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* ShoutOut: An elderly unicorn uses the Jedi Mind Trick from ''Film/StarWars'' to gain access to Ferrous Dominous, and is himself a CaptainErsatz of Ben Kenobi.
** Silver Spoon finds Scootaloo's Chaos-granted superpower of UnstoppableRage underwhelming, similar to nobody taking [[TheBerserker Mr. Furious]] from ''Film/MysteryMen'' seriously.
** Silver Spoon finds Scootaloo's Chaos-granted superpower of UnstoppableRage underwhelming, similar to nobody taking [[TheBerserker Mr. Furious]] from ''Film/MysteryMen'' seriously.
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* RunningGag: Humans are absolutely blown away by cragodiles, and someone will ''always'' comment on "alligators made of rocks".
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Serith honestly thought returning something he stole ([[spoiler: The Elements of Harmony]]) would endear him to Celestia.
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* FluffyTamer: Fluttershy makes riends with a group of daemon engines.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Rainbow Dash's attempt to make Tellis knock himself out by [[ItMakesSenseInContext flying into a wall of Fluttershy's cottage]], after enraging Tellis enough to make him chase her out of Ponyville. She didn't take into account that Tellis weighs about 600 pounds, is flying just as fast as she is, and that Fluttershy's cottage is made out of wood.
* DidntSeeThatComing: The Tau having not had much contact with humans outside of the Imperium and are shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos.
* DidntSeeThatComing: The Tau having not had much contact with humans outside of the Imperium and are shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Rainbow Dash's attempt to make Tellis knock himself out by [[ItMakesSenseInContext flying into a wall of Fluttershy's cottage]], after enraging Tellis enough to make him chase her out of Ponyville. She didn't take into account that Tellis is a [=supersoldier=] who weighs about 600 pounds, is flying just as fast as she is, and that Fluttershy's cottage is made out of wood.
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* BadVibrations: Used with Big Mac's apple juice to show that a Greater Gnarloc is stomping towards the Apple farm. For bonus points, Pinkie naturally shows up to say that she remembers this scene from [[Film/JurassicPark Draconic Park]], directed by somepony named Stephen Spielbuck.
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* BadVibrations: Used with Big Mac's apple juice to show that a Greater Gnarloc Knarloc is stomping towards the Apple farm. For bonus points, Pinkie naturally shows up to say that she remembers this scene from [[Film/JurassicPark Draconic Park]], directed by somepony named Stephen Spielbuck.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Tellis of the Iron Warriors is simultaneously a discussed and defied example. He is certainly one of the most deadly Raptors of the 38th Company, to the point that he's a powerful Champion of Khorne and gets the Blood God's direct attention occasionally. He's also one of the Legion's worst soldiers: Tellis has no attention span, barely listens to his own side, and doesn't care for tactics beyond flying headlong into a fight.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Rainbow Dash's attempt to make Tellis knock himself out by [[ItMakesSenseInContext flying into a wall of Fluttershy's cottage]], after enraging Tellis enough to make him chase her out of Ponyville. She didn't take into account that Tellis weighs about 600 pounds, is flying just as fast as she is, and that Fluttershy's cottage is made out of wood.
* OddFriendship: Between Rainbow Dash and Tellis, after she flew next to an anti-air missile and kicked it hard enough to stop it from blowing him up. It impressed/distracted him enough to forget about horribly maiming her.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: The 38th Companies of the Iron Warriors are suggested to be this; back in the Pre-Heresy days, the grand companies of the Iron Warriors were required by their Primarch to maintain a 38th Company dedicated to guarding their supply lines. Even among a Legion that had grueling siegework as their lot in the Crusades, being in one of these companies was regarded as a punishment detail. When the fanfic starts, the 38th Company is still the place where the Iron Warriors dump Marines too incompetent or eccentric to tolerate, but who aren't total wastes of gene-seed to simply kill.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Applejack refuses to get involved with the fighting between the Tau and the Iron Warriors, and maintains that her family will also stay out of it. It takes a Great Knarloc destroying some of the Apple's orchards and literally walking through their farmhouse before she finally snaps.
* ReassignedToAntarctica: The 38th Companies of the Iron Warriors aresuggested stated to be this; back in the Pre-Heresy days, the grand companies of the Iron Warriors were required by their Primarch to maintain a 38th Company dedicated to guarding their supply lines. Even among a Legion that had grueling siegework as their lot in the Crusades, being in one of these companies was regarded as a punishment detail. When the fanfic starts, the 38th Company is still the place where the Iron Warriors dump Marines too incompetent or eccentric to tolerate, but who aren't total wastes of gene-seed to simply kill.
* ReassignedToAntarctica: The 38th Companies of the Iron Warriors are
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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Done by Apple Bloom to a daemon-corrupted probe droid, which she names Crabapple. Neither Applejack or Galea are happy about it. Crabapple, for "her" part, considers Apple Bloom her owner and resists all attempts to return to service.
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* WrongGenreSaavy: Apple siblings first reaction to a possible visitor from outer space is to track it down and try to sell it apples. To their credit, they wise up quickly when the probe starts to look threatening.
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* ReassignedToAntartica: ReassignedToAntarctica: The 38th Companies of the Iron Warriors are suggested to be this; back in the Pre-Heresy days, the grand companies of the Iron Warriors were required by their Primarch to maintain a 38th Company dedicated to guarding their supply lines. Even among a Legion that had grueling siegework as their lot in the Crusades, being in one of these companies was regarded as a punishment detail. When the fanfic starts, the 38th Company is still the place where the Iron Warriors dump Marines too incompetent or eccentric to tolerate, but who aren't total wastes of gene-seed to simply kill.
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* BadassBookworm: Twilight.
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* BadassBookworm: Twilight.Twilight, as she is in her alicorn form for this story. She gets her opportunities to use her heightened magical power to defend her world.
* BadVibrations: Used with Big Mac's apple juice to show that a Greater Gnarloc is stomping towards the Apple farm. For bonus points, Pinkie naturally shows up to say that she remembers this scene from [[Film/JurassicPark Draconic Park]], directed by somepony named Stephen Spielbuck.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie, once again, reprises her role as Destroyer of the Fourth Wall. She claims to understand Crabapple's buzzing due to having subtitles on, and says she knows that Equestria will need saving since she read the plot outline notes.
* CutenessProximity: The Chaos soldiers accompany Dark Acolyte Gaelia in chapter 2 start losing their discipline when talking to Applebloom, whom they regard as one of the nicer things they've seen since turning to Chaos.
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* DoorStopper: At the time of it's conclusion the series clocks in at over a million words.
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* DoorStopper: At the time of it's conclusion its conclusion, the series clocks in at over a million words.
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* MadeASlave: Tau prisoners.
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* MadeASlave: Tau prisoners.prisoners, or anyone who the 38th Company thinks could be useful working in their ships.
