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* HurtingHero: She suffers a lot, including from PTSD.
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The main character of the fic, Scootaloo during the war was the Vice President of Stable-Tec and was the one to propose the social experiments the Stables carried out. She survived by being placed in magical stasis by [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] and wakes up about 10 years after the events of Fanfic/FalloutEquestria, she spends the first few chapters of the fic battling her personal demons and looking for her family [[spoiler:She finds it in a filly named Serenity]].
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The main character of the fic, Scootaloo during the war was the Vice President of Stable-Tec and was the one to propose the social experiments the Stables carried out. She survived by being placed in magical stasis by [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] and wakes up about 10 years after the events of Fanfic/FalloutEquestria, she spends the first few chapters of the fic battling her personal demons and looking for her family [[spoiler:She finds it in a filly named Serenity]].
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A Stable Dweller from Stable 66 somewhere in Manehattan, Arc Light left her home Stable in order to find her best friend (and [[spoiler: crush]]) Caramel Corn who seems to have been captured by the Enclave.
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A Stable Dweller from Stable 66 somewhere in Manehattan, Arc Light left her home Stable in order to find her best friend (and [[spoiler: crush]]) Caramel Corn who seems to have been captured by the Enclave.
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* {{Expy}}: Of Frank Horrigan from ''VideoGame/Fallout2''
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*Hidden Depths: HiddenDepths: Its not clear what, but Spectra implied that she has some secret that even she's not aware of.
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* NiceHat: She wears a fedora specifically.
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* DarthVaderClone: She dresses in black power armor so its kind of a given.
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* BadDreams: She suffers from these on occasion because of her time fighting the Changelings.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: She suffers from bad dreams on occasion because of her time fighting the Changelings.
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* BadDreams: She suffers from particularly nasty ones involving ponies she knows being consumed by a Megaspell and her being left the only one alive, and then they call her out for it.
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* AltumVidetur: She doesn't speak the Equestrian language, instead speaking in the Zebra language, which seems to be Latin. She does seem to have slowly picked up on Equestrian.
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* GratuitousLatin: She doesn't speak the Equestrian language, instead speaking in the Zebra language, which seems to be Latin. She does seem to have slowly picked up on Equestrian.
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* {{Expy}}: Of Frank Horrigan from ''VideoGame/Fallout2''
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* {{Expy}}: Of Frank Horrigan from ''VideoGame/Fallout2''''VideoGame/Fallout2''
* Hidden Depths: Its not clear what, but Spectra implied that she has some secret that even she's not aware of.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[Spoiler: In Chapter 32 following the use of a Megaspell on the city of Thunderhead, she suffered a breakdown and after talking with Scootaloo, gave the order to her forces to stand down and ended the war. She went on to say that it was time for the Enclave to work with the Alliance and help Equestria.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: In Chapter 32 following the use of a Megaspell on the city of Thunderhead, she suffered a breakdown and after talking with Scootaloo, gave the order to her forces to stand down and ended the war. She went on to say that it was time for the Enclave to work with the Alliance and help Equestria.]]
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* TheStarcream: [[spoiler: In chapter 32 after Winter ordered the Enclave to stand down he had her captured, then branded and exiled as a Dashite, assuming control of the Enclave.]]
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* TheStarcream: TheStarscream: [[spoiler: In chapter 32 after Winter ordered the Enclave to stand down he had her captured, then branded and exiled as a Dashite, assuming control of the Enclave.]]
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*HeelFaceTurn: [[Spoiler: In Chapter 32 following the use of a Megaspell on the city of Thunderhead, she suffered a breakdown and after talking with Scootaloo, gave the order to her forces to stand down and ended the war. She went on to say that it was time for the Enclave to work with the Alliance and help Equestria.]]
*DragonAscendant: At the end of chapter 32, see below.
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*TheStarcream: [[spoiler: In chapter 32 after Winter ordered the Enclave to stand down he had her captured, then branded and exiled as a Dashite, assuming control of the Enclave.]]
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*TheMole: In chapter 22 its revealed [[spoiler: that she's really an Enclave spy, albeit one who was forced.]]
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The main character of the fic, Scootaloo during the war was the Vice President of Stable-Tec and was the one to propose the social experiments the Stables carried out. She survived by being placed in magical stasis by [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] and wakes up about 10 years after the events of FalloutEquestria, she spends the first few chapters of the fic battling her personal demons and looking for her family [[spoiler:She finds it in a filly named Serenity]].
