attack from the Elements of Harmony.]]
-->‘YOU BI-’\\
The rainbow finished closing in, its deafening roar overpowering even her thoughts.
* DealWithTheDevil: Misty offers Twilight the necessary magic spells to survive and escape the cave. In exchange, Twilight just needs to smash a burial urn and cast a particular spell to free Misty from the mortal plane. [[spoiler:That isn't actually Misty, and she's lying. What the spell really does is bind Nameless to Twilight, enabling the spirit to hijack her body.]]
* DemonicPossession: After enough time in a pony host, Nameless will eventually take complete control over the body and trap the pony inside their own brain--and use the body to go on a killing rampage. [[spoiler:And Twilight Sparkle is its latest victim.]]
* DiedHappilyEverAfter: After the BigBad's final demise, the grateful ghost of [[spoiler:the real Misty]] appears briefly to Twilight.
* DreamingOfTimesGoneBy: After escaping from the cave, Twilight starts having vivid dreams of events from thousands of years ago.
* TheDogBitesBack: During the BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind, the minds of Nameless's prior victims rebel against it at a crucial moment, [[spoiler:allowing Twilight to overpower Nameless and regain control of her body]].
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: This was the first-written story in the series, so Dusky only shows up as a supporting character. This is also the only story to use third-person narration and multiple viewpoint characters.
* {{Hallucinations}}: As Twilight's dreams of the ancient past persist, she starts seeing these visions while she's awake as well.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: At the beginning, Nameless tricks Twilight into binding herself to it. [[spoiler:At the end, when Nameless tries to flee, Twilight uses that same spell to trap Nameless, ensuring it gets the full brunt of the Elements of Harmony and winds up DeaderThanDead.]]
* HostileWeather: A blizzard during Winter Wrap-Up kicks off the plot. Twilight gets lost and injured in the whiteout; she's forced to take shelter in a cave, and then she gets snowed in.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: After teleporting back to Ponyville, Twilight's memory of her ordeal in the cave gets foggy. She can still remember the spells she learned, but no other details--particularly not the name of the pony who helped her in the cave.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: The effects of possession by the Nameless, as observed by an outsider. The pony starts off doing morally dubious acts in pursuit of a goal that's in-character for them (such as a Guard, trying to defend his hometown from Diamond Dogs, who assassinated the Diamond Emperor). Then the Nameless takes over, and the pony suddenly becomes a genocidal maniac (such as the aforementioned Guard, who then attempted to kill Celestia and Luna).
* MixAndMatchCritters: "Dog-worms" lurk inside the cave--four-legged worm creatures that growl like dogs.
* NoNameGiven: As far as anypony knows, the evil spirit simply doesn't have a name. Celestia and Luna dubbed him "Nameless" for lack of anything better to call him.
* PricelessPaperweight: Nameless gathers a number of ancient artifacts, each filled with arcane magicks. It finds one of them in Mayor Mare's office, being used as a flower vase.
* SealedEvilInACan: One with a very nasty tendency to break out of the can, no less. Celestia and Luna can seal the Nameless away, but it keeps tempting ponies to free it, and sometimes breaking out all by itself. [[spoiler:Even banishing it to the Moon isn't enough.]]
* ShootTheDog: Luna is willing to kill Twilight if that's what it takes to defeat the Nameless, even temporarily. She only holds back out of respect for Celestia's affection for Twilight, and later, the mane six's insistence that they can still save Twilight.
* UpgradeArtifact: Nameless gathers the ancient, magical artifacts in order to siphon their power into Twilight, intending to boost the unicorn until she's more magically power than even Celestia.
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[[folder:''From Dusk to Night'' / ''Mending Light'']]
* {{Adorkable}}: Night is so much in love with Dusky, so nervous around her... [[RealityEnsues that he can barely get out a full sentence when speaking to her, and Dusky just feels sorry for him.]] But as he gains more confidence, his awkwardness shrinks to a level that's actually endearing:
-->There was something oddly charming about him being so nervous about proposing a date that wasn’t a date as a follow-up to us already agreeing to go on a date.
* ChekhovsGun: Merri gives a bracer to Night as a gift; the narrative just presents it as an heirloom whose history Merri doesn't care much about. Later, it's revealed the bracer has a magic hoofblade, which proves very useful to Night. [[spoiler:And then we find out that the soul of the original owner, Bellerophon, is inside the bracer, and he winds up possessing Night's body. Which also raises the question of ''why'' Merri had a piece of Bellerophon's armor in the first place...]]
