NNinja
Since: Sep, 2015
Mar 4th 2016 at 5:37:27 AM
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Cleaned up some from Harry Potter
- Even Lord Voldemort falls victim to this as he becomes more integral to the series. He's the Evil Overlord, The Evil Genius, the leader of the Death Eaters, who's so frightening that even the mention of his name sends people into panic. It is true that Voldemort is extremely powerful, to the point where the only person in the series to fight him evenly is Dumbledore. But he's also holding the Villain Ball quite often throughout the series. He does things like hiding his Soul Jars in places connected to his past.
- Dumbledore is reported to hold the position of, essentially, the Head of the Supreme Court of magical Britain. Yet he never uses his authority to resolve any of the occurring cases when innocent people are being accused by the incredibly flawed wizardry judicial system. However, this may be a subversion, as Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban hints that the magical supreme court is corrupt. When Dumbledore does use his influence, he's immediately vilified by the other politicians and kicked out of office.
- By the time of the Order of Phoenix there is no "maybe" corrupt anymore; Fudge manages to call a full criminal hearing, the type of which normally reserved for Death Eater-level murderers, for a simple case of under-age magic which at most carries a relatively minor sentence such as expulsion from Hogwarts. Related to the example above, Dumbledore does indeed use his knowledge of wizarding law to get Harry out of it, so it would appear his abilities are not quite as informed as they seemed before.
- Dumbledore is reported to hold the position of, essentially, the Head of the Supreme Court of magical Britain. Yet he never uses his authority to resolve any of the occurring cases when innocent people are being accused by the incredibly flawed wizardry judicial system. However, this may be a subversion, as Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban hints that the magical supreme court is corrupt. When Dumbledore does use his influence, he's immediately vilified by the other politicians and kicked out of office.
- The Nimbus Two Thousand and One is introduced as superior to every other model of racing broom ever invented - up until the Firebolt in Book 3. According to Draco, it Outstrips the Nimbus Two Thousand by a considerable degree and completely wipes the floor with the Cleansweeps. So you would naturally assume that a whole team equipped with these fantastic brooms would be the equivalent of the Brazil soccer team going up against Samoa right? Well, no, actually. Though it is reported early on that the Slytherin team resembles a series of green blurs during their practice sessions, they never win the cup for the rest of the series, and we are never told of them ever having a scoreline against an opposing team that is ever anything more than completely average.
- The books imply that while the brooms the Slytherin team uses are superb, the players themselves are not. Malfoy buys his way onto the team, they frequently resort to cheating, and it's mentioned time and again that the Slytherin team seems to prefer thuggish brutality to skill.
- The Nimbus Two Thousand and One is introduced as superior to every other model of racing broom ever invented - up until the Firebolt in Book 3. According to Draco, it Outstrips the Nimbus Two Thousand by a considerable degree and completely wipes the floor with the Cleansweeps. So you would naturally assume that a whole team equipped with these fantastic brooms would be the equivalent of the Brazil soccer team going up against Samoa right? Well, no, actually. Though it is reported early on that the Slytherin team resembles a series of green blurs during their practice sessions, they never win the cup for the rest of the series, and we are never told of them ever having a scoreline against an opposing team that is ever anything more than completely average.
vifetoile
Queen of Filks
Since: Jan, 2001
Dec 31st 2014 at 3:01:26 PM
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Cut this section from Literature, under The Fault in Our Stars:
- The (fictional) book by Peter van Houten is often stated as the only book that properly describes what it's like to have cancer yet we see no proof of it.
- Hazel and Gus even suffer from Informed Illness. Neither one of them ever suffers any symptomps of their diseases or side-effects of treatments except for a few scenes here and there when it's plot convenient. Hazel, who apparently needs a bi-pap and oxygen through cannula 24/7, is perfectly able to run around malls and airports, climb several flights of stairs, have sex and push people around in wheelchairs. Sometimes the text does state that she feels out of breath but she shouldn't be able to do any of those things in the first place. Not to mentions she never has any symptoms of any kind from her primary tumor. As for Gus, his symptoms never show up until the dramatic reveal, then he proceeds to have several symptoms that don't match the kind of cancer he's supposedly dying from. All in all, this book feels like it's written by someone who merely took a guess as to how cancer works.
The first bullet point is not this trope, it's Take Our Word for It. The second bullet point also doesn't belong on this page, because illnesses are not abilities, and for the same reason it was taken from the Fault in Our Stars YMMV tab: saying that "the cancer only shows up when the plot requires it" is not the same thing as "we are told about the cancer but it is never shown."
Candi
Sorcerer in training
Since: Aug, 2012
Feb 27th 2014 at 4:43:04 AM
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- Used to be a very common in the romance genre. Most typically, the heroine would be described in the first chapter by the author as intelligent, assertive, strong-willed and independent, but her dialogue, actions, etc. throughout the entire book portray her as a weak, hollow shell of a woman with the mind of a tuna sandwich.
- Noted by George Eliot in "Silly Novels by Lady Novelists," where she says, "In her recorded conversations [the typical Mary Sue] is amazingly eloquent, and in her unrecorded conversations, amazingly witty" — the implication being that the writers of these books can do Author Filibusters but not jokes.
While very true, this is a general example, and needs some specific filled-in examples. (If you want romance novels where the ladies have brains, try Beatrice Small's historical romantic fiction.)
Coming back to where you started is not the same as never leaving. -Terry Pratchett
In Heart Of Darkness, it's the point how the Darkest Africa has corrupted even the ideal colonist Kurtz was supposed to be.