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* CoolCar: The Rhinos. Any vehicle in this series really.
* CoolGuns: Every gun in it could qualify.
* CoolSword: Power swords, Chainswords and many more.
* CoolGuns: Every gun in it could qualify.
* CoolSword: Power swords, Chainswords and many more.
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Incorruptible Pure Pureness has been renamed to The Incorruptible and redefined to be about characters who are portrayed in-universe as untemptable/incorruptible. Removing for not fitting the definition.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Ponies have a natural resistance to Chaos, but they can give themselves over to Chaos.
* InsectoidAliens: The Vespid.
* JackOfAllStats: Space Marines.
* {{Jetpack}}: Tellis enjoys his very much.
* InsectoidAliens: The Vespid.
* JackOfAllStats: Space Marines.
* {{Jetpack}}: Tellis enjoys his very much.
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* TheJuggernaut: Space Marines.
* KillerRabbit: Angel Bunny.
* LighterAndSofter: Than 40K in general.
* KillerRabbit: Angel Bunny.
* LighterAndSofter: Than 40K in general.
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* OneManArmy: Any Space Marine really.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Tellis.
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* PsychicStatic: The Shadow of the Warp
* RadioVoice: Vox Systems.
* RadioVoice: Vox Systems.
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* SpacePirates: The 38th Company.
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* AttackAttackAttack: The main strategy of a large number of characters.
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* AttackAttackAttack: AttackAttackAttack:
** The main strategy of a large number of characters.
** The main strategy of a large number of characters.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Subverted. Solon, Warsmith of the 38th Company, holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing). He holds the rank of Warsmith due to being uniquely suited to leading a roving band of looters, and being incredibly skilled with technology.
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* RankScalesWithAsskicking: Subverted. Solon, Warsmith of the 38th Company, holds the record for most duels lost (largely because he survives losing). He holds the rank of Warsmith due to being uniquely suited to leading a roving band of looters, and being incredibly skilled with technology.
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* CoolPet: Applebloom has a pet maulerfiend.
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** When Equinaught Squadron is called to a meeting with Solon just before their first deployment, Twilight says [[Franchise/StarWars "I've got a bad feeling about this"]].
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** When Equinaught Squadron is called to a meeting with Solon just before their first deployment, Twilight says tells her friends that she's [[Franchise/StarWars "I've "..got a bad feeling about this"]].
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** Rot Blossom fights Killer Instinct with a [[Film/FromRussiaWithLove spring-loaded blade in her boot]].
** When Equinaught Squadron is called to a meeting with Solon just before their first deployment, Twilight says [[Franchise/StarWars "I've got a bad feeling about this"]].
** When Equinaught Squadron is called to a meeting with Solon just before their first deployment, Twilight says [[Franchise/StarWars "I've got a bad feeling about this"]].
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Italicizing the titles in the intro... and I don't see why this spoiler text in the intro's recommendation is here. Yes, the author's bit is amusing, but we should have the author's name plainly put here.
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The Iron Hearts series is comprised of 5 Books and its sequels Entrenchment and Rep'talal and related stories, and they explore what happens when a slightly unorthodox band of Chaos space pirates get allied with a magical nation of talking equines and just snowballs from there.
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The Iron Hearts ''Iron Hearts'' series is written by [=SFaccountant=] and is comprised of 5 Books and its sequels Entrenchment and Rep'talal ''Entrenchment'', ''Rep'talal'' and related stories, and they stories. They explore what happens when a slightly unorthodox band of Chaos space pirates get allied with a magical nation of talking equines and just snowballs from there.
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It's recommended to read the side stories "Visions of Darkness", "Gear in the Machine" + "Steely Hearts" by [[spoiler:nothing_to_see_here]] after finishing Book 4.
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It's recommended to read the side stories "Visions ''Visions of Darkness", "Gear Darkness'', ''Gear in the Machine" + "Steely Hearts" Machine'' and spin-off ''Steely Hearts'' by [[spoiler:nothing_to_see_here]] nothing_to_see_here after finishing Book 4.4 [[note]]''Steely Hearts'' is unfinished and Dead as per our FanficRecommendations standards, having been marked on Hiatus in 2016 with no further updates [[/note]].
