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Snobby: obsessed with being "the first Fairy Pokemon". Stuck-up: listen to how she describes, well, anything. Self-absorbed: see previous comment about "first Fairy Pokemon". Idiot: seems unable to EAT without step-by-step instructions.
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** [[spoiler:Vapor. Hateful {{Jerkass}}, or broken abuse victim who ''really'' needs help but is too beaten-down to ask for it?]]
** Sylvia: innocent ingenue or incredibly snobby, stuck-up, self-absorbed idiot?
** Sylvia: innocent ingenue or incredibly snobby, stuck-up, self-absorbed idiot?
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** To a number of readers, Sylvia crossed it when [[spoiler:she denounced Vapor and abandoned him, effectively leaving an abuse victim to his fate... for the crime of ''not being nice to her''.]]
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: [[spoiler:Vapor is captured by an abusive trainer, forced to evolve into a Jolteon against his will, and is implied to be regularly beaten... and we're supposed to see ''him'' as the bad guy because he (completely understandably) isn't polite to Sylvia when she finds him.]]
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I fully expect this to get deleted, but it has to be said.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Sylvia leaves one of her brothers to a life of abuse and torture because he was rude to her when they met again, runs out on [[spoiler:Alseides]] while he's struggling for his life, and obsesses over a suicide victim... because of how it makes ''her'' feel. Das Sporking had a field day with how much of a ''jerk'' she can be.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but it's confirmed that Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a Fairy-type move. Justified in that the story began in February, and Sylveon's method of evolution wasn't revealed until October. The author admits this error in the story notes.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but it's confirmed that Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a Fairy-type move. Justified in that the story began in February, and Sylveon's method of evolution [[OutdatedByCanon wasn't revealed until October. October.]] The author admits this error in the story notes.
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** Sylvia's first human friend [[spoiler:, and her trainer at the end of the story,]] was named Serena (not the Pokemon X and Y character). Later, in the Pokemon XY anime, [[spoiler: Serena catches an Eevee]]
*** ThereAreNoCoincidences: [[spoiler: And now it's a Sylveon]]
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** Sylvia's first human friend [[spoiler:, and her trainer at the end of the story,]] was named Serena (not the Pokemon X and Y character). Later, in the Pokemon XY anime, [[spoiler: Serena catches an Eevee]]
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*** ThereAreNoCoincidences: [[spoiler: And now it's aSylveon]]Sylveon.]]
*** ThereAreNoCoincidences: [[spoiler: And now it's a
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: There are several of these, but [[spoiler:Sylvia's reunion with Bolt]] takes the cake, primarily because of [[spoiler:how nice he's become.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: There are several of these, but [[spoiler:Sylvia's reunion with Bolt]] takes the cake, primarily because of [[spoiler:how nice he's become.]]
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*** ThereAreNoCoincidences: [[spoiler: And now it's a Sylveon]]
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* CriticalResearchFailure: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but it's confirmed that Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a fairy type Fairy-type move. Justified in that the story began in February, and Sylveon's method of evolution wasn't revealed until October. The author admits this error in the story notes.
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* OneSceneWonder: [[spoiler: N]]N, who is not even referred to by name.]]
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* TearJerkerTearJerker: Again, several of these, the most notable one being when [[spoiler:Sylvia's father dies]].
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* CriticalResearchFailure: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but it's confirmed that Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a fairy type move. Justified in that the story began in February, and Sylveon's method of evolution wasn't revealed until October. The author admits this error in the story notes.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: There are several of these, but [[spoiler:Sylvia's reunion with Bolt]] takes the cake, primarily because of [[spoiler:how nice he's become.]]
* HilariousInHindsight: In one chapter, Sylvia is severely weakened from getting attacked by a group of Venipede, [[spoiler: and in another, she defeats Moondancer in battle.]] Both of these events were written before it was confirmed that Fairy types are strong against Dark types and weak against Poison types; it is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in a later chapter.
