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** Harming his ParentalSubtitute Elle. When Lute is even willing [[spoiler: to declare an all out war with the strongest Legion who captured her.]]
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** Harming his ParentalSubtitute ParentalSubstitute Elle. When Lute is even willing [[spoiler: to declare an all out war with the strongest Legion who captured her.]]
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* WorldsStrongestMan: In terms of physical strength, Dan is the strongest in the story. He is a LightiningBruiser that can shrug off almost any damage, and his BattleAura that Dan surrounds his body is equivalent of an Explosive Reactive Armor, meaning the damage that he receives will be lessened upon impact and sometimes could damage his enemy.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: In terms of physical strength, Dan is the strongest in the story. He is a LightiningBruiser LightningBruiser that can shrug off almost any damage, and his BattleAura that Dan surrounds his body is equivalent of an Explosive Reactive Armor, meaning the damage that he receives will be lessened upon impact and sometimes could damage his enemy.
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* SeriousBusiness: Don't skimp or cut corners in making sweets!
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* SeriousBusiness: Don't skimp or cut corners in making sweets!sweets! Oop
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* ScienceHerosBabeAssistant: Meiya serves as this for Lute especially when they are on mission. She helps Lute when they need to build something on the spot.
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* TheEngineer:As Meiya serves as Lute's assistant on the field most of the time, Lute assigned Luna as the R&D of the Peacemaker. She gets in charge of mass producing the armaments or assembling the weaponry conceptualized by Lute.
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* DeskJockey: Barney handles the administrative and financial part of the Peacemaker Legion. Also one of the people who actively prevent their funds being drained by Lute's toilet fueled mania.
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*SinisterSpyAgency: Muir is the sole member of the information and espionage division of the Peacemaker. Surprisingly, she can get any info that can be serve as a blackmail material against the political foes of the Peacemaker.
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*CantLiveWithThemCantLiveWithoutThem: Despite Meiya making Lute cringe by her intense devotion, He soon realized that he didn't exactly dislike it. That's why when Lute notices that Meiya isn't around to fawn him, he will be immediately worried and will immediately find her.
* BattleAura: Since Dan can't use magic normally, he surrounds his body with it. This makes his impressive physical strength even more powerful and can move very fast despite his build and size.
* DisabilitySuperpower: [[spoiler: It is implied that Dan is also a singular magician, meaning while he can't use his magic normally, his physical and magic power is very potent. Chrisse must have inherited this trait but instead its focused on her sight.]]
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Dan Vlad Gate is a very famous adventurer despite not having a proper ability to be a magician. He is so famous and admired that those he saved are inspired by him that they also become muscular like their hero.
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* TestosteronePoisoning: [[spoiler: How did Dan deal with a human supremacist prince? He forced the poor sod into Trainingfromhell that it transformed the prince into a dark skinned muscled gentleman that considers Dan as his master who in turn converted his uncle (who was the general) the same way he was converted by Dan, in turn transformed the army into muscled gentlemen.]]
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* TestosteronePoisoning: [[spoiler: How did Dan deal Training with a human supremacist prince? He forced Dan for long periods of time will make someone like him physically and mentally. The vice captain of the poor sod into Trainingfromhell that it transformed army of the prince into Zagsonia Kingdom William Mcneal who begged to be his disciple within a dark skinned muscled few days became stronger and also acted like a honorable gentleman that considers Dan as his master who in turn converted his uncle (who was the general) the same way he was converted by Dan, in turn transformed the army into muscled gentlemen.]]like Dan.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: In terms of physical strength, Dan is the strongest in the story. He is a LightiningBruiser that can shrug off almost any damage, and his BattleAura that Dan surrounds his body is equivalent of an Explosive Reactive Armor, meaning the damage that he receives will be lessened upon impact and sometimes could damage his enemy.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Justified. His one and only child, Chrisse, has been horribly traumatized, and is targeted by nefarious individuals. If Lute's going to be worthy of her, he's got to earn it.
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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: Behind closed doors, she's a total sweetheart. In public, she maintains a cool, rigid exterior reminding the world that her word is law.
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* TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask: ToughLeaderFacade: Behind closed doors, she's a total sweetheart. In public, she maintains a cool, rigid exterior reminding the world that her word is law.
