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* BigWhat:
** When Hollow Ichigo invokes the You Need To Get Laid trope.
** Toshiro's reaction to Ichigo's Knight Templar Big Brother attitude.
** When Hollow Ichigo invokes the You Need To Get Laid trope.
** Toshiro's reaction to Ichigo's Knight Templar Big Brother attitude.
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9424156/1/Further-Machinations Further Machinations]]'', is now up, as of June 24, 2013.
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9424156/1/Further-Machinations Further Machinations]]'', is now up, as of had its first chapter published on June 24, 2013.
2013, but it has not been updated since then.
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* FantasticRomance: The hollow just can't get enough of [[spoiler:Neliel.]]
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* GhostShipping: The hollow just can't get enough of [[spoiler:Neliel.]]
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* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: Orihime points out that Ichigo's adventures would make a great manga. They could even have it printed in ''ShonenJump''.
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* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: Orihime points out that Ichigo's adventures would make a great manga. They could even have it printed in ''ShonenJump''.''Magazine/ShonenJump''.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: "We could serialize them, maybe! ShonenJump would take the manga!"
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: "We could serialize them, maybe! ShonenJump ''Magazine/ShonenJump'' would take the manga!"
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** Orihime says Ichigo's adventures could be printed in ''ShonenJump''.
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** Orihime says Ichigo's adventures could be printed in ''ShonenJump''.''Magazine/ShonenJump''.
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* YourEyesCanDeceiveYou: Ichigo trains blindfolded, both to improve his ability to sense reiatsu and so he can fight Aizen without falling prey to his illusions.
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* YourEyesCanDeceiveYou: Ichigo trains blindfolded, both to improve his ability to sense reiatsu and so he can fight Aizen without falling prey to his illusions.illusions.
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* CelibateHero[=/=]ChasteHero[=/=]CluelessChickMagnet: Ichigo as usual and lampshaded mercilessly.
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* CelibateHero[=/=]ChasteHero[=/=]CluelessChickMagnet: Ichigo as usual and lampshaded mercilessly. In fact, his obliviousness to when people are interested in him [[spoiler:indirectly leads to Aizen's defeat]].
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* AnthropomorphicPersonification: Neither Zangetsu nor his Inner Hollow were ever separate spirits from Ichigo -- they are ultimately a part of him, and only merged together with Ichigo is their master whole. [[spoiler:This technicality means that Ichigo was still capable of taking on a Zanpakuto, which is why Muramasa was able to bond with him.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes:[[spoiler:Because Muramasa isn't a zanpakuto formed from Ichigo's soul, Aizen isn't able to drain him into the King's Key's creation right away. Thus, Ichigo is able to call upon Muramasa before Aizen can kill them both.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Uryu, Isshin, Renji, Chad, Neliel and others arriving to save Ichigo from the hollowfied Tosen.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Uryu, Isshin, Renji, Chad, Neliel and others arriving to save Ichigo from the hollowfied Tosen.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes:[[spoiler:Because BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Because Muramasa isn't a zanpakuto formed from Ichigo's soul, Aizen isn't able to drain him into the King's Key's creation right away. Thus, Ichigo is able to call upon Muramasa before Aizen can kill them both.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Uryu, Isshin, Renji, Chad, Neliel and others arriving to save Ichigo from the hollowfiedTosen.Tousen.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:Uryu, Isshin, Renji, Chad, Neliel and others arriving to save Ichigo from the hollowfied
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Non-romantic example. When [[spoiler: Muramasa decides that Ichigo should be his next wielder, [[TheStoic Zangetsu]] does NOT [[NotSoStoic take it well]].]]
* CynicalMentor: Yamamoto acts as one to Ichigo by discussing battle strategies and forcing him to use his hollow abilities when he's been too frightened of them so far. He finds Ichigo far too idealistic, but as he put it, "In one thousand years, no shinigami has been born who was able to stand against the full force of my spiritual pressure." Guess who the exception was.
* CynicalMentor: Yamamoto acts as one to Ichigo by discussing battle strategies and forcing him to use his hollow abilities when he's been too frightened of them so far. He finds Ichigo far too idealistic, but as he put it, "In one thousand years, no shinigami has been born who was able to stand against the full force of my spiritual pressure." Guess who the exception was.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Non-romantic example. When [[spoiler: Muramasa [[spoiler:Muramasa decides that Ichigo should be his next wielder, [[TheStoic Zangetsu]] does NOT [[NotSoStoic take it well]].]]
* CynicalMentor: Yamamoto acts as one to Ichigo by discussing battle strategies and forcing him to use his hollow abilities when he's been too frightened of them so far. He finds Ichigo far too idealistic, but as he put it, "In one thousand years, no shinigami has been born who was able to stand against the full force of my spiritual pressure." Guess who the exception was.
