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** The fact that some civilizations are stated to have set up Hells ''purely because they thought that was how it was done''.
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** The fact that some civilizations are stated to have set up Hells ''purely because they thought that was how it was done''.done''.
** Banks' extremely detailed description of Lededje's murder from her own [=POV=].
** Banks' extremely detailed description of Lededje's murder from her own [=POV=].
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* CompleteMonster: [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Joiler Veppers]] is a wealthy playboy who once ruined the life of a supposed friend of his to get rich and take the man's daughter Lededje as his own. Regularly raping Lededje, Veppers murders her when she tries to escape, unaware her mind survives thanks to a neural lace. Veppers also [[{{Greed}} gets richer]] by selling and running artificial hells where the minds of countless victims on multiple worlds victims are [[AndIMustScream tortured in horrific simulations for eternity]]. Worried that the anti-hell factions will win, Veppers arranges for an alien race to raze his estates into ashes with most of the innocent staff still there, [[ItsAllAboutMe all to avoid a loss in profits]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Joiler Veppers]] is a wealthy playboy who once ruined the life of a supposed friend of his to get rich and take the man's daughter Lededje as his own. Regularly raping Lededje, Veppers murders her when she tries to escape, unaware her mind survives thanks to a neural lace. Veppers also [[{{Greed}} gets richer]] by selling and running artificial hells where the minds of countless victims on multiple worlds victims are [[AndIMustScream tortured in horrific simulations for eternity]]. Worried that the anti-hell factions will win, Veppers arranges for an alien race to raze his estates into ashes with most of the innocent staff still there, [[ItsAllAboutMe all to avoid a loss in profits]].
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** The fact that some civilizations are stated to have set up Hells ''purely because they thought that was how it was done''.
** And then you realize that ''this kind of shit is exactly what many religious people really believe happens to people after they die'', and not only do they think it's okay, they '''worship''' the [[GodIsEvil monstrous deity]] that they think would commit this atrocity, and celebrate it with sadistic glee!
** And then you realize that ''this kind of shit is exactly what many religious people really believe happens to people after they die'', and not only do they think it's okay, they '''worship''' the [[GodIsEvil monstrous deity]] that they think would commit this atrocity, and celebrate it with sadistic glee!
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** The fact that some civilizations are stated to have set up Hells ''purely because they thought that was how it was done''.
** And then you realize that ''this kind of shit is exactly what many religious people really believe happens to people after they die'', and not only do they think it's okay, they '''worship''' the [[GodIsEvil monstrous deity]] that they think would commit this atrocity, and celebrate it with sadistic glee!done''.
** And then you realize that ''this kind of shit is exactly what many religious people really believe happens to people after they die'', and not only do they think it's okay, they '''worship''' the [[GodIsEvil monstrous deity]] that they think would commit this atrocity, and celebrate it with sadistic glee!
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* CompleteMonster: [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Joiler Veppers]] is a wealthy playboy who once ruined the life of a supposed friend of his to get rich and take the man's daughter Lededje as his own. Regularly raping Lededje, Veppers murders her when she tries to escape, unaware her mind survives thanks to a neural race. Veppers also [[{{Greed}} gets richer]] by selling and running artificial hells where the minds of countless victims on multiple worlds victims are [[AndIMustScream tortured in horrific simulations for eternity]]. Worried that the anti-hell factions will win, Veppers arranges for an alien race to raze his estates into ashes with most of the innocent staff still there, [[ItsAllAboutMe all to avoid a loss in profits]].
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* CompleteMonster: [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Joiler Veppers]] is a wealthy playboy who once ruined the life of a supposed friend of his to get rich and take the man's daughter Lededje as his own. Regularly raping Lededje, Veppers murders her when she tries to escape, unaware her mind survives thanks to a neural race.lace. Veppers also [[{{Greed}} gets richer]] by selling and running artificial hells where the minds of countless victims on multiple worlds victims are [[AndIMustScream tortured in horrific simulations for eternity]]. Worried that the anti-hell factions will win, Veppers arranges for an alien race to raze his estates into ashes with most of the innocent staff still there, [[ItsAllAboutMe all to avoid a loss in profits]].
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Not all religions have a concept of hell.
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** And then you realize that ''this kind of shit is exactly what many religious people really believe happens to people after they die'', and not only do they think it's okay, they '''worship''' the [[GodIsEvil monstrous deity]] that they think would commit this atrocity, and celebrate it with sadistic glee!
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*CompleteMonster: [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Joiler Veppers]] is a wealthy playboy who once ruined the life of a supposed friend of his to get rich and take the man's daughter Lededje as his own. Regularly raping Lededje, Veppers murders her when she tries to escape, unaware her mind survives thanks to a neural race. Veppers also [[{{Greed}} gets richer]] by selling and running artificial hells where the minds of countless victims on multiple worlds victims are [[AndIMustScream tortured in horrific simulations for eternity]]. Worried that the anti-hell factions will win, Veppers arranges for an alien race to raze his estates into ashes with most of the innocent staff still there, [[ItsAllAboutMe all to avoid a loss in profits]].
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* CompleteMonster: Veppers is introduced as a terrible human being, and future information about him, by and large, only works to make him even less sympathetic than a rapist and murderer already was.
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* CompleteMonster: Veppers is introduced as a terrible human being, and future information about him, by and large, only works to make him even less sympathetic than a rapist and murderer already was.
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** Just even thinking about some of the things done to those in Hell qualifies.qualifies.
** The fact that some civilizations are stated to have set up Hells ''purely because they thought that was how it was done''
** And then you realize that ''this kind of shit is exactly what religious people really believe happens to people after they die'', and not only do they think it's okay, they '''worship''' the [[GodIsEvil monstrous deity]] that they think would commit this atrocity, and celebrate it with sadistic glee!
** The fact that some civilizations are stated to have set up Hells ''purely because they thought that was how it was done''
** And then you realize that ''this kind of shit is exactly what religious people really believe happens to people after they die'', and not only do they think it's okay, they '''worship''' the [[GodIsEvil monstrous deity]] that they think would commit this atrocity, and celebrate it with sadistic glee!
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* NightmareFuel:
** You will spend at least 5 minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators."
** Just even thinking about some of the things done to those in Hell qualifies.
** You will spend at least 5 minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators."
** Just even thinking about some of the things done to those in Hell qualifies.
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* NightmareFuel: You will spend at least 5 minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators."
** Just even thinking about some of the things down to those in Hell qualifies.
** Just even thinking about some of the things down to those in Hell qualifies.
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* CompleteMonster: the demons in Hell. And apparently, you can have just 1 sadistic psychopath and copy them a million times.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Let's just say you will spend at least five minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators."
** Forget that, just even thinking about some of the things down to those in Hell qualifies.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Let's just say you will spend at least five minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators."
** Forget that, just even thinking about some of the things down to those in Hell qualifies.
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* CompleteMonster: the demons in Hell. And apparently, you can have just 1 sadistic psychopath and copy them a million times.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Let's just say youNightmareFuel: You will spend at least five 5 minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators."
**Forget that, just Just even thinking about some of the things down to those in Hell qualifies.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Let's just say you
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Let's just say you will spend at least five minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators."
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* CompleteMonster: the demons in Hell. And apparently, you can have just 1 sadistic psychopath and copy them a million times.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Let's just say you will spend at least five minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators.""
** Forget that, just even thinking about some of the things down to those in Hell qualifies.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Let's just say you will spend at least five minutes paralyzed by the fear that you might be in one one of Hells' "Hope Simulators.
** Forget that, just even thinking about some of the things down to those in Hell qualifies.