* CringeComedy: A brief scene of it. Terra encourages Night to practice, before asking Dusky out for real. Night closes his eyes and starts to speak--and then Dusky walks in and hears his entire love confession.
* EmbarrassingLastName: Night Flurry was originally known as [[spoiler:Night Light]]. He thinks the name paints him as a child afraid of the dark, so he hates it. [[spoiler:He makes peace with the name later, once he realizes it can symbolize being ''someone else's'' light in the dark.]]
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The owner of the Lusty Sea Pony tavern in Ponyville specifically asks everyone to call him Barkeep. Given Equestrian naming conventions, that might ''actually'' be his name.
* TheExile: Merriweather did something to sully her honor, and was banished from Ostfriesen as a result. Her sister, Starshadow, willingly left with her, hoping to help Merri regain her honor and eventually return.
* FauxtivationalPoster: Apparently Equestria also has their own version of the poster of a cat hanging from a tree branch, with the caption ''Hang in there, baby.'' Which makes Dusky think of something else entirely:
-->I always found myself distracted from the motivational part by the fact that in order to get their precious photo, someone had to be cruel enough to dangle their poor kitty from a tree.
* FortuneTeller: When Night wanders into the Everfree on a poorly thought-out quest to prove himself, Zecora appears to guide him back to safety. Then, sensing something that Night hadn't yet admitted to anyone, she offers him [[{{Foreshadowing}} some prescient advice]].
-->"And if you seek love for yourself and this mare, then with your choices, you must take care. Trod not upon the path of the Knight, for the path that suits you is one of light."
* FriendOrFoe: At the Fetlock Falls Winter Festival, Dusky gets on-edge after noticing a shifty stallion watching her. So when another pony approaches, in a face-concealing hood, Dusky attacks first--and finds Merri under the hood.
* FunctionalAddict: Terra and Mahogany both have have successful careers, but at nights, they regularly binge-drink themselves into oblivion at the Lusty Sea Pony.
* GambitPileup: The climax of the Ostfriesen arc. [[spoiler:Lord Firetail wants to usurp Queen Papaya and become King himself. The Descendants of the Justicar are solely loyal to the memory of Bellerophon--they follow Firetail because he has an imposter posing as Bell's reincarnation. And Broken Tooth just wants to kill everyone--he's helping Firetail fool the Descendants in hopes that their revolution will destabilize the country enough for him to swoop in and burn everything down.]]
* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: Dusky notes that she hasn't pursued romance in years, because:
-->Anyone who got close to me like that could become a target and that wouldn’t be fair.
* LetsJustBeFriends: Inverted. Dusky is open to the possibility of a romantic relationship with Night, but she insists they take things slowly and try being friends ''first''. Night agrees. Many chapters later, they do start dating.
* LoveAtFirstSight: Night is hopelessly smitten with Dusky the very first time he sees her. Dusky takes quite a bit longer to warm up to Night.
* NotRightInTheBed: After feeling much less amorous than usual for a few days, Terra accuses Star of casting a spell to "steal my sexy". And Star casually admits that she really did cast a libido-inhibiting spell on Terra. Then Merri tries to dispel it, but something goes wrong, and the spell lingers for a few weeks.
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:Night Light]] hated his old name, so he renamed himself Night Flurry to reflect his talent for winter weather work. It works the other way, too: when he opens up to Dusky about his old name, it's a sign that he's making peace with his past.
* POVSequel: Though neither story is quite a sequel, since they're both publishing simultaneously. ''From Dusk to Night'' covers events from Dusky's perspective, while ''Mending Light'' shows (mostly) the same events from Night's perspective.
* RescueRomance: Night is convinced that "an act of supreme heroism" is the only way to win Dusky over. He fantasizes about rescuing her from thugs, and her falling in love with him as a result. [[DramaticIrony It's quite ironic]]: he doesn't realize, but Dusky is a ''much'' better fighter than he is, and she doesn't care at all for his idealized view of heroism.
* SequelEscalation: This one juggles a larger cast than ''The Necromancer's Ambition'' and is already four times longer--and it isn't even half-finished yet. While ''Necromancer'' had Dusky and her friends fighting bandits over the fate of a small town, this one pits them against a wide-reaching criminal empire, a foreign army, and a ''dragon''. And they've already saved an entire country from a bloody revolution.
* ShipperOnDeck:
** Terra has a history of pointing out hot stallions and insisting they'd be a great match for Dusky. When she realizes Night has a thing for Dusky, Terra encourages them with absolutely zero subtlety.