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent: Celestia gets told by Voidsong that they aren’t that different at all. Celestia is not pleased.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Celestia gets told by Voidsong that they aren’t that different at all. Celestia is not pleased.
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* CrazyAwesome: Rainbow Dash and Tellis, especially after they become friends and begin to go for crazier and crazier stunts to defeat their enemies.
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* CrazyAwesome: CrazyEnoughToWork: Rainbow Dash and Tellis, especially after they become friends and begin to go for crazier and crazier stunts to defeat their enemies.
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Commenting these entries out since they're Zero Context Examples.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Derpy delivering a letter to Warmaster Solon in person. This is despite the fact that he was in the center of his heavily-defended base at the time, which was absolutely covered in automated defensive guns, guarded by hardened soldiers 24/7, and was getting more impenetrable by the hour. She didn't even notice any of these things.
* AFatherToHisMen: Sliver, at least where the Iron Warriors are concerned.
* AFatherToHisMen: Sliver, at least where the Iron Warriors are concerned.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Derpy delivering a letter to Warmaster Solon in person. This is despite the fact that he was is in the center of his heavily-defended base at the time, which was is absolutely covered in automated defensive guns, guarded by hardened soldiers 24/7, and was is getting more impenetrable by the hour. She didn't even notice any of these things.
* AFatherToHisMen: Sliver, at least where the Iron Warriors are concerned.things and got into his inner sanctum, delivered said letter and then gets ''out again'' without issue.
* AFatherToHisMen: Sliver, at least where the Iron Warriors are concerned.
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** After "The Soldier" in Visions of Darkness, [[spoiler:Wyatt Daniels, a human mercenary, is unoffically adopted into the Apples by Applejack.]]
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** After "The Soldier" in Visions ''Visions of Darkness, Darkness'', [[spoiler:Wyatt Daniels, a human mercenary, is unoffically unofficially adopted into the Apples by Applejack.]]
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* BerserkButton: Twilight's becomes Lord Serith himself, after his various plots humiliate Twilight while casually destroying her own attempts to outsmart him, she has to be physically restrained by her friends in order to not try murdering him after the first meeting between Celestia and the Chaos leadership.
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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
** Twilight's becomes Lord Serith himself, after his various plots humiliate Twilight while casually destroying her own attempts to outsmart him, she has to be physically restrained by her friends in order to not try murdering him after the first meeting between Celestia and the Chaos leadership.
** Twilight's becomes Lord Serith himself, after his various plots humiliate Twilight while casually destroying her own attempts to outsmart him, she has to be physically restrained by her friends in order to not try murdering him after the first meeting between Celestia and the Chaos leadership.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Tellis of the Iron Warriors is simultaneously a discussed and subverted example. He is certainly one of the most deadly Raptors of the 38th Company, to the point that he's a powerful Champion of Khorne and gets the Blood God's direct attention occasionally. He's also one of the Legion's worst soldiers: Tellis has no attention span, barely listens to his own side, and doesn't care for tactics beyond flying headlong into a fight. Tellis has repeatedly ruined his Company's battle plans by going on his own and slaughtering anything he finds.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Tellis of the Iron Warriors is simultaneously a discussed and subverted example. He is certainly one of the most deadly Raptors of the 38th Company, to the point that he's a powerful Champion of Khorne and gets the Blood God's direct attention occasionally. He's also one of the Legion's worst soldiers: Tellis has no attention span, barely listens to his own side, side (even if he does, he swiftly forgets any order that isn't "stab those guys in front of you"), and doesn't care for tactics beyond flying headlong into a fight. Tellis has repeatedly ruined his Company's battle plans by going on his own and slaughtering anything he finds.
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* CelestialBureaucracy: Discord's latest job is working in one of these, but it's for the Dark Gods and its somewhere in the Warp. He's shown to be either approving or denying prayers to Tzeentch, and the whole thing feels like an office building (complete with water cooler banter with some of Slaanesh's "employees").
