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* [[BeachEpisode Beach Chapter]]: The Fifth Chapter. Needless to say, the narrator can't resist [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] how fast the story got one.
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[[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/gallery/28924261 Succubus Days]] is an ongoing work by [[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/ LakituAl]]. An UrbanFantasy SliceOfLife, ''Succubus Days'' is set in a coast city [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial that is totally not California]], and follows the antics of Ai, a [[VoluntaryShapeshifter shape shifting]] [[HornyDevils Succubus]] dealing with problems and issues that come with her lifestyle.
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[[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/gallery/28924261 Succubus Days]] is an ongoing work by [[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/ LakituAl]]. An UrbanFantasy SliceOfLife, ''Succubus Days'' is set in a coast city [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial that is totally not California]], and follows the antics of Ai, a [[VoluntaryShapeshifter shape shifting]] [[HornyDevils [[SuccubiAndIncubi Succubus]] dealing with problems and issues that come with her lifestyle.
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* CuteMonsterGirl: [[HornyDevils Succubus]]? Check. [[UglyCute Two Mouth Woman]]? Check. [[FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire Vampire Mini Moe]]? Check. [[OurBansheesAreLouder Head-bobbing Banshee]]? Check. As you see, this work BREATHES this trope.
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* CuteMonsterGirl: [[HornyDevils [[SuccubiAndIncubi Succubus]]? Check. [[UglyCute Two Mouth Woman]]? Check. [[FriendlyNeighborhoodVampire Vampire Mini Moe]]? Check. [[OurBansheesAreLouder Head-bobbing Banshee]]? Check. As you see, this work BREATHES this trope.
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One night, while surveying from the rooftop of an abandoned apartment complex, Ai locates what she thinks is an exquisite pray: A PrettyBoy of WhiteHairBlackHeart wandering alone, all in the open. Just before trying to catch the guy, it turns out someone else has her eyes set on him, namely, a [[TokenMiniMoe small]] [[TheNapoleon vampire]] who introduces herself as Katey the Third. Fighting ensues and Ai wins, but, due to a big misunderstanding and the guy's inexplicable immunity to her charms, he is now under the impression Ai is none other than a Vampire Slayer.
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One night, while surveying from the rooftop of an abandoned apartment complex, Ai locates what she thinks is an exquisite pray: prey: A PrettyBoy of WhiteHairBlackHeart wandering alone, all in the open. Just before trying to catch the guy, it turns out someone else has her eyes set on him, namely, a [[TokenMiniMoe small]] [[TheNapoleon vampire]] who introduces herself as Katey the Third. Fighting ensues and Ai wins, but, due to a big misunderstanding and the guy's inexplicable immunity to her charms, he is now under the impression Ai is none other than a Vampire Slayer.
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* FiveManBand: Majo and the Kittycats:
** Caviar (TheLeader)
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** Katey the Third (TheLancer)
** Keyboard (TheSmartGuy)
** Edison (TeamPet / TheChick, somehow...)
** Caviar (TheLeader)
** Majo (TheBigGuy)
** Katey the Third (TheLancer)
** Keyboard (TheSmartGuy)
** Edison (TeamPet / TheChick, somehow...)
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One night, while surveying from the rooftop of an abandoned apartment complex, Ai locates what she thinks is an exquisite pray: A WhiteHairedPrettyBoy PrettyBoy of WhiteHairBlackHeart wandering alone, all in the open. Just before trying to catch the guy, it turns out someone else has her eyes set on him, namely, a [[TokenMiniMoe small]] [[TheNapoleon vampire]] who introduces herself as Katey the Third. Fighting ensues and Ai wins, but, due to a big misunderstanding and the guy's inexplicable immunity to her charms, he is now under the impression Ai is none other than a Vampire Slayer.
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* OminousOwl: The owl that roosts in front of the apartment building '''despises''' Ai, and attacks her at every chance possible. Of course, the same owl gets along with Amanda quite well.
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* OwlBeDamned: The owl that roosts in front of the apartment building '''despises''' Ai, and attacks her at every chance possible. Of course, the same owl gets along with Amanda quite well.
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*FiveManBand: Majo and the Kittycats:
**Caviar (TheLeader)
**Majo (TheBigGuy)
**Katey the Third (TheLancer)
**Keyboard (TheSmartGuy)
**Edison (TeamPet / TheChick, somehow...)
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: The protagonists:
**Ai (Choleric)
**Teresa (Sanguine)
**Melancholic (Owl)
**Amanda (Phlegmatic)
**Caviar (TheLeader)
**Majo (TheBigGuy)
**Katey the Third (TheLancer)
**Keyboard (TheSmartGuy)
**Edison (TeamPet / TheChick, somehow...)
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: The protagonists:
**Ai (Choleric)
**Teresa (Sanguine)
**Melancholic (Owl)
**Amanda (Phlegmatic)
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* VictoriasSecretCompartment: Ai isn't particularly well endowed, yet she seems to store lots and lots of stuff in there...
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* PaperThinDisguise: Because that tiny girl playing bass for ''Majo and the Kittycats'' is definitely [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial not]] Katey the Third with a wig.
** Ai is prone to this too, due to a small quirk in her shape shifting powers: No matter what appearance she takes, she can't change her eye color, nor hide the mole on her left cheek.