** Blizzard gives Night the initial kick in the rump to ask Dusky out in the first place.
* SpannerInTheWorks: As noted under GambitPileup, the three factions in Ostfriesen are united because of Lord Firetail's imposter Bellerophon. [[spoiler:The arrival of the ''real'' Bellerophon exposes Firetail's deception, and the three sides almost immediately turn on each other.]]
* SpeechImpediment: Night stutters whenever he's nervous or self-conscious--which is almost always. Over the course of the story, [[CharacterDevelopment as he grows more confident and more comfortable around Dusky]], he stutters less and less.
* StalkerWithACrush: From Dusky's perspective, Night starts off as this--he follows her around Ponyville for about a month before finally speaking to her. Night's perspective reveals that he was trying to introduce himself, but kept chickening out each time.
* StupidSacrifice: When one of Merri's spells goes wrong, [[TakingTheBullet Night jumps between Dusky and the magic blast]]--not noticing that Dusky had already taken cover and wasn't really in danger. So he badly injures his wing for no good reason.
* YouAllMeetInAnInn: Starshadow and Merriweather meet the rest of the heroes by chance at the Ponyville tavern. Although Dusky and Night both knew ''of'' each other, they don't get properly introduced until meeting at the tavern as well.
* YouJustToldMe: Terra suspects Night has a crush on Dusky, so she tricks him into admitting it by pretending she already ''knows'':
-->Terrabona grinned, glancing at Mahogany who raised his glass to her in salute. “We need to talk about you and a certain mare. I know it all, so just fess up.”\\
My jaw dropped as I followed Terrabona’s look towards my friend. “M-Mahogany... you told her? Y-you told her about my confession?”\\
Mahogany raised his free hoof to his face and sighed. “Nope. I didn't. I promised I wouldn't. But you did. Just now. Smoooooooth.”
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-->-- '''Dusky Down''', from the description of ''From Dusk to Night''
The Duskyverse is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction series by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/KuroiTsubasaTenshi Kuroi Tsubasa Tenshi]] (with help from [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/Invidlord Invidlord]]), mainly focusing on the traveling pegasus, Dusky Down.
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/120195/the-necromancers-ambition The Necromancer's Ambition]]'': Dusky Down makes an unexpected detour to Pasture, a small town supposedly menaced by a Necromancer in the nearby forest. Dusky soon finds that the Necromancer is real--her name is Ivory, and she's far kinder than expected. Ivory is also at war with a gang of bandits; Dusky tries to stay uninvolved, but when a young aspiring guardsmare throws a spanner into the ongoing conflict, Dusky can't help but leap into the fray herself. (Complete.)
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/14061/evils-twilight Evil's Twilight]]'': (A side story, with Dusky just appearing as a supporting character.) A freak winter storm traps Twilight Sparkle alone in a cave system, where a mysterious voice offers the help she needs to escape. But afterwards, Twilight is troubled by strange outbursts of anger and disturbing visions of the past. Too late, the Princesses realize that a millennia-old force of evil has returned, and Twilight is its latest target. (Complete.)
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191145/from-dusk-to-night From Dusk to Night]]'' and ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191722/mending-light Mending Light]]'': Years later, Dusky bides her time in Ponyville, waiting for the chance to rejoin Ivory and free Pasture from the grip of evil. In the meantime, she reconnects with her Ponyville friends, and makes a few new ones: a pair of exiled knights from the distant country of Ostfriesen, and Night Flurry, a nervous weatherpony with a lot of emotional baggage and an obvious crush on Dusky. But figures from the past--dysfunctional family members, criminals with a grudge against Dusky, and a warrior from ancient Ostfriesen--break the peace and draw all the ponies into further conflicts. Fortunately, Dusky's friends are made of sterner stuff than she realizes. (Currently ongoing--''From Dusk to Night'' tells the story from Dusky's perspective, and ''Mending Light'' tells it from Night's perspective.)
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!! Provides examples of:
[[folder:The whole series]]
* AlternateUniverseFic: Initially meant to be a PseudocanonicalFic, but canon has {{Jossed}} certain elements since these were published. This series complies with the original episodes through most of season three, excluding "Magical Mystery Cure" and everything after. So Twilight is still a unicorn here, and the backstories for Nightmare Moon and the Elements of Harmony differ from the flashbacks in "Princess Twilight Sparkle".
* BlackMagic: Ironically, necromancers aren't inherently evil in this 'verse. But on the other hand, you have to be evil (or at least power-hungry and a little crazy) to become a Shadow Walker--one who gives up part of their soul in exchange for magic powers. [[spoiler:Gaelle, the bandit leader,]] from ''The Necromancer's Ambition'' and [[spoiler:Lord Firetail]] in ''From Dusk to Night'' are both Shadow Walkers.
