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* MentorArchetype: Gaia considered teaching her most important duty in life long before she officially took a job as one.
** [[spoiler: She eventually decides to personally give Flick private lessons.]]
** [[spoiler: She eventually decides to personally give Flick private lessons.]]
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* MentorArchetype: Gaia considered teaching her most important duty in life long before she officially took a job as one. \n** [[spoiler: She eventually decides to personally give Flick private lessons.]]
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* WhipItGood: Her weapon is a whip that glows crimson when she's using it.
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* WhipItGood: WeaponSpecialization: Her weapon is a whip that glows crimson when she's using it.
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* NamesTheSame: Joselyn and Deveron named their son after Pericles. This inadvertently results in the professor's death when TheMole learns that Zedekiah is the name of the person who cast a protection spell on Avalon and assumes it was Pericles, as he's the only person at Crossroads Academy who actually goes by that name.
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* NamesTheSame: Wyatt's birth name is Zedekiah, after Zedekiah Pericles. He's never gone by it, but magic still identifies him as Zedekiah Atherby.
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* DotingGrandparent: To Joselyn Atherby. He wasn't literally her grandfather, but she was raised by Bystander friends of his and loved him as though he was.
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* [[MasterSwordsman Master Swordswoman]]: Dare teaches the fencing class for a reason. She's very, very good with a sword, to the point that her Heretic weapon is just a sword with hammerspace magazines for one-shot spell sticks.
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* [[MasterSwordsman Master Swordswoman]]: MasterSwordswoman: Dare teaches the fencing class for a reason. She's very, very good with a sword, to the point that her Heretic weapon is just a sword with hammerspace magazines for one-shot spell sticks.
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* [[WolfMan Wolf Woman]]: Dare originally became a Heretic after falling into a pool of amarok blood.
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* [[WolfMan Wolf Woman]]: WolfWoman: Dare originally became a Heretic after falling into a pool of amarok blood.
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* YouAreNotMyFather: The reason for the MeaningfulRename up there. Klassin basically disowned himself in protest of Joselyn Atherby's banishment.
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* YouAreNotMyFather: YoureNotMyFather: The reason for the MeaningfulRename up there. Klassin basically disowned himself in protest of Joselyn Atherby's banishment.
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* {{Adorkable}} At times. Just like his little sister.
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* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler:As Pericles's killer, even if she wasn't in control of herself at the time, Kohaku is the answer to one of the oldest driving questions of the series. Her being Manakel's host since before the story started only compounds her status as this.]]
* WalkingTechbane: A flashback in one of Nevada's interludes reveals that Kohaku had a lot of problems with technology when she was first appointed head of security, although she seems to have gotten better with it over the years.
* WalkingTechbane: A flashback in one of Nevada's interludes reveals that Kohaku had a lot of problems with technology when she was first appointed head of security, although she seems to have gotten better with it over the years.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: When he was a teenager, his family was tortured to death by Fomorians.
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* CoolTeacher: Most of his students think he's awesome. [[spoiler: He was also Josleyn Atherby's favorite teacher.]]
* DotingGrandparent: [[spoiler: To Joselyn Atherby. He wasn't literally her grandfather, but she was raised by Bystander friends of his and loved him as though he was.]]
* DotingGrandparent: [[spoiler: To Joselyn Atherby. He wasn't literally her grandfather, but she was raised by Bystander friends of his and loved him as though he was.]]
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* CoolTeacher: Most of his students think he's awesome. [[spoiler: He was also Josleyn Atherby's favorite teacher.]]
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* DotingGrandparent:[[spoiler: To Joselyn Atherby. He wasn't literally her grandfather, but she was raised by Bystander friends of his and loved him as though he was.]]
* DotingGrandparent:
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* NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: Joselyn and Deveron]] named their son after Pericles. [[spoiler: This inadvertently results in the professor's death when TheMole learns that Zedekiah is the name of the person who cast a protection spell on Avalon and assumes it was Pericles, as he's the only person at Crossroads Academy who actually goes by that name.]]
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* NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: Joselyn and Deveron]] Deveron named their son after Pericles. [[spoiler: This inadvertently results in the professor's death when TheMole learns that Zedekiah is the name of the person who cast a protection spell on Avalon and assumes it was Pericles, as he's the only person at Crossroads Academy who actually goes by that name.]]
