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* BrokenPedestal: To many of the other ninja of his generation, particularly Sakura. He destroys all positive recognition from being the Hokage's son and a prodigal ninja within about five minutes of conversation.
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* BrokenPedestal: To many of the other ninja of his generation, particularly Sakura. He destroys all positive recognition from being the Hokage's son and a prodigal ninja within about five minutes of conversation.conversation. PlayedForLaughs.
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* BrokenPedestal: To many of the other ninja of his generation, particularly Sakura. He destroys all positive recognition from being the Hokage's son and a prodigal ninja within about five minutes of conversation.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: She gets elected as Clan Head by beating Fugaku and legitimizes her position by beating her dissenters.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: She gets elected as Clan Head by beating Fugaku and legitimizes her position by beating her dissenters.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Is the most powerful ninja in Konoha and thus the Hokage.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: Is the most powerful ninja in Konoha and thus the Hokage.
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* {{Kitsune}}: ''The'' kitsune, in fact.
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* RapunzelHair: Very long and rather unruly.
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* [[spoiler: ActionMom]]: [[spoiler: Gets pregnant by Minato and gives birth to six children.]]
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* [[spoiler: ActionMom]]: ActionMom: [[spoiler: Gets pregnant by Minato and gives birth to six children.]]
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* BunnyEarsLawyer[=/=]TheWonka: Musume is very mischievous and disruptive and initially seen as mentally deficient for her constantly MissingTime. But she is a very strong ninja, and proves it when she defeats Fugaku and becomes Head of the Uchiha Clan.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer[=/=]TheWonka: BunnyEarsLawyer: Musume is very mischievous and disruptive and initially seen as mentally deficient for her constantly MissingTime. But she is a very strong ninja, and proves it when she defeats Fugaku and becomes Head of the Uchiha Clan.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Played with: she has tons of raw power and skill in specific areas, but her fine control is... [[{{JustForFun/Egregious}} lacking]].
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* UnskilledButStrong: Played with: she has tons of raw power and skill in specific areas, but her fine control is... [[{{JustForFun/Egregious}} lacking]].
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* NotSoStoic: Musume has been a corrupting influence on him, since he now enjoys some sarcasm toward his mother.
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** NotSoStoic: Musume has been a corrupting influence on him, since he now enjoys some sarcasm toward his mother.
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* OnlySaneMan: Musume is a CrazyAwesome prankster, Naruto is just like her. Jiraiya and the Sandaime are very perverted. No wonder Minato is the Hokage.
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* OnlySaneMan: Musume is a CrazyAwesome prankster, Naruto is just like her. Jiraiya and the Sandaime are very perverted. No wonder Minato is the Hokage.
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* CrazyAwesome: He definitely was raised by Musume.
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* CrazyAwesome: Especially the way she is able to shrug off massive physical trauma.
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* MadeOfIron: Especially the way she is able to shrug off massive physical trauma.
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* TricksterArchetype: She is the Nine Tailed Fox.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer[[=/=]]TheWonka: Musume is very mischevious and disruptive and initially seen as mentally deficient for her constantly MissingTime. But she is a very strong ninja, proving so when she defeats Fugaku and becomes Head of the Uchiha Clan.
* CrazyAwesome: Especially the way she is able to shrug off massive physical trauma
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* BunnyEarsLawyer[[=/=]]TheWonka: BunnyEarsLawyer[=/=]TheWonka: Musume is very mischevious mischievous and disruptive and initially seen as mentally deficient for her constantly MissingTime. But she is a very strong ninja, proving so and proves it when she defeats Fugaku and becomes Head of the Uchiha Clan.
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* {{Kitsune}}: The kitsune ''The'' kitsune, in fact.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Played with, she has tons of raw power and skill in specific areas, but her fine control is not the best thing.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Played with, with: she has tons of raw power and skill in specific areas, but her fine control is not the best thing.
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* ActionDad: Naruto's father and [[spoiler: to the six children he has with Musume.]]
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* ActionDad: Naruto's father and [[spoiler: father to the six children he has with Musume.]]
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* CelibateHero: [[spoiler: Until he and Musume get together]], before than he avoided romantic entanglements due to his position.
* IcyBlueEyes: In Hokage mode or just in wrathful father/[[spoiler: husband]] mode.
* IcyBlueEyes: In Hokage mode or just in wrathful father/[[spoiler: husband]] mode.
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* CelibateHero: [[spoiler: Until he and Musume get together]], together]]; before than then he avoided romantic entanglements due to his position.