* PoorCommunicationKills: The Mane Six get embroiled in their first fight due to the language barrier between them and the Tau. In this case, it did kill some Tau and Kroot.
* ReassignedToAntartica: The 38th Companies of the Iron Warriors are suggested to be this; back in the Pre-Heresy days, the grand companies of the Iron Warriors were required by their Primarch to maintain a 38th Company dedicated to guarding their supply lines. Even among a Legion that had grueling siegework as their lot in the Crusades, being in one of these companies was regarded as a punishment detail. When the fanfic starts, the 38th Company is still the place where the Iron Warriors dump Marines too incompetent or eccentric to tolerate, but who aren't total wastes of gene-seed to simply kill.
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* AWizardDidIt: This is Dark Acolyte Gaelia's default explanation for technical things she doesn't want to explain to the uninitiated, blaming Warp energy for the strange things she runs into. Justified, as Warp energy does actually cause a good deal of odd events.
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The Iron Warriors 38th Company has landed in Equestria, entrenching themselves like a barbed hook. They hunt the aliens of the Tau Empire, intent on destruction and pillage.
A small squad is dispatched on a reconnaissance mission, only to find that there is intelligent life on this world besides the feuding space-farers.
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The [[Warhammer40K Iron Warriors Warriors]] 38th Company has landed in Equestria, [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]], entrenching themselves like a barbed hook. They hunt hook after a fierce battle with the aliens of the Tau Empire, intent on destruction and pillage.
pillage of anything and anyone they encounter.
A small squad is dispatched on a reconnaissance mission, only to find that there is intelligent life on this worldbesides unlike the feuding space-farers.
space-farers above.
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EXPLOSIONS!!
Most stories about 40k can be really annoying to read due to a distinct lack of humor found within the scene. Something that is able to cause genuine forget to breath levels of laughter while still maintaining all of what you might expect from 40k is really nice to see. So even if not normally your thing this reader suggests at least taking a look at the first chapter.
Most stories about 40k can be really annoying to read due to a distinct lack of humor found within the scene. Something that is able to cause genuine forget to breath levels of laughter while still maintaining all of what you might expect from 40k is really nice to see. So even if not normally your thing this reader suggests at least taking a look at the first chapter.
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* DoorStopper: At the time of it's conclusion the series clocks in at over a million words.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Everybody seems pretty sure Wyatt Daniels and Applejack are a thing. Everybody except them.
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* TheDragon: Hazarr "Coggz" Wrencha is surprisingly intelligent for an Ork, whether in building gigantic war machines or keeping an interest in what calls the Orks to the Centaur System in the first place. He still has to follow the Warboss's orders, though; the Warboss is bigger than he is.
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* VerbalJudo: Twilight often acts as the voice of reason to keep things calm between the violent, alien militants of the 38th Company and the Equestrians, some of whom are less than happy to be fighting, helping, or even tolerating the forces of Chaos.
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* LivingShip: The Iron Warrior’s ship the Harvest of Steel.
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* LivingShip: The Iron Warrior’s ship the Harvest of Steel. Steel.
* LoopholeAbuse: Trixie would never have succeeded in her first performance for the Iron Warriors without pulling this every time.
* LoopholeAbuse: Trixie would never have succeeded in her first performance for the Iron Warriors without pulling this every time.
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: Good thing the 38th Company despises Slaanesh. Who knows what would have happened if <spoiler>the CMC had chosen his mark?</spoiler>
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: Good thing the 38th Company despises Slaanesh. Who knows what would have happened if <spoiler>the [[spoiler:the CMC had chosen his mark?</spoiler>mark?]]
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* ImmortalityInducer: Being a Space Marine, or worshipping Nurgle.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Subverted repeatedly. The Iron Warriors don't have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomable evil but no gold. Yet a lot of ponies worship them as heros.
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* UnstoppableRage: If you worship Khorne you have this.
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* WeHaveReserves: Averted with the 38th Company, which tries to conserve its troops. Even the redshirts. Even the orks (or at least their leader) has a problem with this. As much as an ork can be against it anyway.
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* WeHaveReserves: Averted with the 38th Company, which tries to conserve its troops. Even the redshirts. Even the orks Orks (or at least their leader) has a problem with this. As much as an ork Ork can be against it anyway.
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: Good thing the 38th Company despises Slaanesh. Who knows what would have happened if [spoiler] the CMC had chosen his mark? [/spoiler]
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: Good thing the 38th Company despises Slaanesh. Who knows what would have happened if [spoiler] the <spoiler>the CMC had chosen his mark? [/spoiler]mark?</spoiler>
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* {{Cyborg}}: Standard policy in the Iron Warriors involves removing any non-useful mutations and replacing them with cybernetics. Broken arm, must amputate and replace with a robotic arm.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Subverted repeatedly. The Iron Warriors don'tnot have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomable evil but no gold. Yet a lot of ponies worship them as heros.
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* LayeredMetropolis: Canterlot is built into a mountain. The leader of the iron warriors regiment is digested by how it looks like a child's fantasy and is hard to defend.
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* LayeredMetropolis: Canterlot is built into a mountain. The leader of the iron warriors regiment is digested disgusted by how it looks like a child's fantasy and is hard to defend.
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* {{Mook}}s: Subverted. as the antagonist Tau, whom are killed off constantly and with no drama whatsoever, actually have a morally defensible mission, are fighting an explicitly evil army, and even occasionally make significant ethical decisions on the battlefield.
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* VillainByDefault: Subverted constantly. The 38th Company are space pirates, evil cultists, and violent tyrants, and everypony knows it. But the Equestrians end up making friends with them and becoming allies anyway.
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: No they are not!
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: No they are not!Good thing the 38th Company despises Slaanesh. Who knows what would have happened if [spoiler] the CMC had chosen his mark? [/spoiler]
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* CantHaveSexEver: Several Iron Warriors are incapable of removing their armor or have replaced much of their body with machinery.
* CharacterDevelopment: In droves.
* CharacterDevelopment: In droves.
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* CharacterDevelopment: In droves.
* CharacterDevelopment: In droves.
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* CurbStompBattle: The space battle.
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* CurbStompBattle: The space battle.
battle. The first dream simulation.
* {{Cyborg}}: Standard policy in the Iron Warriors involves removing any non-useful mutations and replacing them with cybernetics. Broken arm, must amputate and replace with a robotic arm.
* {{Cyborg}}: Standard policy in the Iron Warriors involves removing any non-useful mutations and replacing them with cybernetics. Broken arm, must amputate and replace with a robotic arm.
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* EvilSorcerer: Serith.
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* FearlessFool: Tellis.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Angel bunny, worshiper of Khorne (maybe).
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Subverted repeatedly. The Iron Warriors may not have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomable evil but no gold.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Subverted repeatedly. The Iron Warriors may not don'tnot have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomable evil but no gold.gold. Yet a lot of ponies worship them as heros.