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He's the only teacher Shiori thought she could trust with what she saw when she went through the Heretical Edge. Too bad he was killed before she had the chance to.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: He's the only teacher Shiori thought she and Gordon could trust with what she saw when she went through the Heretical Edge. knowledge of their Stranger ancestry. Too bad he was killed before she they had the chance to.to tell him.
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* TheScapegoat: Accidentally became this and died because of it. Zekediah Atherby, now known as Wyatt Rendell, placed a spell to keep enemies from murdering Avalon. However, the Atherby family name had been erased by a memory spell, so TheMole only heard the first name Zekediah when performing a divination spell to learn who protected Avalon, and thus killed Pericles so [[NoOntologicalInertia the spell would fade after his death]].
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* SecretKeeper: Is one for Gaia who, among other things, [[spoiler: tells her about Flick's relation to Wyatt Rendell and Koren Fellows]] when neither of them are supposed to know.
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* SecretKeeper: Is one for Gaia who, among other things, [[spoiler: tells her about Flick's relation to Wyatt Rendell and Koren Fellows]] Fellows when neither of them are supposed to know.
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A security guard at Crossroads. He's extremely enthusiastic at his job to the point of being disruptive, but also an excellent enchanter. [[spoiler: And he's Flick and Ammon's older half-brother, Joselyn and Deveron's son, and Koren Fellows' uncle through her mother and his twin, Abigail. His birth name is Zedekiah Atherby.]]
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A security guard at Crossroads. He's extremely enthusiastic at his job to the point of being disruptive, but also an excellent enchanter. [[spoiler: And he's Flick and Ammon's older half-brother, Joselyn and Deveron's son, and Koren Fellows' uncle through her mother and his twin, Abigail. His birth name is Zedekiah Atherby.]]
Atherby.
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* AbusiveParents: Wyatt only ever received cold treatment and harsh punishments for even the slightest of infractions from his parents. It actually got to the point where he started training himself to wake up silently with electrical shocks rather than let them realize he was awake. [[spoiler: The parents in question being the Rendells, not Joselyn and Deveron.]]
* {{Adorkable}} At times. [[spoiler: Just like his little sister.]]
* {{Adorkable}} At times. [[spoiler: Just like his little sister.]]
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* AbusiveParents: Wyatt only ever received cold treatment and harsh punishments for even the slightest of infractions from his adoptive parents. It actually got to the point where he started training himself to wake up silently with electrical shocks rather than let them realize he was awake. [[spoiler: The parents in question being the Rendells, not Joselyn and Deveron.]]
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* {{Adorkable}} At times.[[spoiler: Just like his little sister.]]
* {{Adorkable}} At times.
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* CoolUncle: [[spoiler: To Koren, once they both learn that they're related.]]
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* CoolUncle: [[spoiler: To Koren, once they both learn that they're related.]]
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* CynicismCatalyst: Eavesdropping on his parents to discover that they never cared about him [[spoiler: and are prepared to murder him if ordered]]. As a result, he doesn't trust ''anyone''.
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* CynicismCatalyst: Eavesdropping on his parents to discover that they never cared about him [[spoiler: and are prepared to murder him if ordered]].ordered. As a result, he doesn't trust ''anyone''.
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* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Wyatt wants to be able to trust people, but his intense paranoia and the weirdness that results prevents him from doing so. He's never had a real friend in his life. [[spoiler: He's overjoyed to learn of his relation to Flick, Koren, and Deveron because it means he's finally found people he can trust.]]
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: [[spoiler: Wyatt is ''fiercely'' protective of his sisters and niece, to the point where he comes very close to starting a war with Eden's Garden after learning what Pace almost did to Flick (and did do to Roxa).]]
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: [[spoiler: Wyatt is ''fiercely'' protective of his sisters and niece, to the point where he comes very close to starting a war with Eden's Garden after learning what Pace almost did to Flick (and did do to Roxa).]]
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* IJustWantToHaveFriends: Wyatt wants to be able to trust people, but his intense paranoia and the weirdness that results prevents him from doing so. He's never had a real friend in his life. [[spoiler: He's overjoyed to learn of his relation to Flick, Koren, and Deveron because it means he's finally found people he can trust.]]
trust.
