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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: We are suppose to want to root for Reginald in trying to win over Alice but his ManChild behavior and SpoiledBrat personality can be too annoying for some readers who will probably indentify with Alice despite the story showing her in the wrong.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: We are suppose to want to root for Reginald in trying to win over Alice but his ManChild behavior and SpoiledBrat personality can be too annoying for some readers who will probably indentify with Alice despite the story showing portraying her as in the wrong.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: At the time the fic came out Alice's romantic interest Reginald was seen has being unique and original with him not looking handsome as the average Disney Prince/Hero, which the comic itself even devotes a TakeThat panel at the other Disney's Princesses' romantic leads. These days however it doesn't stand out as much thanks to recent Disney Romantic leads and heroes having more average "goofy" designs such as Ralph from ''Wreck-It-Ralph'' and Kristoff from ''Frozen'', making newer younger readers wonder why Reginald's appearance is such a big deal.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: OnceOriginalNowOverdone: At the time the fic came out Alice's romantic interest Reginald was seen has being unique and original with him not looking handsome as the average Disney Prince/Hero, which the comic itself even devotes a TakeThat panel at the other Disney's Princesses' romantic leads. These days however it doesn't stand out as much thanks to recent Disney Romantic leads and heroes having more average "goofy" designs such as Ralph from ''Wreck-It-Ralph'' and Kristoff from ''Frozen'', making newer younger readers wonder why Reginald's appearance is such a big deal.
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A non-YMMV trope shoehorned in just to complain.
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* ButterFace: For some this is the main problem with Bri's and Rain's design choice for Alice's suppose romantic love interest Reginald, in fact this is even pointed out in the story about Reginald not looking like a typical Disney princes by the Princesses. The design is intended to look like the Disney Parks character actor (or which the idea came from) which has also the same reaction from people in that some find it near the uncanny valley or just find the nose to be just plain ugly.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: Stalking a woman and violently threatening her other suitors is alright and perfectly legal as long as she eventually comes around.
