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#2: Feb 21st 2020 at 2:08:18 PM

[tdown] to the current (heh) and the suggestions. The current's quality isn't great and it's leaning too much on the caption. 1.1 looks like whatever that is is being disintegrated instead of shocked, and 1.2's quality is worse than the current's.

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#3: Feb 21st 2020 at 2:17:08 PM

I'd suggest this if it wasn't super eye grating.

Edited by Crossover-Enthusiast on Feb 21st 2020 at 5:21:25 AM

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#4: Feb 21st 2020 at 2:22:36 PM

I'd say Keep Until Better Image Suggested to this. It's obvious in the current pic what's going to happen, and in the suggestions I'm not really sure what's going on (teleporting a dog with magic powers, maybe??)

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#5: Feb 21st 2020 at 5:07:47 PM

A dog is falling onto the subway tracks and getting electrocuted by the third rail. Perhaps a narrower crop would make it clearer?

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/oliverandcompanythirdrail.png

Second suggestion was of the "electrogun" from GTA 2.

Edited by neoYTPism on Feb 21st 2020 at 5:08:01 AM

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#6: Feb 21st 2020 at 5:22:42 PM

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/simpsons_frank_grimes_death.png

Wondering if the middle shot is necessary. I kinda like it because it's a non-graphic way of showing a deadly shock.

Edited by Drope on Feb 21st 2020 at 5:32:37 AM

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#7: Feb 21st 2020 at 5:45:08 PM

[up]I think the before-and-after aspect makes that an improvement. I'm leaning toward having all three panels.

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#8: Feb 21st 2020 at 6:07:49 PM

[up][up] I was thinking of adding the impct to the current, at least.

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#10: Feb 21st 2020 at 6:26:38 PM

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#11: Feb 22nd 2020 at 7:06:38 AM

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#16: Feb 23rd 2020 at 3:40:55 AM

[up]I like that version better.

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#17: Feb 23rd 2020 at 4:21:49 AM

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#19: Feb 23rd 2020 at 5:16:46 AM

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#20: Feb 23rd 2020 at 6:25:16 AM

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#21: Feb 23rd 2020 at 7:05:21 AM

OK, the latest version is a [awesome]

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#24: Feb 23rd 2020 at 3:02:59 PM

Go ahead with the latest version. Caption?

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#25: Feb 23rd 2020 at 3:04:33 PM

"Truly a Shocking Moment."

EDIT: The replacement is installed and tagged.

Edited by Brainulator9 on Feb 23rd 2020 at 6:14:06 AM

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