* CombatPragmatist: Pretty much everyone fights dirty, especially Dusky. (The only exceptions are the few magic-users who are so powerful they don't really ''need'' to fight smart. Even so, they tend to die anyway.) A notable example is in ''The Necromancer's Ambition'' when Dusky fights a griffon and deliberately breaks one of her claws.
-->Funny thing about griffon claws: they’re a lot easier to stomp on than hooves.\\
My forehoof came down hard with a sickening crack, though Gaelle’s agonized screech quickly overtook it.
* TheCynic: Dusky used to be [[TheIdealist an idealist]], until she learned the hard way that the good guys don't always win, and they aren't always that good. As she notes in ''The Necromancer's Ambition'':
-->Even though I was relieved that she finally got the hint, I also felt kind of bad. The conviction to act, to do what she thinks is right, isn’t the most common quality around. But a pony has to know her limits and that’s something she needed to figure out before she learned it the hard way. Or worse, became the lesson for somepony else.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: Played with. Dusky refrains from certain Equestrian-isms associated with the original canon--she says "people" instead of "ponies", "anyone" instead of "anypony", etc. This signifies that she travels and interacts with other species more than the average pony does.
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Dusky is alive because she knows how to run the hell away when faced with a fight she can't win.
* MyGreatestFailure:
** Dusky is haunted by the outcome of her first "adventure". [[spoiler:She found evidence incriminating the Leaf Cartel and turned it over to the Guard, but she wasn't careful enough at covering her tracks. The Cartel attacked the Guard's safehouse, and several Guard ponies died protecting Dusky.]]
** Her role in the events of ''Evil's Twilight'' weighs on her as well. She was with Twilight during the blizzard, so she blames herself for Twilight getting lost and entering the cave, and for everything that followed.
* ProperlyParanoid: Dusky is constantly on-guard, as though any stranger might attack her without warning--owing to the self-defense training drilled into her by her mother. [[spoiler:An organized crime family has been hunting her for years]], so that paranoia has saved Dusky's life several times.
-->Some ponies might balk at the idea of keeping a wingblade so close at hoof, but a lone mare on the road needs to be prepared.
* ScarfOfAsskicking: Dusky wears a blue scarf and hides her wingblade inside it.
* AWorldHalfFull: This series uses the idea that, far from the eyes of the Princesses and the mane six, Equestria has more violence and corruption than we see on the show. But there is still hope and the potential to make things better. As Dusky explains in ''The Necromancer's Ambition'':
-->“Sometimes bad things happen. Sometimes bad people win. Sometimes something beautiful is lost beneath the sands of time, like a forgotten rainbow. But sooner or later, someone will dig it up and remember that the world does have nice things.”
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[[folder:''The Necromancer's Ambition'']]
* BadPowersGoodPeople: Ivory the necromancer is firmly in CreepyGood territory.
* BittersweetEnding: Dusky and her friends score a significant victory ([[spoiler:Gaelle dies and her bandits scatter]]), but lose their best hope of taking down the Big Bad and have no choice but to flee Pasture.
* BleedEmAndWeep: When Blaze kills an enemy for the first time, she starts to go into shock, mechanically stabbing the body over and over. Dusky has to talk her back to reality.
* BodySurf: The original legend of the Necromancer stated that, every time he started to get too old, he would transfer his mind into a new body. [[spoiler:Dusky suspects that this is the reason the Necromancer legend persists--so the residents of Pasture would have a readymade excuse to drive ''anyone'' out of town, simply by claiming the unwanted pony is the Necromancer's latest incarnation.]]
* CameBackWrong: Ivory can revive dead animals with no side effects. But when she tries to bring a pony back from the dead:
-->''I don’t know what I missed, but it was bad. The spell brought Prideful's grandma back, but it wasn't right. She was saying weird things and didn't even recognize Prideful. They tried to talk for five minutes, but nothing was getting through.''
* CreepyGood: Ivory is a necromancer--but she uses her power mostly to help others or defend herself. In fact, by the time Dusky arrives in Pasture, Ivory has already been defending the town from bandits for years.