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* MadeASlave: Tau prisoners.
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* MadeASlave: Tau prisoners.
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* WeHaveReserves: Averted with the 38th Company, which tries to conserve its troops. Even the redshirts.
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Story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/147183/iron-hearts-book-1-planetfall here]]
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* AFatherToHisMen: Silver to the Iron Warriors at least.
* ActionGirl: Are you a female in this series? Then there is a 90% chance you are this.
* AlienBlood: Blood for the blood….Wait their bugs, do they have ichor or something? Oh well.
* ActionGirl: Are you a female in this series? Then there is a 90% chance you are this.
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* AFatherToHisMen: Silver to Sliver, at least where the Iron Warriors at least.are concerned.
* ActionGirl: Are you a female in this series? Then there is a 90% chanceyou are this.
you're one of these.
* AlienBlood: Blood for the blood….Wait their Wait, they're bugs, do they have ichor or something? Oh well.
* ActionGirl: Are you a female in this series? Then there is a 90% chance
* AlienBlood: Blood for the blood….
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* AskAStupidQuestion: And most characters will give you either a stupid answer or an overly long scientific answer that won’t be listened to.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Solon, Warsmith of the 38th holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing).
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* AttackAttackAttack: The main strategy of a large number of characters
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Subverted. Solon, Warsmith of the 38th Company, holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing).
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Subverted. Solon, Warsmith of the 38th Company, holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing).
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* BadassFamily: A nurgling cultist, part of a magical super weapon, and a cyborg these are the apples.
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* CoolPet: Applebloom has a pet maulerfiend
* CoolSword: Powerswords, Chainswords and many more.
* CrazyAwesome: Rainbow Dash, and Tellis
* CrazyPrepared: Whenever the Iron Warriors make planet fall they build a fortress.
* CoolSword: Powerswords, Chainswords and many more.
* CrazyAwesome: Rainbow Dash, and Tellis
* CrazyPrepared: Whenever the Iron Warriors make planet fall they build a fortress.
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* CoolPet: Applebloom has a pet maulerfiend
maulerfiend.
* CoolSword:Powerswords, Power swords, Chainswords and many more.
* CrazyAwesome: RainbowDash, Dash and Tellis
Tellis.
* CrazyPrepared:Whenever When the Iron Warriors make planet fall planetfall they build a fortress.
* CoolSword:
* CrazyAwesome: Rainbow
* CrazyPrepared:
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* DividedWeFall: The Iron Warriors realize that if you just kill the regular humans willy nilly that you won’t have enough people to operate at full capacity.
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* DividedWeFall: The Iron Warriors realize that if you just kill the regular humans willy nilly that nilly, then you won’t have enough people to operate at full capacity.
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* ExtradimensionalShortCut: Warp.
* FanDisservice: Any description of a nurgle worshiper
* FantasticRacist: Ponies towards Tau.
* FanDisservice: Any description of a nurgle worshiper
* FantasticRacist: Ponies towards Tau.
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* ExtradimensionalShortCut: The Warp.
* FanDisservice: Any description of anurgle worshiper
Nurgle worshiper.
* FantasticRacist: Ponies towards Tau. Understandable, perhaps, since their first impression of the Tau Empire is profoundly negative.
* FanDisservice: Any description of a
* FantasticRacist: Ponies towards Tau. Understandable, perhaps, since their first impression of the Tau Empire is profoundly negative.
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* FireForgedFriends: The reason the Iron Warriors and ponies get along is their mutual antipathy for the Tau
* FlatEarthAtheist: Gaela outright refuses to believe the Celestia and Luna control the rotation of the planet, and the moon’s orbit. Until about three hours after the planet stops moving when she relents to help the mane six.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Angle bunny, worshiper or Khorne.
* FlatEarthAtheist: Gaela outright refuses to believe the Celestia and Luna control the rotation of the planet, and the moon’s orbit. Until about three hours after the planet stops moving when she relents to help the mane six.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Angle bunny, worshiper or Khorne.
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* FireForgedFriends: The reason the Iron Warriors and ponies get along is their mutual antipathy for the Tau
Tau Empire.
* FlatEarthAtheist: Gaela outright refuses to believe the Celestia and Luna control the rotation of theplanet, planet and the moon’s orbit. Until about three hours after the planet stops moving moving, when she relents to help the mane six.
* FluffyTheTerrible:Angle Angel bunny, worshiper or Khorne. of Khorne (maybe).
* FlatEarthAtheist: Gaela outright refuses to believe the Celestia and Luna control the rotation of the
* FluffyTheTerrible:
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* FromBadToWorse: From maybe upwards of a million Tau (counting those in space) to nearly ten billion orks.
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* FromBadToWorse: From maybe upwards of a million several thousand Tau (counting those in space) to nearly ten billion orks.Orks.
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* GoodOldFisticuffs: Tellis and Silver slug it out over a party
* HealingFactor: Tellis can regrow wolverine style lightning claws.
* HealingFactor: Tellis can regrow wolverine style lightning claws.
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* GoodOldFisticuffs: Tellis and Silver Sliver slug it out over a party
party.
* HealingFactor: Tellis can regrowwolverine style Wolverine-style lightning claws.
* HealingFactor: Tellis can regrow
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* IllegalReligion: At one point Celestia has any chaos artifacts in Canterlot confiscated.
* ImmortalityInducer: Being a space marine, or worshiping nurgle.
* ImmortalityInducer: Being a space marine, or worshiping nurgle.
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* IllegalReligion: At one point Celestia has any chaos Chaos artifacts in Canterlot confiscated.
* ImmortalityInducer: Being aspace marine, Space Marine, or worshiping nurgle.worshipping Nurgle.
* ImmortalityInducer: Being a
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: The Iron warriors may not have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomably evil but no gold.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Subverted repeatedly. The Iron warriors Warriors may not have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomably unfathomable evil but no gold.
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* KillerRabbit: Angle Bunny.
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* KillerRabbit: Angle Angel Bunny.
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* LivingShip: The Iron warrior’s ship after constant Chaos exposer.
* LuckManipulationMechanic: The author states in one of his notes this is why no ponies have died yet.
* LuckManipulationMechanic: The author states in one of his notes this is why no ponies have died yet.
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* LivingShip: The Iron warrior’s Warrior’s ship after constant Chaos exposer.the Harvest of Steel.
* LuckManipulationMechanic: The author states in one of his notes that this is why no ponies have died yet.
* LuckManipulationMechanic: The author states in one of his notes that this is why no ponies have died yet.
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* MakeThemRot: Nurgle blessed weapons.
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* MakeThemRot: Nurgle blessed Nurgle-blessed weapons.
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* {{Mook}}s: Subverted the antagonist Tau whom are killed off constantly and with no drama whatsoever actually have a morally defensible mission, are fighting an explicitly evil army, and even occasionally make significant ethical decisions on the battlefield.