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The main character of the fic, Scootaloo during the war was the Vice President of Stable-Tec and was the one to propose the social experiments the Stables carried out. She survived by being placed in magical stasis by [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] and wakes up about 10 years after the events of FalloutEquestria, Fanfic/FalloutEquestria, she spends the first few chapters of the fic battling her personal demons and looking for her family [[spoiler:She finds it in a filly named Serenity]].
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* LukeYouAreMyFather: Of sorts [[spoiler:In chapter 19 it is revealed that Scootaloo is actually Winter Breeze's ancestor.]]
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: She at least tries to be one, whether or not she is one is open to interpretation.
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!!Riva
A Zebra that had traveled to Equestria from the Zebra Lands, very little is known about her at the moment other than that she seems to represent something called the Free Roam Alliance.
*AncientRome: Of sorts, the Zebras are modeled on Rome but are more modernized.
*AltumVidetur: She doesn't speak the Equestrian language, instead speaking in the Zebra language, which seems to be Latin. She does seem to have slowly picked up on Equestrian.
*BilingualBonus: All her dialogue actually means something in Latin.
A Zebra that had traveled to Equestria from the Zebra Lands, very little is known about her at the moment other than that she seems to represent something called the Free Roam Alliance.
*AncientRome: Of sorts, the Zebras are modeled on Rome but are more modernized.
*AltumVidetur: She doesn't speak the Equestrian language, instead speaking in the Zebra language, which seems to be Latin. She does seem to have slowly picked up on Equestrian.
*BilingualBonus: All her dialogue actually means something in Latin.
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** BiggerBad: Is this for everything else involving the Enclave in the past 10 years.
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* {{expy}}: He seems to share some qualities with the Star Wars character Thrawn, even having a similar color scheme.
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surviving members of the Wonderbolt Generals.
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* {{Expy}}: Of Frank Horrigan from Fallout2
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* EvilBrit: While not described as such in the fic, WordOfGod is that she sounds similar to Doctor Sofia Lamb from BioShock2.
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* CompleteMonster: He lacks anything resembling altruistic tendencies, being willing to torture traitors, including [[spoiler: his own daughter]].
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*BigBad: Is this for ''Survivor's Guilt''.
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**They both broadcast speeches on occasion.
**They're both the President of the Enclave.
**They both come off as AffablyEvil.
* PresidentEvil: She appears to be one atleast.least.
*VillainWithGoodPublicity: Not necessarily among the hero groups, but there seems to be a growing pro-Enclave sentiment in Equestria following her first speech.
!!Cloud Chaser
Not to be confused with the My Little Pony character of the same name, Cloud Chaser is a cold and ruthless General in the Enclave Remnant that is encountered in Stable 117.
*AmbitionIsEvil: He comes off as ambitious at times.
*CoDragons: Along with the other remaining Generals and Tornado.
*CompleteMonster: He lacks anything resembling altruistic tendencies, being willing to torture traitors, including [[spoiler: his own daughter]].
*EvilBrit: He seems to speak in a Trottingham accent.
*{{expy}}: He seems to share some qualities with the Star Wars character Thrawn, even having a similar color scheme.
!!Tornado
A mysterious Alicorn that appears twice so far in Scootaloo's journey, her origin and backstory is unknown other than that she serves as a bodyguard and enforcer for Winter Breeze.
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*DarthVaderClone: She dresses in black power armor so its kind of a given.
**BiggerBad: Is this for everything else involving the Enclave in the past 10 years.
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**They both broadcast speeches on occasion.
**They're both the President of the Enclave.
**They both come off as AffablyEvil.
* PresidentEvil: She appears to be one at
*VillainWithGoodPublicity: Not necessarily among the hero groups, but there seems to be a growing pro-Enclave sentiment in Equestria following her first speech.
!!Cloud Chaser
Not to be confused with the My Little Pony character of the same name, Cloud Chaser is a cold and ruthless General in the Enclave Remnant that is encountered in Stable 117.
*AmbitionIsEvil: He comes off as ambitious at times.
*CoDragons: Along with the other remaining Generals and Tornado.
*CompleteMonster: He lacks anything resembling altruistic tendencies, being willing to torture traitors, including [[spoiler: his own daughter]].