* CryingWolf: Pasture's Mayor has sent a lot of hunting parties in search of the Necromancer, to absolutely no effect. Earnest Care notes that it's happened so many times, the Equestrian Guard no longer responds to the mayor's requests for aid.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Ivory tried to bring Prideful's grandmother back from the dead, but it didn't go right. Prideful blamed Ivory for what happened. In response, he accused Ivory of being the "evil Necromancer" from the legend, and used his family connections to drive her family out of town, as well as her only friend and his family. And when he realized Ivory hadn't died in the woods, he hired bandits to hunt and kill her. And he kept up that hunt for ''years''.
* DeathOfAThousandCuts: [[spoiler:Gaelle]] is taken down by zombie birds {{Zerg Rush}}ing her, pecking and scratching until she's too weak to stand. Then a mob of angry ponies finishes her off.
* TheDrifter: Dusky's just passing through Pasture, and doesn't ''want'' to get involved in the local problems with the Necromancer. But she winds up in the thick of things anyway.
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Ivory, the CreepyGood necromancer, has an ivory coat and black mane.
* FireForgedFriends: Dusky and Ivory.
-->They say that friendship forged in the trials of fire is among the strongest things in the world. On that day, I felt no statement could be truer.
* {{Foil}}: Dusky notes that both of the other major protagonists are foils for her:
** She and Ivory are both outsiders who were wronged by corrupt authority figures.
** Blaze is a WideEyedIdealist, eagerly looking for an adventure--just like Dusky used to be.
* [[HealingHands Healing Hooves]]: Ivory has healing powers, closely tied to her necromantic abilities. She doesn't just bring the dead back to life, but she fully restores them (bodily, at least). She can heal the living just as effectively.
* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Dusky carries a wingblade for self-protection--and it almost gets her killed. One of Ivory's zombie sentries notices Dusky's blade, mistakes her for a bandit, and attacks her.
* ItGetsEasier / ItNeverGetsAnyEasier: Dusky notes that how you deal with the stress, after the fact, is what determines if killing gets easier or not.
-->“Different people have different ways of coping. But that’s just it. It’s coping, learning to move on, but never completely leaving the pain behind. It doesn’t simply vanish into thin air. It’s not easy and I don’t think it ever should be. [...] Don't let yourself reach a point where killing is easy, because that's when you lose yourself.”
* {{Necromancer}}: Ivory--she even has a cutie mark for reviving the dead.
* PutDownYourGunAndStepAway: The fake necromancer takes Blaze hostage, then threatens to kill her if the real Necromancer doesn't call off her real zombies--and he thinks Dusky is the Necromancer. She's smart enough to know ''not'' to comply with his request:
-->[Dusky said,] “If I disarm, you’ll kill us both. But if you kill her, you’ll be dead in an instant. How about you surrender and I’ll think about sparing your life?”
* ARareSentence:
-->“Can… can your zombies cover me?”\\
Had the situation been any less dire, I might have laughed. Never in a thousand years did I think I’d utter those words.
* TheRealRemingtonSteele: Back when Ivory was just a filly, there was already a legend of an "evil Necromancer" living in the woods. When Ivory developed her powers, Prideful drove her out of town by claiming that she was the Necromancer's latest incarnation. By the present day, the legend has grown to the extent that the bandits exploit it by posing as a Necromancer (and an army of zombie ponies) themselves.
* RefusalOfTheCall: Early on, Blaze tries to recruit Dusky into the fight against the Necromancer. Dusky declines--she's seen enough adventure to know that she wants nothing to do with this one. Then she gets attacked by a zombie bird and spends a few days recovering in Ivory's cabin, but she ''still'' doesn't want to get involved in Ivory's war against the bandits. What finally convinces Dusky to intervene is seeing Blaze on the verge of getting herself killed by marching into a trap.
* ShapedLikeItself:
-->True to its name, Pasture was a small village sitting in the middle of a plain.
* RaisingTheSteaks: Many of Ivory's zombies are forest animals, rather than ponies.
* TalkToTheFist:
-->With a flourish, he continued. “No, I felt it and knew. Knew that you didn’t bear the touch of dark m—”\\
I lunged, deciding that if he was going to make death threats and then go on to showboat, he was going to pay for his ego.
* TeleportSpam: In his second fight, the fake necromancer teleports to disorient his enemies. [[spoiler:It's not enough, because he's outnumbered. Blaze gives the killing blow while he's focused on Dusky.]]
* ThatWasTheLastEntry: Dusky reads Ivory's journal. She gets just enough information about Ivory's childhood to call into doubt her earlier assumption that Ivory is evil--then the journal ends. However, when Dusky asks to hear the rest of the story, Ivory is right there and happy enough to explain.