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* {{Mook}}s: Subverted Subverted. as the antagonist Tau Tau, whom are killed off constantly and with no drama whatsoever whatsoever, actually have a morally defensible mission, are fighting an explicitly evil army, and even occasionally make significant ethical decisions on the battlefield.
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* NightmarishFactory: The Iron Warriors base.
* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Averted, the Tau are fully willing to leave people behind for the greater good.
* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Averted, the Tau are fully willing to leave people behind for the greater good.
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* NightmarishFactory: The Iron Warriors Warriors' base.
* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Averted, the Tau are fully willing to leave people behind for thegreater good.Greater Good.
* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Averted, the Tau are fully willing to leave people behind for the
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* PlotArmor: Are you a main character congratulations you’ll be fine.
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* PlotArmor: Are you a main character congratulations character? Congratulations, you’ll be fine.
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* SpacePirates: The 38th.
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* SpacePirates: The 38th.38th Company.
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* WeHaveReserves: Not so much with the 38th.
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* WeHaveReserves: Not so much Averted with the 38th.38th Company, which tries to conserve its troops. Even the redshirts.
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* A Father to His Men: Silver to the Iron Warriors at least.
* Action Girl: Are you a female in this series? Then there is a 90% chance you are this.
* Alien Blood: Blood for the blood….Wait their bugs, do they have ichor or something? Oh well.
* Always Chaotic Evil: Chaos.
* Armour is Useless: Subverted in that armor has save quite a few character.
* The Artifact: The Warp Core for quite a while.
* Ask a Stupid Question: And most characters will give you either a stupid answer or an overly long scientific answer that won’t be listened to.
* Asteroids Monster: Solon is full of cockroaches.
* Attack! Attack! Attack! : The main strategy of a large number of characters
* Authority Equals Asskicking: Solon, Warsmith of the 38th holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing).
* Badass: Too many to list.
* Badass Bookworm: Twilight.
* Badass Family: A nurgling cultist, part of a magical super weapon, and a cyborg these are the apples.
* Badass Normal: Daniels.
* Bad Powers, Bad People: Chaos.
* Bad Powers, Good People: The Chaos Mark Crusaders.
* Big Bad: High Commander Voidsong for the first three books
* Big Brother Instinct: Bigmac has this.
* Big Damn Heroes: Most main characters have managed this at some point.
* Black magic: Chaos magic.
* Blown Across the Room: Happens very often in fights.
* Boring But Practical: Practicality is Iron Warrior policy.
* Can’t Have Sex Ever: Several Iron Warriors are incapable of removing their armor or replaced most of their body with machinery.
* Character Development: In droves.
* Children Are Innocent: No they are not!
* Cold Blooded Torture: Subverted, the 38th doesn’t use torture they have the information psychically ripped from their enemies. Due to the fact that when torture is used people will say anything.
* Combat Pragmatist: Iron warriors in general (there are exceptions).
* Cool Big Sis: Applejack and Rarity.
* Cool Car: The Rhino’s
* Cool Guns: Every gun in it could qualify.
* Cool Pet: Applebloom has a pet maulerfiend
* Cool Sword: Powerswords, Chainswords and many more.
* Crazy Awesome: Rainbow Dash, and Tellis
* Crazy Prepared: Whenever the Iron Warriors make planet fall they build a fortress.
* Curb Stomp Battle: The space battle.
* Cyborg: Standard policy in the Iron Warriors involves removing any non-useful mutations and replacing them with cybernetics.
* Destructive Saviour: The Iron Warriors.
* Didn’t See That Coming: The Tau having not had much contact with humans outside of the Imperium and are shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos.
* Divided We Fall: The Iron Warriors realize that if you just kill the regular humans willy nilly that you won’t have enough people to operate at full capacity.
* Drunk On the Dark Side: Chaos worshippers.
* Eldritch Abomination: Daemons.
* Even Evil has Standards: Not really no.
* Evil Feels Good: Chaos grants lots of benefits.
* Evil Sorcerer: Serith.
* Extradimensional Short Cut: Warp.
* Fan Disservice: Any description of a nurgle worshiper
* Fantastic Racist: Ponies towards Tau.
* Fearless Fool: Tellis.
* Fire Forged Friends: The reason the Iron Warriors and ponies get along is their mutual antipathy for the Tau
* Flat Earth Atheist: Gaela outright refuses to believe the Celestia and Luna control the rotation of the planet, and the moon’s orbit. Until about three hours after the planet stops moving when she relents to help the mane six.
* Fluffy the Terrible: Angle bunny, worshiper or Khorne.
* Foreshadowing: Ork beacons are mentioned relatively early in the story.
* From Bad to Worse: From maybe upwards of a million Tau (counting those in space) to nearly ten billion orks.
* Full Frontal Assault: Tellis’ style.
* Gender Is No Object: As long as you prove useful the Iron Warriors don’t care.
* Good Old Fisticuffs: Tellis and Silver slug it out over a party
* Healing Factor: Tellis can regrow wolverine style lightning claws.
* Hearing Voices: The CMC.
* Hidden Depths: The Iron Warriors.
* Hyperspace is a Scary Place: The Warp very much is.
* I Don’t Like the Sound of That Place: The warp and the galaxy at large.
* Illegal Religion: At one point Celestia has any chaos artifacts in Canterlot confiscated.
* Immortality Inducer: Being a space marine, or worshiping nurgle.
* Impaled with Extreme Prejudice: Tellis impales a Vespid on a Celestia Statue.
* Incorruptible Pure Pureness: Ponies have a natural resistance to Chaos, but they can give themselves over to Chaos.
* Insectoid Aliens: The Vespid.
* Jack of All Stats: Space Marines.
* Jetpack: Tellis enjoys his very much.
* Jerk with a Heart of Gold: The Iron warriors may not have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomably evil but no gold.
* The Juggernaut: Space Marines.
* Killer Rabbit: Angle Bunny.
* Layered Metropolis: Canterlot is built into a mountain.
* Lighter and Softer: Than Warhammer in general.
* Limited Wardrobe: When you can’t remove your armor this is what happens.
* Living Ship: The Iron warrior’s ship after constant Chaos exposer.
* Luck manipulation Mechanic: The author states in one of his notes this is why no ponies have died yet.
* Mad Scientist: Solon, and the Dark Mechanicus.
* Made a Slave: Tau prisoners.
* Made of Plasticine: If you don’t have armor.
* Make Them Rot: Nurgle blessed weapons.
* Mecha-Mooks: Drones.
* Mile-long Ship: Most space ships.
* Mind Rape: How Serith gets information from prisoners.
* Moody Mount: Maulerfiends aren’t too happy to give Pinkie a ride.
* Mooks: Subverted the antagonist Tau whom are killed off constantly and with no drama whatsoever actually have a morally defensible mission, are fighting an explicitly evil army, and even occasionally make significant ethical decisions on the battlefield.