* KnightTemplarBigBrother:[[spoiler: Wyatt is ''fiercely'' protective of his sisters and niece, to the point where he comes very close to starting a war with Eden's Garden after learning what Pace almost did to Flick (and did do to Roxa).]]
* KnightTemplarBigBrother:
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Crossroads didn't let him know anything about [[spoiler: his biological family]] even before they started using memory magic. [[spoiler: Consequently, he has ''no idea'' why spies have been following him around all his life.]]
* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: Wyatt is the son of Joselyn and Deveron, making him Flick and Ammon's older brother, Koren's uncle, and Seller's descendant.]]
* LongLostRelative: [[spoiler: Wyatt is the son of Joselyn and Deveron, making him Flick and Ammon's older brother, Koren's uncle, and Seller's descendant.]]
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Crossroads didn't let him know anything about [[spoiler: his biological family]] family even before they started using memory magic. [[spoiler: Consequently, he has ''no idea'' why spies have been following him around all his life.]]
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* LongLostRelative:[[spoiler: Wyatt is the son of Joselyn and Deveron, making him Flick and Ammon's older brother, Koren's uncle, and Seller's descendant.]]
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* NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: Wyatt's birth name is Zedekiah, after Zedekiah Pericles. He's never gone by it, but magic still identifies him as Zedekiah Atherby.]]
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* NamesTheSame: [[spoiler: Wyatt's birth name is Zedekiah, after Zedekiah Pericles. He's never gone by it, but magic still identifies him as Zedekiah Atherby.]]
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* TheParanoiac: His interlude reveals that Wyatt is even more paranoid than he seems. His morning rituals consist of elaborate checks to ensure that he's alone and he doesn't trust anyone because he's convinced that spies are always trying to get close to him. Every so often he uproots his life and moves on to avoid anyone that might be reporting on him. [[spoiler: Tragically, this is [[ProperlyParanoid completely justified]]. His life really has been filled with people spying on him on Ruthers' orders. As the tags put it:]]
--> [[spoiler: It’s Not Paranoia When They Really Did Kidnap You To Force Your Mother To Surrender And Erase All Memory Of Her From Existence.]]
* TellMeAboutMyFather: [[spoiler: Once he learns the truth about his family, he becomes very curious to learn more about his real mother.]]
* TooGoodToBeTrue: To Wyatt, even something as simple as meeting someone who's nice to him is too good to be true. [[spoiler: Inverted when he finds out about his family. He believes Flick, Deveron, and Koren in part because the complicated and dangerous circumstances they describe are ''not'' too good to be true.]]
* SeparatedAtBirth: [[spoiler: From his twin sister Abigail Fellows in order to hide them from their father and the rest of the rebellion.]]
* SinsOfTheFather: [[spoiler: To an even greater extent than his little sister. Being Joselyn Aterby's son has led Ruthers to turn his life into a nightmare of paranoia.]]
* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler: The security magic he places on Avalon is ''the'' chief reason none of the attempts on her life have succeeded. Even when they manage to block one of his spells, another functions well enough to prevent TheMole from kidnapping her.]]
--> [[spoiler: It’s Not Paranoia When They Really Did Kidnap You To Force Your Mother To Surrender And Erase All Memory Of Her From Existence.]]
* TellMeAboutMyFather: [[spoiler: Once he learns the truth about his family, he becomes very curious to learn more about his real mother.]]
* TooGoodToBeTrue: To Wyatt, even something as simple as meeting someone who's nice to him is too good to be true. [[spoiler: Inverted when he finds out about his family. He believes Flick, Deveron, and Koren in part because the complicated and dangerous circumstances they describe are ''not'' too good to be true.]]
* SeparatedAtBirth: [[spoiler: From his twin sister Abigail Fellows in order to hide them from their father and the rest of the rebellion.]]
* SinsOfTheFather: [[spoiler: To an even greater extent than his little sister. Being Joselyn Aterby's son has led Ruthers to turn his life into a nightmare of paranoia.]]
* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler: The security magic he places on Avalon is ''the'' chief reason none of the attempts on her life have succeeded. Even when they manage to block one of his spells, another functions well enough to prevent TheMole from kidnapping her.]]