** Sylvia's first trainer was named Serena (not the Pokemon X and Y character). Later, in the Pokemon XY anime, [[spoiler: Serena catches an Eevee]]
* JerkassWoobie: Hikaru at times, Dilandau, [[spoiler: Vapor, Alseides.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Dilandau's crossed it since before he appeared by setting Chargestone Cave on fire, killing many Pokemon. He doesn't stop there.]]
* OneSceneWonder: [[spoiler: N]]
* TastesLikeDiabetes: In-story, many not-so-nice characters Sylvia meets are disgusted by her cute appearance and have no problem telling her exactly this.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler: Alseides, post-TimeSkip. Will he recover and get the psychological help he needs in order to heal, or is the damage so bad that he'll be an AxCrazy / BloodKnight / {{Jerkass}} / BrokenBird for the rest of his life?]]
* CriticalResearchFailure: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but it's confirmed that Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a fairy type move. Justified in that the story began in February, and Sylveon's method of evolution wasn't revealed until October. The author admits this error in the story notes.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: There are several of these, but [[spoiler:Sylvia's reunion with Bolt]] takes the cake, primarily because of [[spoiler:how nice he's become.]]
* HilariousInHindsight: In one chapter, Sylvia is severely weakened from getting attacked by a group of Venipede, [[spoiler: and in another, she defeats Moondancer in battle.]] Both of these events were written before it was confirmed that Fairy types are strong against Dark types and weak against Poison types; it is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in a later chapter.
** Sylvia's first trainer was named Serena (not the Pokemon X and Y character). Later, in the Pokemon XY anime, [[spoiler: Serena catches an Eevee]]
* JerkassWoobie: Hikaru at times, Dilandau, [[spoiler: Vapor, Alseides.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Dilandau's crossed it since before he appeared by setting Chargestone Cave on fire, killing many Pokemon. He doesn't stop there.]]
* OneSceneWonder: [[spoiler: N]]
* TastesLikeDiabetes: In-story, many not-so-nice characters Sylvia meets are disgusted by her cute appearance and have no problem telling her exactly this.
* TearJerker
* TheWoobie: Many characters.
* CriticalResearchFailure: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but it's confirmed that Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a fairy type move. Justified in that the story began in February, and Sylveon's method of evolution wasn't revealed until October. The author admits this error in the story notes.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: There are several of these, but [[spoiler:Sylvia's reunion with Bolt]] takes the cake, primarily because of [[spoiler:how nice he's become.]]
* HilariousInHindsight: In one chapter, Sylvia is severely weakened from getting attacked by a group of Venipede, [[spoiler: and in another, she defeats Moondancer in battle.]] Both of these events were written before it was confirmed that Fairy types are strong against Dark types and weak against Poison types; it is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in a later chapter.
** Sylvia's first trainer was named Serena (not the Pokemon X and Y character). Later, in the Pokemon XY anime, [[spoiler: Serena catches an Eevee]]
* JerkassWoobie: Hikaru at times, Dilandau, [[spoiler: Vapor, Alseides.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Dilandau's crossed it since before he appeared by setting Chargestone Cave on fire, killing many Pokemon. He doesn't stop there.]]
* OneSceneWonder: [[spoiler: N]]
* TastesLikeDiabetes: In-story, many not-so-nice characters Sylvia meets are disgusted by her cute appearance and have no problem telling her exactly this.
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* TheWoobie: Many characters.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but it's confirmed that Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a fairy type move. Justified in that the story began in February, and Sylveon's method of evolution wasn't revealed until October. The author admits this error in the story notes.
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: There are several of these, but [[spoiler:Sylvia's reunion with Bolt]] takes the cake, primarily because of [[spoiler:how nice he's become.]]
* HilariousInHindsight: In one chapter, Sylvia is severely weakened from getting attacked by a group of Venipede, [[spoiler: and in another, she defeats Moondancer in battle.]] Both of these events were written before it was confirmed that Fairy types are strong against Dark types and weak against Poison types; it is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in a later chapter.