** Discord is not amused by the amulet that Serith gave to Twilight, and tells Spike that the cursed artifact that Spike put on is a lawsuit waiting to happen; the new daemon inside it didn't offer Spike a contract of any sort in exchange for its power, and has the nerve to go for full mutation for its drawback.
* CharacterDevelopment: In droves from everyone. The Equestrians start out innocent and pure, but eventually get used to the prospect of constant warfare and become more-or-less Chaotic servants while still being somewhat chipper. The 38th Company is still evil and Chaotic, but there is a noticeable relaxation of their violent urges. Serith muses on how their time on Equestria has changed them in Book 5.
** Discord is not amused by the amulet that Serith gave to Twilight, and tells Spike that the cursed artifact that Spike put on is a lawsuit waiting to happen; the new daemon inside it didn't offer Spike a contract of any sort in exchange for its power, and has the nerve to go for full mutation for its drawback.
* CharacterDevelopment: In droves from everyone. The Equestrians start out innocent and pure, but eventually get used to the prospect of constant warfare and become more-or-less Chaotic servants while still being somewhat chipper. The 38th Company is still evil and Chaotic, but there is a noticeable relaxation of their violent urges. Serith muses on how their time on Equestria has changed them in Book 5.
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* CelestialBureaucracy: CelestialBureaucracy:
** Discord's latest job is working in one of these, but it's for the Dark Gods and its somewhere in the Warp. He's shown to be either approving or denying prayers to Tzeentch, and the whole thing feels like an office building (complete with water cooler banter with some of Slaanesh's "employees").
** As a result of his new job, Discord is not amused by the amulet that Serith gave to Twilight, and tells Spike that the cursed artifact that Spike put on is alawsuit "lawsuit" waiting to happen; the new daemon inside it didn't offer Spike a contract of any sort in exchange for its power, and has the nerve to go for full mutation for its drawback.
* CharacterDevelopment: In droves from everyone. The Equestrians start out innocent and pure, but eventually get used to the prospect of constantwarfare warfare, reapply their various talents to unending war, and become more-or-less Chaotic servants while still being somewhat chipper. The 38th Company is still evil and Chaotic, but there is a noticeable relaxation of their violent urges.urges due to their interaction with the Equestrians. Serith muses on how their time on Equestria has changed them in Book 5.
** Discord's latest job is working in one of these, but it's for the Dark Gods and its somewhere in the Warp. He's shown to be either approving or denying prayers to Tzeentch, and the whole thing feels like an office building (complete with water cooler banter with some of Slaanesh's "employees").
** As a result of his new job, Discord is not amused by the amulet that Serith gave to Twilight, and tells Spike that the cursed artifact that Spike put on is a
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* CrazyPrepared: When the Iron Warriors make planetfall anywhere, they build a fortress. Even if it's only a small scale supply run, they build a fortress just in case they need to dig in.
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* CrazyPrepared: When the Iron Warriors make planetfall anywhere, they build a fortress. Even if it's only a small scale small-scale supply run, they build a fortress just in case they need to dig in.
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* DemonicPossession: Spike gets latched onto by a daemon hiding in a chaos artefact. Since there was no official [[DealWithTheDevil contract]], Discord has it removed from him.
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* DemonicPossession: Spike gets latched onto by a daemon hiding in a chaos Chaotic artefact. Since there was no official [[DealWithTheDevil contract]], Discord has it removed from him.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: Happens to the Tau due to them not having much contact with humans outside of the Imperium, and are accordingly shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos. The Tau also didn't expect the "native xenos life-forms" to actually assist the Iron Warriors, given the Imperium's xenophobic attitudes to other species.
** The Iron Warriors get their turn after the Tau force in the Everfree Forest is found to be totally underwhelming. The Legion relax their guard to the point that construction of their base's high-priority defensive works get delayed, [[spoiler: which goes incredibly poorly for them when a much bigger Tau force with heavy armor support suddenly attacks the incomplete fortress]].