*EvilBrit: He seems to speak in a Trottingham accent.
*{{expy}}: He seems to share some qualities with the Star Wars character Thrawn, even having a similar color scheme.
!!Tornado
A mysterious Alicorn that appears twice so far in Scootaloo's journey, her origin and backstory is unknown other than that she serves as a bodyguard and enforcer for Winter Breeze.
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*DarthVaderClone: She dresses in black power armor so its kind of a given.
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!!Cherry Blossom
A Stable Dweller from Stable 48 outside of Reino, Cherry is part of the breeder division from her home Stable. She left the Stable and wound up working at a brothel until she met Scootaloo and Arc Light. After their trip to Stable 48, she formally joined Scootaloo's team.
*AllLesbiansWantKids: Kinda played with, she is pregnant at the time the fic starts, but she didn't necessarily want the child instead had to do it because of her role in her home Stable. However she wants to keep the child and raise her away from her home.
*BabyFactory: Played with, Cherry's role in the Stable as a Breeder in essence makes her this, but basically only when her name comes up in the cycle. There are other ponies in the Stable that likely fit it a lot more such as Tinker.
*FlowerMotifs: Her Cutie Mark is of a pink flower blossom.
*FloralThemeNaming: Well, her name is Cherry Blossom.
*LipstickLesbian: While not completely feminine, Cherry is generally more feminine than her teammates, and she's the only one who willingly wore a dress in chapter 10.
*PregnantBadass: She helped take on the Enclave in Stable 48 despite being six months pregnant.
A Stable Dweller from Stable 48 outside of Reino, Cherry is part of the breeder division from her home Stable. She left the Stable and wound up working at a brothel until she met Scootaloo and Arc Light. After their trip to Stable 48, she formally joined Scootaloo's team.
*AllLesbiansWantKids: Kinda played with, she is pregnant at the time the fic starts, but she didn't necessarily want the child instead had to do it because of her role in her home Stable. However she wants to keep the child and raise her away from her home.
*BabyFactory: Played with, Cherry's role in the Stable as a Breeder in essence makes her this, but basically only when her name comes up in the cycle. There are other ponies in the Stable that likely fit it a lot more such as Tinker.
*FlowerMotifs: Her Cutie Mark is of a pink flower blossom.
*FloralThemeNaming: Well, her name is Cherry Blossom.
*LipstickLesbian: While not completely feminine, Cherry is generally more feminine than her teammates, and she's the only one who willingly wore a dress in chapter 10.
*PregnantBadass: She helped take on the Enclave in Stable 48 despite being six months pregnant.
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*AffablyEvil: In her brief interaction with Scootaloo in chapter 10 she came across as polite and almost courteous.
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*FishOutOfTemporalWater: Very much so.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: In the past, now that she's seen the results of it she wants to make up for it.
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!!Arc Light
A Stable Dweller from Stable 66 somewhere in Manehattan, Arc Light left her home Stable in order to find her best friend (and [[spoiler: crush]]) Caramel Corn who seems to have been captured by the Enclave.
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!!Serenity
*BadDreams: She suffers from these on occasion because of her time fighting the Changelings.
*ChildSoldier: A minor example of one, but she did fight in a war against the Changeling invaders along with the Crusaders.
*GenerationXerox: She has a lot of similarities to Scootaloo, [[spoiler: which makes sense given that she's her descendant]].
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!!Winter Breeze
The President of the Enclave, she's behind all the Enclave's actions in the past 10 years. Not much is known about her otherwise except that she was originally the Secretary of Education for the Enclave.
*Expy: She shares some qualities with John Henry Eden from Fallout3.
*PresidentEvil: She appears to be one at least.
!!Arc Light
A Stable Dweller from Stable 66 somewhere in Manehattan, Arc Light left her home Stable in order to find her best friend (and [[spoiler: crush]]) Caramel Corn who seems to have been captured by the Enclave.
!Other Characters
!!Serenity
*BadDreams: She suffers from these on occasion because of her time fighting the Changelings.
*ChildSoldier: A minor example of one, but she did fight in a war against the Changeling invaders along with the Crusaders.
*GenerationXerox: She has a lot of similarities to Scootaloo, [[spoiler: which makes sense given that she's her descendant]].