** Sylvia's first trainer was named Serena (not the Pokemon X and Y character). Later, in the Pokemon XY anime, [[spoiler: Serena catches an Eevee]]
* JerkassWoobie: Hikaru at times, Dilandau, [[spoiler: Vapor, Alseides.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Dilandau's crossed it since before he appeared by setting Chargestone Cave on fire, killing many Pokemon. He doesn't stop there.]]
* OneSceneWonder: [[spoiler: N]]
* TastesLikeDiabetes: In-story, many not-so-nice characters Sylvia meets are disgusted by her cute appearance and have no problem telling her exactly this.
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** Sylvia's first trainer was named Serena (not the Pokemon X and Y character). Later, in the Pokemon XY anime, [[spoiler: Serena catches an Eevee]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: Moondancer dislikes being called "Moonie", probably because of [[{{Mooning}} what a moonie is]].
** As of now, the authoress has [[OrwellianRetcon changed the nickname to Dancer.]]
** As of now, the authoress has [[OrwellianRetcon changed the nickname to Dancer.]]
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No Such Thing As Notability, and besides, she made an official statement about this in her Author\'s Notes.
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** As of now, the authoress has [[OrwellianRetcon changed the nickname to Dancer.]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler: Alseides, post-TimeSkip. Will he recover and get the psychological help he needs in order to heal, or is the damage so bad that he'll be an AxCrazy BloodKnight {{Jerkass}} BrokenBird for the rest of his life?]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler: Alseides, post-TimeSkip. Will he recover and get the psychological help he needs in order to heal, or is the damage so bad that he'll be an AxCrazy / BloodKnight / {{Jerkass}} / BrokenBird for the rest of his life?]]
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* HilariousInHindsight: In one chapter, Sylvia almost dies is severely weakened from getting attacked by a group of Venipede Venipede, [[spoiler: and in another, she defeats Moondancer in battle.]] Both of these events were written before it was confirmed that fairy Fairy types are strong against dark Dark types and weak against poison types.Poison types; it is even [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in a later chapter.
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* UnfortunateImplications: Moondancer dislikes being called "Moonie", probably because of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mooning what a moonie is]].
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* UnfortunateImplications: Moondancer dislikes being called "Moonie", probably because of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mooning [[{{Mooning}} what a moonie is]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: In one chapter, Sylvia almost dies from getting attacked by a group of Venipede [[spoiler: and in another, she defeats Moondancer in battle.]] Both of these events were written before it was confirmed that fairy types are strong against dark types and weak against poison types.
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Please present all Complete Monster candidates in this thread.
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* CompleteMonster: Theseus [=McCoy=]. He makes Pokemon fight in ways similar to dog fighting and doesn't care about their welfare at all.
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** As of now, the authoress has changed the nickname to Dancer.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Dilandau's crossed it since before he appeared, by setting Chargestone Cave on fire, killing many Pokemon. He doesn't stop there.]]
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* JerkassWoobie: Hikaru at times, Dilandau, [[spoiler: Vapor, Alseides.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Dilandau's crossed it since before heappeared, appeared by setting Chargestone Cave on fire, killing many Pokemon. He doesn't stop there.]]]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: Moondancer dislikes being called "Moonie", probably because of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mooning what a moonie is]].is]].
* TheWoobie: Many characters.
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* CompleteMonster: Theseus McCoy. He makes Pokemon fight in ways similar to dog fighting and doesn't care about their welfare at all.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: There are several of these, but [[spoiler:Sylvia's reunion with Bolt]] takes the cake, primarily because of [[spoiler:how nice he's become.]]
* UnfortunateImplications: Moondancer dislikes being called "Moonie", probably because of what a moonie is.
* UnfortunateImplications: Moondancer dislikes being called "Moonie", probably because of what a moonie is.
