Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not enough context (ZCE), Fixing indentation
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
* AbusiveParents: Besides kidnapping her from her real parents, Mother Gothel isolates Rapunzel from the world, then leaves her up a tree for years when she becomes defiant, then finally just tries getting rid of her.
to:
* AbusiveParents: AbusiveParents:
** Besides kidnapping her from her real parents, Mother Gothel isolates Rapunzel from the world, then leaves her up a tree for years when she becomes defiant, then finally just tries getting rid of her.
** Besides kidnapping her from her real parents, Mother Gothel isolates Rapunzel from the world, then leaves her up a tree for years when she becomes defiant, then finally just tries getting rid of her.
Changed line(s) 18 (click to see context) from:
* BookEnds: The story begins with little Rapunzel in a dress. One would never suspect a story about an independent Rapunzel dressed as a cowboy to also end with her in a dress ([[spoiler: as part of a disguise]]).
to:
* BookEnds: BookEnds:
** The story begins with little Rapunzel in a dress. One would never suspect a story about an independent Rapunzel dressed as a cowboy to also end with her in a dress ([[spoiler: as part of a disguise]]).
** The story begins with little Rapunzel in a dress. One would never suspect a story about an independent Rapunzel dressed as a cowboy to also end with her in a dress ([[spoiler: as part of a disguise]]).
Changed line(s) 23 (click to see context) from:
** Inga is Chekhov's ''pickaxe''.
to:
Changed line(s) 27,28 (click to see context) from:
* DoesntLikeGuns:
-->'''Rapunzel:''' ''I was noticing how without guns in their hands, most folk around here turned pale. Made me realize I'd never seen Jack touch a gun except to throw it away.''
-->'''Rapunzel:''' ''I was noticing how without guns in their hands, most folk around here turned pale. Made me realize I'd never seen Jack touch a gun except to throw it away.''
to:
Changed line(s) 34 (click to see context) from:
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Of the Old West.
to:
Changed line(s) 43 (click to see context) from:
* Literature/JackAndTheBeanstalk
to:
Changed line(s) 49,51 (click to see context) from:
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: ''[[SarcasmMode Now, with a name like the Devil's Armpit, you'd think it'd be a right jolly place.]]''
** Also, Brute.
-->'''Jack:''' His name is ''Brute''? Yeegh, that doesn't sound promising.
** Also, Brute.
-->'''Jack:''' His name is ''Brute''? Yeegh, that doesn't sound promising.
to:
Changed line(s) 53 (click to see context) from:
* NoodleIncident: One guest at Mother Gothel's party mentions that the year before involved a lot of goat cheese.
to:
* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
** One guest at Mother Gothel's party mentions that the year before involved a lot of goat cheese.
** One guest at Mother Gothel's party mentions that the year before involved a lot of goat cheese.
Changed line(s) 66 (click to see context) from:
* {{Tsundere}}: Rapunzel to Jack
to:
Changed line(s) 69 (click to see context) from:
* WeirdWest
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* CurseCutShort: During Mother Gothel's final visit to Rapunzel's tower, the former offers the latter one last chance to be her obedient daughter on her terms. Fed up with her overall selfishness, Rapunzel tells her off, though her curse is drowned out by the thunder. Her narration says she told Gothel to go to... someplace less pleasant.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* MemoryTrigger: For the better part of her formative years, Rapunzel has gleaned bits and pieces of memories from her life before Mother Gothel, but not enough to remember Gothel isn't her mother. But once she meets her actual mother on her twelfth birthday, her earliest memories of her family come flooding back, right up until Mother Gothel had her abducted from her parents.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* PuppyDogEyes: During one of Mother Gothel's visit to Rapunzel's tree to see if the girl has grown obedient, Rapunzel gives one of these to make her submissive daughter act convincing. Unfortunately for her, it doesn't work.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Names The Same is now a disambiguation
Changed line(s) 3,4 (click to see context) from:
''Rapunzel's Revenge'' is a graphic novel by award-winning author Creator/ShannonHale and husband Dean, illustrated by Nathan Hale ([[NamesTheSame no relation]]). The story follows a strong and independent Literature/{{Rapunzel}}, perfectly willing and able to save herself. Initially following the original fairy tale, Rapunzel is kidnapped, but in this tale she escapes herself via her long hair. The rest of the story chronicles her dealing with her pursuers and attempting to escape to freedom.
to:
''Rapunzel's Revenge'' is a graphic novel by award-winning author Creator/ShannonHale and husband Dean, illustrated by Nathan Hale ([[NamesTheSame no relation]]).Hale. The story follows a strong and independent Literature/{{Rapunzel}}, perfectly willing and able to save herself. Initially following the original fairy tale, Rapunzel is kidnapped, but in this tale she escapes herself via her long hair. The rest of the story chronicles her dealing with her pursuers and attempting to escape to freedom.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 50 (click to see context) :
%% * NiceHat
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Adult Fear is now a disambig, and this is misuse which boils down to "listing all the scary stuff without context"
Changed line(s) 13,18 (click to see context) from:
* ActionGirl: Rapunzel.