!The Grand Pegasus Enclave
!!Winter Breeze
The President of the Enclave, she's behind all the Enclave's actions in the past 10 years. Not much is known about her otherwise except that she was originally the Secretary of Education for the Enclave.
*Expy: She shares some qualities with John Henry Eden from Fallout3.
*PresidentEvil: She appears to be one at least.
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!Main Characters
!!Scootaloo
The main character of the fic, Scootaloo during the war was the Vice President of Stable-Tec and was the one to propose the social experiments the Stables carried out. She survived by being placed in magical stasis by [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] and wakes up about 10 years after the events of FalloutEquestria, she spends the first few chapters of the fic battling her personal demons and looking for her family [[spoiler:She finds it in a filly named Serenity]].
*ActionGirl: Its kind of a given since she's the main character, but she has fought against the Enclave on at least one occasion.
*ActionMom: Prior to being placed into stasis she had a daughter named Cloudy, and she definitely qualifies these days.
*AntiHero: She's reprising this from the original fic.
*TheAtoner: Her journey is in part to atone for her actions during the war.
*BadassLongcoat: She wears one as part of her disguise.
*BadDreams: She suffers from particularly nasty ones involving ponies she knows being consumed by a Megaspell and her being left the only one alive, and then they call her out for it.
*DarkIsNotEvil: She wears a black outfit starting in chapter 1.
*GoodIsNotSoft: Definitely not, she has had some combat training and can hold her own, and then there's what she did during the war.
*HandicappedBadass: The fic doesn't even bother hiding it, she's specifically stated to be incapable of flight in the fic.
*HappilyAdopted: For a time at least when she lived with Rainbow Dash up until the war.
*HeartwarmingOrphan: Played with, Scootaloo was orphaned when she was young and later adopted by Rainbow Dash, however its not a major plot point outside of chapter 5.
*HeroicBSOD: She suffers one when she finds out what happened to Rainbow Dash, but it doesn't last long.
*HurtingHero: She suffers a lot, including from PTSD.
*InSeriesNickname: The Wanderer.
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: She practically says it word for word once she realizes how badly the Stables had failed.
*NiceHat: She wears a fedora specifically.
*SurvivorsGuilt: She suffers from this as a result of being the last survivor of her friends and family, its even the title of the fic she stars in.
*WellIntentionedExtremist: In the past, now that she's seen the results of it she wants to make up for it.
!!Scootaloo
The main character of the fic, Scootaloo during the war was the Vice President of Stable-Tec and was the one to propose the social experiments the Stables carried out. She survived by being placed in magical stasis by [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] and wakes up about 10 years after the events of FalloutEquestria, she spends the first few chapters of the fic battling her personal demons and looking for her family [[spoiler:She finds it in a filly named Serenity]].
*ActionGirl: Its kind of a given since she's the main character, but she has fought against the Enclave on at least one occasion.
*ActionMom: Prior to being placed into stasis she had a daughter named Cloudy, and she definitely qualifies these days.
*AntiHero: She's reprising this from the original fic.
*TheAtoner: Her journey is in part to atone for her actions during the war.
*BadassLongcoat: She wears one as part of her disguise.
*BadDreams: She suffers from particularly nasty ones involving ponies she knows being consumed by a Megaspell and her being left the only one alive, and then they call her out for it.
*DarkIsNotEvil: She wears a black outfit starting in chapter 1.
*GoodIsNotSoft: Definitely not, she has had some combat training and can hold her own, and then there's what she did during the war.
*HandicappedBadass: The fic doesn't even bother hiding it, she's specifically stated to be incapable of flight in the fic.
*HappilyAdopted: For a time at least when she lived with Rainbow Dash up until the war.
*HeartwarmingOrphan: Played with, Scootaloo was orphaned when she was young and later adopted by Rainbow Dash, however its not a major plot point outside of chapter 5.
*HeroicBSOD: She suffers one when she finds out what happened to Rainbow Dash, but it doesn't last long.
*HurtingHero: She suffers a lot, including from PTSD.
*InSeriesNickname: The Wanderer.
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: She practically says it word for word once she realizes how badly the Stables had failed.
*NiceHat: She wears a fedora specifically.
*SurvivorsGuilt: She suffers from this as a result of being the last survivor of her friends and family, its even the title of the fic she stars in.
*WellIntentionedExtremist: In the past, now that she's seen the results of it she wants to make up for it.