* More Dakka: When Trixe gets guns expect this.
* Nightmarish Factory: The Iron Warriors base.
* No One Gets Left Behind: Averted, the Tau are fully willing to leave people behind for the greater good.
* Not So Different: Celestia gets told by Voidsong that they aren’t that different at all. Celestia is not pleased.
* Obviously Evil: The Iron Warriors.
* One-Man Army: Any Space Marine really.
* Our Weapons Will Be Boxy in the Future: Bolters.
* Person of Mass Destruction: Tellis.
* Plasma Cannon: An available weapon.
* Plot Armor: Are you a main character congratulations you’ll be fine.
* Power Born of Madness: Chaos powers
* Power Armor
* Psychic Powers: All unicorns and psykers.
* Psychic Static: The Shadow of the Warp
* Radio Voice: Vox Systems.
* Red Shirt Army: The Chaos Mercenaries.
* Sapient Tank: Daemon engines.
* Shock and Awe: How ponies generally react to things.
* Space Marines
* Space Pirates: The 38th.
* The Spark of Genius: Solon's ability to construct weapons and equipment is far beyond that of the small army of scientists and engineers at his beck and call.
* Summon Magic: Daemon summoning specifically.
* Techno Wizard: The Dark Mechanicus.
* Teleporters and Transporters
* Temple of Doom: Chaos temples.
* Unstoppable Rage: If you worship Khorne you have this.
* Violence is the Only Option: Always.
* War God: Khorne.
* We Have Reserves: Not so much with the 38th.
* Well-Intentioned Extremist: The Tau.
* With Great Power Comes Great Insanity: Chaos powers.
* Wrench Wench: Gaela.
* Action Girl: Are you a female in this series? Then there is a 90% chance you are this.
* Alien Blood: Blood for the blood….Wait their bugs, do they have ichor or something? Oh well.
* Always Chaotic Evil: Chaos.
* Armour is Useless: Subverted in that armor has save quite a few character.
* The Artifact: The Warp Core for quite a while.
* Ask a Stupid Question: And most characters will give you either a stupid answer or an overly long scientific answer that won’t be listened to.
* Asteroids Monster: Solon is full of cockroaches.
* Attack! Attack! Attack! : The main strategy of a large number of characters
* Authority Equals Asskicking: Solon, Warsmith of the 38th holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing).
* Badass: Too many to list.
* Badass Bookworm: Twilight.
* Badass Family: A nurgling cultist, part of a magical super weapon, and a cyborg these are the apples.
* Badass Normal: Daniels.
* Bad Powers, Bad People: Chaos.
* Bad Powers, Good People: The Chaos Mark Crusaders.
* Big Bad: High Commander Voidsong for the first three books
* Big Brother Instinct: Bigmac has this.
* Big Damn Heroes: Most main characters have managed this at some point.
* Black magic: Chaos magic.
* Blown Across the Room: Happens very often in fights.
* Boring But Practical: Practicality is Iron Warrior policy.
* Can’t Have Sex Ever: Several Iron Warriors are incapable of removing their armor or replaced most of their body with machinery.
* Character Development: In droves.
* Children Are Innocent: No they are not!
* Cold Blooded Torture: Subverted, the 38th doesn’t use torture they have the information psychically ripped from their enemies. Due to the fact that when torture is used people will say anything.
* Combat Pragmatist: Iron warriors in general (there are exceptions).
* Cool Big Sis: Applejack and Rarity.
* Cool Car: The Rhino’s
* Cool Guns: Every gun in it could qualify.
* Cool Pet: Applebloom has a pet maulerfiend
* Cool Sword: Powerswords, Chainswords and many more.
* Crazy Awesome: Rainbow Dash, and Tellis
* Crazy Prepared: Whenever the Iron Warriors make planet fall they build a fortress.
* Curb Stomp Battle: The space battle.
* Cyborg: Standard policy in the Iron Warriors involves removing any non-useful mutations and replacing them with cybernetics.
* Destructive Saviour: The Iron Warriors.
* Didn’t See That Coming: The Tau having not had much contact with humans outside of the Imperium and are shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos.
* Divided We Fall: The Iron Warriors realize that if you just kill the regular humans willy nilly that you won’t have enough people to operate at full capacity.
* Drunk On the Dark Side: Chaos worshippers.
* Eldritch Abomination: Daemons.
* Even Evil has Standards: Not really no.
* Evil Feels Good: Chaos grants lots of benefits.
* Evil Sorcerer: Serith.
* Extradimensional Short Cut: Warp.
* Fan Disservice: Any description of a nurgle worshiper
* Fantastic Racist: Ponies towards Tau.
* Fearless Fool: Tellis.
* Fire Forged Friends: The reason the Iron Warriors and ponies get along is their mutual antipathy for the Tau
* Flat Earth Atheist: Gaela outright refuses to believe the Celestia and Luna control the rotation of the planet, and the moon’s orbit. Until about three hours after the planet stops moving when she relents to help the mane six.
* Fluffy the Terrible: Angle bunny, worshiper or Khorne.
* Foreshadowing: Ork beacons are mentioned relatively early in the story.
* From Bad to Worse: From maybe upwards of a million Tau (counting those in space) to nearly ten billion orks.
* Full Frontal Assault: Tellis’ style.
* Gender Is No Object: As long as you prove useful the Iron Warriors don’t care.
* Good Old Fisticuffs: Tellis and Silver slug it out over a party
* Healing Factor: Tellis can regrow wolverine style lightning claws.
* Hearing Voices: The CMC.
* Hidden Depths: The Iron Warriors.
* Hyperspace is a Scary Place: The Warp very much is.
* I Don’t Like the Sound of That Place: The warp and the galaxy at large.
* Illegal Religion: At one point Celestia has any chaos artifacts in Canterlot confiscated.
* Immortality Inducer: Being a space marine, or worshiping nurgle.
* Impaled with Extreme Prejudice: Tellis impales a Vespid on a Celestia Statue.
* Incorruptible Pure Pureness: Ponies have a natural resistance to Chaos, but they can give themselves over to Chaos.
* Insectoid Aliens: The Vespid.
* Jack of All Stats: Space Marines.
* Jetpack: Tellis enjoys his very much.
* Jerk with a Heart of Gold: The Iron warriors may not have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomably evil but no gold.
* The Juggernaut: Space Marines.
* Killer Rabbit: Angle Bunny.
* Layered Metropolis: Canterlot is built into a mountain.
* Lighter and Softer: Than Warhammer in general.
* Limited Wardrobe: When you can’t remove your armor this is what happens.
* Living Ship: The Iron warrior’s ship after constant Chaos exposer.
* Luck manipulation Mechanic: The author states in one of his notes this is why no ponies have died yet.
* Mad Scientist: Solon, and the Dark Mechanicus.