* AdultFear:
** Stealing lettuce once will lead to your BadBoss stealing your child and keeping you separated from her.
** For Rapunzel, learning that your mother is abusive and lied to you, so that you live in a GildedCage. Then when you learn the truth, she locks you away so as to break your spirit.
** For Jack, [[spoiler: committing one crime to make life easier goes awry]], so that his mother has told him to GetOut and is terrified [[spoiler: when he returns to save her]].
** And Jack's mother, who not only [[spoiler: found her son sold his father's [[TragicKeepsake jacket]] for ''one more dishonest scheme'' that goes up in flames]], but [[spoiler: later sees her son return in the rise of a new ruler who outlaws said-son.]]
* AdultFear:
** Stealing lettuce once will lead to your BadBoss stealing your child and keeping you separated from her.
** For Rapunzel, learning that your mother is abusive and lied to you, so that you live in a GildedCage. Then when you learn the truth, she locks you away so as to break your spirit.
** For Jack, [[spoiler: committing one crime to make life easier goes awry]], so that his mother has told him to GetOut and is terrified [[spoiler: when he returns to save her]].
** And Jack's mother, who not only [[spoiler: found her son sold his father's [[TragicKeepsake jacket]] for ''one more dishonest scheme'' that goes up in flames]], but [[spoiler: later sees her son return in the rise of a new ruler who outlaws said-son.]]
to:
* AdultFear:
** Stealing lettuce once will lead to your BadBoss stealing your child and keeping you separated from her.
** For Rapunzel, learning that your mother is abusive and lied to you, so that you live in a GildedCage. Then when you learn the truth, she locks you away so as to break your spirit.
** For Jack, [[spoiler: committing one crime to make life easier goes awry]], so that his mother has told him to GetOut and is terrified [[spoiler: when he returns to save her]].
** And Jack's mother, who not only [[spoiler: found her son sold his father's [[TragicKeepsake jacket]] for ''one more dishonest scheme'' that goes up in flames]], but [[spoiler: later sees her son return in the rise of a new ruler who outlaws said-son.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 30 (click to see context) from:
* DistractedByTheSexy: For one plan, Jack suggests Rapunzel put on a dress and invoke this. She says no.
to:
* DistractedByTheSexy: For one plan, Jack suggests Rapunzel put on a dress and invoke this. [[NoJustNoReaction She says no.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* TheDragon: Brute is Gotherl's largest henchman, and he chases Punzie and Jack throughout Gothel's Reach.
to:
* TheDragon: Brute is Gotherl's Gothel’s largest henchman, and he chases Punzie and Jack throughout Gothel's Reach.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Changed line(s) 36 (click to see context) from:
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In-Universe, the sequel gives us AMinorKidroduction of young Jack using one of his schemes to trip up another child in order to steal his lunch. At first, he savors that his scheme actually worked. ...But then he notices [[RealityEnsues said-child is injured and upset]], and Jack [[HeelRealization feels bad about it]].
to:
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In-Universe, the sequel gives us AMinorKidroduction of young Jack using one of his schemes to trip up another child in order to steal his lunch. At first, he savors that his scheme actually worked. ...But then he notices [[RealityEnsues said-child is injured and upset]], upset, and Jack [[HeelRealization feels bad about it]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
[[quoteright:350:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/rapunzels_revenge.jpg]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 8 (click to see context) :
* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Mother Gothel has no one who's loyal to her out of something other than fear. ''No one''.
Added DiffLines:
* HatedByAll: Mother Gothel has no one who's loyal to her out of something other than fear. ''No one''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 25 (click to see context) from:
%% * BraidsOfAction
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 32 (click to see context) from:
%% * TheDragon: Brute
to:
* DramaticNecklaceRemoval: Blunderboar is able to rip off Jack's grandfather's war band, giving Jack the final motivation/energy needed to [[spoiler:make the final blow to plunge him into the sea]].
