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* TearJerker: If you're not crying upon reading about Derpy's past, especially ''[[AbusiveParents her own parents]]'' disowning her because she didn't grow up to be the pony they wanted, '''YOU HAVE NO HEART'''!
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* TearJerker: If you're not crying upon reading about Derpy's past, especially ''[[AbusiveParents her own parents]]'' disowning her because she didn't grow up to be the pony they wanted, '''YOU HAVE NO HEART'''!wanted.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: By the bucketload, but the best one is when [[spoiler: Dinky Doo, who is written to have an AmbiguousDisorder akin to Autism and is going through some of the same experiences as Derpy, opens up to her and wants to become her friend after hearing Derpy's story at Family Appreciation Day.]]
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: By the bucketload, but the best one is when [[spoiler: Dinky Doo, who is written to have an AmbiguousDisorder akin to [[DiagnosedByTheAudience traits that suggest Autism to audience]] and is going through some of the same experiences as Derpy, opens up to her and wants to become her friend after hearing Derpy's story at Family Appreciation Day.]]
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* {{Anvilicious}}/SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: There's more to somepony than their flaws. Don't judge someone by just one thing. You have to get the whole picture and acknowledge their good qualities and strengths along with their flaws. 90% of the ponies Derpy dealt with, even her own parents, just assumed she was stupid and dumb simply because of her crossed eyes and her clumsiness, not bothering to really get to know her and see who she really is: a sweet, kind, hard working pony who always wants to make her friends happy.
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* {{Anvilicious}}/SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: {{Anvilicious}}: There's more to somepony than their flaws. Don't judge someone by just one thing. You have to get the whole picture and acknowledge their good qualities and strengths along with their flaws. 90% of the ponies Derpy dealt with, even her own parents, just assumed she was stupid and dumb simply because of her crossed eyes and her clumsiness, not bothering to really get to know her and see who she really is: a sweet, kind, hard working pony who always wants to make her friends happy.
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* TheScrappy: [[AbusiveParents Derpy's]] [[WellDoneSonGuy parents]], [[AlphaBitch Flitter]] [[LackOfEmpathy and Cloudchaser.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: By the bucketload, but the best one is when [[spoiler: Dinky Doo, who is written to have an AmbiguousDisorder akin to Autism and is going through some of the same experiences as Derpy, opens up to her and wants to become her friend after hearing Derpy's story at Family Appreciation Day.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: By the bucketload, but the best one is when [[spoiler: Dinky Doo, who is written to have an AmbiguousDisorder akin to Autism and is going through some of the same experiences as Derpy, opens up to her and wants to become her friend after hearing Derpy's story at Family Appreciation Day.]]
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* DudeNotFunny: In-universe. Derpy almost drowns in an icy pond, and Flitter and Cloudchaser react by...laughing at her. Rainbow Dash is appalled and calls them out on it, and later convinces Thunderlane to do the same since they're his friends.
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Fan Dumb & Hate Dumb are now part of Flame Bait. Only in-universe examples are allowed. Also, Natter.
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* {{Anvilicious}}/SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: There's more to somepony than their flaws. Don't judge someone by just one thing. You have to get the whole picture and acknowledge their good qualities and strengths along with their flaws. 90% of the ponies Derpy dealt with, even her own parents, just assumed she was stupid and dumb simply because of her crossed eyes and her clumsiness, not bothering to really get to know her and see who she really is: a sweet, kind, hard working pony who always wants to make her friends happy. It's a lot like how people tend to [[HateDumb judge people with disabilities like Autism or ADHD rather harshly due to their ignorance, assuming they're all bad kids who throw tantrums and make messes or not even have any feelings]], when there's much more to them than they care to acknowledge.
** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it. Thunderlane is torn between Derpy and his friends, Flitter and Cloudchaser, who have been picking on Derpy. When he learns of their complete apathy toward Derpy's almost near death experience with the pond, he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOMELY]] [[WhatTheHellHero gives them an epic]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech verbal lashing!]]
