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* CompleteMonster: [[WickedWitch Elizabeth Craven]], also known as the ToothFairy, is a witch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts if they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
* {{Narm}}: Pretty much everything out of Mrs. [=MacDonald's=] mouth.
** The Literature/HarryPotter references come off as rather clunky.
** "TOOOOOTH!"
* {{Narm}}: Pretty much everything out of Mrs. [=MacDonald's=] mouth.
** The Literature/HarryPotter references come off as rather clunky.
** "TOOOOOTH!"
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* CompleteMonster: [[WickedWitch Elizabeth Craven]], also known as the ToothFairy, is a witch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts if they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
* {{Narm}}: Pretty much everything out of Mrs. [=MacDonald's=] mouth.
** The Literature/HarryPotter references come off as rather clunky.
** "TOOOOOTH!"kid.
* {{Narm}}: Pretty much everything out of Mrs. [=MacDonald's=] mouth.
** The Literature/HarryPotter references come off as rather clunky.
** "TOOOOOTH!"
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* CompleteMonster: [[WickedWitch Elizabeth Craven]], also known as [[RedBaron the Tooth Fairy]], is a witch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts if they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
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* CompleteMonster: [[WickedWitch Elizabeth Craven]], also known as [[RedBaron the Tooth Fairy]], ToothFairy, is a witch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts if they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Elizabeth Craven]], also known as [[RedBaron the Tooth Fairy]], is a WickedWitch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts if they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad [[WickedWitch Elizabeth Craven]], also known as [[RedBaron the Tooth Fairy]], is a WickedWitch witch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts if they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Elizabeth Craven]], also known as [[RedBaron the Tooth Fairy]], is a WickedWitch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts of they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Elizabeth Craven]], also known as [[RedBaron the Tooth Fairy]], is a WickedWitch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts of if they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Elizabeth Craven]], also known as [[RedBaron the Tooth Fairy]], is a WickedWitch who collects children's teeth by bribing them with gifts of they give them to her. After she gets their last tooth, she [[WouldHurtAChild kills the kids]], trapping their souls to [[AndIMustScream walk the Earth forever, barely able to communicate with the rest of the world]]. Killing seven kids before dying herself, Craven's spirit is awoken by a man who has purchased her old abode. This man has a daughter with one more baby tooth, which Craven manages to get knocked out. She then spends the film tormenting the girl and killing anybody who stands in the way of her getting the tooth and killing the kid.
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* {{Narm}}: Pretty much everything out of [=Mrs. McDonald's=] mouth.
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* {{Narm}}: Pretty much everything out of [=Mrs. McDonald's=] Mrs. [=MacDonald's=] mouth.
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** The Literature/HarryPotter references come off as rather clunky.