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* Peacemaker is the trope itself in this story. Its not the absurd firepower or advanced technology but their rigid military structure and adaptability in dealing their enemies. Mages that can detect your magic? Snipe them far away. Enemies that can dodge bullets because they read its movements? [[spoiler: shoot them with a shotgun.]], [[spoiler: an enemy can control flying dragons and wyverns? Shoot them with anti air flak guns.]]
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* Peacemaker is the trope itself in this story. Its not the absurd firepower or advanced technology but their rigid military structure and adaptability in dealing their enemies. Mages that can detect your magic? Snipe them far away. Enemies that can dodge bullets because they read its movements? [[spoiler: shoot them with a shotgun.]], [[spoiler: an enemy can control flying dragons and wyverns? Shoot them with anti air flak guns.]]
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* OutsideContextProblem: Peacemaker is the trope itself in this story. Its not the absurd firepower or advanced technology but their rigid military structure and adaptability in dealing their enemies. Mages that can detect your magic? Snipe them far away. Enemies that can dodge bullets because they read its movementa? [[spoiler: shoot them with a shotgun.]], [[spoiler: an enemy can control flying dragons and wyverns? Shoot them with anti air flak guns.]]
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--> Preferred Weapon: Ak-47 light machine gun.
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--> Preferred Weapon: Ak-47 light machine gun.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Peacemaker is the trope itself in this story. Its not the absurd firepower or advanced technology but their rigid military structure and adaptability in dealing their enemies. Mages that can detect your magic? Snipe them far away. Enemies that can dodge bullets? [[spoiler: shoot them with a shotgun.]], [[spoiler; an enemy can control flying dragons and wyverns? Shoot them with anti air flak guns.]]
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* OutsideContextProblem: Peacemaker is the trope itself in this story. Its not the absurd firepower or advanced technology but their rigid military structure and adaptability in dealing their enemies. Mages that can detect your magic? Snipe them far away. Enemies that can dodge bullets? bullets because they read its movementa? [[spoiler: shoot them with a shotgun.]], [[spoiler; [[spoiler: an enemy can control flying dragons and wyverns? Shoot them with anti air flak guns.]]
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* OutsideContextProblem: Peacemaker is the trope itself in this story. Its not the absurd firepower or advanced technology but their rigid military structure and adaptability in dealing their enemies. Mages that can detect your magic? Snipe them far away. Enemies that can dodge bullets? [[spoiler: shoot them with a shotgun.]], [[spoiler; an enemy can control flying dragons and wyverns? Shoot them with anti air flak guns.]]
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* InTheBlood: Lute's impressive leadership skills and charisma despite having no magic power happens to be the same as the [[spoiler: his ancestor Liyu, who basically built the framework of kingdoms and Adventurer system. Even Asura who fell in love with Lute's ancestor also note that [[IdenticalGrandson they even resemble physically]].]]
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* BerserkButton: Other than trying to his wives, Lute instantly gets furious when he faces the people who duped and enslaved him.
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* BerserkButton: Other than trying to his wives, Lute instantly gets furious when he faces the people BerserkButton:
** The trio who duped and enslavedhim. him is a sore point for Lute, so much that when [[spoiler: he met Misha again on the Devil Continent, he almost killed her on the spot, not caring if she was mindbroken and had to be talked down by everyone around him.]]
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** Harming his ParentalSubtitute Elle. When Lute is even willing [[spoiler: to declare an all out war with the strongest Legion who captured her.]]
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** Trying to harm his wives also presses this button.
** Harming his ParentalSubtitute Elle. When Lute is even willing [[spoiler: to declare an all out war with the strongest Legion who captured her.]]
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Gag Boobs has been renamed to Boob Based Gag. Changing to the proper trope where appropriate and cutting misuse.
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* CuteClumsyGirl: She's prone to tripping all over her own feet. [[GagBoobs Perhaps because her center of gravity is messed up?]]
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* CuteClumsyGirl: She's prone to tripping all over her own feet. [[GagBoobs Perhaps because her center of gravity is messed up?]]up?
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* GagBoobs: Her breasts are so large, they don't fit her frame. Lute even lampshades it.
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* DisabilitySuperpower: It is implied that Chrisse's superb vision is due to her being a [[spoiler: Singular Magician. Her magic power focuses on her eyes, rather than distributing from her whole body.]]