* CynicalMentor: Yamamoto acts as one to Ichigo by discussing battle strategies and forcing him to use his hollow abilities when he's been too frightened of them so far. He finds Ichigo far too idealistic, but as he put it, "In one thousand years, no shinigami has been born who was able to stand against the full force of my spiritual pressure." Guess who the exception was.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Nearly everyone is sickened with the thought of another Tousen (enough to agree with the less-than-popular Gin), [[spoiler:and nearly everyone was enraged by Kouga's mistreatment of Muramasa, whether they showed it or not.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: It's easy to miss, but an author's note helpfully points it out. While TheCavalry is fighting [[MasterOfIllusion Aizen]], [[spoiler: Ichigo, gravely injured, sensibly stays out of the way. [[TheHero That]] [[LeeroyJenkins sounds]] [[HotBlooded like]] [[{{Determinator}} him]], [[SarcasmMode doesn't it?]] It foreshadows that Aizen wasted no time in implementing his DisguisedHostageGambit]].
* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler: Ichigo does not use the Final Getsuga Tensho release against Aizen in the FinalBattle. Another example of this is that Senna from the first film never exists since Ichigo spends all his time in Soul Society and she is never created]].
* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler: Ichigo does not use the Final Getsuga Tensho release against Aizen in the FinalBattle. Another example of this is that Senna from the first film never exists since Ichigo spends all his time in Soul Society and she is never created]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: It's easy to miss, but an author's note helpfully points it out. While TheCavalry is fighting [[MasterOfIllusion Aizen]], [[spoiler: Ichigo, [[spoiler:Ichigo, gravely injured, sensibly stays out of the way. [[TheHero That]] [[LeeroyJenkins sounds]] [[HotBlooded like]] [[{{Determinator}} him]], [[SarcasmMode doesn't it?]] It foreshadows that Aizen wasted no time in implementing his DisguisedHostageGambit]].
* ForWantOfANail:[[spoiler: Ichigo [[spoiler:Ichigo does not use the Final Getsuga Tensho release against Aizen in the FinalBattle. Another example of this is that Senna from the first film never exists since Ichigo spends all his time in Soul Society and she is never created]].
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* [[spoiler: [[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Family and Best Friend]]]]
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* [[spoiler: [[IHaveYourWife [[spoiler:[[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Family and Best Friend]]]]
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* ItCanThink: While it's touched on in canon, in ''Hogykou ex Machina,'' the Hogyoku has the mind of a domesticated animal. [[spoiler: Its spirit is turned into a dog by the end of the story.]]
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* ItCanThink: While it's touched on in canon, in ''Hogykou ex Machina,'' the Hogyoku has the mind of a domesticated animal. [[spoiler: Its [[spoiler:Its spirit is turned into a dog by the end of the story.]]
** Hilariously, the one time Ichigo calls him Hitsugaya-taicho, [[{{Irony}} Hitsugaya-taicho immediately wishes to be "Toshiro" again]].
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* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Upon learning that Karin had a crush on Toshiro, Ichigo's first thought is to kill him. After Zangetsu talks him down from that, Ichigo asks him if he can at least maim him.
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* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Upon learning that Karin had a crush on Toshiro, Ichigo's first thought is to kill him. After Zangetsu talks him down from that, Ichigo asks him if he can at least maim him. When denied that, he reaffirms that he ''will'' kick his ass.
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* YouAreNotAlone: In the end, the greatest difference between Aizen and Ichigo is that Ichigo '''chose''' not to be alone. [[spoiler:That is what ultimately leads to Aizen's defeat.]]
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* YouAreNotAlone: In the end, the greatest difference between Aizen and Ichigo is that Ichigo '''chose''' not to be alone. [[spoiler:That is what ultimately leads to Aizen's defeat.death.]]
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* YouAreNotAlone: In the end, the greatest difference between Aizen and Ichigo is that Ichigo '''chose''' not to be alone. [[spoiler:That is what ultimately leads to Aizen's defeat.]]
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: Ichigo gets told this word-for-word by his [[SuperpoweredEvilSide hollow self]] since he's severely weakening himself in order to not be a PoisonousPerson (it came with his PhysicalGod status) and he's a ChickMagnet anyway, so why waste it? [[ChasteHero Ichigo's so embarrassed and adverse to the idea]] that the hollow turns to Zangetsu and asks, "He's not gay, right? I'd know if he was gay."
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: Ichigo gets told this word-for-word by his [[SuperpoweredEvilSide hollow self]] since he's severely weakening himself in order to not be a PoisonousPerson (it came with his PhysicalGod status) and he's a ChickMagnet anyway, so why waste it? [[ChasteHero Ichigo's so embarrassed and adverse to the idea]] that the hollow turns to Zangetsu and asks, "He's not gay, right? I'd know if he was gay.""
* YourEyesCanDeceiveYou: Ichigo trains blindfolded, both to improve his ability to sense reiatsu and so he can fight Aizen without falling prey to his illusions.
* YourEyesCanDeceiveYou: Ichigo trains blindfolded, both to improve his ability to sense reiatsu and so he can fight Aizen without falling prey to his illusions.