** The Iron Warriors get their turn after the Tau force in the Everfree Forest is found to be totally underwhelming. The Legion relax their guard to the point that construction of their base's high-priority defensive works get delayed, [[spoiler: which goes incredibly poorly for them when a much bigger Tau force with heavy armor support suddenly attacks the incomplete fortress]].
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* DidntSeeThatComing: DidntSeeThatComing:
** Happens to the Tau due to them not having much contact with humans outside of the Imperium, and are accordingly shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos. The Tau also didn't expect the "native xenos life-forms" to actually assist the Iron Warriors, given the Imperium's xenophobic attitudes to other species.
** The Iron Warriors get their turn after the Tau force in the Everfree Forest is found to be totally underwhelming. The Legion relax their guard to the point that construction of their base's high-priority defensive works bordering the Forest get delayed, [[spoiler: which goes incredibly poorly for them when a much bigger Tau force with heavy armor support suddenly attacks the incomplete fortress]].
** Happens to the Tau due to them not having much contact with humans outside of the Imperium, and are accordingly shocked by some of the things they see when fighting Chaos. The Tau also didn't expect the "native xenos life-forms" to actually assist the Iron Warriors, given the Imperium's xenophobic attitudes to other species.
** The Iron Warriors get their turn after the Tau force in the Everfree Forest is found to be totally underwhelming. The Legion relax their guard to the point that construction of their base's high-priority defensive works bordering the Forest get delayed, [[spoiler: which goes incredibly poorly for them when a much bigger Tau force with heavy armor support suddenly attacks the incomplete fortress]].
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* EvilFeelsGood: Chaos grants lots of benefits, whether it bee increased archane might, martial skill, or extreme durability.
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* EvilFeelsGood: Chaos grants lots of benefits, whether it bee increased archane arcane might, martial skill, or extreme durability.
* AFatherToHisMen: Sliver, at least where the Iron Warriors are concerned.
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: [[spoiler: Serith, for all his power and posturing, is actually this compared to other Chaos Sorcerers. His prior schemes and projects have constantly fallen apart, and the resultant self-loathing that his failures cause has made Serith suggest that Solon should just [[YouHaveFailedMe deactivate him permanently]] to spare Serith the shame]].
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: [[spoiler: Serith, for all his power and posturing, is actually this compared to other Chaos Sorcerers. His prior schemes and projects have constantly fallen apart, and the resultant self-loathing that his failures cause has made Serith suggest that Solon should just [[YouHaveFailedMe deactivate him permanently]] to spare Serith the shame]].shame of existing]].
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Subverted repeatedly. The Iron Warriors don't have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomable evil but no gold. Yet a lot of ponies worship them as heroes.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Subverted repeatedly. The Iron Warriors don't have hearts of gold, maybe hearts composed of unfathomable evil but no gold. Yet a lot of ponies worship them as heroes.heroes and see (relative) good in them.
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* MadScientist: Solon, and the Dark Mechanicus.
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* MadScientist: Solon, and the Dark Mechanicus. The 38th Company is effectively a roving band of warriors and mercenaries led by mad scientists who are free to experiment with anything they get their hands on.
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* MadeOfPlasticine: If you don’t have armor.
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* MechaMooks: Drones.
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* PsychicPowers: All unicorns and psykers. The former is remarked upon by the alien armies on Equestria, since it's unheard of to have so many psykers in a planet's population.
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* PsychicPowers: All unicorns and psykers. The former is remarked upon by the alien armies on Equestria, since it's unheard of to have so many psykers in a planet's population.population, let alone ''stable'' ones that don't get possessed by daemons on the regular.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Applejack refuses to get involved with the fighting between the Tau and the Iron Warriors, and maintains that her family will also stay out of it. It takes a Great Knarloc destroying some of the Apple's orchards and literally walking through their farmhouse before she finally snaps.
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* RageBreakingPoint: RageBreakingPoint:
** Applejack refuses to get involved with the fighting between the Tau and the Iron Warriors, and maintains that her family will also stay out of it. It takes a Great Knarloc destroying some of the Apple's orchards and literally walking through their farmhouse before she finally snaps.