* IcyBlueEyes: In Hokage mode or just in wrathfulfather/[[spoiler: husband]] father/[[spoiler:husband]] mode.
* IcyBlueEyes: In Hokage mode or just in wrathful
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* UnfazedEveryman: Not quite an every man but he is the only one that can handle Musume.
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* UnfazedEveryman: Not quite an every man everyman, but he is the only one that can handle Musume.Musume.
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* ItAmusedMe: He makes many of the Chunnin hopeful teams to ridiculous stuff in exchange of one of the scrolls.
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* ItAmusedMe: He makes many of the Chunnin hopeful Chunnin-hopeful teams to do ridiculous stuff in exchange of for one of the scrolls.
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* {{Chewtoy}}: Was nearly brainwashed into killing his best friend/[[spoiler: lover]] Shisui, along with the entire clan. Then he went through a traumatizing experience that cost him an eye and caused him to achieve [[spoiler: the Mangekyo Sharingan.]] His mother is also hounding him to marry. [[spoiler: His baby brother gets kidnapped.]] All of this happens before he becomes old enough to drink.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: Since Musume, partly with his help tricked the council into legalizing same sex relationships he now can openly be with Shisui an his baby brother is safe and sound.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: Since Musume, partly with his help tricked the council into legalizing same sex relationships he now can openly be with Shisui an his baby brother is safe and sound.]]
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* {{Chewtoy}}: Was nearly brainwashed into killing his best friend/[[spoiler: lover]] friend/[[spoiler:lover]] Shisui, along with the entire clan. Then he went through a traumatizing experience that cost him an eye and caused him to achieve [[spoiler: the Mangekyo Sharingan.]] His mother is also hounding him to marry. [[spoiler: His baby brother gets kidnapped.]] All of this happens before he becomes old enough to drink.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: SinceMusume, partly Musume (partly with his help help) tricked the council into legalizing same sex relationships he now can openly be with Shisui an and his baby brother is safe and sound.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: Since
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** NotSoStoic: Musume has been a corrupting influence on him, since he now enjoys is some sarcasm toward his mother.
* TechnicalPacifist: Minato claims that he is one, but is still an active ninja.
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** NotSoStoic: Musume has been a corrupting influence on him, since he now enjoys is some sarcasm toward his mother.
* TechnicalPacifist: Minato claims that he is one, but is still an activeninja.
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* TechnicalPacifist: Minato claims that he is one, but is still an active
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* [[spoiler: ActionMom]]: [spoiler: Gets pregnant by Minato and gives birth to six children.]]
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: She gets elected as Clan Head by beating Fugaku and legitimizes her position by beating her dissenters.
* [[spoiler: ActionMom]]:[spoiler: [[spoiler: Gets pregnant by Minato and gives birth to six children.]]
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* BunnyEarsLawyer[[=/=]]TheWonka: Musume is very mischevious and disruptive and initially seen as mentally deficient for her constantly MissingTime. But she is a very strong ninja, proving so when she defeats Fugaku and becomes Head of the Uchiha Clan.
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* GroundhogPeggySue: The story begins with her breaking out of one and a flashback of these loops open the chapters.
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* ParentalSubstitute: [[spoiler: Before Musume becomes Naruto's stepmother,]] Musume acted as one to Naruto. Jiraiya points that she more or less ''raised'' Naruto since Minato is so busy as Hokage.
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* TheTysonZone: She is seen as so crazy and wild, that any weird thing is possible for her. Defacing the Hokage Momemt? Check. Sealing the Hyuuga Clan Head? Check. Taking over the Uchiha Clan? Check. Having a fit in a Council Meeting screaming that she's a man trapped in a woman's body before blacking out? Check.[[note]] Musume was accidentally by Naruto to get the fox contract and Madara momentarily repossessed her body.[[/note]]
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* ObliviousToLove: Unaware of Musume and his own affection for each other.
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* HotDad: Musume falls for him.
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* [[spoiler: HotMom]]: Minato, Jiraiya, Kakashi an a horde of wannabe Uchiha suitors find her very attractive.
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ActionMom]]: [spoiler: Gets pregnant by Minato and gives birth to six children.]]
*BecomingTheMask
BecomingTheMask: She is slowly and surely integrating herself in Konoha and comes to deeply care for everyone under her charge.
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* [[spoiler: HotMom]]HotMom]]: Minato, Jiraiya, Kakashi an a horde of wannabe Uchiha suitors find her very attractive.
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* PrettyFreeloader
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* PrettyFreeloader
PrettyFreeloader: Musume often crashes in the Namikaze residence where she eats all the food and pesters Minato.