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* TheParanoiac: His interlude reveals that Wyatt is even more paranoid than he seems. His morning rituals consist of elaborate checks to ensure that he's alone and he doesn't trust anyone because he's convinced that spies are always trying to get close to him. Every so often he uproots his life and moves on to avoid anyone that might be reporting on him. [[spoiler: Tragically, this is [[ProperlyParanoid completely justified]]. His life really has been filled with people spying on him on Ruthers' orders. As the tags put it:]]
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-->[[spoiler: It’s Not Paranoia When They Really Did Kidnap You To Force Your Mother To Surrender And Erase All Memory Of Her From Existence.]]
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* TellMeAboutMyFather:[[spoiler: Once he learns the truth about his family, he becomes very curious to learn more about his real mother.]]
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* TooGoodToBeTrue: To Wyatt, even something as simple as meeting someone who's nice to him is too good to be true.[[spoiler: Inverted when he finds out about his family. He believes Flick, Deveron, and Koren in part because the complicated and dangerous circumstances they describe are ''not'' too good to be true.]]
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* SeparatedAtBirth:[[spoiler: From his twin sister Abigail Fellows in order to hide them from their father and the rest of the rebellion.]]
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* SinsOfTheFather:[[spoiler: To an even greater extent than his little sister. Being Joselyn Aterby's son has led Ruthers to turn his life into a nightmare of paranoia.]]
paranoia.
* SpannerInTheWorks:[[spoiler: The security magic he places on Avalon is ''the'' chief reason none of the attempts on her life have succeeded. Even when they manage to block one of his spells, another functions well enough to prevent TheMole from kidnapping her.]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Wyatt was desperate to earn his parents' love when he was young, only to give up when he realized that he was never going to get it. [[spoiler: He's overwhelmed to the point where he can barely form coherent sentences when he finally meets his real father, who wastes no time telling him how proud he is of him, and that he loves him.]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Wyatt was desperate to earn his parents' love when he was young, only to give up when he realized that he was never going to get it. [[spoiler: He's overwhelmed to the point where he can barely form coherent sentences when he finally meets his real father, who wastes no time telling him how proud he is of him, and that he loves him.]]
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Klassin Roe isn't his original name, [[spoiler: Jonathon Ruthers]] is. He changed it in an effort to disassociate himself from his father.
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Klassin Roe isn't his original name, [[spoiler: Jonathon Ruthers]] Ruthers is. He changed it in an effort to disassociate himself from his father.
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* HeelRealization: [[spoiler: Jonathon was his father's son, until a family of Alters saved his life and then gave theirs to protect his.]]
* InternalReformist: [[spoiler: Joselyn eventually brought him around to her line of thinking, which eventually placed him in Gaia's camp (although he's not one of Gaia's most trusted people).]]
* InternalReformist: [[spoiler: Joselyn eventually brought him around to her line of thinking, which eventually placed him in Gaia's camp (although he's not one of Gaia's most trusted people).]]
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* HeelRealization: [[spoiler: Jonathon was his father's son, until a family of Alters saved his life and then gave theirs to protect his.]]
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* InternalReformist:[[spoiler: Joselyn eventually brought him around to her line of thinking, which eventually placed him in Gaia's camp (although he's not one of Gaia's most trusted people).]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler: He spent the entire revolution being a mole for Joselyn.]]
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* RomanticRunnerUp: [[spoiler: It's implied that he eventually developed feelings for Joselyn over the course of the rebellion.]]
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* RomanticRunnerUp: [[spoiler: It's implied that he eventually developed feelings for Joselyn over the course of the rebellion.]]
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* YouAreNotMyFather: The reason for the MeaningfulRename up there. Klassin basically disowned himself [[spoiler: in protest of Joselyn Atherby's banishment]].
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* YouAreNotMyFather: The reason for the MeaningfulRename up there. Klassin basically disowned himself [[spoiler: in protest of Joselyn Atherby's banishment]].
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** [[spoiler: Secretly becomes an unknowing mole for Wyatt when he and Koren switch out his watch for one enchanted to serve as a listening device.]]