* Made a Slave: Tau prisoners.
* Made of Plasticine: If you don’t have armor.
* Make Them Rot: Nurgle blessed weapons.
* Mecha-Mooks: Drones.
* Mile-long Ship: Most space ships.
* Mind Rape: How Serith gets information from prisoners.
* Moody Mount: Maulerfiends aren’t too happy to give Pinkie a ride.
* Mooks: Subverted the antagonist Tau whom are killed off constantly and with no drama whatsoever actually have a morally defensible mission, are fighting an explicitly evil army, and even occasionally make significant ethical decisions on the battlefield.
* More Dakka: When Trixe gets guns expect this.
* Nightmarish Factory: The Iron Warriors base.
* No One Gets Left Behind: Averted, the Tau are fully willing to leave people behind for the greater good.
* Not So Different: Celestia gets told by Voidsong that they aren’t that different at all. Celestia is not pleased.
* Obviously Evil: The Iron Warriors.
* One-Man Army: Any Space Marine really.
* Our Weapons Will Be Boxy in the Future: Bolters.
* Person of Mass Destruction: Tellis.
* Plasma Cannon: An available weapon.
* Plot Armor: Are you a main character congratulations you’ll be fine.
* Power Born of Madness: Chaos powers
* Power Armor
* Psychic Powers: All unicorns and psykers.
* Psychic Static: The Shadow of the Warp
* Radio Voice: Vox Systems.
* Red Shirt Army: The Chaos Mercenaries.
* Sapient Tank: Daemon engines.
* Shock and Awe: How ponies generally react to things.
* Space Marines
* Space Pirates: The 38th.
* The Spark of Genius: Solon's ability to construct weapons and equipment is far beyond that of the small army of scientists and engineers at his beck and call.
* Summon Magic: Daemon summoning specifically.
* Techno Wizard: The Dark Mechanicus.
* Teleporters and Transporters
* Temple of Doom: Chaos temples.
* Unstoppable Rage: If you worship Khorne you have this.
* Violence is the Only Option: Always.
* War God: Khorne.
* We Have Reserves: Not so much with the 38th.
* Well-Intentioned Extremist: The Tau.
* With Great Power Comes Great Insanity: Chaos powers.
* Wrench Wench: Gaela.
to:
* A Father to His Men: AFatherToHisMen: Silver to the Iron Warriors at least.
*Action Girl: ActionGirl: Are you a female in this series? Then there is a 90% chance you are this.
*Alien Blood: AlienBlood: Blood for the blood….Wait their bugs, do they have ichor or something? Oh well.
*Always Chaotic Evil: AlwaysChaoticEvil: Chaos.
*Armour is Useless: ArmourIsUseless: Subverted in that armor has save quite a few character.
*The Artifact: TheArtifact: The Warp Core for quite a while.
*Ask a Stupid Question: AskAStupidQuestion: And most characters will give you either a stupid answer or an overly long scientific answer that won’t be listened to.
*Asteroids Monster: AsteroidsMonster: Solon is full of cockroaches.
*Attack! Attack! Attack! : AttackAttackAttack: The main strategy of a large number of characters
*Authority Equals Asskicking: AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Solon, Warsmith of the 38th holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing).
*Badass: {{Badass}}: Too many to list.
*Badass Bookworm: BadassBookworm: Twilight.
*Badass Family: BadassFamily: A nurgling cultist, part of a magical super weapon, and a cyborg these are the apples.
*Badass Normal: BadassNormal: Daniels.
*Bad Powers, Bad People: BadPowersBadPeople: Chaos.
*Bad Powers, Good People: BadPowersGoodPeople: The Chaos Mark Crusaders.
*Big Bad: BigBad: High Commander Voidsong for the first three books
*Big Brother Instinct: BigBrotherInstinct: Bigmac has this.
*Big Damn Heroes: BigDamnHeroes: Most main characters have managed this at some point.
*Black magic: BlackMagic: Chaos magic.
*Blown Across the Room: BlownAcrossTheRoom: Happens very often in fights.
*Boring But Practical: BoringButPractical: Practicality is Iron Warrior policy.
*Can’t Have Sex Ever: CantHaveSexEver: Several Iron Warriors are incapable of removing their armor or replaced most of their body with machinery.
*Character Development: CharacterDevelopment: In droves.
*Children Are Innocent: ChildrenAreInnocent: No they are not!
*Cold Blooded Torture: ColdBloodedTorture: Subverted, the 38th doesn’t use torture they have the information psychically ripped from their enemies. Due to the fact that when torture is used people will say anything.
*Combat Pragmatist: CombatPragmatist: Iron warriors in general (there are exceptions).
*Cool Big Sis: CoolBigSis: Applejack and Rarity.
*Cool Car: CoolCar: The Rhino’s
*Cool Guns: CoolGuns: Every gun in it could qualify.
*Cool Pet: CoolPet: Applebloom has a pet maulerfiend
*Cool Sword: CoolSword: Powerswords, Chainswords and many more.
*Crazy Awesome: CrazyAwesome: Rainbow Dash, and Tellis
*Crazy Prepared: CrazyPrepared: Whenever the Iron Warriors make planet fall they build a fortress.
*Curb Stomp Battle: CurbStompBattle: The space battle.
*Cyborg: {{Cyborg}}: Standard policy in the Iron Warriors involves removing any non-useful mutations and replacing them with cybernetics.
*Destructive Saviour: DestructiveSaviour: The Iron Warriors.
*Didn’t See That Coming: DidntSeeThatComing: The Tau having not had much contact with humans outside of the Imperium and are shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos.
*Divided We Fall: DividedWeFall: The Iron Warriors realize that if you just kill the regular humans willy nilly that you won’t have enough people to operate at full capacity.
*Drunk On the Dark Side: DrunkOnTheDarkSide: Chaos worshippers.
*Eldritch Abomination: EldritchAbomination: Daemons.
*Even Evil has Standards: EvenEvilHasStandards: Not really no.
*Evil Feels Good: EvilFeelsGood: Chaos grants lots of benefits.
*Evil Sorcerer: EvilSorcerer: Serith.
*Extradimensional Short Cut: ExtradimensionalShortCut: Warp.
*Fan Disservice: FanDisservice: Any description of a nurgle worshiper
*Fantastic Racist: FantasticRacist: Ponies towards Tau.
*Fearless Fool: FearlessFool: Tellis.
*Fire Forged Friends: FireForgedFriends: The reason the Iron Warriors and ponies get along is their mutual antipathy for the Tau
*Flat Earth Atheist: FlatEarthAtheist: Gaela outright refuses to believe the Celestia and Luna control the rotation of the planet, and the moon’s orbit. Until about three hours after the planet stops moving when she relents to help the mane six.
*Fluffy the Terrible: FluffyTheTerrible: Angle bunny, worshiper or Khorne.
*Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: Ork beacons are mentioned relatively early in the story.
*From Bad to Worse: FromBadToWorse: From maybe upwards of a million Tau (counting those in space) to nearly ten billion orks.
*Full Frontal Assault: FullFrontalAssault: Tellis’ style.
*Gender Is No Object: GenderIsNoObject: As long as you prove useful the Iron Warriors don’t care.
*Good Old Fisticuffs: GoodOldFisticuffs: Tellis and Silver slug it out over a party
*Healing Factor: HealingFactor: Tellis can regrow wolverine style lightning claws.
*Hearing Voices: HearingVoices: The CMC.
*Hidden Depths: HiddenDepths: The Iron Warriors.
*Hyperspace is a Scary Place: HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: The Warp very much is.
*I Don’t Like the Sound of That Place: IDontLikeTheSoundOfThatPlace: The warp and the galaxy at large.
*Illegal Religion: IllegalReligion: At one point Celestia has any chaos artifacts in Canterlot confiscated.
*Immortality Inducer: ImmortalityInducer: Being a space marine, or worshiping nurgle.
*Impaled with Extreme Prejudice: ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Tellis impales a Vespid on a Celestia Statue.
*Incorruptible Pure Pureness: IncorruptiblePurePureness: Ponies have a natural resistance to Chaos, but they can give themselves over to Chaos.
*Insectoid Aliens: InsectoidAliens: The Vespid.
*Jack of All Stats: JackOfAllStats: Space Marines.
*Jetpack: {{Jetpack}}: Tellis enjoys his very much.
*Jerk with a Heart of Gold: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: The Iron warriors may not have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomably evil but no gold.
*The Juggernaut: TheJuggernaut: Space Marines.
*Killer Rabbit: KillerRabbit: Angle Bunny.
*Layered Metropolis: LayeredMetropolis: Canterlot is built into a mountain.
*Lighter and Softer: LighterAndSofter: Than Warhammer in general.
*Limited Wardrobe: LimitedWardrobe: When you can’t remove your armor this is what happens.
*Living Ship: LivingShip: The Iron warrior’s ship after constant Chaos exposer.
*Luck manipulation Mechanic: LuckManipulationMechanic: The author states in one of his notes this is why no ponies have died yet.
*Mad Scientist: MadScientist: Solon, and the Dark Mechanicus.
*Made a Slave: MadeASlave: Tau prisoners.
*Made of Plasticine: MadeOfPlasticine: If you don’t have armor.
*Make Them Rot: MakeThemRot: Nurgle blessed weapons.
*Mecha-Mooks: MechaMooks: Drones.
*Mile-long Ship: MileLongShip: Most space ships.
*Mind Rape: MindRape: How Serith gets information from prisoners.
*Moody Mount: MoodyMount: Maulerfiends aren’t too happy to give Pinkie a ride.
*Mooks: {{Mook}}s: Subverted the antagonist Tau whom are killed off constantly and with no drama whatsoever actually have a morally defensible mission, are fighting an explicitly evil army, and even occasionally make significant ethical decisions on the battlefield.
*More Dakka: MoreDakka: When Trixe gets guns expect this.
*Nightmarish Factory: NightmarishFactory: The Iron Warriors base.
*No One Gets Left Behind: NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Averted, the Tau are fully willing to leave people behind for the greater good.
*Not So Different: NotSoDifferent: Celestia gets told by Voidsong that they aren’t that different at all. Celestia is not pleased.
*Obviously Evil: ObviouslyEvil: The Iron Warriors.
*One-Man Army: OneManArmy: Any Space Marine really.
*Our Weapons Will Be Boxy in the Future: OurWeaponsWillBeBoxyInTheFuture: Bolters.
*Person of Mass Destruction: PersonOfMassDestruction: Tellis.
*Plasma Cannon: PlasmaCannon: An available weapon.
*Plot Armor: PlotArmor: Are you a main character congratulations you’ll be fine.
*Power Born of Madness: PowerBornOfMadness: Chaos powers
*Power Armor
PowerArmor
*Psychic Powers: PsychicPowers: All unicorns and psykers.
*Psychic Static: PsychicStatic: The Shadow of the Warp
*Radio Voice: RadioVoice: Vox Systems.
*Red Shirt Army: RedShirtArmy: The Chaos Mercenaries.
*Sapient Tank: SapientTank: Daemon engines.
*Shock and Awe: ShockAndAwe: How ponies generally react to things.
*Space Marines
SpaceMarines
*Space Pirates: SpacePirates: The 38th.
*The Spark of Genius: TheSparkOfGenius: Solon's ability to construct weapons and equipment is far beyond that of the small army of scientists and engineers at his beck and call.
*Summon Magic: SummonMagic: Daemon summoning specifically.
*Techno Wizard: TechnoWizard: The Dark Mechanicus.
*Teleporters and Transporters
TeleportersAndTransporters
*Temple of Doom: TempleOfDoom: Chaos temples.
*Unstoppable Rage: UnstoppableRage: If you worship Khorne you have this.
*Violence is the Only Option: ViolenceIsTheOnlyOption: Always.
*War God: WarGod: Khorne.
*We Have Reserves: WeHaveReserves: Not so much with the 38th.
*Well-Intentioned Extremist: WellIntentionedExtremist: The Tau.
*With Great Power Comes Great Insanity: WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Chaos powers.
*Wrench Wench: Gaela.WrenchWench: Gaela.
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!!This fic contains examples of the following:
*A Father to His Men: Silver to the Iron Warriors at least.
*Action Girl: Are you a female in this series? Then there is a 90% chance you are this.
*Alien Blood: Blood for the blood….Wait their bugs, do they have ichor or something? Oh well.
*Always Chaotic Evil: Chaos.
*Armour is Useless: Subverted in that armor has save quite a few character.
*The Artifact: The Warp Core for quite a while.
*Ask a Stupid Question: And most characters will give you either a stupid answer or an overly long scientific answer that won’t be listened to.
*Asteroids Monster: Solon is full of cockroaches.
*Attack! Attack! Attack! : The main strategy of a large number of characters
*Authority Equals Asskicking: Solon, Warsmith of the 38th holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing).
*Badass: Too many to list.
*Badass Bookworm: Twilight.
*Badass Family: A nurgling cultist, part of a magical super weapon, and a cyborg these are the apples.
*Badass Normal: Daniels.
*Bad Powers, Bad People: Chaos.
*Bad Powers, Good People: The Chaos Mark Crusaders.
*Big Bad: High Commander Voidsong for the first three books
*Big Brother Instinct: Bigmac has this.
*Big Damn Heroes: Most main characters have managed this at some point.
*Black magic: Chaos magic.
*Blown Across the Room: Happens very often in fights.
*Boring But Practical: Practicality is Iron Warrior policy.
*Can’t Have Sex Ever: Several Iron Warriors are incapable of removing their armor or replaced most of their body with machinery.
