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* KillEmAll: Two of the twelve are still alive at the end of part one. One of them dies near the beginning of Part Two.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Josef will do literally anything to become the savior of his people from [[OurDwarvesAreDifferent dwarven]] tyranny.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Josef will do literally anything to become the savior of his people from [[OurDwarvesAreDifferent dwarven]] tyranny.tyranny.
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* PettingZooPeople: Max and the rest of his race of dog-people.
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* WolfMan: Max and the rest of his race of dog-people.
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* TheObiWan: Ben
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* BeingHumanSucks: Sir Espion Castor is a human adopted and raised by the much more technologically advanced, as well as telekenetic and telepathic Atnirian aliens, on their planet. Since he has none of these abilities, and both the Atnirian spoken AND written language has telepathic elements, he grew up believing he was a SEVERELY mentally disabled, illiterate, short Atniarian with a mutation that made his skin the wrong color.
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TheEmoGame is a three part story under some sort of progress by PadurKaril and his best friend. It is a total self insert on both parts, but great efforts have been made to keep all characters non-MarySue The plot revolves around a group of twelve {{Emo Teen}}s who get murdered by a group of punkish kids. The Emo Kids are rescued by a "Goddess" who goes by the name The Empress. The Empress recruits the kids to participate in an interstellar quest to rid the galaxy of the evil "Shifters". She bestowes upon this group elemental powers, and gives them missions.
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TheEmoGame is a three part story under some sort of progress by PadurKaril and his best friend. It is a total self insert on both parts, but great efforts have been made to keep all characters non-MarySue The plot revolves around a group of twelve {{Emo Teen}}s who get murdered by a group of punkish kids. The Emo Kids are rescued by a "Goddess" who goes by the name The Empress. The Empress recruits the kids to participate in an interstellar quest to rid the galaxy of the evil "Shifters". She bestowes bestows upon this group elemental powers, and gives them missions.
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* LittleMissBadass Natalie is the smallest character, but is by far the most competent fighter of the group.
* LoveMakesYouCrazy: A pretty constant theme.
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* OddFriendship: The [[BloodKnight violent, aggressive]] Billy and the [[TechnicalPacifist peace-loving]] timid Matthew end up becoming close partners near the end.
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* SandWorm: There are plenty of them on the desert planet Ben gets sent to.
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* WaifProphet: The Seeress who accompanies Josef [[spoiler: subverted in that she actually isn't any kind of seer, just manipulating him for her own protection and gain.]]
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* SiblingYinYang: Devon is quiet, generally kind, well meaning, a little shy, and NeutralGood. Billy is loud, rarely even tries to be nice really, and swings between NeutralEvil, ChaoticEvil, and a bit near the end, LawfulEvil / LawfulNeutral, sometimes nearing CompleteMonster territory.
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* SiblingYinYang: Devon is quiet, generally kind, well meaning, a little shy, and NeutralGood. Billy is loud, rarely even tries to be nice really, and swings between NeutralEvil, ChaoticEvil, and a bit near the end, LawfulEvil / LawfulNeutral, sometimes nearing CompleteMonster territory.LawfulNeutral.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Billy slowly evolves from a sociopathic murderer to a competent, tough love style leader, partly due to influence from [[MoralityPet Matthew]] and [[BruiserWithASoftCenter Big Ben]]
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* TechnicalPacifist: Matthew abhors violence, and finds a technique to use his lightning powers to disable shifters without killing them, once disabled he [[ReluctantMadScientist experiments with them]] [[HaveYouTriedNotBeingAMonster in an attempt to cure them of being shifters]]
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* LittleMissBadass Natalie is the smallest character, but is by far the most competent fighter of the group.
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* GodGuise: When Christina is sent back to ancient Egypt when the Empress [[BreakingTheFellowship splits the team up]] for [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment "Correctional"]] purposes, this happens
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* SendMeBack: Matthew and Billy after being pulled out of Camelot, and Ben when the Empress brings him back from the desert planet. The Empress denies both pleas.
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* ILetGwenStacyDie: [[spoiler: Pierce]] gets killed after deciding against his better judgement to take an escape route Ben insisted was the right one.
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* DwindlingParty: [[spoiler: In Order: Pierce, Krista, Max, Natalie, Luke, Ryan, Big Ben, Billy, Matt, Christina, Devon, Ben]]
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** Cynics: Ben, Billy, Ryan
** Optimists: Matthew, Devon, Cheney
** Realists: Natalie, Krista, Luke
** Apathetic: Big Ben, Christina, Pierce
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** Optimists: Matthew, Devon, Cheney
** Realists: Natalie, Krista, Luke
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Josef will do literally anything to become the savior of his people from [[OurDwarvesAreDifferent dwarven]] tyranny.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Josef will do literally anything to become FinalGirl: Cheney, for the savior of his people from [[OurDwarvesAreDifferent dwarven]] tyranny.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Sir Espion Castor is given a huge book of names and titles on his way to earth, and told to pick from them to choose his human name.
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* BuyThemOff: The team gets sent to the future to get revenge on the people who killed them. Billy finds their leader, now an old man, who has apparently undergone a HeelFaceTurn. The man offers him everything he owns to spare his life. Billy [[ScrewTheMoneyIHaveRules throws him off a ledge to his death]].
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* PettingZooPeople: Max and the rest of his race of dog-people.
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy: A pretty constant theme.
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* SanitySlippage: Everyone to a degree, but especially Devon. He never really gets better.
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* CowardlyLion: Pierce, overlaps with HeroicSelfDeprecation, below.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Pierce is by far the strongest of the team, but constantly underestimates himself, shrinks back from glory, and often lets it get in the way of acting decisively [[spoiler: resulting in his own death]]
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Elementals' hair colors change to reflect their element.element.
!!Tropes present in Part Two
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*WillNotTellALie: Inverted with the fauns in Neverland, who will kill themselves in an attempt to prove their BlatantLies.