* TownWithADarkSecret: Pasture, with its rumors of a Necromancer. [[spoiler:The ''real'' dirty secret is that the Mayor is corrupt and vindictive. He's perpetuating the legends of the evil Necromancer while cozying up with organized crime, purely to get personal revenge against Ivory.]]
* VoodooZombie: The animals and ponies that Ivory brings back to life are completely under her thrall.
* WideEyedIdealist: Blaze, who's gung-ho about leaping into battle against the forces of evil, and says she's willing to die for a good cause, but doesn't seem to grasp the possibility of losing.
* XanatosGambit: When Ivory and the bandit leader openly fight in the middle of Pasture, the Mayor's timely speech turns the onlooking crowd against both of them. This leaves Ivory in a bind: if she fights back, she'll kill at least some of the mob and forever cement her reputation as a dangerous monster. But if she doesn't fight back, the mob will kill her ''now''. [[spoiler:Ivory takes her chances fleeing. She escapes thanks to timely intervention from Earnest Care.]]
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[[folder:''Evil's Twilight'']]
* AmbitionIsEvil: Played with. The BigBad of this story claims that he's merely helping mortal ponies realize their ambitions, by [[TheUnfettered making them throw off any concerns that might hold them back]]. Luna argues in response that his interpretation of ambition is off-base:
-->“If you ask me, the real negative emotions are those that get in the way of my pony’s ambitions. Those sentiments that hold them back, those are the ones that put them truly off course.”\\
[Luna said,] “You make a good point. Those emotions can be troublesome at times. [...] But a pony’s own ambitions aren’t everything. They are not as simple as you make them out to be. Many genuinely desire to see their friends and family happy, to see them succeed. And those desires are not any less worthwhile than their own dreams.”\\
“Hmph, seems I spoke too soon. You do not truly understand. I wonder how long until you do, though.”
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: While her friends fight Nameless outside, [[spoiler:Twilight]] fights Nameless inside, for control of her own body. It takes the form of a magical RealityWarper brawl.
* BlackMagic: Destruction magic, spells designed specifically to kill, are regarded as this. Princess Celestia made Twilight promise not to study that field until Celestia felt she was ready. [[spoiler:When Misty pressures Twilight to learn one such spell anyway, it's the readers' first clue that she's not to be trusted.]]
* BodySurf: When its current host dies, the Nameless will leap into a new one--usually the same pony who just killed its host.
* TheCavalry: Pinkie and Rainbow Dash are surrounded and outnumbered by dog-worms. They prepare to make their LastStand--until Dusky and Ditzy swoop in with firebombs to rescue them.
* TheCorrupter: The Nameless starts off as this, amplifying and exploiting the host pony's negative emotions--until it progresses to outright DemonicPossession.
* CurseCutShort: [[spoiler:The Nameless's last words are cut off by the rainbow attack from the Elements of Harmony.]]
-->‘YOU BI-’\\
The rainbow finished closing in, its deafening roar overpowering even her thoughts.
* DealWithTheDevil: Misty offers Twilight the necessary magic spells to survive and escape the cave. In exchange, Twilight just needs to smash a burial urn and cast a particular spell to free Misty from the mortal plane. [[spoiler:That isn't actually Misty, and she's lying. What the spell really does is bind Nameless to Twilight, enabling the spirit to hijack her body.]]
* DemonicPossession: After enough time in a pony host, Nameless will eventually take complete control over the body and trap the pony inside their own brain--and use the body to go on a killing rampage. [[spoiler:And Twilight Sparkle is its latest victim.]]
* DiedHappilyEverAfter: After the BigBad's final demise, the grateful ghost of [[spoiler:the real Misty]] appears briefly to Twilight.
* DreamingOfTimesGoneBy: After escaping from the cave, Twilight starts having vivid dreams of events from thousands of years ago.
* TheDogBitesBack: During the BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind, the minds of Nameless's prior victims rebel against it at a crucial moment, [[spoiler:allowing Twilight to overpower Nameless and regain control of her body]].
* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: This was the first-written story in the series, so Dusky only shows up as a supporting character. This is also the only story to use third-person narration and multiple viewpoint characters.
* {{Hallucinations}}: As Twilight's dreams of the ancient past persist, she starts seeing these visions while she's awake as well.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: At the beginning, Nameless tricks Twilight into binding herself to it. [[spoiler:At the end, when Nameless tries to flee, Twilight uses that same spell to trap Nameless, ensuring it gets the full brunt of the Elements of Harmony and winds up DeaderThanDead.]]