** Different and stupid don't mean the same thing.
** While there are some ponies who do genuinely do mean things, it doesn't mean they can't feel remorse or regret it later on.
** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it. Thunderlane is torn between Derpy and his friends, Flitter and Cloudchaser, who have been picking on Derpy. When he learns of their complete apathy toward Derpy's almost near death experience with the pond, he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOMELY]] [[WhatTheHellHero gives them an epic]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech verbal lashing!]]
** Different and stupid don't mean the same thing.
** While there are some ponies who do genuinely do mean things, it doesn't mean they can't feel remorse or regret it later on.
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* {{Anvilicious}}/SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: There's more to somepony than their flaws. Don't judge someone by just one thing. You have to get the whole picture and acknowledge their good qualities and strengths along with their flaws. 90% of the ponies Derpy dealt with, even her own parents, just assumed she was stupid and dumb simply because of her crossed eyes and her clumsiness, not bothering to really get to know her and see who she really is: a sweet, kind, hard working pony who always wants to make her friends happy. It's a lot like how people tend to [[HateDumb judge people with disabilities like Autism or ADHD rather harshly due to their ignorance, assuming they're all bad kids who throw tantrums and make messes or not even have any feelings]], when there's much more to them than they care to acknowledge.
** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it. Thunderlane is torn between Derpy and his friends, Flitter and Cloudchaser, who have been picking on Derpy. When he learns of their complete apathy toward Derpy's almost near death experience with the pond, he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOMELY]] [[WhatTheHellHero gives them an epic]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech verbal lashing!]]
** Different and stupid don't mean the same thing.
** While there are some ponies who do genuinely do mean things, it doesn't mean they can't feel remorse or regret it later on.
** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it. Thunderlane is torn between Derpy and his friends, Flitter and Cloudchaser, who have been picking on Derpy. When he learns of their complete apathy toward Derpy's almost near death experience with the pond, he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOMELY]] [[WhatTheHellHero gives them an epic]] [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech verbal lashing!]]
** Different and stupid don't mean the same thing.
** While there are some ponies who do genuinely do mean things, it doesn't mean they can't feel remorse or regret it later on.
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** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it. Thunderlane is torn between Derpy and his friends, Flitter and Cloudchaser, who have been picking on Derpy. When he learns of their complete apathy toward Derpy's almost near death experience with the pond, he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOMELY]] [[WhatTheHellHero gives them an epic]] [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech verbal lashing!]]
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** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it. Thunderlane is torn between Derpy and his friends, Flitter and Cloudchaser, who have been picking on Derpy. When he learns of their complete apathy toward Derpy's almost near death experience with the pond, he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOMELY]] [[WhatTheHellHero gives them an epic]] [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech verbal lashing!]]
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* TheScrappy: [[AbusiveParents Derpy's]] [[WellDoneSonGuy parents]], [[AlphaBitch Flitter]] [[LackOfEmpathy and Cloudchaser.]]
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* TheScrappy: [[AbusiveParents Derpy's]] [[WellDoneSonGuy parents]], [[AlphaBitch Flitter]] [[LackOfEmpathy and Cloudchaser.]]]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: By the bucketload!
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: By the bucketload!bucketload, but the best one is when [[spoiler: Dinky Doo, who is written to have an AmbiguousDisorder akin to Autism and is going through some of the same experiences as Derpy, opens up to her and wants to become her friend after hearing Derpy's story at Family Appreciation Day.]]
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* DudeNotFunny: In-universe. Derpy almost drowns in an icy pond, and Flitter and Cloudchaser react by...laughing at her. Rainbow Dash is appalled and calls them out on it, and later convinces Thunderlane to do the same since they're his friends.
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* TearJerker: If you're not crying upon reading about Derpy's past, especially ''[[AbusiveParents her own parents]]'' disowning her because she didn't grow up to be the pony they wanted, '''YOU HAVE NO HEART'''!