** Applejack refuses to get involved with the fighting between the Tau and the Iron Warriors, and maintains that her family will also stay out of it. It takes a Great Knarloc destroying some of the Apple's orchards and literally walking through their farmhouse before she finally snaps.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: The 38th Companies of the Iron Warriors are stated to be this; back in the Pre-Heresy days, the grand companies of the Iron Warriors were required by their Primarch to maintain a 38th Company dedicated to guarding their supply lines. Even among a Legion that had grueling siegework as their lot in the Crusades, being in one of these companies was regarded as a punishment detail. When the fanfic starts, the 38th Company is still the place where the Iron Warriors dump Marines too incompetent or eccentric to tolerate, but who aren't total wastes of gene-seed to simply kill.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: The 38th Companies of the Iron Warriors are explicitly stated to be this; back in the Pre-Heresy days, the grand companies of the Iron Warriors were required by their Primarch to maintain a 38th Company dedicated to guarding their supply lines. Even among a Legion that had grueling siegework as their lot in the Crusades, being in one of these companies was regarded as a punishment detail. When the fanfic starts, the 38th Company is still the place where the Iron Warriors dump Marines too incompetent or eccentric to tolerate, but who aren't total wastes of gene-seed to simply kill.
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* SoulJar: [[spoiler: What Serith is revealed to be in Book 5; a phylactery created by Solon binds Serith's soul to his armor, after his attempt to undo the Rubric of Ahriman severely backfired and left him a Rubric Sorcerer]]
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* SoulJar: SoulJar:
** [[spoiler: What Serith is revealed to be in Book 5; a phylactery created by Solon binds Serith's soul to his armor, after his attempt to undo the Rubric of Ahriman severely backfired and left him a Rubric Sorcerer]]
** [[spoiler: What Serith is revealed to be in Book 5; a phylactery created by Solon binds Serith's soul to his armor, after his attempt to undo the Rubric of Ahriman severely backfired and left him a Rubric Sorcerer]]
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* StartOfDarkness: The Visions of Darkness stories reveal how each of the named human characters was either recruited or forced into the forces of Chaos.
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* StartOfDarkness: The Visions ''Visions of Darkness Darkness'' stories reveal how each of the named human characters was either recruited or forced into the forces of Chaos.
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* TeleportersAndTransporters
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Serith honestly thought returning something he stole ([[spoiler:The Elements of Harmony]]) would endear him to Celestia.
* WarGod: Khorne.
* WarGod: Khorne.
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* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Serith honestly thought returning something he stole ([[spoiler:The Elements of Harmony]]) would endear him to Celestia.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Chaos powers.
* WrenchWench: Gaela.
* WrenchWench: Gaela.
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* SpiderSense: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. If your gums start itching, [[TheCavalry someone's about to teleport in and ruin/save your day]].
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* SpiderSense: Played straight with Pinkie Sense, but [[InvertedTrope Inverted]].inverted]] with the humans' teleporter technology. If your gums start itching, [[TheCavalry someone's about to teleport in and ruin/save your day]].
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** After "The Soldier" in Visions of Darkness, [[spoiler:Wyatt Daniels, a human mercenary, is unoffically adopted into the Apples by Applejack.]]
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** An elderly unicorn uses the Jedi Mind Trick from ''Film/StarWars'' to gain access to Ferrous Dominous, and is himself a CaptainErsatz of Ben Kenobi.
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** An elderly unicorn uses the Jedi Mind Trick from ''Film/StarWars'' ''Franchise/StarWars'' to gain access to Ferrous Dominous, and is himself a CaptainErsatz of Ben Kenobi.
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It's recommended to read the side stories "Visions of Darkness" and "Gear in the Machine" after finishing Book 4.
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It's recommended to read the side stories "Visions of Darkness" and Darkness", "Gear in the Machine" + "Steely Hearts" by [[spoiler:nothing_to_see_here]] after finishing Book 4.