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** [[spoiler: Secretly becomes an unknowing mole for Wyatt when he and Koren switch out his watch for one enchanted to serve as a listening device.]] device.
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* BlatantLies: [[spoiler: She annually tells her students that Tiras was a natural vampire-Heretic.]]
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* BlatantLies: [[spoiler: She annually tells her students that Tiras was a natural vampire-Heretic. Which is true, but leaves out the fact that all natural vampire-Heretics are themselves vampires.]]
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* OffscreenTeleportation: First introduces herself to Flick by appearing behind her while she's testing whether the portal in front of her is real.
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* GenreSavvy: Takes steps to avert a dangerous PoorCommunicationKills situation by engineering an opportunity to explain the situation as clearly and completely to the other parties ([[spoiler:Flick and Shiori]]) as she can.
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* [[MasterSwordsman Master Swordswoman]]: Dare teachs the fencing class for a reason. She's very, very good with a sword, to the point that her Heretic weapon is just a sword with hammerspace magazines for one-shot spell sticks.
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* [[MasterSwordsman Master Swordswoman]]: Dare teachs teaches the fencing class for a reason. She's very, very good with a sword, to the point that her Heretic weapon is just a sword with hammerspace magazines for one-shot spell sticks.
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Hunter Track Adviser and combat instructor, Professor Katain is a no nonsense teacher responsible for teaching a bunch of teenagers how to properly handle their (''incredibly'' dangerous) {{Magitek}} weapons. Poor bastard.
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Hunter Track Adviser and combat instructor, Professor Katain Katarin is a no nonsense teacher responsible for teaching a bunch of teenagers how to properly handle their (''incredibly'' dangerous) {{Magitek}} weapons. Poor bastard.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Twice. Her daughter Kiyomi was killed in the Fomoiran invasion of earth, and her son Yuuto died in an accident a few years before the start of the story when he was a teenager. [[spoiler: Her grief over his death causes her to withdraw enough to make it easier for Manakel to impersonate her.]]
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Twice. Her daughter Kiyomi was killed in the Fomoiran Fomorian invasion of earth, and her son Yuuto died in an accident a few years before the start of the story when he was a teenager. [[spoiler: Her grief over his death causes her to withdraw enough to make it easier for Manakel to impersonate her.]]
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** This is pointed out in-universe as him being irrational about his daughters' lives after hia wife's disappearance.
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** This is pointed out in-universe as him being irrational about his daughters' lives after hia his wife's disappearance.
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Professor Tangle is supposed to be teaching the Explorer track and magic classes, but she was injured over the summer and Professor Carfied is filling in for her while she recovers. She's a black woman who appears to be in her mid-forties.
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Professor Tangle is supposed to be teaching the Explorer track and magic classes, but she was injured over the summer and Professor Carfied Carfried is filling in for her while she recovers. She's a black woman who appears to be in her mid-forties.
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* NumberTwo: To Professor Kohaku
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* NumberTwo: To Professor KohakuKohaku.
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The school's... rather intense chef. He takes his job pretty seriously.
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The school's... rather intense chef. He takes his job pretty seriously. \n [[spoiler: Fossor zombified him and turned him into his [[TheMole mole]].]]
* ChubbyChef: Described as squat and rotund.
* FunetikAksent: Has a thick Russian accent.
* FunetikAksent: Has a thick Russian accent.
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* YouKilledMyFather: Implicit. Peterson is a hardliner who was introduced to the supernatural when a group of nocen murdered his parents.
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* YouKilledMyFather: Implicit. Peterson is a hardliner who was introduced to the supernatural when a group of nocen Nocen murdered his parents.
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler: Manakel might have escaped to fight another day if Kohaku hadn't told Flick and Sariel where he put his escape hatch.]]
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* ActionMom: Kohaku has had eight children, five daughters and three sons.
* IntergenerationalFriendship: Kohaku and Columbus Porter end up with a unique bond with each other [[spoiler: over their shared experience as Seosten hosts]].
* IntergenerationalFriendship: Kohaku and Columbus Porter end up with a unique bond with each other [[spoiler: over their shared experience as Seosten hosts]].
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Twice. Her daughter Kiyomi was killed in the Fomoiran invasion of earth, and her son Yuuto died in an accident a few years before the start of the story when he was a teenager. [[spoiler: Her grief over his death causes her to withdraw enough to make it easier for Manakel to impersonate her.]]