* HostileWeather: A blizzard during Winter Wrap-Up kicks off the plot. Twilight gets lost and injured in the whiteout; she's forced to take shelter in a cave, and then she gets snowed in.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: After teleporting back to Ponyville, Twilight's memory of her ordeal in the cave gets foggy. She can still remember the spells she learned, but no other details--particularly not the name of the pony who helped her in the cave.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: The effects of possession by the Nameless, as observed by an outsider. The pony starts off doing morally dubious acts in pursuit of a goal that's in-character for them (such as a Guard, trying to defend his hometown from Diamond Dogs, who assassinated the Diamond Emperor). Then the Nameless takes over, and the pony suddenly becomes a genocidal maniac (such as the aforementioned Guard, who then attempted to kill Celestia and Luna).
* MixAndMatchCritters: "Dog-worms" lurk inside the cave--four-legged worm creatures that growl like dogs.
* NoNameGiven: As far as anypony knows, the evil spirit simply doesn't have a name. Celestia and Luna dubbed him "Nameless" for lack of anything better to call him.
* PricelessPaperweight: Nameless gathers a number of ancient artifacts, each filled with arcane magicks. It finds one of them in Mayor Mare's office, being used as a flower vase.
* SealedEvilInACan: One with a very nasty tendency to break out of the can, no less. Celestia and Luna can seal the Nameless away, but it keeps tempting ponies to free it, and sometimes breaking out all by itself. [[spoiler:Even banishing it to the Moon isn't enough.]]
* ShootTheDog: Luna is willing to kill Twilight if that's what it takes to defeat the Nameless, even temporarily. She only holds back out of respect for Celestia's affection for Twilight, and later, the mane six's insistence that they can still save Twilight.
* UpgradeArtifact: Nameless gathers the ancient, magical artifacts in order to siphon their power into Twilight, intending to boost the unicorn until she's more magically power than even Celestia.
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[[folder:''From Dusk to Night'' / ''Mending Light'']]
* {{Adorkable}}: Night is so much in love with Dusky, so nervous around her... [[RealityEnsues that he can barely get out a full sentence when speaking to her, and Dusky just feels sorry for him.]] But as he gains more confidence, his awkwardness shrinks to a level that's actually endearing:
-->There was something oddly charming about him being so nervous about proposing a date that wasn’t a date as a follow-up to us already agreeing to go on a date.
* ChekhovsGun: Merri gives a bracer to Night as a gift; the narrative just presents it as an heirloom whose history Merri doesn't care much about. Later, it's revealed the bracer has a magic hoofblade, which proves very useful to Night. [[spoiler:And then we find out that the soul of the original owner, Bellerophon, is inside the bracer, and he winds up possessing Night's body. Which also raises the question of ''why'' Merri had a piece of Bellerophon's armor in the first place...]]
* CringeComedy: A brief scene of it. Terra encourages Night to practice, before asking Dusky out for real. Night closes his eyes and starts to speak--and then Dusky walks in and hears his entire love confession.
* EmbarrassingLastName: Night Flurry was originally known as [[spoiler:Night Light]]. He thinks the name paints him as a child afraid of the dark, so he hates it. [[spoiler:He makes peace with the name later, once he realizes it can symbolize being ''someone else's'' light in the dark.]]
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The owner of the Lusty Sea Pony tavern in Ponyville specifically asks everyone to call him Barkeep. Given Equestrian naming conventions, that might ''actually'' be his name.
* TheExile: Merriweather did something to sully her honor, and was banished from Ostfriesen as a result. Her sister, Starshadow, willingly left with her, hoping to help Merri regain her honor and eventually return.
* FauxtivationalPoster: Apparently Equestria also has their own version of the poster of a cat hanging from a tree branch, with the caption ''Hang in there, baby.'' Which makes Dusky think of something else entirely:
-->I always found myself distracted from the motivational part by the fact that in order to get their precious photo, someone had to be cruel enough to dangle their poor kitty from a tree.
* FortuneTeller: When Night wanders into the Everfree on a poorly thought-out quest to prove himself, Zecora appears to guide him back to safety. Then, sensing something that Night hadn't yet admitted to anyone, she offers him [[{{Foreshadowing}} some prescient advice]].
-->"And if you seek love for yourself and this mare, then with your choices, you must take care. Trod not upon the path of the Knight, for the path that suits you is one of light."
* FriendOrFoe: At the Fetlock Falls Winter Festival, Dusky gets on-edge after noticing a shifty stallion watching her. So when another pony approaches, in a face-concealing hood, Dusky attacks first--and finds Merri under the hood.
