to the current (heh) and the suggestions. The current's quality isn't great and it's leaning too much on the caption. 1.1 looks like whatever that is is being disintegrated instead of shocked, and 1.2's quality is worse than the current's.
I'd suggest this◊ if it wasn't super eye grating.
Edited by Crossover-Enthusiast on Feb 21st 2020 at 5:21:25 AM
Jawbreakers on sale for 99¢I'd say Keep Until Better Image Suggested to this. It's obvious in the current pic what's going to happen, and in the suggestions I'm not really sure what's going on (teleporting a dog with magic powers, maybe??)
Rhetorical, eh? ... Eight!A dog is falling onto the subway tracks and getting electrocuted by the third rail. Perhaps a narrower crop would make it clearer?
Second suggestion was of the "electrogun" from GTA 2.
Edited by neoYTPism on Feb 21st 2020 at 5:08:01 AM
Wondering if the middle shot is necessary. I kinda like it because it's a non-graphic way of showing a deadly shock.
Edited by Drope on Feb 21st 2020 at 5:32:37 AM
I think the before-and-after aspect makes that an improvement. I'm leaning toward having all three panels.
Patiently awaiting the release of Paper Luigi and the Marvelous Compass.I was thinking of adding the impct to the current, at least.
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"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
(Annoyed grunt)
I like that version better.
Patiently awaiting the release of Paper Luigi and the Marvelous Compass.The universe is under no obligation to make sense to us.
(Annoyed grunt)
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
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OK, the latest version is a
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Go ahead with the latest version. Caption?
"Truly a Shocking Moment."
EDIT: The replacement is installed and tagged.
Edited by Brainulator9 on Feb 23rd 2020 at 6:14:06 AM
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Show, Don't Tell.