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* The first chapter of ''Choice'' details exactly why Fluttershy defected: after enduring months of seeing Equestria become a self-righteous, bigoted hellhole, the propagandists used her image to promote what she knew was genocide, [[TheLastStraw and that did it.]]
* The first chapter of ''Choice'' details exactly why Fluttershy defected: after enduring months of seeing Equestria become a self-righteous, bigoted hellhole, the propagandists used her image to promote what she knew was genocide, [[TheLastStraw and that did it.]]
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* Realizing that ponykind had no hope of winning the war, General Valkyrie [[MilitaryCoup staged a coup]] to assassinate Celestia and take control of Canterlot in order to negotiate peace with mankind, and she would've succeeded if not for Celestia's alicorn biology saving her from the poison that otherwise would have killed her.
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* Realizing that ponykind had no hope of winning the war, General Valkyrie [[MilitaryCoup staged a coup]] to assassinate Celestia and take control of Canterlot in order to negotiate peace with mankind, and she would've succeeded if not for Celestia's alicorn biology saving her from the poison that otherwise would have killed her.
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** Developing [[spoiler:the Thalmann Anti-Magic Generators, which allowed Earth to finally go on the offensive and take the fight to Equestria. Highlights of how useful they were include:]]
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*** [[spoiler:Draining Luna of her magic so she could then be killed by a hailstorm of bullets during the Battle of Jerusalem.]]
*** [[spoiler:Forcing Celestia into a six-year-long coma, which finally brought the war to a close.]]
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* Twilight openly condemning Celestia for everything she did, and even calling her former mentor out on it right to her face. Gone is the naive, loyal student who took everything Celestia said as gospel; she has now grown into her own mare who knows better than to blindly follow somepony without question and start thinking for herself rather than constantly seek Celestia's approval at her own expense.
* Twilight openly condemning Celestia for everything she did, and even calling her former mentor out on it right to her face. Gone is the naive, loyal student who took everything Celestia said as gospel; she has now grown into her own mare who knows better than to blindly follow somepony without question and start thinking for herself rather than constantly seek Celestia's approval at her own expense.
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* Twilight openly condemning Celestia for everything she did, and even calling her former mentor out on it right to her face. Gone is the naive, loyal student who took everything Celestia said as gospel; she has now grown into her own mare who knows better than to blindly follow somepony without question and start thinking for herself rather than constantly seek Celestia's approval ather own expense.the expense of herself and others.
* Twilight openly condemning Celestia for everything she did, and even calling her former mentor out on it right to her face. Gone is the naive, loyal student who took everything Celestia said as gospel; she has now grown into her own mare who knows better than to blindly follow somepony without question and start thinking for herself rather than constantly seek Celestia's approval at
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* [[spoiler:Twilight's HeelFaceTurn in part one, which sets the stage for the rest of the series.]]
* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several awesome moments:]]
** Developing [[spoiler:the Thalmann Anti-Magic Generators, the key component in defeating Equestria. Highlights of how useful they were include:]]
*** [[spoiler:Destroying the barrier surrounding Equestria and the lands/countries the ponies conquered, leaving them wide open to a human counterattack.]]
*** [[spoiler:Draining Luna of her magic so she could then be killed by a hailstorm of bullets during the Battle of Jerusalem.]]
*** [[spoiler:Forcing Celestia into a coma that took her six years to wake up from.]]
** The ponies got a villainous one when they [[spoiler:destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon. This was then followed by humanity straight up '''nuking''' the Crystal Empire in retaliation, reducing it to a nuclear wasteland and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians.]]
* [[spoiler:Twilight successfully developing a cure for ponification and using it to cure every single human afflicted by it.]]
* [[spoiler:Twilight's HeelFaceTurn in part one, which sets the stage for the rest of the series.]]
* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several awesome moments:]]
** Developing [[spoiler:the Thalmann Anti-Magic Generators, the key component in defeating Equestria. Highlights of how useful they were include:]]
*** [[spoiler:Destroying the barrier surrounding Equestria and the lands/countries the ponies conquered, leaving them wide open to a human counterattack.]]
*** [[spoiler:Draining Luna of her magic so she could then be killed by a hailstorm of bullets during the Battle of Jerusalem.]]
*** [[spoiler:Forcing Celestia into a coma that took her six years to wake up from.]]
** The ponies got a villainous one when they [[spoiler:destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon. This was then followed by humanity straight up '''nuking''' the Crystal Empire in retaliation, reducing it to a nuclear wasteland and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians.]]
* [[spoiler:Twilight successfully developing a cure for ponification and using it to cure every single human afflicted by it.]]
