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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Mosa does not wear shoes at any point and is unknown why.
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* ManInWhite: Mosa's only attire consist of a white hood that covers his face, a white cape and white pants.
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* PerpetuallyBroke: Jeremy's salary is very low, to the point he cannot afford a good meal. In chapter 2, he donates everything he has (2 pieces of coin), and in good christian faith, receives 10 times what he delivered a time later. He still has to work hard, though.
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* PerpetuallyBroke: Jeremy's salary is very low, to the point he cannot afford a good meal. In chapter 2, he donates everything he has (2 pieces of coin), and in good christian faith, receives 10 times what he delivered a time later. He still has to work hard, though.
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* PerpetuallyBroke: Jeremy's salary is very low, to the point he cannot afford a good meal. In chapter 2, he donates everything he has (2 pieces of coin), and in good christian faith, receives 10 times what he delivered a time later. He still has to work hard, though.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Mosa has African traits in his design. His counterpart in Manga/EdepthAngel is of African-ancestry.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Mosa has African traits in his design. His counterpart in Manga/EdepthAngel Webcomic/EdepthAngel is of African-ancestry.
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--> '''Jeremy''', ch.3: No matter where I go, my father's legacy overshadows me. It's frustrating.
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--> '''Jeremy''', '''Jeremy, ch.3: 3''': No matter where I go, my father's legacy overshadows me. It's frustrating.
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* TheAloner: Because of his prosthetic arms, only seen on Mamon individuals, alongside his mysterious past, he is not welcome among Yahveh's soldiers. In turn, Mosa prefers to be alone.
* TheComicallySerious: [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1258190/132/ "Mosa, give me a hand"]]
* TheAloner: Because of his prosthetic arms, only seen on Mamon individuals, alongside his mysterious past, he is not welcome among Yahveh's soldiers. In turn, Mosa prefers to be alone.
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AmbiguouslyBrown: Mosa has African traits in his design. His counterpart in Manga/EdepthAngel is of African-ancestry.
* TheAloner: Because of his prostheticarms, hands, only seen on Mamon individuals, alongside his mysterious past, he is not welcome among Yahveh's soldiers. In turn, Mosa prefers to be alone.
* TheComicallySerious:[[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1258190/132/ "Mosa, give me The humor of the comic comes from his deadpan delivery and seriousness. When Jeremy asks him for a hand"]]hand, Mosa throws his prosthetic hand to him.
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* HandicappedBadass: Mosa has metal arms because his real ones got chopped. He almost got metal legs too.
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* HandicappedBadass: Mosa has metal arms hands because his real ones got chopped. He almost got metal legs too.
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!!! Abilities:
* AuraVision: ''Yehveh vision''. It allows Jeremy to detect his enemies.
* HealingHands: While not a professional medic, Jeremy can use ''Yehveh heal'' to stabilize wounds. He however cannot heal those who kill themselves.
* SpontaneousWeaponCreation: Jeremy can create a sword made from Yehveh's energy like all soldiers. He likewise can create daggers. These weapons are not made to kill, though, but to incapacitate, and they work to detect if someone works for Mamon or Yehveh. According to the soldiers, using these may provoke the Mamons to go berserk, but these are rare ocassions.
* AuraVision: ''Yehveh vision''. It allows Jeremy to detect his enemies.
* HealingHands: While not a professional medic, Jeremy can use ''Yehveh heal'' to stabilize wounds. He however cannot heal those who kill themselves.
* SpontaneousWeaponCreation: Jeremy can create a sword made from Yehveh's energy like all soldiers. He likewise can create daggers. These weapons are not made to kill, though, but to incapacitate, and they work to detect if someone works for Mamon or Yehveh. According to the soldiers, using these may provoke the Mamons to go berserk, but these are rare ocassions.
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* BrokenAce: Implied. Despite being a hero that defeated and converted ten thousand Mamon in battle, he told Jeremy "there was a price for heroism".
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* OvershadowByAwesome: Jeremy lives in his father's shadow. Some of his comrades blackmail him to do their chores by threatening to reveal who Jeremy's father is since it would mean for him to struggle to find work in a long time.
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* OvershadowByAwesome: OvershadowedByAwesome: Jeremy lives in his father's shadow. Some of his comrades blackmail him to do their chores by threatening to reveal who Jeremy's father is since it would mean for him to struggle to find work in a long time.
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* DissapearedDad: The story is vague on Benjamin's fate. It is implied he died at some point in the past.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Jeremy lives in his father's shadow. In fact, some of his comrades blackmail him to do their chores by threatening to reveal who Jeremy's father is since it would mean struggling to find work in a long time.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: OvershadowByAwesome: Jeremy lives in his father's shadow. In fact, some Some of his comrades blackmail him to do their chores by threatening to reveal who Jeremy's father is since it would mean struggling for him to struggle to find work in a long time.time.
--> '''Jeremy''', ch.3: No matter where I go, my father's legacy overshadows me. It's frustrating.
--> '''Jeremy''', ch.3: No matter where I go, my father's legacy overshadows me. It's frustrating.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Jeremy lives in his father's shadow. In fact, some of his comrades blackmail him to do their chores by threatening to reveal who Jeremy's father is since it would mean struggling to find work in a long time.
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* TheComicallySerious: [[http://2masters.smackjeeves.com/comics/1258190/132/ "Mosa, give me a hand"]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Mosa hides himself in an aura of mystery and snarky remarks.
* DoesNotLikeShoes: Mosa does not wear shoes at any point, and is unknown why.
* HandicappedBadass: Mosa has metal arms because his real ones got chopped in the past. He almost got metal legs too.
* TheLancer: Due to his gratitude, Mosa follows Jeremy like a right-hand man, but they couldn't be any more different.
* ManInWhite: Mosa's only attire consist of a white hood that covers his face, a white cape and white pants.
* TheStoic: Mosa really doesn't show emotions besides sarcasm.
* WalkingShirtlessScene: Outside the hood covering his face and his cape, Mosa goes shirtless.
* DeadpanSnarker: Mosa hides himself in an aura of mystery and snarky remarks.
* DoesNotLikeShoes: Mosa does not wear shoes at any point, and is unknown why.
* HandicappedBadass: Mosa has metal arms because his real ones got chopped in the past. He almost got metal legs too.
* TheLancer: Due to his gratitude, Mosa follows Jeremy like a right-hand man, but they couldn't be any more different.
* ManInWhite: Mosa's only attire consist of a white hood that covers his face, a white cape and white pants.
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