Fanfiction/Fictionpress Review Circle

We, as fanfiction writers, all love to get reviews. Don't lie. It's actually the same process as This thread, but different in that we'll be actually reviewing each others' stories on Fan Fiction or Fiction Press rather than posting it in the thread. Basically, the next poster will link their story here, and provided I know enough about the canon that they're writing about, I'll review one chapter, then the person after will review a chapter of my story and post theirs, and so on.

1.) Drop your FF or FP username so we know you've reviewed. It'll be added to the table, assuming I formatted it right.

2.) None of the "Oh, great fic, update soon." business. We want substance. Talk about what you liked, didn't like, maybe a bit of Wild Mass Guessing if you're so inclined. At least act like you're interested.

3.) Review one chapter at a time for maximum reviewosity.

4.) Specify the fandom you are writing for or if it's an original work.

5.) ???

6.) Profit!

Troper Handle	FFN / FP Username
Sal Fish Fin	Herpestidae
Count Daxam	Daxam S. Loken
Ronnie	Futuramakid
Geth Knight	Seriyu the ice dragon
Commando Dude	CommandoDude
Mr AHR	AHR

edited 29th Nov '10 10:32:03 AM by SalFishFin

I have my stuff on Google Docs - and it's a lot. Does FF divvie it up into chapters based off of word count, or is that left up to the poster?

Up to the poster.

God Damnit. I would LOVE to do it, but all my fanfiction are old shames.

I have a Fanfiction and Fiction Press account, though nothing is currently in the latter one. I have provided a link to the FP page in my FF account though. My FF accounts mostly contain novelisations of games though, so don't expect anything amazing.

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2112845/Daxam_S_Loken

edited 8th Oct '10 5:00:55 AM by CountDaxam

I have a fanfiction account though I warn you, tons of little abandoned stories and crap are in the older stuff...

www.fanfiction.net/~futuramakid

I have a fanfiction account though I warn you, tons of little abandoned stories and crap are in the older stuff...

http://www.fanfiction.net/~futuramakid

edited 8th Oct '10 8:14:51 AM by Ronnie

I have fanfiction under the name of Seriyu-the-ice-dragon on Fanfiction.net. I've not worked on them in some time

edited 28th Nov '10 9:09:11 PM by GethKnight

This reminds me I have a story I published in March that I need to update...Ahhh, procrastination...

Please ignore any works before 2010.

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/935159/CommandoDude

I doubt anyone is actually doing this, but what the hey.

http://www.fictionpress.com/~ahr

I promise Ill get around to looking at your script AHR!

I just have to wait to do anything important until I'm not sick anymore~

Is it sad that I forgot about this?

Yes. Yes it is.

Thank ye kindly Cygan.

Here I am at Fanfiction.net...

and Fictionpress

reviewed fictionpress stuff, yarrgh!

And yes, I'm a cynical bastard. My apologies.

edited 29th Nov '10 3:02:40 PM by MrAHR

Here's my FF.net account: http://www.fanfiction.net/~spongey444
I'd ask to not read anything I consider an Old Shame, but really almost evreything, expect what I'e written this year is an Old Shame, so review whatever you want.

Chapter 3 of my fictionpress thing is up.

I guess I'll throw mine into the lot once more.

The link is in my sig (don't worry—red link works).

Thank you for the critque AHR, I really appreciate it. :)

Alright. I'll bite.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2811020/1/Tales_of_the_Waffle_House Here's the original fic that I keep shamelessly pimping (and I'll stop once I get a SINGLE DAMN REVIEW!)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5651575/1/bA_b_bSnap_b_In_The_bRight_b_bDirection_b And this here is my ONE piece of fanfiction. I've been told it's pretty good, so...yeah. ....It's Pokemon...

Okay, I'll bite the bullet.

Here's my FF.net handle; it's the same as the one I use here.

I only have one story on there right now. Though the general reception of my story has been quite positive, I haven't been receiving much in the way of useful criticism on it. Anything would be much appreciated, really.

Necro'd to say I updated my fictionpress story (second link)

edited 14th Apr '11 9:24:13 PM by snowfoxofdeath

Just wanting to link to my profile again. I need some constrictive criticism.