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* {{Troll}}: Since Ichigo's Hollow can't fight Ichigo anymore, this becomes his main form of entertainment.
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* PrecisionFStrike: After being told his plan will ultimately not work, Gin's eyes are [[EyesAlwaysShut wide open]] and he says, “Well....shit.”
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* PrecisionFStrike: After being told his plan will ultimately not work, Gin's eyes are [[EyesAlwaysShut wide open]] and he says, “Well...."Well....shit.”"
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Kenpachi laughs and says this when Ichigo's memory of Aizen turning into a butterfly is shown.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Ishida asks it when Ichigo tells him he is already planning to kill Aizen instead of letting the Shinigami fight the war
--> ""Kurosaki. When did this become some kind of grudge match between you two?!"
--> ""Kurosaki. When did this become some kind of grudge match between you two?!"
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* VillainsActHeroesReact: Ichigo lampshades this by pointing out that Aizen has learned to use it to his advantage.
--> "This isn't right. This is what he wants. Us distracted. Always reacting to what he does."
--> "This isn't right. This is what he wants. Us distracted. Always reacting to what he does."
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* KnightTemplarBigBrother: Upon learning that Karin had a crush on Toshiro, Ichigo's first thought is to kill him. After Zangetsu talks him down from that, Ichigo asks him if he can at least maim him.
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* [[spoiler: [[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Little Sisters and Best Friend]]]]
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* [[spoiler: [[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Little Sisters Family and Best Friend]]]]
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* FridgeHorror: In-universe example when Ishida and Ichigo explain TB and antibiotics to Unohana. Unohana suddenly has OhCrap moment when she realises that if Ukitake had TB, she'd been unintentionally strengthening the disease.
* FridgeLogic: "I guess antibiotics don't work on dead guys then."
* FridgeLogic: "I guess antibiotics don't work on dead guys then."
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In the final battle, Ichigo and Aizen strike fatal blows against each other at the same time. The Hogyoku reacts by sending them both [[TimeTravel back three months]] to the point in time when Aizen first picked up the stone right after he betrayed Soul Society. On one hand, Ichigo has the chance to kill Aizen properly and [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong undo damage and deaths caused the first time around]]. Unfortunately, the enemy too enemy, too, is well-aware of what has (and will) happen happen, as well as who they should attack if they want to hurt Ichigo in the worst way.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler: "Consorting with a declared threat to the peace! Offering to free a dangerous criminal! Releasing hundreds of Menos Grande into Soul Society! Merging with a second zanpakuto!"]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler: "Consorting with a declared threat to the peace! Offering to free a dangerous criminal! Releasing hundreds of Menos Grande into Soul Society! Merging ''Merging with a second zanpakuto!"]]zanpakuto!''"]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: [[spoiler: "Consorting with a declared threat to the peace! Offering to free a dangerous criminal! Releasing hundreds of Menos Grande into Soul Society! Merging with a second zanpakuto!"]]
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* [[spoiler:[[AllAmazonsWantHercules All Zanpakuto Want Hercules]]: Ichigo succeeds in convincing Muramasa to stand down. He did not expect Muramasa to choose him as his next wielder.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[AllAmazonsWantHercules All Zanpakuto Want Hercules]]: Ichigo]]: Ichigo succeeds in convincing Muramasa to stand down. He did not expect Muramasa to choose him as his next wielder.]]
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The sequel, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9424156/1/Further-Machinations Further Machinations]]'', is now up, as of June 24, 2013.
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*** Unohana gets one too. When she notices that Ichigo is OnlyMostlyDead, she notes that this means he is slightly alive.
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The Gadfly and Troll cleanup - the former is for teasing and the latter malicious. Type labels and zero context examples are being removed.
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* TheGadfly: The hollow.
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-->'''Hitsugaya:''' He wants to kill me because I'm too ''old?'' (''There was just something cosmically unfair about that.'')
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-->'''Hitsugaya:''' He wants to kill me because I'm too ''old?'' (''There was just something [[ChildProdigy cosmically unfair unfair]] about that.'')
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku Ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6437275/1/Hogyoku_ex_Machina Hogyoku Ex Machina]]'' is a completed ''{{Bleach}}'' ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' fanfiction by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/230982/Mac_Ceallach Mac Ceallach]].
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* GhostShipping: The hollow just can't get enough of [[spoiler:[[HotAmazon Neliel.]]]]
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* GhostShipping: The hollow just can't get enough of [[spoiler:[[HotAmazon Neliel.]]]][[spoiler:Neliel.]]
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* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''[[BeyondTheImpossible Yamamoto's Bankai]]'' like so much tissue paper.
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* PhysicalGod: The full implications of Ichigo's ascension after fusing with Zangetsu are explored. Bleeding out, half-dead, he cuts through ''[[BeyondTheImpossible Yamamoto's Bankai]]'' ''Yamamoto's Bankai'' like so much tissue paper.
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** Ichigo convinces Gin that he's from the future by explaining the true power of Gin's bankai, which Gin never revealed to anyone.