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* MuggingTheMonster: In Chapter 13, a pervert on the train Alex and Kasumi are riding gropes Kasumi's butt, and promptly gets laid out flat for it.
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* MuggingTheMonster: In Chapter 13, a pervert on the train Alex and Kasumi are riding gropes Kasumi's butt, [[PervertRevengeMode and promptly gets laid out flat for it.it]].
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* {{Expy}}: Nanako is one for Misaki from ''LightNovel/WelcomeToTheNHK'', even wanting to seduce Alex to prove her father wrong.
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* {{Expy}}: Nanako is one for Misaki from ''LightNovel/WelcomeToTheNHK'', ''Literature/WelcomeToTheNHK'', even wanting to seduce Alex to prove her father wrong.
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* ClarkKenting[=/=]PaperThinDisguise: Kasumi disguises herself in public as an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent named Sakura Misaka by simply [[PurelyAestheticGlasses wearing glasses]] and [[BraidsOfAction braiding her hair]]. She's FamedInStory thanks to the Dead or Alive tournaments, and still no one catches on. It's taken UpToEleven in Chapter 22 when her friends at school arrange for Kasumi/Sakura to cosplay as herself at a DOA convention and still remain none the wiser. So far, the only people to see through the disguise other than Alex are Seiji and Nanako, though Kasumi suspects in Chapter 21 that Alex's mother is on to her.
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* ClarkKenting[=/=]PaperThinDisguise: Kasumi disguises herself in public as an OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent named Sakura Misaka by simply [[PurelyAestheticGlasses wearing glasses]] and [[BraidsOfAction braiding her hair]]. She's FamedInStory thanks to the Dead or Alive tournaments, and still no one catches on. It's taken UpToEleven in In Chapter 22 when 22, her friends at school arrange for Kasumi/Sakura to cosplay as herself at a DOA convention and still remain none the wiser. So far, the only people to see through the disguise other than Alex are Seiji and Nanako, though Kasumi suspects in Chapter 21 that Alex's mother is on to her.
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* GossipyHens: When Alex and Kasumi pose as a couple in the subway, a pair of old men observe the two and comment that Kasumi is [[GoldDigger probably only dating Alex for money and that he's not the only guy she does this with]]. Alex shuts them up with a DeathGlare.
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* UnderestimatingBadassery: A couple of martial artists who were rejected from the Dead or Alive tournament dismiss the female fighters as only "pretending". Hitomi and Kasumi make them realize how wrong they are when the group makes threats against the former and harass people at the DOA convention.
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* DangerouslyShortSkirt: A teenage girl wearing one of these nearly becomes a victim of an upskirter in Chapter 11, though Alex stops it.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent: Part of the reason Kasumi swears her allegiance to Alex is because she sees much of the same anger and hatred in him as she sees in Ayane, and hopes to save him from himself.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Part of the reason Kasumi swears her allegiance to Alex is because she sees much of the same anger and hatred in him as she sees in Ayane, and hopes to save him from himself.
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* AerithAndBob: Alex's sisters are named Rika and Mayu.
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* AerithAndBob: Downplayed by Alex's sisters who are named Rika and Mayu.Mayu. Not really uncommon in names in Japan, however like Alex, both of his sisters are ethnically French-American.
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!!'''This fic contains examples of the following tropes (Beware of untagged spoilers):'''
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* YamatoNadeshiko: Nanako's father wants her to be one, but she has other plans in life.
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* YamatoNadeshiko: Nanako's father wants her to be one, but she has other plans in life.life.
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* WholePlotReference: As stated before, to ''Manga/KimiWaPetto''.
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* WholePlotReference: As stated before, to ''Manga/KimiWaPetto''.''Manga/YoureMyPet''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3938599/1/Kunoichis-Like-Us Kunoichis Like Us]]'' is a ''VideoGame/DeadOrAlive'' fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/589118/Damon-Black Damon Black]]'', following a similar plot formula to the manga ''[[Manga/KimiWaPetto Tramps Like Us]]''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3938599/1/Kunoichis-Like-Us Kunoichis Like Us]]'' is a ''VideoGame/DeadOrAlive'' fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/589118/Damon-Black Damon Black]]'', following a similar plot formula to the manga ''[[Manga/KimiWaPetto Tramps Like Us]]''.
''Manga/YoureMyPet''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3938599/1/Kunoichis-Like-Us Kunoichis Like Us]]'' is a ''VideoGame/DeadOrAlive'' FanFic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/589118/Damon-Black Damon Black]]'', following a similar plot formula to the manga ''[[Manga/KimiWaPetto Tramps Like Us]]''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3938599/1/Kunoichis-Like-Us Kunoichis Like Us]]'' is a ''VideoGame/DeadOrAlive'' FanFic fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/589118/Damon-Black Damon Black]]'', following a similar plot formula to the manga ''[[Manga/KimiWaPetto Tramps Like Us]]''.
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* {{OC}}: Alex Kane, Nanako Izumi... the list goes on.
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* {{OC}}: OriginalCharacter: Alex Kane, Nanako Izumi... the list goes on.