* FunctionalAddict: Terra and Mahogany both have have successful careers, but at nights, they regularly binge-drink themselves into oblivion at the Lusty Sea Pony.
* GambitPileup: The climax of the Ostfriesen arc. [[spoiler:Lord Firetail wants to usurp Queen Papaya and become King himself. The Descendants of the Justicar are solely loyal to the memory of Bellerophon--they follow Firetail because he has an imposter posing as Bell's reincarnation. And Broken Tooth just wants to kill everyone--he's helping Firetail fool the Descendants in hopes that their revolution will destabilize the country enough for him to swoop in and burn everything down.]]
* ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: Dusky notes that she hasn't pursued romance in years, because:
-->Anyone who got close to me like that could become a target and that wouldn’t be fair.
* LetsJustBeFriends: Inverted. Dusky is open to the possibility of a romantic relationship with Night, but she insists they take things slowly and try being friends ''first''. Night agrees. Many chapters later, they do start dating.
* LoveAtFirstSight: Night is hopelessly smitten with Dusky the very first time he sees her. Dusky takes quite a bit longer to warm up to Night.
* NotRightInTheBed: After feeling much less amorous than usual for a few days, Terra accuses Star of casting a spell to "steal my sexy". And Star casually admits that she really did cast a libido-inhibiting spell on Terra. Then Merri tries to dispel it, but something goes wrong, and the spell lingers for a few weeks.
* MeaningfulRename: [[spoiler:Night Light]] hated his old name, so he renamed himself Night Flurry to reflect his talent for winter weather work. It works the other way, too: when he opens up to Dusky about his old name, it's a sign that he's making peace with his past.
* POVSequel: Though neither story is quite a sequel, since they're both publishing simultaneously. ''From Dusk to Night'' covers events from Dusky's perspective, while ''Mending Light'' shows (mostly) the same events from Night's perspective.
* RescueRomance: Night is convinced that "an act of supreme heroism" is the only way to win Dusky over. He fantasizes about rescuing her from thugs, and her falling in love with him as a result. [[DramaticIrony It's quite ironic]]: he doesn't realize, but Dusky is a ''much'' better fighter than he is, and she doesn't care at all for his idealized view of heroism.
* SequelEscalation: This one juggles a larger cast than ''The Necromancer's Ambition'' and is already four times longer--and it isn't even half-finished yet. While ''Necromancer'' had Dusky and her friends fighting bandits over the fate of a small town, this one pits them against a wide-reaching criminal empire, a foreign army, and a ''dragon''. And they've already saved an entire country from a bloody revolution.
* ShipperOnDeck:
** Terra has a history of pointing out hot stallions and insisting they'd be a great match for Dusky. When she realizes Night has a thing for Dusky, Terra encourages them with absolutely zero subtlety.
** Blizzard gives Night the initial kick in the rump to ask Dusky out in the first place.
* SpannerInTheWorks: As noted under GambitPileup, the three factions in Ostfriesen are united because of Lord Firetail's imposter Bellerophon. [[spoiler:The arrival of the ''real'' Bellerophon exposes Firetail's deception, and the three sides almost immediately turn on each other.]]
* SpeechImpediment: Night stutters whenever he's nervous or self-conscious--which is almost always. Over the course of the story, [[CharacterDevelopment as he grows more confident and more comfortable around Dusky]], he stutters less and less.
* StalkerWithACrush: From Dusky's perspective, Night starts off as this--he follows her around Ponyville for about a month before finally speaking to her. Night's perspective reveals that he was trying to introduce himself, but kept chickening out each time.
* StupidSacrifice: When one of Merri's spells goes wrong, [[TakingTheBullet Night jumps between Dusky and the magic blast]]--not noticing that Dusky had already taken cover and wasn't really in danger. So he badly injures his wing for no good reason.
* YouAllMeetInAnInn: Starshadow and Merriweather meet the rest of the heroes by chance at the Ponyville tavern. Although Dusky and Night both knew ''of'' each other, they don't get properly introduced until meeting at the tavern as well.
* YouJustToldMe: Terra suspects Night has a crush on Dusky, so she tricks him into admitting it by pretending she already ''knows'':
-->Terrabona grinned, glancing at Mahogany who raised his glass to her in salute. “We need to talk about you and a certain mare. I know it all, so just fess up.”\\
My jaw dropped as I followed Terrabona’s look towards my friend. “M-Mahogany... you told her? Y-you told her about my confession?”\\
Mahogany raised his free hoof to his face and sighed. “Nope. I didn't. I promised I wouldn't. But you did. Just now. Smoooooooth.”
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