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
%% * FracturedFairyTale
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 18,19 (click to see context) from:
* AMinorKidroduction: We are introduced to Rapunzel's life with Gothel from the moment she was a little girl.
** Jack also gets one in the second book recollecting all his schemes, from the time he was a little baby to the later years of his childhood.
** Jack also gets one in the second book recollecting all his schemes, from the time he was a little baby to the later years of his childhood.
to:
* AMinorKidroduction: AMinorKidroduction:
** We are introduced to Rapunzel's life with Gothel from the moment she was a little girl.
** Jackalso gets one in the second book recollecting all his schemes, from the time he was a little baby to the later years of his childhood.
** We are introduced to Rapunzel's life with Gothel from the moment she was a little girl.
** Jack
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* BraidsOfAction
to:
%% * BraidsOfAction
Changed line(s) 31 (click to see context) from:
* TheDragon: Brute
to:
%% * TheDragon: Brute
Changed line(s) 36,38 (click to see context) from:
* FracturedFairyTale
* FreudianExcuse: Gothel tries to justify that because her parents abandoned her, she's entitled to take this world by storm. However...
** FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Gothel's backstory hardly outweighs that fact she's become a power-hungry tyrant who rules the land with an iron fist, enslaves those who defy her, and stole Rapunzel from her real parents. Rapunzel certainly won't hear any excuses for such barbaric behavior.
* FreudianExcuse: Gothel tries to justify that because her parents abandoned her, she's entitled to take this world by storm. However...
** FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Gothel's backstory hardly outweighs that fact she's become a power-hungry tyrant who rules the land with an iron fist, enslaves those who defy her, and stole Rapunzel from her real parents. Rapunzel certainly won't hear any excuses for such barbaric behavior.
to:
%% * FracturedFairyTale
* FreudianExcuse: Gothel tries to justify that because her parents abandoned her, she's entitled to take this world bystorm. However...
**storm.
* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Gothel's backstory hardly outweighs that fact she's become a power-hungry tyrant who rules the land with an iron fist, enslaves those who defy her, and stole Rapunzel from her real parents. Rapunzel certainly won't hear any excuses for such barbaric behavior.
* FreudianExcuse: Gothel tries to justify that because her parents abandoned her, she's entitled to take this world by
**
* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Gothel's backstory hardly outweighs that fact she's become a power-hungry tyrant who rules the land with an iron fist, enslaves those who defy her, and stole Rapunzel from her real parents. Rapunzel certainly won't hear any excuses for such barbaric behavior.
Changed line(s) 51 (click to see context) from:
* NiceHat
to:
%% * NiceHat
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 38 (click to see context) from:
** FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Gothel's backstory hardly outweighs that fact she's become a power-hungry tyrant who rules the land with an iron fist, enslaves those who defy her, and stole Rapunzel from her real parents. Rapunzel certainly won't take that lying down.
to:
** FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Gothel's backstory hardly outweighs that fact she's become a power-hungry tyrant who rules the land with an iron fist, enslaves those who defy her, and stole Rapunzel from her real parents. Rapunzel certainly won't take that lying down.hear any excuses for such barbaric behavior.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
* FreudianExcuse: Gothel tries to justify that because her parents abandoned her, she's entitled to take this world by storm.
to:
* FreudianExcuse: Gothel tries to justify that because her parents abandoned her, she's entitled to take this world by storm. However...
** FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Gothel's backstory hardly outweighs that fact she's become a power-hungry tyrant who rules the land with an iron fist, enslaves those who defy her, and stole Rapunzel from her real parents. Rapunzel certainly won't take that lying down.
** FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Gothel's backstory hardly outweighs that fact she's become a power-hungry tyrant who rules the land with an iron fist, enslaves those who defy her, and stole Rapunzel from her real parents. Rapunzel certainly won't take that lying down.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 56 (click to see context) from:
* PrinceCharmless: A wealthy plantation owner arrives at the tower in order to tell Rapunzel he'll rescue her, but is fully planning on stringing her along instead of upsetting Mother Gothel, as he admits... [[DramaticIrony to Rapunzel]], who has already escaped the tower.
to:
* PetGetsTheKeys: Subverted. When Jack and Rapunzel are detained by TheSheriff awaiting their hanging, Jack tries to get Goldie to bring him the ring of keys left conveniently on the wall. But in leaning against the cell door to do so, he discovers it was never locked in the first place.
* PrinceCharmless: A wealthy plantationowner heir arrives at the tower in order to tell Rapunzel he'll rescue her, but is fully planning on stringing her along instead of upsetting Mother Gothel, as he admits... [[DramaticIrony to Rapunzel]], who has already escaped the tower.