*RapunzelHairRapunzelHair: Very long and rather unruly.
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirlSavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: The energetic girl to Minato's savvy guy.
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* AllLovingHero
AllLovingHero: He is bright, cheerful and kind to everyone. Musume notes despite her efforts in some of the time loops he never became evil.
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CheerfulChild: Bouncy, energetic, sweet and always up for something fun.
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CrazyAwesome: He definitely was raised by Musume.
*FriendToAllLivingThingsFriendToAllLivingThings: Makes friends with the foxes.
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* TheStoic: Only the people that know him very well or are particularly perceptive are able to tell that he feels anything.
** NotSoStoic: Musume has been a corrupting influence on him, since he now enjoys is some sarcasm toward his mother.
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!!Naruto Namikaze
* AllLovingHero
* CheerfulChild
* CrazyAwesome
* FriendToAllLivingThings
* ItAmusedMe: He makes many of the Chunnin hopeful teams to ridiculous stuff in exchange of one of the scrolls.
* HiddenDepths: Is much more perceptive and intelligent than most would guess. His goofy persona is partly an act to make people let down their guard.
* ThePrankster: Learns it from Musume.
* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: He realized halfway through the story that Musume was the Kyuubi and had suspicions even before.]]
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Ramen
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Would not be Itachi otherwise.
* BreakTheCutie: Danzo tried to get him to murder his entire clan.
* {{Chewtoy}}: Was nearly brainwashed into killing his best friend/[[spoiler: lover]] Shisui, along with the entire clan. Then he went through a traumatizing experience that cost him an eye and caused him to achieve [[spoiler: the Mangekyo Sharingan.]] His mother is also hounding him to marry. [[spoiler: His baby brother gets kidnapped.]] All of this happens before he becomes old enough to drink.
* EyeScream: Courtesy of a Hyuuga.
* NiceGuy: One of the few Uchiha to be nice to Musume from the very beginning.
* TechnicalPacifist: Minato claims that he is one, but is still an active ninja.
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* TheNicknamer: She tries.
* RapunzelHair
* RapunzelHair
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl
* CelibateHero: [[spoiler: Until he and Musume get together]], before than he avoided romantic entanglements due to his position.
* HeartbrokenBadass: For a while, due to Kushina's death.
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* OnlySaneMan: Musume is a CrazyAwesome prankster, Naruto is just like her. Jiraiya and the Sandaime are very perverted. No wonder Minato is the Hokage.
* RealMenWearPink: He cooks and knows how to fix women's hair.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: He is destined to be the savvy guy in such pairings.
* SupremeChef: Musume loves his cooking.
* UnfazedEveryman: Not quite an every man but he is the only one that can handle Musume.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Is the most powerful ninja in Konoha and thus the Hokage.
* IcyBlueEyes: In Hokage mode or just in wrathful father/[[spoiler: husband]] mode.
* HasAType: Long haired female Jinchuriiki.
* HotDad
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* ActionDad
* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Is the most powerful ninja in Konoha and thus the Hokage.
* IcyBlueEyes: In Hokage mode or just in wrathful father/[[spoiler: husband]] mode.
* HasAType: Long haired female Jinchuriiki.
* HotDad
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* BecomingTheMask
* CrazyAwesome
* GoodThingYouCanHeal: To a ludicrous degree.
* GrandTheftMe: Pulled it on Uchiha Madara.
* [[spoiler: HotMom]]
* {{Kitsune}}: The kitsune in fact.
* MamaBear: Just try threatening Naruto in front of her.
* TheMedic: She learned how to heal other by manipulating the chakra inside their bodies. She mostly uses it to heal herself rather than others.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Obsessed with ramen, something she shares with Naruto.
* UnskilledButStrong: Played with, she has tons of raw power and skill in specific areas, but her fine control is not the best thing.
* [[spoiler: ActionMom]]
* BecomingTheMask
* CrazyAwesome
* GoodThingYouCanHeal: To a ludicrous degree.
* GrandTheftMe: Pulled it on Uchiha Madara.
* [[spoiler: HotMom]]
* {{Kitsune}}: The kitsune in fact.
* MamaBear: Just try threatening Naruto in front of her.
* TheMedic: She learned how to heal other by manipulating the chakra inside their bodies. She mostly uses it to heal herself rather than others.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Obsessed with ramen, something she shares with Naruto.
* UnskilledButStrong: Played with, she has tons of raw power and skill in specific areas, but her fine control is not the best thing.