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Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#2: Feb 23rd 2020 at 9:09:53 PM

Not seeing an issue with the current, plus the suggestions seem really fuzzy.

WarJay77 Bonnie's Artistic Cousin from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
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#3: Feb 23rd 2020 at 9:10:55 PM

I agree the current relies on text a little too much, but the suggestions are also bad.

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#4: Feb 23rd 2020 at 9:40:27 PM

Current is at least a keep till better image suggested.

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#5: Feb 23rd 2020 at 9:41:47 PM

Current isn't perfect, but it's better than the suggestions.

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#6: Feb 26th 2020 at 8:16:51 AM

Keep, OP hasn't given a reason for the replacement, and I don't think the suggestion is better.

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#7: Feb 26th 2020 at 8:25:15 AM

Keep. The current is much cleaner and concise.

I know we've spoken about OP's anti-Simpsons pushes elsewhere, but can we talk about their Show, Don't Tell push? Ideally an image doesn't rely on text, but I will absolutely favor a more concise, cleaner single-panel image that uses text over a multipanel image with bad quality. Current isn't even that text-reliant, you certainly see a prison in the current, and the only word you need to know from the text is "Juvenile".... which is in the English-language title of the page, on an English-language wiki.

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#8: Feb 26th 2020 at 9:02:33 AM

[up]I feel like OP doesn't really understand what Show, Don't Tell actually means.

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#9: Feb 26th 2020 at 9:55:12 AM

I agree that the current is too text-reliant. Would either of the suggestions work if they were higher quality?

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rachiebird Since: May, 2014
#10: Feb 26th 2020 at 2:06:21 PM

I don't cave any particular problems with current. But I'd be down for a better-quality version of 1.2, maybe? It's nice that it shows actual kids.

Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#11: Mar 2nd 2020 at 10:06:57 AM

Consensus is that the current's a Keep Until Better Image Suggested case; it's tagged. Locking up.

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