** And then there's Amanda hiding her second mouth under a plain blanket in the fifth chapter. It seems the story is set in a place full of gullible idiots...
** Ai is prone to this too, due to a small quirk in her shape shifting powers: No matter what appearance she takes, she can't change her eye color, nor hide the mole on her left cheek.
** And then there's Amanda hiding her second mouth under a plain blanket in the fifth chapter. It seems the story is set in a place full of gullible idiots...
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* [[BeachEpisode Beach Chapter]]: The Fifth Chapter. Needless to say, the narrator can't resist [[LampshadeHanging lampshading]] how fast the story got one.
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* CutenessProximity: This, along with HypnoticEyes, is Ai's main method of luring pray. And yet, for some reason, Derrick seems to be immune...
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* MoralityPet: Ai has Amanda, who in turn has the owl.
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* OwlBeDamned: The owl that roosts in front of the apartment building '''despises''' Ai, and attacks her at every chance possible. Of course, the same owl gets along with Amanda quite well.
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One night, while surveying from the rooftop of an abandoned apartment complex, Ai locates what she thinks is an exquisite pray: A WhiteHairedPrettyBoy wandering alone. alone, all in the open. Just before catching trying to catch the guy, it turns out someone else has her eyes set on him, namely, a [[TokenMiniMoe small]] [[TheNapoleon vampire]] who introduces herself as Katey the Third. Fighting ensues and Ai wins, but, due to a big misunderstanding and the guy's inexplicable immunity to her charms, he is now under the impression Ai is none other than a Vampire Slayer.
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* CutenessProximity: This, along with HypnoticEyes, is Ai's main method of luring pray. And yet, for some reason, Derrick seems to be immune...
* [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep Everyone Calls Her Keyboard]]: The girl who plays the keyboard, natch. Worth noting Katey the Third has her own nickname for her: Kiki.
* [[EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep Everyone Calls Her Keyboard]]: The girl who plays the keyboard, natch. Worth noting Katey the Third has her own nickname for her: Kiki.
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One night, while surveying from the rooftop of an abandoned apartment complex, Ai locates what an exquisite pray: A WhiteHairedPrettyBoy wandering alone. Just before catching the guy, it turns out someone else has her eyes set on him, namely, a [[TokenMiniMoe small]] [[TheNapoleon vampire]] who introduces herself as Katey the Third. Fighting ensues and Ai wins, but, due to PoorCommunicationSkills a big misunderstanding and the guy's inexplicable immunity to her charms, he is now under the impression Ai is none other than a Vampire Slayer.
Slayer.
The man introduces himself as Derrick, and makes small talk with Ai before being found by a girl friend of his and giving him a ride. Thus, Derrick now becomes 'the one who got away', and Ai swears he shall find him again, and get him for good.
Also, more subplots and loads of characters.
The man introduces himself as Derrick, and makes small talk with Ai before being found by a girl friend of his and giving him a ride. Thus, Derrick now becomes 'the one who got away', and Ai swears he shall find him again, and get him for good.
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* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation: Keyboard is described as having pale, blueish skin.
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[[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/gallery/28924261 Succubus Days]] is an ongoing story by [[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/ LakituAl]]. It tells the story of Ai, a [[HornyDevils Succubus]], her friend Amanda, a [[BodyHorror Two Mouth Woman]] and lots of other not-quite human characters in an UrbanFantasy SliceOfLife format. [[BreakingTheFourthWall The 4th wall is made of plasticine]].
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* UnusualEuphemism: Ai is fond of using these when talking about her job. 'Kissy Kissy time', 'go out and play', 'go hunting'...
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[[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/gallery/28924261 Succubus Days]] is an ongoing story by [[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/ LakituAl]]. It tells the story about of Ai, a [[HornyDevils Succubus]], her friend Amanda, a [[BodyHorror Two Mouth Woman]] and lots of other not-quite human characters in an UrbanFantasy SliceOfLife format. [[BreakingTheFourthWall The 4th wall is made of plasticine]].
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* TheAllegedCar: Dubbed the ''[=BishieMobile=]'' by Chris.
* UnconventionalFormatting: Dialogue spoken by characters in a trance-like state is written in different fonts than the usual, denoting the unusual tone they are speaking in.
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* TheAllegedCar: Dubbed the ''[=BishieMobile=]'' by Chris.
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[[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/gallery/28924261 Succubus Days]] is an ongoing story by [[http://lakitual.deviantart.com/ LakituAl]]. It tells the story about a [[HornyDevils Succubus]], her friend a [[BodyHorror Two-Mouth Two Mouth Woman]] and lots of other not-quite human characters in an UrbanFantasy SliceOfLife format. [[BreakingTheFourthWall The 4th wall is made of plasticine]].
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*ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Ai, being a Succubus, engages in activities such as rape, murder, identity theft and... stealing a bike.
*BodyHorror: To a small extent with Amanda, the Two Mouth Woman.
*[[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming Idiosyncratic Chapter Naming]]: Each title is a ShoutOut to a different video game, in one shape or the other. Some are more obvious than others.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The work plays and zigzags many aspects of them. Katey the Third needs to beware the sun, but running water is no obstacle for her, godly amounts of self regeneration are possible, Katey the Second being a devoted Christian... The list goes on and on.
* PrehensileHair: Amanda the Two Mouth Woman. It comes with some [[MoreTeethThantheOsmondFamily nice fangs]] as well.
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