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* TearJerker: If you're not crying upon reading about Derpy's past, especially ''[[AbusiveParents her own parents]]'' disowning her because she didn't grow up to be the pony they wanted, '''YOU HAVE NO HEART'''!HEART'''!
* TheScrappy: [[AbusiveParents Derpy's]] [[WellDoneSonGuy parents]], [[AlphaBitch Flitter]] [[LackOfEmpathy and Cloudchaser.]]
* TheScrappy: [[AbusiveParents Derpy's]] [[WellDoneSonGuy parents]], [[AlphaBitch Flitter]] [[LackOfEmpathy and Cloudchaser.]]
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* {{Anvilicious}}/SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: There's more to somepony than their flaws. Don't judge someone by just one thing. You have to get the whole picture and acknowledge their good qualities and strengths along with their flaws. 90% of the ponies Derpy dealt with, even her own parents, just assumed she was stupid and dumb simply because of her crossed eyes and her clumsiness, not bothering to really get to know her and see who she really is: a sweet, kind, hard working pony who always wants to make her friends happy.
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* {{Anvilicious}}/SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: There's more to somepony than their flaws. Don't judge someone by just one thing. You have to get the whole picture and acknowledge their good qualities and strengths along with their flaws. 90% of the ponies Derpy dealt with, even her own parents, just assumed she was stupid and dumb simply because of her crossed eyes and her clumsiness, not bothering to really get to know her and see who she really is: a sweet, kind, hard working pony who always wants to make her friends happy. It's a lot like how people tend to [[HateDumb judge people with disabilities like Autism or ADHD rather harshly due to their ignorance, assuming they're all bad kids who throw tantrums and make messes or not even have any feelings]], when there's much more to them than they care to acknowledge.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: By the bucketload!
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** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it.
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** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it. Thunderlane is torn between Derpy and his friends, Flitter and Cloudchaser, who have been picking on Derpy. When he learns of their complete apathy toward Derpy's almost near death experience with the pond, he [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome AWESOMELY]] [[WhatTheHellHero gives them an epic]] [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech verbal lashing!]]
** Different and stupid don't mean the same thing.
** While there are some ponies who do genuinely do mean things, it doesn't mean they can't feel remorse or regret it later on.
** Different and stupid don't mean the same thing.
** While there are some ponies who do genuinely do mean things, it doesn't mean they can't feel remorse or regret it later on.
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* TearJerker: If you're not crying upon reading about Derpy's past, especially [[AbusiveParents ''her own parents'']] disowning her because she didn't grow up to be the pony they wanted, '''YOU HAVE NO HEART'''!
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* TearJerker: If you're not crying upon reading about Derpy's past, especially [[AbusiveParents ''her ''[[AbusiveParents her own parents'']] parents]]'' disowning her because she didn't grow up to be the pony they wanted, '''YOU HAVE NO HEART'''!
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* {{Anvilicious}}/SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: There's more to somepony than their flaws. Don't judge someone by just one thing. You have to get the whole picture and acknowledge their good qualities and strengths along with their flaws. 90% of the ponies Derpy dealt with, even her own parents, just assumed she was stupid and dumb simply because of her crossed eyes and her clumsiness, not bothering to really get to know her and see who she really is: a sweet, kind, hard working pony who always wants to make her friends happy.
** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it.
* TearJerker: If you're not crying upon reading about Derpy's past, especially [[AbusiveParents ''her own parents'']] disowning her because she didn't grow up to be the pony they wanted, '''YOU HAVE NO HEART'''!
** If your "friends" are being mean to someone you love, it's not good to leave things as they are. If they can't accept the fact that you like someone who they don't like, then they're not worth it.
* TearJerker: If you're not crying upon reading about Derpy's past, especially [[AbusiveParents ''her own parents'']] disowning her because she didn't grow up to be the pony they wanted, '''YOU HAVE NO HEART'''!
