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* Twilight successfully developing an antidote for ponification and curing every single human afflicted by it.

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* Twilight successfully developing an antidote for ponification and curing every single human afflicted by it.it.
* Realizing that ponykind had no hope of winning the war, General Valkyrie [[MilitaryCoup staged a coup]] to assassinate Celestia and take control of Canterlot in order to negotiate peace with mankind, and she would've succeeded if not for Celestia's alicorn biology saving her from the poison that otherwise would have killed her.
** She also gets bonus points for [[DefiantToTheEnd contemptuously spitting in Celestia's face right before the latter executed her personally.]]


** The ponies destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NukeEm straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] as payback, reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead.

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** The ponies destroyed Vatican City Rome and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NukeEm straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] as payback, reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead.


** The ponies destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NuclearOption straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] [[{{Revenge}} as payback]], [[GenocideBackfire reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead.]]

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** The ponies destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NuclearOption [[NukeEm straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] [[{{Revenge}} as payback]], [[GenocideBackfire payback, reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead.]]


** The ponies [[spoiler:destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NuclearOption straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] [[{{Revenge}} as payback]], [[GenocideBackfire reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead]].]]

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** The ponies [[spoiler:destroyed destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NuclearOption straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] [[{{Revenge}} as payback]], [[GenocideBackfire reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead]].instead.]]


** Developing [[spoiler:the Thalmann Anti-Magic Generators, which allowed Earth to finally go on the offensive and take the fight to Equestria. Highlights of how useful they were include:]]
*** [[spoiler:Destroying the barrier surrounding Equestria and the lands/countries the ponies conquered, leaving them wide open to a human counterattack.]]
*** [[spoiler:Draining Luna of her magic so she could then be killed by a hailstorm of bullets during the Battle of Jerusalem.]]
*** [[spoiler:Forcing Celestia into a six-year-long coma, which finally brought the war to a close.]]

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** Developing [[spoiler:the the Thalmann Anti-Magic Generators, which allowed Earth to finally go on the offensive and take the fight to Equestria. Highlights of how useful they were include:]]
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*** [[spoiler:Destroying Destroying the barrier surrounding Equestria and the lands/countries the ponies conquered, leaving them wide open to a human counterattack.]]
counterattack.
*** [[spoiler:Draining Draining Luna of her magic so she could then be killed by a hailstorm of bullets during the Battle of Jerusalem.]]
Jerusalem.
*** [[spoiler:Forcing Forcing Celestia into a six-year-long coma, which finally brought the war to a close.]]



* [[spoiler:Twilight successfully developing an antidote for ponification and curing every single human afflicted by it.]]

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* [[spoiler:Twilight Twilight successfully developing an antidote for ponification and curing every single human afflicted by it.]]


* The utter decimation of the Equestrians First terrorist organization, carried out by the first coalition of human and pony soldiers formed after the war's end.

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* The utter decimation of the Equestrians First Equestrian Freedom Fighters terrorist organization, carried out by the first coalition of human and pony soldiers formed after the war's end.


* [[spoiler:Twilight's HeelFaceTurn in part one, which sets the stage for the rest of the series.]]
* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several instances of CMOA for the good guys such as:]]

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* [[spoiler:Twilight's Twilight's HeelFaceTurn in part one, which sets the stage for the rest of the series.]]
series.
* [[spoiler:Lyra Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several instances of CMOA for the good guys such as:]]as:


** The ponies [[spoiler:destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NuclearOption straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] [[{{Revenge}} in retaliation]], [[GenocideBackfire reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead]].]]
* Twilight openly condemning Celestia for everything she did, and even calling her former mentor out on it right to her face. Gone is the naive, loyal student who took everything Celestia said as gospel; she has now grown into her own mare who knows better than to blindly follow somepony without question and start thinking for herself rather than constantly seek Celestia's approval at her own expense.

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** The ponies [[spoiler:destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NuclearOption straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] [[{{Revenge}} in retaliation]], as payback]], [[GenocideBackfire reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead]].]]
* Twilight openly condemning Celestia for everything she did, and even calling her former mentor out on it right to her face. Gone is the naive, loyal student who took everything Celestia said as gospel; she has now grown into her own mare who knows better than to blindly follow somepony without question and start thinking for herself rather than constantly seek Celestia's approval at her own expense.the expense of herself and others.


* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several CMOA's for the good guys such as:]]

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* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several CMOA's instances of CMOA for the good guys such as:]]


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* Twilight openly condemning Celestia for everything she did, and even calling her former mentor out on it right to her face. Gone is the naive, loyal student who took everything Celestia said as gospel; she has now grown into her own mare who knows better than to blindly follow somepony without question and start thinking for herself rather than constantly seek Celestia's approval at her own expense.


* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several CMOAs for the good guys such as:]]

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* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several CMOAs CMOA's for the good guys such as:]]


As with most deconstructions of TCB, this fic has its fair share:

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As with most deconstructions of TCB, this fic has its fair share:
share of awesome moments:



* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several awesome moments:]]
** Developing [[spoiler:the Thalmann Anti-Magic Generators, the key component in defeating Equestria. Highlights of how useful they were include:]]

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* [[spoiler:Lyra managing to recruit several key ponies, including Fluttershy and even ''Discord'' by extension, into her rebellion and joining forces with humanity to fight against Celestia and her conversion efforts. This alliance between man and pony results in several awesome moments:]]
CMOAs for the good guys such as:]]
** Developing [[spoiler:the Thalmann Anti-Magic Generators, which allowed Earth to finally go on the key component in defeating offensive and take the fight to Equestria. Highlights of how useful they were include:]]


* The utter decimation of the Equestrians First terrorist organization, carried out by the first coalition of human and pony soldiers formed several years after the war's end.

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* The utter decimation of the Equestrians First terrorist organization, carried out by the first coalition of human and pony soldiers formed several years after the war's end.


** The ponies [[spoiler:destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of demoralizing mankind... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NuclearOption straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] [[{{Revenge}} in retaliation]], [[GenocideBackfire reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead]].]]

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** The ponies [[spoiler:destroyed Vatican City and Mecca with their Crystal Cannon superweapon in hopes of demoralizing mankind...breaking mankind's spirit... '''AND FAILED'''. To their horror, humanity, [[ItsPersonal enraged over their loss]], [[NuclearOption straight up nuked the Crystal Empire]] [[{{Revenge}} in retaliation]], [[GenocideBackfire reducing the region to a nuclear wasteland, nearly wiping out the crystal ponies, and utterly demoralizing the Equestrians instead]].]]


* The utter decimation of the Equestrians First terrorist organization, carried out by a coalition of human and pony soldiers, the first of its kind, formed several years after the war's end.

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* The utter decimation of the Equestrians First terrorist organization, carried out by a the first coalition of human and pony soldiers, the first of its kind, soldiers formed several years after the war's end.


* [[spoiler:Twilight successfully developing a cure for ponification and using it to cure every single human afflicted by it.]]

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* [[spoiler:Twilight successfully developing a cure an antidote for ponification and using it to cure curing every single human afflicted by it.]]

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