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* DropTheHammer: Like in canon, her weapon of choice is a warhammer.
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* {{Determinator}}: Deconstructed. She doesn't KnowWhenToFoldEm and will continue to fight even in situations where it's better to retreat. During the Breach, she [[ICanStillFight insisted on still fighting]] the Grimm even when it became clear that she was exhausted and in no condition to do so.
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* {{Determinator}}: Deconstructed. DetrimentalDetermination: She doesn't KnowWhenToFoldEm and will continue to fight even in situations where it's better to retreat. During the Breach, she [[ICanStillFight insisted on still fighting]] the Grimm even when it became clear that she was exhausted and in no condition to do so.
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* NasalTrauma: Her nose gets broken when Nihilus throws her using the Force, near the fic's end.
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: {{Downplayed}} as of the fic's ending. [[spoiler:Adam Taurus [[EyeScream cuts out her eyes]], although "Epilogue" reveals that she's set to receive prosthetics from Pietro]].
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* AbledInTheAdaptation: Unlike in canon, [[spoiler:she avoids losing her arm to Adam during the Fall of Beacon]].
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Armor Piercing Slap is no longer a trope
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Gives one to Jaune after learning he accidentally used his powers to mind control her into being his date.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Her reaction upon Jaune admitting that he accidentally brainwashed her into being his date for the Beacon Dance. She gives him an ArmorPiercingSlap and makes it clear that she never wants him to speak to her again. Even weeks later during the Vytal Festival, she continues to give Jaune the SilentTreatment.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Her reaction upon Jaune admitting that he accidentally brainwashed her into being his date for the Beacon Dance. She gives slaps him an ArmorPiercingSlap and makes it clear that she never wants him to speak to her again. Even weeks later during the Vytal Festival, she continues to give Jaune the SilentTreatment.
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Jaune is already Dancing Royalty in canon. Unless this trait of him is an important plot point or gets exaggerated, it's redundant to mention it in a fan work.
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%%* DancingRoyalty
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* SinisterScythe: Her WeaponOfChoice is a giant scythe called Crescent Rose. [[spoiler:She later inherits Qrow's war-scythe Harbinger.]]
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* SinisterScythe: Her WeaponOfChoice weapon is a giant scythe called Crescent Rose. [[spoiler:She later inherits Qrow's war-scythe Harbinger.]]
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Nora's partner on team JNPR.
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Nora's partner on team Team JNPR.
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The leader of team RWBY.
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The leader of team Team RWBY.
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* HeroicBSOD: She briefly loses hope and gives in to despair after [[spoiler:Nihilus defeats her and destroys Crescent Rose.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: She briefly loses hope and gives in to despair after [[spoiler:Nihilus defeats her and personally destroys Crescent Rose.]]
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* TragicKeepsake: [[spoiler:Qrow's weapon Harbinger becomes one for Ruby after his death as it is all she has left of her uncle.]]
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* TragicKeepsake: [[spoiler:Qrow's weapon Harbinger becomes one for Ruby after his death as it is all she has left of her late uncle.]]
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* UnknownRival: [[spoiler:She becomes this to Darth Nihilus around the third act. He is easily Ruby's [[ItsPersonal most personal]] enemy and effectively replaces Cinder as her nemesis by causing the deaths of Qrow, Penny, Pyrrha, and Jaune, as well as destroying Crescent Rose simply to hurt her more. By the time the final battle rolls around, Ruby has come to view Nihilus as her ArchEnemy and chooses to stay behind with Ozpin's group to fight him rather than evacuate with her friends. However, Nihilus couldn't care less about her and considers her so insignificant that he can't even be bothered to talk to her when he delivers his speech to Ozpin and Pyrrha.]]
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* UnknownRival: [[spoiler:She becomes this to Darth Nihilus around the third act. He is easily Ruby's [[ItsPersonal most personal]] enemy and effectively replaces Cinder as her nemesis by causing the deaths of Qrow, Penny, Pyrrha, and Jaune, as well as destroying Crescent Rose simply to hurt her more. By the time the final battle rolls around, Ruby has come to view Nihilus as her ArchEnemy and chooses to stay behind with Ozpin's group to fight him rather than evacuate with her friends. However, Nihilus couldn't care less about her and considers her so insignificant that he can't even be bothered to talk to her when he delivers his speech to Ozpin and Pyrrha.Pyrrha, which cost him dearly when she unleashed her Silver Eyes against him.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Her father was an emotionally abusive ControlFreak who attempted to strip away her independence.
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* AbusiveParents: Her father Jacques was an emotionally abusive ControlFreak who attempted to strip away her independence.
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A member of team RWBY and Ruby's older sister.
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A member of team Team RWBY and Ruby's older sister.
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* DarthVaderClone: Like Anakin, he started out heroic, was gifted with an abnormal amount of power in the Force, and fell to the Dark Side in order to protect those he loved. [[spoiler:He even uses the same lines as Anakin when confronted by his friends in "Destiny".]]
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* OutnumberedSibling: Jaune grew up with seven sisters.
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* ItsPersonal: [[spoiler:She becomes fixated on defeating Nihilus after he possesses her FirstFriend at Beacon, kills her uncle and two of her closest friends in front of her, crushed her scythe while she's ForcedToWatch, and indirectly breaks up her team by destroying Beacon Academy. Nihilus has single-handedly caused more pain and loss in Ruby's life than any of ''RWBY'''s other villains, be it in this fic or in canon.]]
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* UnknownRival: [[spoiler:Ruby becomes this to Darth Nihilus. He has killed dozens of Ruby's fellow students, caused her uncle's death, and destroyed Crescent Rose, all while using the body of one of her closest friends to do it. When the final battle rolls around, Ruby has come to view Nihilus as her ArchEnemy and chooses to stay behind with Ozpin's group to fight him rather than evacuate with her remaining friends. However, Nihilus couldn't care less about her and considers her so insignificant that he can't even be bothered to talk to her when he delivers his speech to Ozpin and Pyrrha.]]
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* UnknownRival: [[spoiler:Ruby [[spoiler:She becomes this to Darth Nihilus. Nihilus around the third act. He has killed dozens of is easily Ruby's fellow students, caused [[ItsPersonal most personal]] enemy and effectively replaces Cinder as her uncle's death, nemesis by causing the deaths of Qrow, Penny, Pyrrha, and destroyed Jaune, as well as destroying Crescent Rose, all while using Rose simply to hurt her more. By the body of one of her closest friends to do it. When time the final battle rolls around, Ruby has come to view Nihilus as her ArchEnemy and chooses to stay behind with Ozpin's group to fight him rather than evacuate with her remaining friends. However, Nihilus couldn't care less about her and considers her so insignificant that he can't even be bothered to talk to her when he delivers his speech to Ozpin and Pyrrha.]]
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* DiesWideOpen: [[spoiler:After being killed by Darth Nihilus, her corpse is shown to have her eyes wide open as tears drip down her face.]]
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* DiesWideOpen: [[spoiler:After [[spoiler:[[DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation After being killed by Darth Nihilus, Nihilus]], her corpse is shown to have her eyes wide open as tears drip down her face.]]
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* NearDeathExperience: In "Fear", he almost dies from extreme blood loss when a strike from a terentatek's claws nearly disembowels him and causes him to lose several internal organs. Although he's able to use Dark Heal to mend his wounds, he still ends up needing to spend a week in emergency care at the hospital.