* PrinceCharmless: A wealthy plantation
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* BaitAndSwitch: In the climax of the sequel, [[spoiler: it looks like the pixies are going to fight the brownies. Instead, it turns out they mean to flirt with the brownies. (It works).]]
Changed line(s) 57 (click to see context) from:
* ShadowArchestype: [[spoiler: Blunderboar points out that he and Jack are both devious and scheming, and this [[HeroicBSOD breaks]] Jack at first. But Rapunzel points out that there's a glaring difference between the two. Blunderboar is a cruel monster who doesn't care who he hurts to get what he wants, whereas Jack cares about his friends and his mother, and has a conscience to boot.]]
to:
* ShadowArchestype: ShadowArchetype: [[spoiler: Blunderboar points out that he and Jack are both devious and scheming, and this [[HeroicBSOD breaks]] Jack at first. But Rapunzel points out that there's a glaring difference between the two. Blunderboar is a cruel monster who doesn't care who he hurts to get what he wants, whereas Jack cares about his friends and his mother, and has a conscience to boot.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In-Universe, the sequel gives us AMinorKidroduction of young Jack using one of his schemes to trip up another child in order to steal his lunch. At first, he savors that his scheme actually worked. ...But then he notices [[RealityEnsues said-child is injured and upset]], and Jack [[HeelRealization feels bad about it]].
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
* PrinceCharmless: A wealthy plantation owner arrives at the tower in order to tell Rapunzel he'll rescue her, but is fully planning on stringing her along instead of upsetting Mother Gothel, as he admits... to Rapunzel, who has already escaped the tower.
to:
* PrinceCharmless: A wealthy plantation owner arrives at the tower in order to tell Rapunzel he'll rescue her, but is fully planning on stringing her along instead of upsetting Mother Gothel, as he admits... [[DramaticIrony to Rapunzel, Rapunzel]], who has already escaped the tower.
Added DiffLines:
* ShadowArchestype: [[spoiler: Blunderboar points out that he and Jack are both devious and scheming, and this [[HeroicBSOD breaks]] Jack at first. But Rapunzel points out that there's a glaring difference between the two. Blunderboar is a cruel monster who doesn't care who he hurts to get what he wants, whereas Jack cares about his friends and his mother, and has a conscience to boot.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
** In between, while Gothel does give Rapunzel "everything", she neglects to ease the girl's general loneliness.
** And Jack's mother, who not only [[spoiler: found her son sold his father's [[TragicKeepsake jacket]] for ''one more dishonest scheme'' that goes up in flames]], but [[spoiler: later sees her son return in the rise of a new ruler who outlaws said-son.]]
* AMinorKidroduction: We are introduced to Rapunzel's life with Gothel from the moment she was a little girl.
** Jack also gets one in the second book recollecting all his schemes, from the time he was a little baby to the later years of his childhood.
* BookEnds: The story begins with little Rapunzel in a dress. One would never suspect a story about an independent Rapunzel dressed as a cowboy to also end with her in a dress ([[spoiler: as part of a disguise]]).
** Also, the story begins and ends with Rapunzel climbing the clock tower in Gothel's villa.
* AMinorKidroduction: We are introduced to Rapunzel's life with Gothel from the moment she was a little girl.
** Jack also gets one in the second book recollecting all his schemes, from the time he was a little baby to the later years of his childhood.
* BookEnds: The story begins with little Rapunzel in a dress. One would never suspect a story about an independent Rapunzel dressed as a cowboy to also end with her in a dress ([[spoiler: as part of a disguise]]).
** Also, the story begins and ends with Rapunzel climbing the clock tower in Gothel's villa.
* FreudianExcuse: Gothel tries to justify that because her parents abandoned her, she's entitled to take this world by storm.
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Brute pulls one after he's deeply moved by seeing Rapunzel cry.]]
Changed line(s) 36 (click to see context) from:
* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Gothel in the climax claims that she locked up Rapunzel in the tower to make her stronger, and she says SoProudOfYou when [[spoiler: a captured Rapunzel refuses to break]].
to:
* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Gothel in the climax claims that she locked up Rapunzel in the tower to make her stronger, and she says SoProudOfYou [[SoProudOfYou so proud]] when [[spoiler: a captured Rapunzel refuses to break]].
Added DiffLines:
** Averted with Jack's incident with the beanstalk. Not only is it [[DramaticIrony easy to predict]], but it's explored upon in the second book.