* TheMole: [[spoiler: She spends much of Flick's first year as Manakel's host, a MoleInCharge situation that allows him to control the investigations into the attempts to murder Avalon.]]
* TheMole: [[spoiler: She spends much of Flick's first year as Manakel's host, a MoleInCharge situation that allows him to control the investigations into the attempts to murder Avalon.]]
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A teacher of American history, fencing and martial technique at Crossroads Academy as well as the adviser for the Investigation Track, Virginia Dare was born in [[LostColony Roanoke]] in 1587. Yep. She's ''that'' Virginia Dare.
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A teacher of American history, fencing and martial technique at Crossroads Academy as well as the adviser for the Investigation Track, Virginia Dare was born in [[LostColony Roanoke]] in 1587. Yep. She's ''that'' Virginia Dare. \n [[spoiler: She is also Flick's grandmother, a fact that was kept secret for very good reason. For more information, see the entry for Joshua Atherby's wife on the Spoiler Characters page.]]
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[[spoiler: She's actually Manakel's host, and he used her to kill Professor Pericles.]]
[[spoiler: He's actually the host of the Seosten Amatiel.]]
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* HotForTeacher: Liam's wife, Larissa, was one of his students in the nineties. But they didn't actually enter into a relationship until after she left school.
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* HotForTeacher: Liam's wife, Larissa, was one of his students in the nineties. But nineties, although they didn't actually enter into a relationship until after she left school.
* MeaningfulName: She managed to get wrapped up in a tangle of plots. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded on several occasions.]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Wyatt was desperate to earn his parent's love when he was young, only to give up when he realized that he was never going to get it. [[spoiler: He's overwhelmed to the point where he can barely form coherent sentences when he finally meets his real father, who wastes no time telling him how proud he is of him, and that he loves him.]]
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* WellDoneSonGuy: Wyatt was desperate to earn his parent's parents' love when he was young, only to give up when he realized that he was never going to get it. [[spoiler: He's overwhelmed to the point where he can barely form coherent sentences when he finally meets his real father, who wastes no time telling him how proud he is of him, and that he loves him.]]
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Crossroads Academy's on staff therapist who helps students (particularly Bystander-kin) deal with traumatic experiences and the stress of the life they're embarking on. Professor Dare sets up an appointment with him for Flick after her visit home.
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Crossroads Academy's on staff on-staff therapist who helps students (particularly Bystander-kin) deal with traumatic experiences and the stress of the life they're embarking on. Professor Dare sets up an appointment with him for Flick after her visit home.
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* {{Foil}}: To Flick, as they both renamed themselves in an effort to affect their parents. The difference is that Flick was a young child lashing out in confusion to hurt her MissingMom, while Klassin was a full grown man who knew exactly what he was doing, changing his name in protest of his father's uncompromising and irrational actions.
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* {{Foil}}: To Flick, as they both renamed themselves in an effort to affect their parents. The difference is that Flick was a young child lashing out in confusion to hurt her MissingMom, while Klassin was a full grown man who knew exactly what he was doing, doing by changing his name in protest of his father's uncompromising and irrational actions.
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** [[spoiler: Despite them knowing of her efforts to reform Crossroads, Gaia was also excluded from the anti-Seosten faction Gabriel Prosser is part of on the recommendation of her brother's wife Guinevere, who doesn't still doesn't fully trust her.]]
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** [[spoiler: Despite them knowing of her efforts to reform Crossroads, Gaia was also excluded from the anti-Seosten faction Gabriel Prosser is part of on the recommendation of her brother's wife Guinevere, who doesn't still doesn't fully trust her.her not to go too far.]]
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** Before that she went by Scáthach, after a teacher who trained Cú Chulainn in Myth/CelticMythology. But even that isn't her original name. She picked it for herself after becoming a Heretic.
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** Before that she went by Scáthach, after a teacher who trained Cú Chulainn in Myth/CelticMythology. But even that isn't her original name. She picked it for herself after becoming a Heretic. [[spoiler: Her original name is Morgan le Fay.]]
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* Technopath: Gaia's original power as a Natural Heretic.