*Character Development: In droves.
*Children Are Innocent: No they are not!
*Cold Blooded Torture: Subverted, the 38th doesn’t use torture they have the information psychically ripped from their enemies. Due to the fact that when torture is used people will say anything.
*Combat Pragmatist: Iron warriors in general (there are exceptions).
*Cool Big Sis: Applejack and Rarity.
*Cool Car: The Rhino’s
*Cool Guns: Every gun in it could qualify.
*Cool Pet: Applebloom has a pet maulerfiend
*Cool Sword: Powerswords, Chainswords and many more.
*Crazy Awesome: Rainbow Dash, and Tellis
*Crazy Prepared: Whenever the Iron Warriors make planet fall they build a fortress.
*Curb Stomp Battle: The space battle.
*Cyborg: Standard policy in the Iron Warriors involves removing any non-useful mutations and replacing them with cybernetics.
*Destructive Saviour: The Iron Warriors.
*Didn’t See That Coming: The Tau having not had much contact with humans outside of the Imperium and are shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos.
*Divided We Fall: The Iron Warriors realize that if you just kill the regular humans willy nilly that you won’t have enough people to operate at full capacity.
*Drunk On the Dark Side: Chaos worshippers.
*Eldritch Abomination: Daemons.
*Even Evil has Standards: Not really no.
*Evil Feels Good: Chaos grants lots of benefits.
*Evil Sorcerer: Serith.
*Extradimensional Short Cut: Warp.
*Fan Disservice: Any description of a nurgle worshiper
*Fantastic Racist: Ponies towards Tau.
*Fearless Fool: Tellis.
*Fire Forged Friends: The reason the Iron Warriors and ponies get along is their mutual antipathy for the Tau
*Flat Earth Atheist: Gaela outright refuses to believe the Celestia and Luna control the rotation of the planet, and the moon’s orbit. Until about three hours after the planet stops moving when she relents to help the mane six.
*Fluffy the Terrible: Angle bunny, worshiper or Khorne.
*Foreshadowing: Ork beacons are mentioned relatively early in the story.
*From Bad to Worse: From maybe upwards of a million Tau (counting those in space) to nearly ten billion orks.
*Full Frontal Assault: Tellis’ style.
*Gender Is No Object: As long as you prove useful the Iron Warriors don’t care.
*Good Old Fisticuffs: Tellis and Silver slug it out over a party
*Healing Factor: Tellis can regrow wolverine style lightning claws.
*Hearing Voices: The CMC.
*Hidden Depths: The Iron Warriors.
*Hyperspace is a Scary Place: The Warp very much is.
*I Don’t Like the Sound of That Place: The warp and the galaxy at large.
*Illegal Religion: At one point Celestia has any chaos artifacts in Canterlot confiscated.
*Immortality Inducer: Being a space marine, or worshiping nurgle.
*Impaled with Extreme Prejudice: Tellis impales a Vespid on a Celestia Statue.
*Incorruptible Pure Pureness: Ponies have a natural resistance to Chaos, but they can give themselves over to Chaos.
*Insectoid Aliens: The Vespid.
*Jack of All Stats: Space Marines.
*Jetpack: Tellis enjoys his very much.
*Jerk with a Heart of Gold: The Iron warriors may not have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomably evil but no gold.
*The Juggernaut: Space Marines.
*Killer Rabbit: Angle Bunny.
*Layered Metropolis: Canterlot is built into a mountain.
*Lighter and Softer: Than Warhammer in general.
*Limited Wardrobe: When you can’t remove your armor this is what happens.
*Living Ship: The Iron warrior’s ship after constant Chaos exposer.
*Luck manipulation Mechanic: The author states in one of his notes this is why no ponies have died yet.
*Mad Scientist: Solon, and the Dark Mechanicus.
*Made a Slave: Tau prisoners.
*Made of Plasticine: If you don’t have armor.
*Make Them Rot: Nurgle blessed weapons.
*Mecha-Mooks: Drones.
*Mile-long Ship: Most space ships.
*Mind Rape: How Serith gets information from prisoners.
*Moody Mount: Maulerfiends aren’t too happy to give Pinkie a ride.
*Mooks: Subverted the antagonist Tau whom are killed off constantly and with no drama whatsoever actually have a morally defensible mission, are fighting an explicitly evil army, and even occasionally make significant ethical decisions on the battlefield.
*More Dakka: When Trixe gets guns expect this.
*Nightmarish Factory: The Iron Warriors base.
*No One Gets Left Behind: Averted, the Tau are fully willing to leave people behind for the greater good.
*Not So Different: Celestia gets told by Voidsong that they aren’t that different at all. Celestia is not pleased.
*Obviously Evil: The Iron Warriors.
*One-Man Army: Any Space Marine really.
*Our Weapons Will Be Boxy in the Future: Bolters.
*Person of Mass Destruction: Tellis.
*Plasma Cannon: An available weapon.
*Plot Armor: Are you a main character congratulations you’ll be fine.
*Power Born of Madness: Chaos powers
*Power Armor
*Psychic Powers: All unicorns and psykers.
*Psychic Static: The Shadow of the Warp
*Radio Voice: Vox Systems.
*Red Shirt Army: The Chaos Mercenaries.
*Sapient Tank: Daemon engines.
*Shock and Awe: How ponies generally react to things.
*Space Marines
*Space Pirates: The 38th.
*The Spark of Genius: Solon's ability to construct weapons and equipment is far beyond that of the small army of scientists and engineers at his beck and call.
*Summon Magic: Daemon summoning specifically.
*Techno Wizard: The Dark Mechanicus.
*Teleporters and Transporters
*Temple of Doom: Chaos temples.
*Unstoppable Rage: If you worship Khorne you have this.
*Violence is the Only Option: Always.
*War God: Khorne.
*We Have Reserves: Not so much with the 38th.
*Well-Intentioned Extremist: The Tau.
*With Great Power Comes Great Insanity: Chaos powers.
*Wrench Wench: Gaela.
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The Iron Warriors 38th Company has landed in Equestria, entrenching themselves like a barbed hook. They hunt the aliens of the Tau Empire, intent on destruction and pillage.
A small squad is dispatched on a reconnaissance mission, only to find that there is intelligent life on this world besides the feuding space-farers.
Will these improbably adorable and friendly equine aliens turn the damned warriors of Chaos from their blood-soaked path, cleansing them of their dark legacy with the magic of friendship and harmony?
No.
No, that isn't happening.
EXPLOSIONS!!
A small squad is dispatched on a reconnaissance mission, only to find that there is intelligent life on this world besides the feuding space-farers.
Will these improbably adorable and friendly equine aliens turn the damned warriors of Chaos from their blood-soaked path, cleansing them of their dark legacy with the magic of friendship and harmony?
No.
No, that isn't happening.
EXPLOSIONS!!
