YMMV / Unbreakable Red Silken Thread

• Arc Fatigue: The Solomon Grundy arc, which the authors both admit has its flaws, even if it has served its intended purpose. The problem, however, is the abrupt shift of focus after fourteen chapters featuring Cody and Heather to their near total absence.
• Big-Lipped Alligator Moment: At one point in Chapter 20, Gwen heads to the cafeteria and runs into Rick Sanchez, Morty Smith, Star Butterfly, and Marco Diaz sitting at the tables. They don't say anything or do anything, their presence is completely unexplained, and they vanish without a trace the moment Gwen turns her back on them. Gwen is confused by their presence, but then immediately decides she doesn't care. This scene was eventually entirely removed.